Reviews by Ar-feiniel
Summary: A little forum incident which I turned into a little story-parody-thing. Glorfindel is quite OOC here, be warned.
Categories: Book-verse, Off Topic Characters: Glorfindel, Maeglin, Original Character, Tuor, Turgon
Genres: Humor, Parody
Warnings: AU (alternate universe), First Draft
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1025 Read Count: 1356
Published: 12/15/08 Updated: 12/15/08 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Ar-feiniel Signed
* Laughs *

Sugar is evil. But so much fun!

Silly and random -- with Fin and Gondolin; I love it!

I am probably that Fangirl that shouted “Glorfie!”
Oh wait, you gave her a name -- I am Eru-thingy!! Fear my wraith!!
Uh, sorry about that, purple pixi-sticks are to blame!

Anyway, really good job! I loved it!!


P.S. Officially the longest title I have ever seen.

Author's Response: Thanks so much. Actually, the one who shouted "Glorfie!" -- that's me. :) I know, the title is nightmarish. *eyeroll*
Date: 12/15/08
Summary: Pippin thinks about Merry and their friendship. Very fluffy.
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Pippin
Genres: General
Warnings: None
Challenges: Friendship
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 183 Read Count: 1505
Published: 12/17/08 Updated: 12/17/08 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Best Reviewer: Ar-feiniel Signed
I thought this was rather cute. But, may I suggest something? Why not put Merry's thoughts of Pippin in there instead of just Pippin's? Or Bilbo's opinion on the two since you mention him. Merry's eyes (I think) are supposed to be brown in the book. Overall, good job!

Author's Response: Thanks for saying it's cute! I enjoyed writing it and will submit a story about Merry's views on Pippin soon.
Date: 12/17/08
Summary: He may seem dense, but this hobbit has some deep thoughts. Just Pippin thinking about the past during Sam's wedding.
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Pippin
Genres: General
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 641 Read Count: 1019
Published: 12/17/08 Updated: 12/17/08 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Ar-feiniel Signed
Good job! I like how you have it on Pippin's thoughts before he catches the bouquet! I never really thought of Pippin like this. Very nice work, I must say.
Date: 12/17/08
Summary: Erestor finds that somethings aren't as bad as he first thought.
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Aragorn, Elladan, Elrohir, Erestor, Glorfindel
Genres: Humor
Warnings: First Draft
Series: Christmas Themes
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1252 Read Count: 4600
Published: 12/19/08 Updated: 12/21/08 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Reviewer: Ar-feiniel Signed
Okay, if you are going to steal my Cirdan's beard line then you have to type it like this, "CIRDAN'S BEARD!!" Remember the *two* exclamation paints. ;P

Gollum: Mistress (that's "Master" for a girl, right?) Daewen is always stealing linesss from you, Mistress Fei. Nasty best friendsesss…

Fei: Uh, thanks Gollum…

Gollum: May we have that fish you promised us for saying that line for you, Mistress Fei?

Fei: Sure. * Tosses Catfish a few feet behind Gollum *

Anyway, It’s totally cool if you want to take my lines, I use some of yours like, “Shuts mouth with auditable clack” anyway. I used that one at least five times already. Valar! ‘Res got his comeuppance! I hope that does not give him any ideas for pranking me…
But I digress. Loved this story!! Estel’s plan, hmmmmmm, that should be interesting.

Author's Response: Alright. CIRDAN'S BEARD!! I'm sorry:)) Mistress for girl or woman, master for boy or man. Yeah, I think Estel and I think about the same way as each other, so it was really easy to come up with a plan. But you'll have to wait until I post the next chapter . . . . Mwahaha!!!
Date: 12/19/08
Summary: Fei gave me this idea, and I thought it was good, so here we are with Merry and Pippin and some other special guests to have a snowball fight!
Categories: Crossovers Characters: Aragorn, Bilbo, Captain Jack Sparrow, Elladan, Elrohir, Frodo, Legolas, Merry, Original Character, Orlando Bloom, Pippin, Sméagol
Genres: Action/Adventure, Humor, Mystery, Romance
Warnings: AU (alternate universe)
Series: Christmas Themes
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 22009 Read Count: 37823
Published: 12/19/08 Updated: 01/19/10 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 14: Hey, Elf Boy! Reviewer: Ar-feiniel Signed
You're welcome! Did Elladan get the ruby for his stick from the red wire ring you gave him for Christmas?
Hm, that *would* be weird if Orlando read that... then again he doesn't like computers, so why would he be on one?
Oooo, I think there’s going to be a little rival between Van and Orli! That should get interesting!
Oh, I had so much fun thinking of the Team Uniforms. Team Gold has the comic relief silly team so they get the funnier Uniforms while Team Silver is the more logical team with the sarcastic humor so they get the more normal looking Uniforms.
Congratulations! You've got Van's portrayal down pat -- when I read that to him, he laughed and said, "I would say that too!"
I thought you writing Orli in was HILARIOUS as well as CREATIVE!! I never would have thought of switching Legolas and him! I mean; if I had to continue on I would just randomly pouf in Beleg or something -- I wouldn’t even think of bringing Orli in! I was just going to write "Happy Birthday Orlando!!" in the Story Notes. Well, then again... if I brought Beleg in we would have another Elf. Then there would be too many Elves ( If that’s possible ;) ).
Grr… we’ll have to get Jack back for calling us wenches now won’t we *Grins evilly*?
Overall, I was laughing all the way through this Dae! I really loved it!
*Laughs* Fun, fun, fun : )


Author's Response: Thank you, thank you *bows and trips* Oops. Cool! Your brother likes it. What does he look like anyway . . . I'm just kidding. Yeah, Jack has it coming to him, though if he sees that I have his hat right now (and steps away from the rum for a while) I'll have to watch out. Have you noticed that Jack is always in a state of drunkeness? I mean, even when he hasn't had any rum! Ah well. Yeah, it was kind of easy to figure out your brother from the fights you've had him in. What color eyes does he have? *Laughs* Man, if Legolas or Elladan ever read this story, they might very well kill me. Or really hurt me. I wasn't really able to give Van a lot of lines though. Maybe you could . . . Anyway, Orlando better not be reading this. I mean, what if some other cast member is reading this? I would want to scream and then melt into the carpet, you know? (Especially since I want to meet some of them.) Let's see what happens with Orlando, though.
Date: 01/13/09
Title: Chapter 28: What Is Going On?! Reviewer: Ar-feiniel Signed


Talk about Drama, Dae. I just didn't see than coming! This is an Uninvited moment. I'm glad I'm alone in reading this...if Van were here...

Whoa. Head rush.


Author's Response: So, I can write in the drama department? Cool! Go ahead and let him see it! I want his take on being taken by a girl! Dae
Date: 03/24/09
Title: Chapter 20: Sibling Rivalries Reviewer: Ar-feiniel Signed
Van and I never seem to learn. *Giggles* Thanks, Dae. I love this. Van and I get to act like little children again. Wait. Don't we always act like kids? Oh well, I'm a kid at heart.

*Blushes* Orlando got close to me there. That is accurate, at first, I *would* pull away. Or... try to. Teehee. Orlando Bloom whipered in my ear. *Grin*

That flag is pretty awesome. Red, black, and silver are some sweet colors, I must say. *Thumbs up*

I wonder how Orli and I are going to get back at Van later. *Brainstorms* I'll have to get back to you on that one.

Cripes! Six more chapters to read! So little time... Mel wants to watch Jeopardy... Grr...

Weeeelll...Sibling Rivalries are the cherry on top of a Snowball war, don't cha think?


Author's Response: Already brainstorming. Revenge will have to be good. Really good:)) Yeah, I've been busy. I'm a little stuck right now, but I'll have something posted soon. Dae
Date: 03/16/09
Title: Chapter 1: It's Only the Beginning . . . Reviewer: Ar-feiniel Signed
Ah yes! We are the Lovely Comic Duo!! I love this Dae! You portray me so well!
Uh, I do not really understand the first part, are we supposed to by tipsy or something? Mmm… Hobbit wine…yummy.
The Glare! Nice! Fun Fact: When I was little, kids used to call my “glare” my “Evil eyes”.
Love the theme song, great touch.
* Evil eyes * You totally stole my “My eyes!” line but that’s okay! It worked! I will not send Fingon to hunt you down for it!
Love Pippin’s brain freeze! And the chick-flick line! * Laughs! *
Great Dae! I cannot wait until the next chapter. If you are low on ideas, I think I have a few that just might work…

Author's Response: I know about the theme song. It's perfect. I only 'used' your line because it's so funny! Thank you for not sending Fingon; I'm not sure I could handle that. Well, I just added the next chapter. Feel free to join in!!

Author's Response: I know about the theme song. It's perfect. I only 'used' your line because it's so funny! Thank you for not sending Fingon; I'm not sure I could handle that. Well, I just added the next chapter. Feel free to join in!!
Date: 12/19/08
Title: Chapter 28: What Is Going On?! Reviewer: Ar-feiniel Signed
Alright, alright! Sheesh! Van read this last chapter! I'll have you know that I practically shoved Van at the computer when he had a free second.

Ready for his comment, Dae?


...Get Comfortable...

...Van's comment is...

…So shockingly predictable….

….that it’s….


Sorry, Dae. You'll have to wait till the commercials are over...

Okay... Ready now?

No seriously…

You might want to sit down for this one….

Van's Response: EV-IL!!

Author's Response: Cool!
Date: 03/25/09
Title: Chapter 11: Logic, Pure Logic Reviewer: Ar-feiniel Signed
Valar, Kitt. I nearly choked with laughter! That was HILARIOUS! Great job!

Date: 01/04/09
Title: Chapter 14: Hey, Elf Boy! Reviewer: Ar-feiniel Signed
Well, Jack is just Jack. Good ‘ole Jack. I have noticed that, though!
Uhhh… hold on…. *Runs away from computer for a moment* Chocolate brown. Why?
Hey, if Legolas and Elladan are planning to kill you, then they have to get through me first. *Pouts indignantly, then turns to Legolas and makes the ‘I’m watching you’ sign* Yeah, that’s right Legolas, fear me!! Next time I’m up for writing the next chapter I’ll get Van to help me put in some lines for him. Yup, Orli VS. Van. That’s going to be exciting.


Author's Response: Definitely have your brother help. Is he on this site? If not, why? I mean, I'd like to see what he could come up with. Did you see the picture on my bio?
Date: 01/14/09
Title: Chapter 14: Hey, Elf Boy! Reviewer: Ar-feiniel Signed
No, he’s not on this site. I posted his novel on here under me but no one was reading or reviewing because it’s non-LotR. Yeah, I’ll get Van to write the next chapter with me. Prepare for a few sibling fights. Yes, I did! I was like, “Ooooooo. Who is that?!”

Author's Response: Does your brother like LOTR? If so, tell him to become a member here. I want to see what he's got. *Laughs* The picture is Elladan. Mmm . . . *Laughs* Okay, who can't resist that face? Hurry and write the next chapter, I'm very interested!
Date: 01/15/09
Title: Chapter 14: Hey, Elf Boy! Reviewer: Ar-feiniel Signed
Of course!!! Um, I’ll run it by him, but I can’t promise you anything. Goheno nin. He and I wrote most of the Arena so I guess you got a glimpse of his humor. Ooooo, do I detect a bit of a fancy (in this manor it means something like “like”, right?) for my brother? Mmmm… for a moment there I thought it was Feanor. But if it’s Elladan, then, can I steal him from you? *Laughs* Just kidding. Maedhros is my man… er… Elf. Okie, I’ll try to write it with Van tomorrow!!

Author's Response: Okay, I get it. I still want to see just him, you know? I loved the Arena - absolutely hilarious. Do you remember when we first starting talking to each other? It was when I reviewed on Return To Me. I'm going to read it really soon, I just am spending the night at a friend's house and won't be back until late tomorrow, so . . . Like, yes. Interested, yes, crush . . . I don't know - maybe . . . Nah, I don't even know him. I'm not a huge fan of Feanor so no, it's Elladan. Mm . . . now he's dreamy! Does your brother really have a mustache? It was mentioned in the Arena. Because if so, I'm not a real fan of just a mustache. Now, if it's like Aragorn's facial hair, right on! I like that. Hm, I better stop before I get myself in trouble. Oh, go ahead and have Orlando and Van fighting: over me, anyone else, it's fine. Good for laughs too. I can't wait to see what you two do, so namarie!
Date: 01/15/09
Title: Chapter 19: Guys Are . . . Disgusting Reviewer: Ar-feiniel Signed
You most certainly made Van laugh! He’s much better now, but the fever’s still slightly there (just between you and me: his eyes totally lit up when I said, “Dae wrote a new snowball chapter—this one’s especially for you”). Van particularly liked the end where Gollum's complaining about being the one to do the dirty work and he laughed when he and Orli rolled their eyes after I said that guys are... disgusting. Excellent job! It’s hard to get Van to laugh when he’s feeling under the weather! I can’t wait to see what happens with Gollum. Will an abominable snowman come and eat him while he’s digging?

Date: 03/07/09
Title: Chapter 30: The Beginning of the End Reviewer: Ar-feiniel Signed
Aww, I wanted to be the first to review the return of the snowball fight! *eyes narrow*

Oh well! I'll settle for second (I don't mean in the war! We're going to win aren't we? ;)) *steals Elladan's snowcone and slurps it*

I love my characteristic bear hug! Excellent dialogue and reactions, Dae! Oh, and Van couldn't help to blush at your guy's touching exchange of puppy eyes.

This is so exciting -- keep it up!


Author's Response:

My evil plan is working! Glad to know I made your brother blush:)

Date: 01/17/10
Title: Chapter 31: The Conclusion of Events and a Word From Our Sponser Reviewer: Ar-feiniel Signed
Aw, Dae, that ending was the cutest! Hilarious, no doubt, too. I absolutely loved it, this was the perfect ending :) (Van’s favorite part was when I was all like “Ew” after you guys expressed your love for one another, teeheehee)

Oh, Elladan. What are we going to do with you? ;P

I can’t wait for the summer-edition! I originally assumed it would be a water balloon fight, but when Van and I discussed the possibilities, we randomly came across the notion of this summer fight to be a battle of the barbeque. We can throw ribs at one another, and potato salad! What about chicken wing guns, or barbeque sauce launchers? Hotdog cannons?

Awww, thanks! I didn’t know I’d be mentioned at the end, I would’ve prepared a speech, or fixed my hair. I just feel so honored, thank you Dae. :D

I think everyone deserves a big round of applause *claps*

Teehee :D


Author's Response: Of course I would mention you! You're the one who encouraged this to happen. Thanks again:)
Date: 01/19/10
Summary: Me + early (for me) morning + keyboard = very strange/baaad.
Categories: Off Topic Characters: None
Genres: Humor, Other
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 528 Read Count: 1414
Published: 12/20/08 Updated: 12/20/08 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 (and only) Reviewer: Ar-feiniel Signed
This is so true. Teenagers are being demonized. I mean, honestly, we are not all bad. I hate watching TV -- everything on it has gone downhill. It used to be funny/educational to watch but now it’s just terribly stupid and/or boring. I like your similes -- they were very good. Like the tea bag one – nice! Uh…. may I ask who Noddy is? I never heard of that. Have a nice day too!


P.S. Nice title!
Date: 12/20/08
Summary: Merry's thoughts on Pippin and their friendship. Sequel to Merry-and-Pippin.
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Merry
Genres: General
Warnings: None
Challenges: Friendship
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 265 Read Count: 1647
Published: 12/20/08 Updated: 12/20/08 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Ar-feiniel Signed
I am so glad that this is not slash. I hate when people do Merry/Pippin slashs. It's so wrong -- there are cousins! Or Elladan/Elrohir. Or – sorry, I digress. Thank you very much for answering my question. I really like how you portrayed Merry and Pippin's view of each other. The brotherly best friends that would do anything for each other -- very nice job. That is how I think of them. Thanks again, meerkatalex!


Author's Response: I never write any Merry/Pippin slash because I think it's weird. However I am not against the fluffy brotherly bond between them - that's my view of them too, although I am not an anti-slash person. I'll read just about anything apart from... Graphic toture, rape and sex. Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 12/20/08
Summary: Just thought I'd redo a well-known (and incredibly annoying song). Enjoy!
Categories: Book-verse Characters: None
Genres: Poetry
Warnings: First Draft
Series: Christmas Themes
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 64 Read Count: 1369
Published: 12/22/08 Updated: 12/22/08 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Ar-feiniel Signed
Very cute, Dae! Melda (my little sister) actually sang this out loud when she was reading it with me. I think (but could be terribly wrong) talan plural is talyns. Ai, I thought you had a crush on Elladan!

Elladan: (Walks by and quickly looks over Fei’s shoulder) * Blushes*

Fei: (whispers when the twin is gone) I think he likes you!

So why not put him for a cute elf up an oak tree?! You know Legolas is mine! That reminds me: (I don’t mean to be bugging you or anything, honestly!) But are you done with your next Legolas Fangirl Arena fight?! I have some new ways to torture you with!! Muhahahaha!

This is so creative -- I would have never thought up all 12 days. I remember this one time Van, Mel and I came up with a “12 days of X-mas” song but it was a dog version. The first day was “A beagle in a dog house” Oh, that was so many years ago! I think we tape-recorded it…hmm…I wonder where it went…

Author's Response: Well, I do . . . and Legolas:)) I don't know, there are so many cute elves out there, it's really hard to just pick one! Well, I only have one idea for the arena and haven't even began it yet. *Blushes* Well, I'm so busy right now. Namarie.
Date: 12/22/08
Summary: Shawn and his dog are sent on the adventure of a lifetime
Found by Aragorn he joins the Dunedain Rangers and his dog is along for the ride New Chapters!! Please Review, I need feed back! Chapter 24 has been added!
Categories: Book-verse, Movie-verse Characters: The Fellowship
Genres: Action/Adventure
Warnings: AU (alternate universe)
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 47628 Read Count: 21976
Published: 12/24/08 Updated: 02/10/09 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: the Wolfrider Reviewer: Ar-feiniel Signed
I have three words for you, D. R. O. T. N: Goldenfang is AWESOME!!


P.S. Thank you for clearing up the whole human qualities matter. I was beginning to worry that Shawn would sick Silverfur on me because I like Max better. *Hides behind a brick wall* Please don’t kill me! :P

Author's Response: (To Silverfur) Down, sit, heel, Good boy Don't worry I wouldn't have sicked him on you' But mabye Goldenfang (Ducks around corner and hides) (Peeks out, laughs weakly) just kidding Fang, cant you take a joke! He says hes glad you like him and that he would appreciate it if you would tell your friends about this story, for more reviews (Looks behind) Im going to shut up now, Fang is giving me a look that says 'he will kill me' (Runs out door) See yah, hey watch the teeth! D.R.O.T.N.
Date: 01/10/09