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Very nicely done - what a pleasure to read.
My only slight concern is that we are told in the appendices that Legolas and Gimli brought their peoples to live near each other before the last two members of the Fellowship sailed for Valinor.
I liked this one very much - I can just see the hobbits asking lots of questions and testing the others' patience.
What was really good was how you got into Pippin's concerns once Legolas had been hurt on his behalf.
A nice little story. Thanks!
Author's Response: I'm happy that you liked it. It was easy for me to picture the hobbits' curiosity, too, especially where elves were concerned. I'm happy you liked that part. It seemed to me that Pippin would have reacted just that way. Thank you!