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Perfect :)
Author's Response: LOL! Really? *claps hands* Thanks for reading, Origo!
-Kitt
haha.. mini Eowyn is cute :)
nice story :)
Author's Response: Thanks - nice to know you enjoyed it!
nicely intergrated.. i like the way youve added your own point of view in there :)
Author's Response: Thanks so much!!! I'm glad you liked it. Thank you for reviewing!!!!! I really really appreciate it!!!!!!! :D
"People sometimes get a little homesick - and I still get ill every October"
what that in referance to bilbo's party?
if so, it was in September.. just wondering lol
anyway.. its good :)
although there could be a few less commers.. not much to change :)
Author's Response: No, people get homesick just in general and Frodo gets ill every October from when he was stabbed at Weathertop. (He is not yet cured of this wound, it's an AU story after all.) Sorry about my over-useness of commas; it's a weakness of mine. I will try to improve that! Thank you for reviewing! :-)
meerkatalex
i think you have spies!!
http://www.comparethemeerkat.com/tv-ad.html
Author's Response: ARGH! That is the freakiest thing I have seen since that Bring on the Trumpets advert! Thanks for telling me this - it's quite scary though!
meerkatalex
cool concept. there is one or two things you could change around, but other then that its really good :)
Author's Response: Thanks, glad you liked it!
Dune
you need energy drink.. if theres anything that will make you creative.. its energy drinks :)
and if you have writers block.. you need to see the story as a movie already.. try imagining the music you could put there.. that might help :)