Ha...I like the beginning. *goes to read more*
Like it. Quite funny, yet cool. One question: why was Balian salty? Is this when he gets shipwrecked and he's covered in sand? *goes to read even more*
Author's Response: Well, he\'s salty coz he\'s been in the ocean since he\'s been shipwrecked.
Ooo... you're right; evil cliffie!
Wow...this is really good. Perfect for the Easter season. Great job, mellon-nin!
Author's Response: Thanks. I\'m glad you like it.
So sad; it really reminds me of MC's story "Dark Visions." Similar title and summary...
Author's Response: It *is* sad. I read that story years ago, and though the title and summary are similar, the stories are totally different. I hope you like this one.