Reviews by Ar-feiniel
Summary: A little forum incident which I turned into a little story-parody-thing. Glorfindel is quite OOC here, be warned.
Categories: Book-verse, Off Topic Characters: Glorfindel, Maeglin, Original Character, Tuor, Turgon
Genres: Humor, Parody
Warnings: AU (alternate universe), First Draft
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1025 Read Count: 1607
Published: Dec 15 2008 Updated: Dec 15 2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Ar-feiniel Signed
* Laughs *

Sugar is evil. But so much fun!

Silly and random -- with Fin and Gondolin; I love it!

I am probably that Fangirl that shouted “Glorfie!”
Oh wait, you gave her a name -- I am Eru-thingy!! Fear my wraith!!
Uh, sorry about that, purple pixi-sticks are to blame!

Anyway, really good job! I loved it!!


P.S. Officially the longest title I have ever seen.

Author's Response: Thanks so much. Actually, the one who shouted "Glorfie!" -- that's me. :) I know, the title is nightmarish. *eyeroll*
Date: Dec 15 2008
Summary: Pippin thinks about Merry and their friendship. Very fluffy.
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Pippin
Genres: General
Warnings: None
Challenges: Friendship
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 183 Read Count: 1894
Published: Dec 17 2008 Updated: Dec 17 2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Best Reviewer: Ar-feiniel Signed
I thought this was rather cute. But, may I suggest something? Why not put Merry's thoughts of Pippin in there instead of just Pippin's? Or Bilbo's opinion on the two since you mention him. Merry's eyes (I think) are supposed to be brown in the book. Overall, good job!

Author's Response: Thanks for saying it's cute! I enjoyed writing it and will submit a story about Merry's views on Pippin soon.
Date: Dec 17 2008
Summary: He may seem dense, but this hobbit has some deep thoughts. Just Pippin thinking about the past during Sam's wedding.
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Pippin
Genres: General
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 641 Read Count: 1276
Published: Dec 17 2008 Updated: Dec 17 2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Ar-feiniel Signed
Good job! I like how you have it on Pippin's thoughts before he catches the bouquet! I never really thought of Pippin like this. Very nice work, I must say.
Date: Dec 17 2008
Summary: Erestor finds that somethings aren't as bad as he first thought.
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Aragorn, Elladan, Elrohir, Erestor, Glorfindel
Genres: Humor
Warnings: First Draft
Series: Christmas Themes
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1252 Read Count: 5512
Published: Dec 19 2008 Updated: Dec 21 2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Reviewer: Ar-feiniel Signed
Okay, if you are going to steal my Cirdan's beard line then you have to type it like this, "CIRDAN'S BEARD!!" Remember the *two* exclamation paints. ;P

Gollum: Mistress (that's "Master" for a girl, right?) Daewen is always stealing linesss from you, Mistress Fei. Nasty best friendsesss…

Fei: Uh, thanks Gollum…

Gollum: May we have that fish you promised us for saying that line for you, Mistress Fei?

Fei: Sure. * Tosses Catfish a few feet behind Gollum *

Anyway, It’s totally cool if you want to take my lines, I use some of yours like, “Shuts mouth with auditable clack” anyway. I used that one at least five times already. Valar! ‘Res got his comeuppance! I hope that does not give him any ideas for pranking me…
But I digress. Loved this story!! Estel’s plan, hmmmmmm, that should be interesting.

Author's Response: Alright. CIRDAN'S BEARD!! I'm sorry:)) Mistress for girl or woman, master for boy or man. Yeah, I think Estel and I think about the same way as each other, so it was really easy to come up with a plan. But you'll have to wait until I post the next chapter . . . . Mwahaha!!!
Date: Dec 19 2008
Summary: Fei gave me this idea, and I thought it was good, so here we are with Merry and Pippin and some other special guests to have a snowball fight!
Categories: Crossovers Characters: Aragorn, Bilbo, Captain Jack Sparrow, Elladan, Elrohir, Frodo, Legolas, Merry, Original Character, Orlando Bloom, Pippin, Sméagol
Genres: Action/Adventure, Humor, Mystery, Romance
Warnings: AU (alternate universe)
Series: Christmas Themes
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 22009 Read Count: 44794
Published: Dec 19 2008 Updated: Jan 19 2010 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 14: Hey, Elf Boy! Reviewer: Ar-feiniel Signed
You're welcome! Did Elladan get the ruby for his stick from the red wire ring you gave him for Christmas?
Hm, that *would* be weird if Orlando read that... then again he doesn't like computers, so why would he be on one?
Oooo, I think there’s going to be a little rival between Van and Orli! That should get interesting!
Oh, I had so much fun thinking of the Team Uniforms. Team Gold has the comic relief silly team so they get the funnier Uniforms while Team Silver is the more logical team with the sarcastic humor so they get the more normal looking Uniforms.
Congratulations! You've got Van's portrayal down pat -- when I read that to him, he laughed and said, "I would say that too!"
I thought you writing Orli in was HILARIOUS as well as CREATIVE!! I never would have thought of switching Legolas and him! I mean; if I had to continue on I would just randomly pouf in Beleg or something -- I wouldn’t even think of bringing Orli in! I was just going to write "Happy Birthday Orlando!!" in the Story Notes. Well, then again... if I brought Beleg in we would have another Elf. Then there would be too many Elves ( If that’s possible ;) ).
Grr… we’ll have to get Jack back for calling us wenches now won’t we *Grins evilly*?
Overall, I was laughing all the way through this Dae! I really loved it!
*Laughs* Fun, fun, fun : )


Author's Response: Thank you, thank you *bows and trips* Oops. Cool! Your brother likes it. What does he look like anyway . . . I'm just kidding. Yeah, Jack has it coming to him, though if he sees that I have his hat right now (and steps away from the rum for a while) I'll have to watch out. Have you noticed that Jack is always in a state of drunkeness? I mean, even when he hasn't had any rum! Ah well. Yeah, it was kind of easy to figure out your brother from the fights you've had him in. What color eyes does he have? *Laughs* Man, if Legolas or Elladan ever read this story, they might very well kill me. Or really hurt me. I wasn't really able to give Van a lot of lines though. Maybe you could . . . Anyway, Orlando better not be reading this. I mean, what if some other cast member is reading this? I would want to scream and then melt into the carpet, you know? (Especially since I want to meet some of them.) Let's see what happens with Orlando, though.
Date: Jan 13 2009
Title: Chapter 28: What Is Going On?! Reviewer: Ar-feiniel Signed


Talk about Drama, Dae. I just didn't see than coming! This is an Uninvited moment. I'm glad I'm alone in reading this...if Van were here...

Whoa. Head rush.


Author's Response: So, I can write in the drama department? Cool! Go ahead and let him see it! I want his take on being taken by a girl! Dae
Date: Mar 24 2009
Title: Chapter 20: Sibling Rivalries Reviewer: Ar-feiniel Signed
Van and I never seem to learn. *Giggles* Thanks, Dae. I love this. Van and I get to act like little children again. Wait. Don't we always act like kids? Oh well, I'm a kid at heart.

*Blushes* Orlando got close to me there. That is accurate, at first, I *would* pull away. Or... try to. Teehee. Orlando Bloom whipered in my ear. *Grin*

That flag is pretty awesome. Red, black, and silver are some sweet colors, I must say. *Thumbs up*

I wonder how Orli and I are going to get back at Van later. *Brainstorms* I'll have to get back to you on that one.

Cripes! Six more chapters to read! So little time... Mel wants to watch Jeopardy... Grr...

Weeeelll...Sibling Rivalries are the cherry on top of a Snowball war, don't cha think?


Author's Response: Already brainstorming. Revenge will have to be good. Really good:)) Yeah, I've been busy. I'm a little stuck right now, but I'll have something posted soon. Dae
Date: Mar 16 2009
Title: Chapter 1: It's Only the Beginning . . . Reviewer: Ar-feiniel Signed
Ah yes! We are the Lovely Comic Duo!! I love this Dae! You portray me so well!
Uh, I do not really understand the first part, are we supposed to by tipsy or something? Mmm… Hobbit wine…yummy.
The Glare! Nice! Fun Fact: When I was little, kids used to call my “glare” my “Evil eyes”.
Love the theme song, great touch.
* Evil eyes * You totally stole my “My eyes!” line but that’s okay! It worked! I will not send Fingon to hunt you down for it!
Love Pippin’s brain freeze! And the chick-flick line! * Laughs! *
Great Dae! I cannot wait until the next chapter. If you are low on ideas, I think I have a few that just might work…

Author's Response: I know about the theme song. It's perfect. I only 'used' your line because it's so funny! Thank you for not sending Fingon; I'm not sure I could handle that. Well, I just added the next chapter. Feel free to join in!!

Author's Response: I know about the theme song. It's perfect. I only 'used' your line because it's so funny! Thank you for not sending Fingon; I'm not sure I could handle that. Well, I just added the next chapter. Feel free to join in!!
Date: Dec 19 2008
Title: Chapter 28: What Is Going On?! Reviewer: Ar-feiniel Signed
Alright, alright! Sheesh! Van read this last chapter! I'll have you know that I practically shoved Van at the computer when he had a free second.

Ready for his comment, Dae?


...Get Comfortable...

...Van's comment is...

…So shockingly predictable….

….that it’s….


Sorry, Dae. You'll have to wait till the commercials are over...

Okay... Ready now?

No seriously…

You might want to sit down for this one….

Van's Response: EV-IL!!

Author's Response: Cool!
Date: Mar 25 2009
Title: Chapter 11: Logic, Pure Logic Reviewer: Ar-feiniel Signed
Valar, Kitt. I nearly choked with laughter! That was HILARIOUS! Great job!

Date: Jan 04 2009
Title: Chapter 14: Hey, Elf Boy! Reviewer: Ar-feiniel Signed
Well, Jack is just Jack. Good ‘ole Jack. I have noticed that, though!
Uhhh… hold on…. *Runs away from computer for a moment* Chocolate brown. Why?
Hey, if Legolas and Elladan are planning to kill you, then they have to get through me first. *Pouts indignantly, then turns to Legolas and makes the ‘I’m watching you’ sign* Yeah, that’s right Legolas, fear me!! Next time I’m up for writing the next chapter I’ll get Van to help me put in some lines for him. Yup, Orli VS. Van. That’s going to be exciting.


Author's Response: Definitely have your brother help. Is he on this site? If not, why? I mean, I'd like to see what he could come up with. Did you see the picture on my bio?
Date: Jan 14 2009
Title: Chapter 14: Hey, Elf Boy! Reviewer: Ar-feiniel Signed
No, he’s not on this site. I posted his novel on here under me but no one was reading or reviewing because it’s non-LotR. Yeah, I’ll get Van to write the next chapter with me. Prepare for a few sibling fights. Yes, I did! I was like, “Ooooooo. Who is that?!”

Author's Response: Does your brother like LOTR? If so, tell him to become a member here. I want to see what he's got. *Laughs* The picture is Elladan. Mmm . . . *Laughs* Okay, who can't resist that face? Hurry and write the next chapter, I'm very interested!
Date: Jan 15 2009
Title: Chapter 14: Hey, Elf Boy! Reviewer: Ar-feiniel Signed
Of course!!! Um, I’ll run it by him, but I can’t promise you anything. Goheno nin. He and I wrote most of the Arena so I guess you got a glimpse of his humor. Ooooo, do I detect a bit of a fancy (in this manor it means something like “like”, right?) for my brother? Mmmm… for a moment there I thought it was Feanor. But if it’s Elladan, then, can I steal him from you? *Laughs* Just kidding. Maedhros is my man… er… Elf. Okie, I’ll try to write it with Van tomorrow!!

Author's Response: Okay, I get it. I still want to see just him, you know? I loved the Arena - absolutely hilarious. Do you remember when we first starting talking to each other? It was when I reviewed on Return To Me. I'm going to read it really soon, I just am spending the night at a friend's house and won't be back until late tomorrow, so . . . Like, yes. Interested, yes, crush . . . I don't know - maybe . . . Nah, I don't even know him. I'm not a huge fan of Feanor so no, it's Elladan. Mm . . . now he's dreamy! Does your brother really have a mustache? It was mentioned in the Arena. Because if so, I'm not a real fan of just a mustache. Now, if it's like Aragorn's facial hair, right on! I like that. Hm, I better stop before I get myself in trouble. Oh, go ahead and have Orlando and Van fighting: over me, anyone else, it's fine. Good for laughs too. I can't wait to see what you two do, so namarie!
Date: Jan 15 2009
Title: Chapter 19: Guys Are . . . Disgusting Reviewer: Ar-feiniel Signed
You most certainly made Van laugh! He’s much better now, but the fever’s still slightly there (just between you and me: his eyes totally lit up when I said, “Dae wrote a new snowball chapter—this one’s especially for you”). Van particularly liked the end where Gollum's complaining about being the one to do the dirty work and he laughed when he and Orli rolled their eyes after I said that guys are... disgusting. Excellent job! It’s hard to get Van to laugh when he’s feeling under the weather! I can’t wait to see what happens with Gollum. Will an abominable snowman come and eat him while he’s digging?

Date: Mar 07 2009
Title: Chapter 30: The Beginning of the End Reviewer: Ar-feiniel Signed
Aww, I wanted to be the first to review the return of the snowball fight! *eyes narrow*

Oh well! I'll settle for second (I don't mean in the war! We're going to win aren't we? ;)) *steals Elladan's snowcone and slurps it*

I love my characteristic bear hug! Excellent dialogue and reactions, Dae! Oh, and Van couldn't help to blush at your guy's touching exchange of puppy eyes.

This is so exciting -- keep it up!


Author's Response:

My evil plan is working! Glad to know I made your brother blush:)

Date: Jan 17 2010
Title: Chapter 31: The Conclusion of Events and a Word From Our Sponser Reviewer: Ar-feiniel Signed
Aw, Dae, that ending was the cutest! Hilarious, no doubt, too. I absolutely loved it, this was the perfect ending :) (Van’s favorite part was when I was all like “Ew” after you guys expressed your love for one another, teeheehee)

Oh, Elladan. What are we going to do with you? ;P

I can’t wait for the summer-edition! I originally assumed it would be a water balloon fight, but when Van and I discussed the possibilities, we randomly came across the notion of this summer fight to be a battle of the barbeque. We can throw ribs at one another, and potato salad! What about chicken wing guns, or barbeque sauce launchers? Hotdog cannons?

Awww, thanks! I didn’t know I’d be mentioned at the end, I would’ve prepared a speech, or fixed my hair. I just feel so honored, thank you Dae. :D

I think everyone deserves a big round of applause *claps*

Teehee :D


Author's Response: Of course I would mention you! You're the one who encouraged this to happen. Thanks again:)
Date: Jan 19 2010
Summary: Me + early (for me) morning + keyboard = very strange/baaad.
Categories: Off Topic Characters: None
Genres: Humor, Other
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 528 Read Count: 1925
Published: Dec 20 2008 Updated: Dec 20 2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 (and only) Reviewer: Ar-feiniel Signed
This is so true. Teenagers are being demonized. I mean, honestly, we are not all bad. I hate watching TV -- everything on it has gone downhill. It used to be funny/educational to watch but now it’s just terribly stupid and/or boring. I like your similes -- they were very good. Like the tea bag one – nice! Uh…. may I ask who Noddy is? I never heard of that. Have a nice day too!


P.S. Nice title!
Date: Dec 20 2008
Summary: Merry's thoughts on Pippin and their friendship. Sequel to Merry-and-Pippin.
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Merry
Genres: General
Warnings: None
Challenges: Friendship
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 265 Read Count: 2035
Published: Dec 20 2008 Updated: Dec 20 2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Ar-feiniel Signed
I am so glad that this is not slash. I hate when people do Merry/Pippin slashs. It's so wrong -- there are cousins! Or Elladan/Elrohir. Or – sorry, I digress. Thank you very much for answering my question. I really like how you portrayed Merry and Pippin's view of each other. The brotherly best friends that would do anything for each other -- very nice job. That is how I think of them. Thanks again, meerkatalex!


Author's Response: I never write any Merry/Pippin slash because I think it's weird. However I am not against the fluffy brotherly bond between them - that's my view of them too, although I am not an anti-slash person. I'll read just about anything apart from... Graphic toture, rape and sex. Thanks for reviewing!
Date: Dec 20 2008
Summary: Just thought I'd redo a well-known (and incredibly annoying song). Enjoy!
Categories: Book-verse Characters: None
Genres: Poetry
Warnings: First Draft
Series: Christmas Themes
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 64 Read Count: 1858
Published: Dec 22 2008 Updated: Dec 22 2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Ar-feiniel Signed
Very cute, Dae! Melda (my little sister) actually sang this out loud when she was reading it with me. I think (but could be terribly wrong) talan plural is talyns. Ai, I thought you had a crush on Elladan!

Elladan: (Walks by and quickly looks over Fei’s shoulder) * Blushes*

Fei: (whispers when the twin is gone) I think he likes you!

So why not put him for a cute elf up an oak tree?! You know Legolas is mine! That reminds me: (I don’t mean to be bugging you or anything, honestly!) But are you done with your next Legolas Fangirl Arena fight?! I have some new ways to torture you with!! Muhahahaha!

This is so creative -- I would have never thought up all 12 days. I remember this one time Van, Mel and I came up with a “12 days of X-mas” song but it was a dog version. The first day was “A beagle in a dog house” Oh, that was so many years ago! I think we tape-recorded it…hmm…I wonder where it went…

Author's Response: Well, I do . . . and Legolas:)) I don't know, there are so many cute elves out there, it's really hard to just pick one! Well, I only have one idea for the arena and haven't even began it yet. *Blushes* Well, I'm so busy right now. Namarie.
Date: Dec 22 2008
Summary: Shawn and his dog are sent on the adventure of a lifetime
Found by Aragorn he joins the Dunedain Rangers and his dog is along for the ride New Chapters!! Please Review, I need feed back! Chapter 24 has been added!
Categories: Book-verse, Movie-verse Characters: The Fellowship
Genres: Action/Adventure
Warnings: AU (alternate universe)
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 47628 Read Count: 28953
Published: Dec 24 2008 Updated: Feb 10 2009 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: the Wolfrider Reviewer: Ar-feiniel Signed
I have three words for you, D. R. O. T. N: Goldenfang is AWESOME!!


P.S. Thank you for clearing up the whole human qualities matter. I was beginning to worry that Shawn would sick Silverfur on me because I like Max better. *Hides behind a brick wall* Please don’t kill me! :P

Author's Response: (To Silverfur) Down, sit, heel, Good boy Don't worry I wouldn't have sicked him on you' But mabye Goldenfang (Ducks around corner and hides) (Peeks out, laughs weakly) just kidding Fang, cant you take a joke! He says hes glad you like him and that he would appreciate it if you would tell your friends about this story, for more reviews (Looks behind) Im going to shut up now, Fang is giving me a look that says 'he will kill me' (Runs out door) See yah, hey watch the teeth! D.R.O.T.N.
Date: Jan 10 2009
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: Edoras Reviewer: Ar-feiniel Signed
I absolutely loved the gifts, D.R.O.T.N! A looking-glass-eye-patch and talking animals ring! I thought they were extremely creative – very, very nice job! Yay, Max – oops, I mean Silverfur – gets to come back!! I was beginning to miss him! I really like how he can talk in Shawn’s mind now. But if you want me be to be honest, I find it a tad freaky that Sil now has human qualities now (i.e. walking, hugging, etc). But that is only my opinion; I honestly do not want to discourage you or anything. And if I have I am dreadfully sorry. But I really did like these last few chapters. Please keep up the good work!


Author's Response: The only Human Qualities he has are Smiling and hugging, He still walks on all fours and runs like a dog. He bows like a dog, he can't stand on two feet, just wanted to clarify that he is still a dog, just silver fur and a few, count them, few human qualities. Sorry for the deception, should have explained it better Thanks for the Review! D.R.O.T.N.
Date: Jan 08 2009
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: A Quest begins Reviewer: Ar-feiniel Signed
Happy New Year to you too!

I think this a very good story so far. I love how you brought a dog into Middle-Earth as well as in an interesting and different manner! I really like how you had Shawn teleport into a Dunedain camp and I also like his relationship with Aragorn and Legolas -- very nice! I also like your writing style. Keep up the good work!


P.S. When is Fletcher coming back? I was beginning to like him. :P

Author's Response: Thank you its nice to see some one else reviewing my stories, because its been only Kit Otter and i would like some other feed back, so thanks. And don't worry Fletcher will come back, its Book-versed too Dunedain Ranger of the North
Date: Jan 01 2009
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Lothlorien Reviewer: Ar-feiniel Signed
I really like the emotions and the friendship-bonds that are developing. Keep up the good work, Dunedain ranger of the North.


Author's Response: Thanks, I appreciate it. Oh and by the way its D.R.O.T.N. for short (Dunedain Ranger of the North) D.R.O.T.N.
Date: Jan 06 2009
Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18: Battle for Helm's deep 2 Reviewer: Ar-feiniel Signed

Me: *Sticks head out from corner of the wall. Sees Fang chasing Shawn, throws head back and laughs* Ha ha!

Fang: *Hears and rears head to see the laughing girl, turns and charges back to the brick wall* ‘I see you…’

Me: Ha…. Ha…. Ha…. *Gulps*

Shawn: *Thinking quickly* Freda attack!

Freda: But I’m just a wittle girl… *Makes puppy face*

Shawn: Right… uh… Silverfur attack!

Sil: *Looks up from thick textbook* What?

Freda: Why does the doggy have glasses?

Shawn: Because his insurance doesn’t pay for contacts.

Freda: Right… *Runs away* I was SO right when I said dogs could read and write, Eothain!

Fang: *Pokes nose around wall and sniffs around for Ar-feiniel* ‘Where are you?’

Me: Um… Shawn? What’s the wolf think—

Fang: ‘There you are!’

Me: Ah! *Runs around the corner of the of the brick wall, Fang on her heels* SHAWN!!!

Shawn: *Reading book with Silverfur* Shush! Fingon’s about to die! *Tear*

Me: *Rolls eyes, turns around abruptly*

Fang: *Stops and snarls at Ar-feiniel, teeth close to her face*

Me: *Smells Fang’s breath* You might want to consider a Tic-Tac.

Fang: ‘Why you little!’ *Chases a laughing Ar-feiniel across Rohan*


Sorry about that… and sorry that it took so long for me to respond. But here are my comments: I liked the Dream chapter as well as the Helm’s Deep ones. I like how you have Shawn compete in the counting kills rivalry between Legolas and Gimli. It lightens the mood. I like how you had Shawn fall asleep. But I’m a bit confused, did Shawn sleep through the rest of the Battle and how? Did he just randomly lie down next to a wall and doze off or did he retreat into the actual building? How long was he sleep? And no Orcs noticed him? (Sorry, I’m a details freak)

Oh, and before I forget, I really like your new story. I love the Civil War and am glad someone has done a crossover. I really like the creativity in that one – where you have two fallen solders beam into Middle-earth differently and I like how you have (James, I think it is…?) wake up as a wolf. I always imagined what would happen if something where to go wrong in the warping time-traveling system. (Someone having two left hands perhaps?) I can’t wait to see what will happen next it that story. It really is very, very interesting.

Well, again sorry it took so long. I have been reading your stories, don’t think I forgot or anything. I’m forgetting something. Rats. Oh, well, I’ll respond again when I think of it. Keep up the great work!


P.S. If I hurt your feeling is any way with my randomness in the beginning of my review, please let my know. I am terribly sorry. I have the outmost respect for your and your characters. I was only poking playful fun…

Author's Response: Actually its ok in the beginning, but I would like to clarify that it was me, D.R.O.T.N., that Fang chased, he has a bad temper, (hears step behind him and turns around) Oh, hey Shawn didn't see you there, (Shawn glares at me) ok, sorry I will move onto something else (Waits till Shawn leaves) whew, ok now, where was I! Oh yah, Shawn doesn't fall asleep during the battle, he falls asleep before the battle ever begins, Gimli is just shaking him awake because Aragorn doesn't want him out of his sight when the fighting begins. But did you really like the way I made him see his Grandpa again? And his family? I had to put a dream sequence in there somewhere! But anyways, I am glad you are liking my other story. The Civil War is my favorite subject. And James wasn't turned into a wolf by being brought there the Valar that he saw at the Battle, yes it was one of the valar, turned him into a wolf, for his old body was dying. But I am glad you like him and on top of that, Alex is turnning into an elf! please keep reviewing, I gotta go, cant stay and talk, got two wolf's after me now. See ya!!( Runs laughing as Fang and Mellon come running around the corner) come on Mellon, I didn't say anything about you, Hey! now you watch your teeth, yowch!!! why you little, yikes!!!
Date: Jan 17 2009
Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20: Isengard and New Father Reviewer: Ar-feiniel Signed
I am dreadfully sorry that it took so long to respond. Honestly, I feel really bad. SORRY! Stupid homework. Thank you for clearing up the Fang-chasing-you and the sleeping-at-Helm's-Deep thing, I can be really stupid sometimes. *Slaps forehead* Wait, I shouldn't be doing that, I have a German Project to do after this. Can't give myself a headache, now can I?! Yes, I did like the Dream chapter very much, because I thought that Shawn seeing his family again was rather cute and it lightened the mood as well. I was like, "Awww!" when he got to talk to his Grandfather and all. Reminds me of this little skit this kid put on once... never mind. Ja, dream squences are always so much fun to write. :)

Moving on to Solders from another Time, the Civil War is one of my favorites as well and I'm glad someone made an LotR-Civil War crossover. YAY! Sorry again, I either read that part wrong or worded my question wrong, which, I am the master at doing both. Stupid Fei. Just curious, but which Valar did James see? Orome? AN ELF? Didn't see that coming! Aw, you ruined it for me... *Pouts*

Okay, moving on to the two chapters that I just read...
“Don’t make me dismount and come down there! Because I will!” -- Tee hee, I love that line. Very nice. Aw, *Pats Fangs head reasurringly* It's going to be okay. *Fang snarls at Fei* Yikes! I was just trying to help. Really, I think that Shawn and Fang have an interesting realationship.
“Well? Why must you disturb my rest? Will you give me no peace at all by night or day?” Said Saruman in a sweet voice *Laughs, then chokes* Sarumon... sweet? *Shivers* Nice line, though. Very funny. YAY! *Claps hands excitedly* Fletcher is back! YAY! I love Fletcher. Aw, that's soo adorable. *Joins group-hug*
P.S. I just read your profile and I nearly choked when I saw my name on it! THANK YOU! I feel so honored! You have no idea how happy you just made my day! Thank you very, very much! :D

P.P.S. Sorry about all of the type-o's, I'm on my sister's computer and I'm typing in a Notepad (which doesn't have a SpellCheck) so, I'm sure that the many spelling mistakes. Sorry!

Author's Response: Its all right! I am glad you liked them both. And I don't know which Valar it was, I just made it up! I had to add you as one of my favorite authors and reviewers, because I like some of your stories, don't ask which ones because I can't remember, and your reviews are helpful. Hey I have a question, I have just placed a challenge on here and I was wondering if you would like to do it? If not I understand! I am adding another story called Riders of Arnor, its another Civil War Fic-LotR! I have also place a third story called a Slave no More, check it out! D.R.O.T.N.
Date: Jan 28 2009