sipply breath-taking! I can't believe how beutifuly it's writen. Never in My life has a story held me so strongly, and that means a lot coming from me. I've been a little bite of a book critic sence I learned how to read, family and friends say I should be one, that I'd be feared by authors everywhere. Great work! Keep it up.
Author's Response: Hello there! I am really happy you have enjoyed the story and I really appreciate your praise. I hope you will like my other story, 'Sleeping Beauty', as well!
Oh god don't do that! This isn't a story! this is curel! This is one of the best BEGININGS of a fanfic I've ever read! But there is no middle and NO END!!! All you did was give your viewer an attachment to a character, gave a few questions, a BIG "OH! Now it makes sense!", and then leave it without without an outlay of what happened, or what will happen the Erestor. He went from the stupid elf, to the deaf, THE END???!!! Your KILLING us out here!!! I hope the rest of your stories aren't way... your a really good writer, but this is a sad waist of tallent and inspiration.
Author's Response: Indeed, perhaps it is thought to have been a waste, but then, not every story has an 'ending' so to speak. This was written in answer to a challenge; by all rights, it is 'done', in that it met the challenge. It may some day merit a sequel, and while I have for some years considered the advice others have given in regards to the abrupt final chapter, all things considered, I do believe it truly is done. There is actually a different character in all of that I should like to focus upon more than Erestor, should anything continue later from this. Thank you for reading and reviewing. -Zhie
this is awsome! It realy stirs deep. I only wish I new the tune. Great work, job well done.
Wow. I have to say this is your best chapter yet. I love the chase.
Wow! This is wonderful. Usually 'Braking the elven rules' doesn’t brother me, but wow! It really tugged my conscious alarm. I was on the edge of my seat thinking ‘Oh, please don’t let some one walk around the corner right now!!!….’ Up date as soon as possible, I’m on pins and needles here!!!…
Author's Response: Thanks for reading! You've actually chosen a really good time to join in, as I've finally decided to finish this (it's been on hiatus for a few years now). I'm really glad you enjoyed the intensity of the situation. I just posted the latest chapter, so please enjoy. -P.G.
Oh, that is too cool! Goldenfang is my kind of ride. I think I feel a bit of kindered spirit here. This is exactly the kind of thing I like to see. I'm kind of a wolf-freak 'cause my Dad raises hiberd-wolves(no kidding here), and they show more personality than any dog breed I've ever seen. I can't help but to imagine them as intellegant as any human. And the way you make Sil is all too easy for me to picture because Grizzlie,(Dad's prized breeder and guard dog)a 215lb.black male puts on facal exspesions that you would swear were too human to be on an animal. Sil kinda makes me think of him. Great job!