Nicely done, cuz. I like it. Wait until u've read mine! its not going to be as good, but what'd u expect? ur the author!
Author's Response: Why thank you!! How very courteous of you to stop by and leave a review!! That doesn't reall make sense but OH WELL!!! I've read your story and I like it. OBVIOSULY mine is better!! Just kidding, just kidding!!! I think it's good, too. Thanks again for the review. CU sometime...
Hey again. It could have a little more detail with meeting, but otherwise i liked it
Author's Response: I'm open to suggestions!! How could I make it better? I like to take the time and edit my work. It's funny when you compare past work to recent stuff. I'm always like, wow I sucked!! Anyways, Thanks for the review, cuz!!