Reviews by Ndil

2009 MEFA Third Place Winner in the Adventure Category. 

Brandon wakes up in the middle of a forest in another world. Is it a dream? Or is he stuck in an unfamiliar place where his life might no longer matter? Please read and review!

Categories: Book-verse Characters: Arwen, Balrog, Bill the Pony, Celeborn, Galadriel, Orcs/Uruk-Hai, Original Character, Sauron, The Fellowship
Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama, General, Humor
Warnings: Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 50612 Read Count: 33543
Published: 24/01/09 Updated: 08/07/09 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 27: Brother to Brother Reviewer: Ndil Signed
Poor Brandon. I like this story. Humour, Drama, Adventure; it's all in there. Your writing is improving as the story progresses. Keep the chapters coming! Good luck with MEFA!

Author's Response: I'm glad you like the story! Thank you so much for the compliments and reviews!
Date: 06/06/09
Second Chance by Narya Rated: PG-13 [Reviews - 138]
Summary: When fifteen-year-old Anna loses her sister in a freak horseriding accident, she has no way of knowing that Izzy has been given another chance to live and love. However, the afterlife works in mysterious ways; soon Anna is plagued by dreams that link her to a young woman from an age long, long forgotten, and to a blue-eyed foal that she has a nagging feeling she should recognise...

A response to Dunedain Ranger of the North's "Animal Transformations" challenge. Rated PG-13 for character death, emotional content and some mild language.
Categories: Book-verse, Movie-verse, Crossovers Characters: Original Character
Genres: Angst, Drama, Family, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort, Other
Warnings: Character Death
Challenges: Animal Transformations
Series: Second Chance
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 64189 Read Count: 30493
Published: 12/02/09 Updated: 16/04/10 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 31: Epilogue Reviewer: Ndil Signed
I've been out of fanfiction for a while, but I am so glad I found this story again! It's one of my all time favourites, but evenso I had forgotten how good it really was. Now I remember. Thank you for writing it.
Date: 10/08/11
Title: Chapter 7: The New Boy Reviewer: Ndil Signed
Well written! I am enjoying this story too. I hope you get the screen time anytime soon! Keep updating...

Author's Response: Hi Ndil! Sorry I didn't get back to you earlier, I'm usually much quicker than this *slaps wrists* thank you for the compliments...and, by way of apology, the next chapter is now up ;-) so feel free to read on!
Date: 09/06/09
Summary: An essay describing how I came to Tolkien and the role it played in my childhood. Round Robin - please do add your own thoughts and experiences!
Categories: Off Topic Characters: None
Genres: Essay
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11572 Read Count: 8127
Published: 12/05/09 Updated: 02/06/09 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: "Of Plant Pots, Siblings and Mad Uncle Tim" - Narya Reviewer: Ndil Signed

I don't think I can respond to a review directly, so I'll submit my thanks this way.

To Kitt Otter: It is hard isn't it? But at least now I finally can read the original English books, I love it. So much is often lost in translations. Like the songs and poems in LOTR, a translator can never get it completely right. Good luck writing to you too!

To: xFanarix. I guess we agree then that Middle Earth's history should be incorporated in high school history classes! ;) I feel too that he left us an invitation… so let’s write on…

Date: 31/05/09
Title: Chapter 1: "Of Plant Pots, Siblings and Mad Uncle Tim" - Narya Reviewer: Ndil Signed
Thanks Narya!

I actually never got back to The Hobbit. Because I don't own a copy. I have started reading the Similarion a few times though. It's a bit hardcore. Do you think I should reread The Hobbit?
Date: 01/06/09
Summary: All the criminal offeses have been piled up against an unsuspecting fanfic writer. Petty theft of originality, 10th walker overkill, Mary Sue overkill, and the likes. Can she survive where fanfic goes to die?
Categories: Off Topic Characters: Aragorn, Balrog, Bilbo, Bill the Pony, Boromir, Elrond, Ents, Eru / Iluvatar, Faramir, Frodo, Gandalf / Olorin, Gil-Galad, Gimli, Gollum, Haldir, Isildur, Legolas, Merry, Nazgûl, Orcs/Uruk-Hai, Original Character, Pippin, Sam, Sméagol
Genres: General, Humor, Parody
Warnings: AU (alternate universe)
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 19166 Read Count: 15290
Published: 18/07/09 Updated: 12/09/09 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Lower-Earth Reviewer: Ndil Signed
lol! this is good and really funny! Will I get sentenced too? ;)

Author's Response: hehe thanks. I think we ALL at some point deserve to serve a sentence, for now I am safe. But I'm sure I will find a note informing me of my lifetime sentence any day now. ;P
Date: 30/07/09
Summary: Sequel to Second Chance.

"Middle-earth is real. It's just...I don't know...hiding."

Anna and Derry try to understand their connection to Middle-earth while Beomia adjusts to married life. Better summary to come ;)
Categories: Book-verse, Movie-verse, Crossovers Characters: Original Character
Genres: Angst, Drama, Family, Fantasy, Friendship, Romance
Warnings: AU (alternate universe)
Series: Second Chance
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 2668 Read Count: 3859
Published: 13/05/10 Updated: 30/03/11 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Retracing and Remembering Reviewer: Ndil Signed
So glad I found the sequal, but it ends too soon! I hope you haven't abandoned the story?
Date: 10/08/11
The Songs of War by Aralinn Rated: PG-13 [Reviews - 1]
Summary: Laineth was much like her father: a loner, distrustful, easily angered, and fierce to her enemies. She has entered into an adventure that will test the very foundations of her soul and have her questions everything she thought she knew about herself.
Categories: Movie-verse, Book-verse Characters: Frodo, Legolas
Genres: Action/Adventure, Romance
Warnings: Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 11395 Read Count: 856
Published: 24/08/13 Updated: 06/09/13 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Ndil Signed
Half-Elf / Half Skin-changer! That is an original idea and I wonder where it will be going. This could become interesting... :)

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad it sounds interesting, I actually got the idea in a crazy dream I had XD hopefully you'll like it!
Date: 29/08/13