Hi, I really enjoy this story... I personally love Haldir/OFC fics and I am currently writing my own.
However I was wondering if I could beta this story for you as there are a few mistakes. All the story needs is a slight tweaking and it will be great
If you would like an example of my work, I have stories on this site.:D Great start though xx
Author's Response: i would love that. i dont have a beta as yet and writing at 4 am in the morning everyday doesn't seem to help with my spelling and grammar lol. how do i get in touch with you?
Wow this was a chilly story. Very well written. So, was the fea trapped between worlds or something? I don't get the “My heart never stopped beating.” part.
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed this! :) As for your questions, that's part of the mystery. ;) About Legolas's heart never stopped beating: it raises the question if Legolas was truly alive, and was buried alive all this time or if he meant it in the more figurative sense (like a ghost with unfinished business.) Thanks for the review!
Loved it, absolutely loved it. The whole story was just.... no other word to describe it other than breathtaking
Author's Response: Thank you very much. Always glad to see a new review on an old story. I'm happy to hear that you enjoyed this. They are two of my favorite characters and I find myself writing little pieces for them still. Again, thank you for your nice comment.
love these couples and your work. I would love it if you wrote an nc-17 short story like this but with more detailed lovemaking with Glandur and Antien, they sound hot. desperately awaiting more of these fics. Maybe even Legolas and Rhavaniel having elf lings and Glandur and antien involved. Antien is definately my most favourite, every girl loves having their own gay friend xx
Author's Response: Well, thank you so much. I'm so glad you are enjoying these stories. Antien and Glandur got such a good response, I did give them a little spotlight as to how they met and fell in love in Morning Daydream. They really are a beautiful pair, easy to love and very much in love with each other. I think Antien and Rhav got along so well because he can handle her and she is not threatened by him. There is no fear of attraction between them besides friendship. Besides, she has her hands full with Legolas. Antien is very carefree and lives life to its fullest while Glandur is a little more serious. Believe me, if I had it in me to write an explicit slash, I would only write for them. I've never tired it and I'm not sure I know enough to write slash. Het is my genre, but you never know.
I am experienced in writing het and slash fic and I absolutely love both. Is there any chance, sometime, I could write it and send it to you privately? I would love to do this and provide a little art. But not definately yet, I am writing four stories at once here, including the BIG BANG OEAM big one. but I would love to do this, if you like, you could read my Erestor/Glorfindel slash fics and see if you like or do not like my style. It is up to you of course, but I would love to do it xx
Author's Response: Sounds like you have quite a lot on your plate. So many elves, so little time. I'll give your E/G a read.
Great story for first time writer. I hope you're not like me though leaving too much time between updates, looking forward to the rest already.
Well done, its great so far and great structure and grammar. looking forward to more :)
Author's Response: Wow, thank you very much! I hope that I won't spend too much time between chapters, haha. I'll try to get them up as fast as possible!
MORE!!! MORE!!! MORE!!!
THIS IS GREAT!!