Reviews by Daewen
First steps by Nerilana Rated: G [Reviews - 3]
Summary: This short story is about Elrohir taking his first steps.
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Celebrían, Elrohir
Genres: Family, General, Other
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 180 Read Count: 1407
Published: Feb 12 2010 Updated: Feb 12 2010 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: First steps Reviewer: Daewen Signed
AWWW!!! I LOVE this!
Date: Feb 12 2010
Summary: This is a drabble. Perhaps this is a death, maybe a vision.
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Original Character
Genres: Drama
Warnings: AU (alternate universe)
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 100 Read Count: 1133
Published: Jul 11 2010 Updated: Jul 11 2010 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Daewen Signed
I finding more and more that drabbles have, although short, the effect to hit the heart more than any other story. This was amazing!

Author's Response: Thank you for your kind words! In my case I drabble because it is near impossible for me to come up with greater than 100 words of any sort of quality. But I have hope of improvement as I continue to write with the encouragement of kind readers.
Date: Jul 12 2010
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Daewen Signed
Well, not only is it hard to continue a story longer than 100 words, drabbles become poignant - it enables one to use large descriptions without seeming dull:)

Author's Response: One of my biggest problems is I tend to be too descriptive and wordy.
Date: Jul 12 2010
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Daewen Signed
I tend to be repetitive. Hey, did you know I have another account here? It's Shadow Maiden. Those are some of my earlier things, but The Snowball Fight to Remember is my favorite.

Author's Response: It will be a pleasure to take a look at your stories on that account.
Date: Jul 13 2010
Summary: In this drabble, Glorfindel is newly returned to ME after his time in Mandos.
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Glorfindel
Genres: Hurt/Comfort
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 100 Read Count: 1170
Published: Jul 12 2010 Updated: Jul 12 2010 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Daewen Signed
Nice!

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: Jul 12 2010
Summary: To understand this, if you are not familiar with Fly Leaf and their Song "Cassie" it can be found on You Tube. I investigated out of curiosity and found Daewn's challenge could not be denied in light of that song.
Categories: Book-verse Characters: None
Genres: Tragedy
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 141 Read Count: 1182
Published: Jul 28 2010 Updated: Jul 28 2010 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Daewen Signed
Thank you so much for responding to my challenge. I posted it a year ago and you are the first! It really made my day. Great detail - love it!

Author's Response: What I’ve read of your entries are short, not as short as mine. I love your writing, your honesty, the anguish you so courageously place on the table and deal with. It was a pleasure to answer your challenge, if I did. I hate to endorse myself, but I’ve put up a challenge that I hope you and my other favorites will take a look at. I believe I titled it “an honest moment” or something like that. I’d like to know about every one’s favorite character, there greatest fear, secrete, joy…something they hide from the world but that the author knows about them. It could be any character OC or cannon. Answer all or one. I’m so glad you are here.
Date: Jul 28 2010
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Daewen Signed
I will definitely check it out. I'm so glad you like my works. I really needed your kind words: right now is a little rough for me. Thanks!

Author's Response: I do love your works. We need you here. You are valued. So what ever is going on, hang in there and know that you have friends who care here. Feel free to contact me just to chat if you would ever like to.
Date: Jul 29 2010
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Daewen Signed
Thank you so much! I will.

Author's Response: see my bio
Date: Jul 31 2010
Summary: A one shot family moment in Mirkwood
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Thranduil
Genres: Family
Warnings: None
Series: The Life of a Leaf
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 635 Read Count: 1357
Published: Aug 05 2010 Updated: Aug 05 2010 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Daewen Signed
This is so cute! I love this!
Date: Aug 05 2010
Summary: How did Eomer feel when he saw his sister fall in love with Aragorn? A short poem.
Categories: Book-verse, Movie-verse Characters: Aragorn, Eomer, Eowyn
Genres: Drama, Family, Poetry, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 72 Read Count: 1493
Published: Aug 09 2010 Updated: Aug 09 2010 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Brotherly Love Reviewer: Daewen Signed
Wow. I love this! My favorite part is "In her hast to find love, let her not forget me." Very powerful and . . . sad.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! That was the line that was the hardest to think of for me, glad you liked it! =)
Date: Aug 09 2010
Summary: Unrequited love. I hate it, yet love it. It gives you a chance to watch from afar, and wish without being caught up in the action.
Categories: Off Topic Characters: None
Genres: Poetry, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: On My Own
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 167 Read Count: 1099
Published: Aug 19 2010 Updated: Aug 19 2010 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Daewen Signed
Simple and beautiful. Flower wishes is a great name for this.

Author's Response: Thank you for your simple and beautiful review! Hugs!
Date: Aug 22 2010
Summary: "I’m not sure exactly why this whole thing wasn’t freaking me out more, but it may have something to do with the fact that the last thing that happened to me in London was that I was shot. Death has a certain way of putting perspective on things." Legolas/OC
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Aragorn, Arwen, Boromir, Celeborn, Denethor, Eomer, Eowyn, Faramir, Frodo, Galadriel, Gandalf / Olorin, Gimli, Haldir, Legolas, Merry, Original Character, Pippin, Sam, Saruman, The Fellowship, Théoden
Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama, Friendship, Romance
Warnings: Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 50658 Read Count: 16442
Published: Aug 23 2010 Updated: Jan 28 2014 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Prologue Reviewer: Daewen Signed
Interesting.

Author's Response: Interesting good or interesting bad?
Date: Aug 23 2010
Title: Chapter 1: Prologue Reviewer: Daewen Signed
Interesting good. I can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: That's relief :) I'll try to update as soon as I can
Date: Aug 24 2010
Summary: The darkness of Sauron spread not only across the whole of Middle Earth but also into the mind of someone least expected, Legolas Greenleaf. When Aragorn finally has the courage to ask his friend why the elf seems so unwell and tired the answer he receives isn't the answer he was expecting...or something he wanted to hear either.
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Aragorn, Gandalf / Olorin, Gimli, Legolas
Genres: Drama, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort, Tragedy
Warnings: Character Death
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2311 Read Count: 1694
Published: Jan 10 2011 Updated: Jan 10 2011 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Poisoned Darkness Reviewer: Daewen Signed
Sorry, Legolas, I didn't want to kill you . . . but it made a good story :) I know exactly how that feels.
Date: Jan 10 2011
Summary: A dying elf gives birth to a baby daughter, who is then brought up by her father in secret. No one know he even has a child. Together they have a lot of adventures, but can he ever get her accepted as his rightful air? And what will happen when she meets her true love, a mortal man?

Drama about Legolas and his daughter. Rated for later chapters!
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Aragorn, Arwen, Celeborn, Elrond, Galadriel, Gandalf / Olorin, Gimli, Haldir, Legolas, Orcs/Uruk-Hai, Original Character, The Fellowship
Genres: Drama
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 787 Read Count: 2480
Published: Dec 14 2011 Updated: Dec 14 2011 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Life and Death Reviewer: Daewen Signed
This has the good beginnings of a story. Focus on the feelings Legolas is having and then focus on how a father would take care of his daughter - alone. You've started doing that, just focus on those two things for right now and you'll be fine :)
Date: Dec 15 2011