Penname: Ar-feiniel [Contact] Real name: Maggie
Member Since: 20/09/08
Membership status: Member
Bio:
Hi there! Name’s Ar-feiniel, but I like Fei for short. I’ve had no training in writing except English class, but I hope to take Creative Writing next year in school (keeping my fingers crossed). I like cheesecake. I’m an editor and writer for my school’s newspaper. I've got two crazy, amazing siblings, Rhovannion and Melda, whom you'll notice accomany me in my mad fun humor stories (Love ya guys!). Chickens and sheep are my favorite animals, but Dug the dog from Disney/Pixar’s “Up” has claimed my heart. Let's see, what else...I go around and claim to be married to Maedhros (not really, but I wish). I’m open to criticism, but might take it too seriously or harshly. Group writing projects are fun, just ask Kitt Otter and Bearer of Light. Shadow Maiden (Daewen) is my partner in crime. Peace in the Middle East!



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Summary: Arya Burke wakes up in an unfamilar forest. After an encouter orcs with she realizes that she is in Middle Earth. But what time in it's history? Before she can answer that question she is thrust into the fasinating culture of the elves. A story of friendship, adventure, and finding love in the people you would never expect.
Categories: Book-verse, Movie-verse
Characters: Aragorn, Arwen, Elladan, Elrohir, Elrond, Legolas, Original Character, Thranduil
Genres: Action/Adventure, Romance
Warnings: Rape, Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 29225 Read Count: 39488
[Report This] Published: 21/09/08 Updated: 23/10/09
Reviewer: Ar-feiniel Signed
Date: 26/11/08 Title: Chapter 12: Surprise!

Wow, didn't see that one coming.
Grr...I hate Vanafindiel already.
Legolas is mine!!

Author's Response: hehe and there is more to come. lol. stay tuned

Reviewer: Ar-feiniel Signed
Date: 28/11/08 Title: Chapter 13: Confessions

Oh, I got it. Trying to go Edward/Bella on the whole walking into wall, hallway fight thing? Interesting. Yup, I'm definatly killing Vanafindiel. You better write all the parts with her in them soon, before I kill her for taking my Lego!!

Author's Response: As far as I know we havent seen the last of Vanafindiel. Mwahahaha but we will find out how Legs feels about the whole thing within the next few chappies. I will most likely have an update soon so keep reading. Faer nîn veren; narn hen ann! PS. Legs is mine lol

Reviewer: Ar-feiniel Signed
Date: 29/11/08 Title: Chapter 13: Confessions

Hmm…let me guess Lego’s opinion on the whole thing...He wants it ditch it all and run away to…me! Muhahahaha!

*Looks at blood on hands * Erm, I think Vanafindiel is dead. Oops, Goheno nin.
*Points to Edward Cullen * Uh…he did it!!

Last thing: What did you call me in Elvish?!!

Author's Response: Faer nîn veren; narn hen ann ~ My spirit is joyous; this tale will be long not an insult melon nin

Summary: A heroic tale of a young Orc soldier searching for his destiny in a world without Sauron.
Categories: Movie-verse, Off Topic
Characters: Saradoc Brandybuck, Saruman, Sauron
Genres: Action/Adventure
Warnings: AU (alternate universe)
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1263 Read Count: 3910
[Report This] Published: 28/09/08 Updated: 29/10/08
Reviewer: Ar-feiniel Signed
Date: 28/09/08 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Brillient prologue. Short but strong. I like how you've written a story honoring Orcs, since they are mistreated and misunderstood. There were once Elves, as you know!! :)

Whispering Lives by MistofStars Rated: PG-13 [Reviews - 2]
Summary: Legolas/Aragorn slash fanfiction before FOTR! Implies their first meeting, how they become friends (and more). They will have to face some adventures and also all those lives they could have.

Warnings might be added to the already added ones (but I will warn you when there are chapters with a new warning)
Categories: Book Verse Slash, Movie-verse, Lord of the Rings Slash
Characters: Aragorn, Legolas
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Drama, Erotica, Humor, Romance, Tragedy
Warnings: Slash (same sex pairing), Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 19233 Read Count: 4619
[Report This] Published: 11/10/08 Updated: 04/12/08
Reviewer: Ar-feiniel Signed
Date: 12/10/08 Title: Chapter 3: An endless heartache

Very good so far. :)
I love how you portrayed Legolas!

Author's Response: Thank you very very much for reading and reviewing! :)) I'm happy you liked it so far! I hope to see you around again when I post the next chapter (that has to be written for a start haha) Yours, Mos

Reviewer: Ar-feiniel Signed
Date: 16/11/08 Title: Chapter 4: Leaving known and safe shores

Well, that was worth the wait, I must say. Loved the beginning.
Is Norgas supposed to be Gollum?

Author's Response: Hey Ar-feiniel :) thank you for reading and reviewing again! You can also say what you didn't like to read (the end of this chapter I assume?) Well, currently I'm working on the fifth chapter. And no, I can assure you that Norgoas definitely isn't Gollum. That would be too funny. *laughs* So, I hope to see you soon again :) Yours, Mos

Summary: As Legolas flees from the orcs that killed his patrol, he stumbles onto a cave that drops him into the land of Narnia. What is his purpose here, and why does the White Witch want him so badly? Can he stand against her magic? Narnia/LOTRs crossover.
Categories: Crossovers
Characters: Legolas
Genres: Action/Adventure
Warnings: AU (alternate universe)
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 39965 Read Count: 10903
[Report This] Published: 12/10/08 Updated: 05/11/08
Reviewer: Ar-feiniel Signed
Date: 12/10/08 Title: Chapter 1: Failures

So far I like it. :)

Author's Response: Thanx! I'm glad to hear you're liking it so far! I've practically finished the story, so I'll be updating regularly. :) Blessings! ~Ila

Summary: What happens when Elladan and Elrohir find out that their brother Aragorn talks in his sleep? What does Legolas think about their little "game"?
Categories: Book Verse Slash, Book-verse
Characters: Aragorn, Elladan, Elrohir, Legolas
Genres: Humor
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 467 Read Count: 1282
[Report This] Published: 20/10/08 Updated: 20/10/08
Reviewer: Ar-feiniel Signed
Date: 10/11/08 Title: Chapter 1: Pink an Purple Night Shirts!?

lol, random. Love it.
Love the Ritz Crackers and Kraken lines. Funny :)

Author's Response: Thanks. I'm glad you liked it. I don't know where i got the kraken from, but my brother thought it said crackers (he id 5 and just learned to read) so he asked me why i had ritz crackers in my story. It was just kinda random. Thanks again!

Summary: If you think you are obsessed with Legolas than check this out!
Categories: Off Topic
Characters: None
Genres: Other
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 452 Read Count: 1718
[Report This] Published: 20/10/08 Updated: 20/10/08
Reviewer: Ar-feiniel Signed
Date: 30/11/08 Title: Chapter 1: Legolas obsession

Wow, I got like, 62% of those right. Uh...what was the 'Osama Bin Laden' one about?

Author's Response: i know i got 98% of them right! you use his picture as target practice for your bow and arrow. lovelovelove L

Reviewer: Ar-feiniel Signed
Date: 08/12/08 Title: Chapter 1: Legolas obsession

Thanks for clearing that up for me. Hmmm, I’m forgetting something…Oh! Thank you for putting me as one of your favorite authors; you rock!! I don’t hug… but I high five!!
* High Five *

Author's Response: your welcome. You are a really good author and you deserve it!

Summary: Haldir is forced to swallow his pride and ask the help of his student. After accepting his offer, Earina will plant the ideas in his head, but make him do the work! Will Haldir learn maybe he can keep a family together after all?
Categories: Book-verse
Characters: Haldir, Original Character, Orophin, Rúmil
Genres: Angst, Drama, General, Humor, Romance
Warnings: AU (alternate universe), First Draft
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 11560 Read Count: 6846
[Report This] Published: 23/10/08 Updated: 17/11/08
Reviewer: Ar-feiniel Signed
Date: 26/10/08 Title: Chapter 2: Eh, boss *this*

YAY! I WANT COOKIES!
Anyway, So far I likey...
I like Haldir's hestition in saying sorry and Earina's thought boxes.
How old is Orophin supposed to be?

Summary: Bored and fed up with court life, Kiaya, youngest child of Arwen and Aragorn finally does something about it. Out and alone for the first time in her life, can she learn things are truly less scary when you've got a family?
Categories: Movie-verse, Book-verse
Characters: Aragorn, Arwen, Haldir, Lindir, Original Character, Orophin
Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama, Humor
Warnings: AU (alternate universe), First Draft
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 7097 Read Count: 5123
[Report This] Published: 02/11/08 Updated: 12/11/08
Reviewer: Ar-feiniel Signed
Date: 09/11/08 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

So far, I think you are off to a good start. I like how you have Orophin tring to get at Kiaya.
But, I am a bit confused...

Somewhere by Shadow Maiden Rated: G Round robin [Reviews - 6]
Summary: Somewhere, oh, they have to exist.
Categories: Off Topic
Characters: None
Genres: Essay
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 228 Read Count: 1259
[Report This] Published: 08/11/08 Updated: 08/11/08
Reviewer: Ar-feiniel Signed
Date: 09/11/08 Title: Chapter 1: Somewhere

Beautifully written. So, I am not alone in believing that Elves exist. That lightens my heart. (Which is not easy to do)
Although their time ended, it will come again. We just have to wait for it. :)

Author's Response: You are not alone. I think a lot more people believe, but are like how I was - afraid that people would think we're crazy. Thank you for reading.

Shadows by Shadow Maiden Rated: G Round robin [Reviews - 10]
Summary: When do you know when enough is enough?
Categories: Off Topic
Characters: None
Genres: Essay
Warnings: Torture
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 407 Read Count: 1224
[Report This] Published: 09/11/08 Updated: 09/11/08
Reviewer: Ar-feiniel Signed
Date: 16/11/08 Title: Chapter 1: The Shadows of Soul

I'm glad I cheered you up a bit by being the first to review. I try to be the person that reviews a story that has none in hope of encourging that writer. I am a major perfectionist myself and there have been sevral accounts were I wanted to delete my storys and give up on writing because I wasn't geting reviews. Oh, well.

As for the Ev lyrics I reconized all of them except the first and third ones. I know that they are all from The Open Door but I do not remember where the first and third ones are from. I haven't listened to The Open Door in a while, I prefer Fallen. I liked it better when Amy Lee was depressed, the music was better! Alas, that is my own opinion.

I know, right! I was the only one in my family and class that picked up on the assassin! I am known for thinking outside of the box.

Example: Okay, let's say we're traped inside a burning room. There is a door and a window. Which way would you go? Door? Well, leave it to me to dry to dig(supposing the floor is dirt) my way out. For some reason, my mind comes up with the most difficult, intersting, and creative way out of things.

Well, I think I've babbled on long enough. Sorry if I wasted your time.

Namarie, Fei.

Author's Response: Yeah, totally. Now it's all revenge and mayhem! The Open Door felt like Middle-earth to me because, yes, it had elctric guitar and drums but it was softened with piano, violin, etc. The only songs I really really like from Fallen is My Immortal, Going Under, Bring me to Life, and Everybody's Fool. I guess the last one really describes me, actually all of them. Um, the first and third lyrics are from Sweet Sacrifice as an echo and Lacrymosa near the end of the song. You never waste my time. I love talking to you. And about the burning room thing, I'd probably be on the floor helping you! Thanks for reviewing it is so encouraging to me as a writer. I'm trying to write a LOTR size or larger novel and it is so hard considering it's my first ever! So, yeah, I guess I think the same as you. And thanks for explaining about the quiz. Namarie!

Reviewer: Ar-feiniel Signed
Date: 15/11/08 Title: Chapter 1: The Shadows of Soul

Dark. Poetic. Evanescence. What's not to like?

Author's Response: Thanks. You are the first one to review, I was getting bummed out. Anyway, yeah I love Evanescence's songs, not their life styles or they way the dress, act, etc. I saw somethings there that I didn't like, but the one thing I do like is the fact that their songs have so much truth in them. *Shrugs* Ah, well, people aren't perfect. I am a perfectionist and I . . . well, don't get me started! Thanks again for reviewing and thanks for explaining your personality test for me. I didn't catch the assassin, either. *Shrugs again* I need to work on my observation skills. Namarie

Reviewer: Ar-feiniel Signed
Date: 17/11/08 Title: Chapter 1: The Shadows of Soul

Fei…is…loved?! * Faints *

Awkward silence…

-2 minutes later-

* Pops back up *

EEP!! NEVER TRUST ERESTOR WITH A DINNER KNIFE!!

More awkward silence.

Sorry about that…

That is true The Open Door is more Middle-Earth like to me as well. Piano, Violins, Electric Guitar...always a good mix!
Do you find it at all funny that you can relate most of Ev’s songs to LotR?

Okay, perfect example: Anywhere, total Aragorn and Arwen.
Another example: Haunted, Grima and Eowyn
And: Lacrymosa, Arwen?

There are more,I'm just to lazy right now to name them right now.

For Fallen I like the same as you but I also like Tourniquet, Haunted, Taking Over Me, Hello, and Whisper…Oh wait, that’s like all over the songs…never mind…I like it all!!

For the burning room, really? Huh, interesting.

Great minds do think alike…

Namarie, Fei!!

Author's Response: It is insane how I can relate their songs to LOTR!!!! Although, I relate a lot of things to LOTR. For instance, I see the word 'habit' and I do a double-take because I think it says 'hobbit'. Ah, well, that's the price we pay for reading the book of no return. Hey, that's a good story title. Don't use it, it's mine! Mwahaha! *Clears throat* Sorry. Anywhere is definitely Aragorn and Arwen - have you seen the music video? Grima and Eowyn for Haunted, that's a good one. I so agree! I think more of Haldir and me for Lacrymosa. *Shrugs* I love elves, I mean, what's not to like? For Arwen, I would choose Like You for when Aragorn dies. Please name more, I like agreeing with you! I love Whisper, too, I forgot when I was writing to you and then I was listening to the c.d. and I wanted to smack myself on the forehead for forgetting it. Yeah, sometimes, I follow the crowd, sometimes, I make my own path. But I think I would help you dig out because I wouldn't want to leave you behind, even though one of the fears I have is dying by fire. But the weird thing about me is, I'm an Aries, so that would be my element, right? I'm glad I checked my e-mail again so I could talk to you. And I have to tell you this - when you said that you review people's stuff that doesn't have any reviews, you've inspired me to do the same thing to others. So, thanks. It always feels good when you help others believe in themselves. Alright, I'll stop talking your ear off. Oh, before I leave, you like in Scotland! You are soooooooooo lucky! Beautiful castles, lochs, have you seen Loch Ness? I am obsessed with the Loch Ness Monster! Ok, Namarie, and please keep talking, I love a good chat!

Reviewer: Ar-feiniel Signed
Date: 17/11/08 Title: Chapter 1: The Shadows of Soul

I know, I relate as much as I can to LotR. Except it’s hard to do because there are NO Ringers where I am. * Sigh * None at all…

Yes, I have seen the music video and that has a VERY interesting story behind it. That music video started everything for me. It was the very first time I saw anything LotR related. At all. Very First. I knew it was some kind of movie from watching it but of course, not which one! Mel was trying to figure it out by the pictures and I was trying to as well. I was like, “Ok, brown-haired chick can’t be with stubble man. Guy that in that blue room, her father. Forbidding her from stubble man. Stubble man…with blonde hair chick…? [When his hand was on Lego’s shoulder] Telling her good-bye ‘cause he’s ditching throne to be with brown-haired chick??” Mel was like, “Ohhh. I get it!!”

Lol, every time Mel and I watch that video, and after a fit of laugher, we’re like, “We’re soooo stupid for thinking Legolas was a girl!!”

Umm…more Ev lyrics…

In Death: Arwen when Aragorn dies??
Missing: Elrond and Celebrian?? NO!! Celeborn when Galadriel leaves for the Valinor!! Erm…no…that doesn’t work…does it?
My Immortal: Definite Aragorn/Arwen
Taking Over Me: Total Gollum and the Ring…lol
Whisper: Frodo and Ring…

Goheno nin…I can’t think of anymore right now.

Same here…I’m terrified of dying in a fire. I always have been. But, hey, we’re Half-elven. We’re immortal!!

Thanks for the Scotland heads-up in Fellowship Candles. I was like, “Uhhh…I’m scared. I haven’t told anyone where I live…”

I’m glad I’ve inspired you to inspire other people.

Hey, pointy ears can never be talked off, unless it’s BlackSpeech. * Cringes *

One last thing before I talk YOUR ear off…I’m….your….favorite…author?!!!!

ME??!!! When I read that I was drinking a Mountain Dew Supernova and I spit it up.
I was like, “Some one…likes….me? Someone took the time out of their day to put me as their favorite author? Someone actually likes….me?!”

I’m still in shock…but a good shock!! Thank you SO much!!

Namarie,
From a very shocked and happy Fei.

Author's Response: Same with me. No Ringers. At all. I here. Alone. All by my lonesome self (except when Legolas decided to smack me on the forehead for not thinking about some good plots with him in it.) *Rolls eyes as Legolas laughs behind me* I Death? I've never heard that one. Is it on Origins? Because I've never even seen it before! I look up the lyrics though and get back to you later. MAybe I can check it out on youtube if I go to the library because I don't have high-speed. Missing - No, I made a video from this one and did Eowyn. My Immortal - I was going to say Aragorn and Arwen but I started making a video about the LOTR and me. It felt appropriate at the time. 'But you still have (And always will have) all of me!' Taking over me - yeah, gollum and the ring. But I always think of my and elves or the Tuatha De Dannan, a type of fairy in Ireland that lives in the ground but aren't dwarves. Whisper - I always think of me and the struggles I've have with certain things lately. Lots of dark things that will forever haunt me no matter where I go. But on to lighter things:)) Yeah, immortal! That's great! Yeah, I'm so stupid! As soon as I realized what I'd done, I really wanted to just sink into the ground. But I'm glad I realized that when I did. (Duh!) Yes!!!!! I get so happy when I'm talking to you and your stories show great insite and humor that I can't stop reading! Your welcome SO much!! I'm glad I'm affecting your life even if it is by spitting up Mountain Dew Supernova. *Laughs* One thing about laughing with drinks in the mouth, it never fails - my brother is always the comedian but whenever he's the funniest, I'm getting a drink. But I try so hard to not spit it up though I can't breath and I feel like I'm going to die! Ai, brothers. I think that's all that needs to be said. Namarie, mellon-nin. P.S. Have a good day.

Reviewer: Ar-feiniel Signed
Date: 18/11/08 Title: Chapter 1: The Shadows of Soul

Ah, yes. My relationship with my good buddy, Erestor. Always a fun one to tell; so many wacky, random times. I do not have much time to chat today but I think I can squeeze in one my personal favorites of Erestor and I’s pranks…

Why I got Kicked Out of Rivendell:

All right, so it’s an average New Year’s Eve day and I’m in Rivendell doing what not with the twins. They are teaching me to fight with two knives; Elladan teaching me lefty style and Elrohir teaching right. I love the fact that Dan’s a lefty [like me] and Ro’s a righty. Makes everything so much easier. Yes, they look alike, but we all know deep down they are different. But I digress. So the day goes on and after a few hours, I walk out of the barracks with bloody hands cursing Elves and their knives with no hand guards. So, we can safely assume that I’m in a bad mood. Well, over the course of the day I go to Elrond to fix my hands and what not, do some archery, read some books, steal Elrond’s hairbrush, ride my horse, play tag with Lindir, paint the Falls of Imladris very badly, and so on. So, now its nighttime and there’s going to be a party and Elrond’s house and the twins somehow get me invited [I don’t live in Elrond’s house, I’ve been crashing on Glorfindel’s couch for the past few weeks because Erestor and I had our Comeuppance War and well…that’s a story for another day…]. I honestly don’t know how or even want to. So, I’m still in a bad mood because now I have a headache so I decide to go to this New Year’s Eve party. Not a good decision.

All right, so, it’s nighttime and I’m doing the Robot, the Frodo Chicken Dane, and the Cabbage Patch and what not in the middle of the dance floor…

No, I’m kidding I was huddled in a corner in horror watching Elrond do the Frodo Chicken Dance. * Shivers * I still can’t get those images out of my head. Anyway, the night goes on and drinks are being served. Well, knowing the twins, can you guess what happens??

Ding ding ding! You win! They got drunk! They started setting off random fireworks like advertisements for Geico…until they find one that’s a huge dragon. Oh, no. Not a dragon! Well, yes, they find a dragon, set it off, and it ends up nearly hitting Elrond and Fin. After a fit of laughter, the twins stumble over to me.Seeing me rubbing my head, Elrohir offers me ‘apple juice’. Well it turns out that this ‘apple juice’ has Greendome in it. * Gasps * Oh, no! Not the dreaded Greendome! [Erm…my Greendome explanation is rather lengthy and I will explain it to you when I have the time. But just to sum it up: Greendome = Elvish dope.]

Well, I drink more and more of this ‘apple juice’ because Greendome is rather addicting. Until I start hallucinating so bad that I mistake Elrond for Erestor and begin chasing him through Rivendell with a meat clever screaming, “Why won’t you have dinner with Glorfindel?! He talks about you enough….AND…I WANT MY PINK SHIRT BACK!! WHY?!! WHY DO I WANT MY PINK SHIRT BACK??!! I HATE PINK!!! YOU KNOW I HATE PINK, RES. YOU JUST HAD TO GO AND DYE MY EVANESCENCE SHIRT PINK!!” And well when I couldn’t catch up to Elrond I gave up and started hiding because when I realize what I had done, I got scared because I knew…Three strikes and I was out! And the whole chasing him thing didn’t help…so…

Now, I’m wandering around in the dark of Mirkwood…trying to find Thranduil’s cave…
Grr…Legolas has never been good at map making!! * Looks around, sees nothing, looks over shoulder and sees HUGE spider * WAH!!!

Erm…sorry about that. If you want to know anymore of my Erestor stories let me know, otherwise, if you think I’m a complete psychopath again, let me know, I’ll stop. Kinda had a long day…

Anyway….

I know, right? It seems on both RARE occasions that I am actually eating at the computer I get picked for favorite author. For when I was picked for someone else’s, I was eating a chocolate chip cookie and nearly choked on that as well. Eh, what can I say…food and computer’s don’t mix!

Cool! Fairy’s in Ireland? Pray tell!

Sorry about being off on the Ev lyric’s it was late and I couldn’t really focus. Oh, wait…I got it…Everybody’s Fool = Emo Pippin!!! Get it…because he’s ‘Everyone’s Fool of a Took?!’ * Laughs * Oh, I crack myself up.

Sorry, this is getting long and I have to go now.

Namarie mellon-nin,
Fei.

Author's Response: You're not a phscopath. I've done the same kind of things or worse. Although I chased the twins one time and well, you'll have to ask me to find out what happened:)) I know I'm evil. Yeah, fairys. If you google Tuatha De Danann, you'd be able to find a better explaination than I could give. But they live in hills in the earth and have castles there (Kind of like Thranduil's palace which I hope you find). Some stories say that their king would come up at night and steal away women. Anyway, I've had some dreams where a really, I mean really hot guy was chasing me, but I knew he wasn't an elf or human because . . . I don't know. Like he would just be sitting there in the woods watching me. Maybe I'm the phscopath! I don't know! I dream of Legolas and them all the time! *Laughs at Emo Pippin.* I think that'd be more than a little strange if you know what I mean. Yeah, I'd like to know more about Erestor and you. I have nothing but time and I really want to get to know you. I've talked to you more than anyone else really and I really like it. I don't care if write long things like this to me. I guess I'm better off with people who talk a lot because most of the time I'd rather be in a dark corner where I can observe everyone. *Shrugs* I just like being on top of everything and I want to know what people are going to do before they do it (by reading their body language) Ok, ok, I'll stop talking. But I want you to know that I'm glad we're talking. It's always nice to find another friend among the hundreds of people here. I'm glad I found a friend. Namarie - mellon - nin.

Reviewer: Ar-feiniel Signed
Date: 19/11/08 Title: Chapter 1: The Shadows of Soul

What did you do to the twins that is more evil then what I do Erestor? Tell me, I love hearing stories. Especially when they are evil.

I Googled the Tuatha De Danann, interesting. I mean, a lot of it I did not understand and I could even begin to try to pronounce majority of the names, but The Four Treasures of the Tuatha De Danann sounds very interesting.

I am still looking for Thranduil’s cave. I fell into one of the rivers that make you forget everything and I started walking around in circles. Dreams I had while in it were nice, though.

As much as I want to have dreams of really hot guys chasing me, I have not really had many good dreams lately. I think I had a couple ones of Ecthelion but that was like a week and a half ago. Why, I just had a nightmare last night; I cannot remember it.

Hmm…what Res story to tell tonight? Well, since I fell into the stream, I can only remember bits and pieces of pranks we used to play on each other.

The Comeuppance War: The Start. (Dun…dun…dun) * See: epic blood stained title and that sound effect where the girl screams and a few lightening bolts across the screen *

Good times. Well, let me see…how did all of this start again? I cannot remember but it was something about him giving me a B- on my Sindarin test. I got mad so I skipped class. Now, I would never do that but this is Erestor and he would not care if I died, let alone come to his class. Why the twins are in my even in my class, I may never know but they noticed that I seemed fine while at breakfast. They told Erestor this and he apparently was having a bad day, too. Something about a fight with Fin or something. The twins sensed my mood and Erestor’s mood as well and I guess that sent their evil minds to work. Well, at least I think the twins started the food fight. I dunno, I can not be sure who actually started it, but I am getting ahead of myself. Elladan came to me with this odd mischievous tinkle in his eye and Elrohir with a stupid grin, but I paid no mind to these observations when I agreed to go to lunch that day. Normally I skip lunch; I am never really all that hungry at lunch time. So, I am eating lunch at my own table where no one sits in the corner of the Falls of Fire, same old, same old. I am looking down at the day’s soup when all of a sudden I feel something gloopy running down my face! I look up to find Erestor, the twins, and some random Elf I do not know laughing at me, laughing so me! So, my only reaction is to pour my soup down Erestor’s back. Well, then the twins kept laughing so I threw a hot dog at Dan and I think I donut and Ro. Never throw food at the twins. First of all there at two of them [so your epically owned anyway] and second they have a good aim. I bet you can imagine what happened next. Food everywhere, people laughing, dodging, screaming, falling flat on their face, and what not.
Since Erestor is an ‘elder’ and teacher, he was trying to stop this the second after I threw vanilla pudding at him. Well…that is as much as I can remember right now.

I know I’d rather be in a dark corner too. I am good at reading peoples faces and I can tell their moods and personality by the tone of voice and what they say and how they say it and all.

No one gets me right when they try to read me. I can’t even read me! I guess I’m just mischievous like that…

You do not have to stop talking. I very much enjoy talking to you. You are my only Ringer friend!! You are the only one on this cite that I can relate too!!

Author's Response: Well, I don't know if it was really evil, but Elladan and Elrohir dumped a bucket of cold water down my back after they had been mercilessly pulling other pranks on me and I had enough. I finally chased them down a hallway where my best friend Glorfindel was sitting. He tripped Elladan and walked away as I pounced on Elladan and proceeded to strangle him. I had had enough! Putting worms in my shoes, or telling me that my music class had changed and we had the day off (Lindir was upset but understanding once he heard what had happened - I love that elf! Only in friend way, though). Anyways, If Elrond hadn't followed me after the prank I probably could've throttled his oldest child. You are my only Ringer friend too. I mean some of the other people here have talked to me but they don't do it all the time. IDK but I'm glad I'm getting to know you better. Yeah, about the Tuatha De Danann, I don't know how to say the names either. Maybe you could do some LOTR Crossovers with the 4 treasures. I would but I'm busy doing other things. I guess I'm just going to do rants and poems and not long stories. *Sighs unhappily* I just have a lot of other things to do. GTG but I have to ask you, What other books have you read? I'm looking for some nice books to cuddle up to, or evil ones. Whichever (I have a morbid fascination with vampires and sucking blood - like what does it feel like? Not that I'm a canible. That is disgusting. (I know I didn't spell that wrong. And I call myself a writer . . .) I can't believe it's almost Thanksgiving! I love the snow, yes, I live in the Northern Hemisphere - when I'm not in Middle-earth that is! Namarie!

Reviewer: Ar-feiniel Signed
Date: 20/11/08 Title: Chapter 1: The Shadows of Soul

Eh, strangling Elladan is the first step to becoming evil. * Sighs * Been there, done that.

Hmmm, what stories have I read that are evil? I dunno, not much unfortunately. I dunno how to search for them. I hate to have to refer to myself but I did do some evil things (like torture) in Amoniel’s Story. I didn’t go as graphic as I wanted to though…

I dunno if I can classify these stories as heart warming or anything, but I do like them.
Wild Roses: The Greenwood Prince 7 by Nieriel Raina. [good Legolas/OC.]
Chance Encounter by Mordaen. [great Balian of Ibelin story.]
Erm…I can’t think of anymore right now. If more pop into my head I’ll be sure to tell you.

More on The Comeuppance War:

Eh, the old hanging spider in the doorway, dieing each other’s hair and clothes while sleeping, putting fake wax ‘spilled ink’ bottles over important documents, hiding important documents, tripping each other, putting Greendome in each other’s drinks, booby trapping each other’s room so literally every step they take launches a new trap [we got so creative on that one!], like the twins did to you: dumping water down each others backs, snowball fights, mud fights, stick fights, wrestling fights [I epically lost them, Res is strong!! (Just between you and me, I think it’s because of Fin. Shh!!)], battle of wits, joke-offs, silly string fights, spit balls, acting pranks, dodge ball fights, jump rope offs, Are You Smarter Then an Elfling?-Offs, trick: swords, beds, food, hair accessories, toothpaste, those awesome skirting ink pens, and more.

Erm…I love Lindir and all but for some reason he can read my mind or something. He can…well, how do I put this…KNOW me without actually KNOWING me. If that’s not confusing. Well I mean...never mind.

Tuatha De Danan-I do not if I can do a crossover. I would have to do more research on them if I’m going do a story. I don’t think I can find any Celtic books around but I’ll do a major Google search when I’m up for it.

Dreams- I had another Ecthelion dream. I’m getting nervous now. If I keep dreaming him….

Oh, I though about your really hot guy…have you ever read Twilight?

I love vampires. I read Interview with the Vampire and ‘salem’s Lot. Interview with the Vampire was better of the two. ‘salen’s Lot was kind of…weird. I’ve also read the Twilight series. In Interview with the Vampire it goes in-depth on the emotions of a Vampire and what happens when they drink and what it feels like and all of that. Cannibal’s are disgusting. I once had to do a report on The Donner Party where I had to pretend to be one the members. It was very interesting I must say. We could have anything on eating people in it though, you know, not school related.


I love snow too, but I don’t really get to see it much because of global warming. * Sigh *
I can’t tell you any Earth stories of snow but I can tell you some Middle-Earth ones.

So, I once tried to walk on the top of a huge pile like Legolas. When I fell knee deep into the pile, Legolas laughed at me and started doing this odd dance on top of the snow {it was a mix of the robot and the wave and well some other moves I can’t describe}. So, I threw a snowball at him. Then, he wrestled me to the ground and buried me in snow. After that, we tricked Merry and Pippin into standing under a gutter of snow to pose for a ‘picture’ when they did so, Aragorn and Maedhros crawled down the roof of Fin’s house and unhinged the gutter so all of the snow on the roof and in the gutter would fall at them. Legolas and I used the camera to capture their faces. So funny! Then, we ice skated and made snow angels with Boromir. After that, I got to cold and we all went to Sam’s house. Rosie makes yummy cookies, I must say! Oh, the good old times.

Well, that all I time I have for now.

That’s all folks! [What is that from anyway? Who says that? Isn’t it that cartoon pig thing?]

Narmarie mellon nin,
Fei.

Author's Response: Are you Smarter than an Elfling? Fe, you made me choke on my hot cocoa! No, I haven't read Twilight. I don't know, maybe I should but I'm not really into Stephany Meyer (Yeah, I read the bestsellers lists every week) - I've seen the pictures from the movie and he's hot, sort of. But my guy had golden blonde hair and piercing blue or green eyes. Yeah, Porky Pig from the Bugs Bunny cartoons. I'm getting ready to do some wacky things on this site so, be watching my list of stories.