i loved it SO much i almost skipped lunch i was so into it! can't wait until the next book!!!
0.o;; 0_o ^_^ I loved it. It is fantastic
WOW. That was bloody brilliant mate! You've got a good sense of humour! Is there more coming?
OMG!!!!! I CAN'T BELIEVE WHAT I JUST READ!! YOU ARE ONE OF THE MOST TALENTED WRITERS!!! I LOVED IT HEAPS!
I loved it! I 'specaially liked:
5. Make fun of the fact that he was beaten by a three foot hairy midget
6. Criticize his 'artistic abilities' and point to an orc
7. Tell him he's not as pretty as Legolas or Aragorn
15. Give him and his ring wraiths pet names
18. When he's been bad smack him and say "Bad boy!"
42. if proven uncooperative, say things like, "Legolas would do it." or, "I wish you were more like Aragorn"
(*rotflmao*) Keep up the humour PaintedBlack!
omg, please continue, you left me in suspence!!
WOW! (*SCREAMS EXCITEDLY*) That was really FABTABULOUS!! I loved it!
(*more excited screams*) (*YELPS*)ohmygoshohmygoshohmygoshohmygosh (*GASPS*) etc. Is there more coming? Cos I loved this piece.!
I loved this poem! I've played the violin for, (*counts on fingers*), eight years; and this poem has a rythymn. Keep up the good rob!!
I really enjoyed it!! It was fabulously humoured and I think I might have lost my bum, laughing so hard! Well Done!
I applaud you
Author's Response: I'm so pleased you liked it. I wrote a sequel drabble called 'Cold Dish' that shows what happened next. It is here, too. Thanks, eomerbear.
AAAWWWWW so cute! wait, WHO IS THE CLOAKED FIGURE? Please tell me! Any way, it was a fabtabulous story.
Author's Response: Thanks! The cloaked figure is Orome. Also? Fabtabulous is an awesome word.
AWW! Fantastic. I loved it! oh, I felt my heart being tugged at too.
I agree, this has got to have a second chapter!! The suspence and mood are eating at my mind
sad, beautiful and incredible... Awk, the corner of my eye is slightly damp... I am absolutly stunned at this story, you obviously had to spend a long time thinking about the storyline! I loved it... Loved it, loved it, loved it!
Author's Response: What lovely compliments. Thank you. I like to evoke strong emotions, so a damp eye is perfect. :o) Actually the storyline wasn't hard. It was the execution that proved a bit tricky. Some parts of it flowed easily and some took a bit of work to make it sound believable. I'm very pleased that you loved it so much. Thanks again.
Oh, my gosh! One of my LotR hero's! I so totally think you are a bad ass poet!! Fabtabulous job!!!
Fabtabulous.... (*smiles with mischief*) That was probably one story I'll be telling to little kids!! (Meaning I enjoyed it) Can I mention a grammer error? You forgot to put the " after Thranduil says "but..." Just makes sure you check for errors!!
Wow, THAT WAS SO TOTALLY AWESOME MATE!
Author's Response: YAY! That's awesome that you reviewed mate! By all means...continue reading!
I think there might have been otters too...I think...?? Well, that was really good!! please write more!
Author's Response: Well that's good. I think I'll go to middle earth to see all the lil otters then ^_^ I will keep writing!! Probably not very fast but still...
soz, didn't review this chapter yet, that was brilliant! I thought it was a heart felt chapter, I really enjoyed it!
Author's Response: That's o.k. Yeah, I really didn't like writing this chapter, it probably wouldn't be here, but it's kind of a necessary chapter. Thanks for reading!
Haha, sibling rivalry, can't back outta it... *smiles* It's good you are adding these small 'stories' about the relationship between the children, so the readers know the personalities better!
Author's Response: Lol, yeah, I pulled from some of my experiences with my siblings, haha. I always liked knowing a characters background, it makes it less confusing I think.
Yes, it is short, but it IS great. I'll suggest rereading the story, just for spelling, grammer and names. I think it was this chapter, or another one, where you accidently typed 'Raina' instead of 'Gwin'!
Author's Response: Thanks so much :D I've been meaning to...Yeah, I have other side projects I'm working on, I get the names mixed up a lot :)