I love the moon. I always hold my hands out in the rays and try to catch them.
I've always loved this drinking song. Hobbits are great, aren't they?
Author's Response: yes they are, they're so carefree!
Most of the time, I write about elves. Sometimes it's just nice to write about hobbits drinking and having a good time.
Oh, no. Poor Aragorn and Arwen.
Mmm . . . False hope. Love that ending! I would love to hear these poems put to music.
The dark blue sky stares down upon the vast wasteland of corpses and sand. Wow. You know, you sound a lot like Amy Lee here.
Author's Response: Really? I take that as an amazing compliment! Thank you!
You're welcome. I wish I had Amy Lee's voice and looks. That would be great.
Fire is an interesting element, is it not? My favorite for I am an Aries.
I could see the maiden dancing and as I watched just fading away. Beautiful!
For me to write my favorite part, I'd have to write all of it. Wonderful!
This is the perfect poem for that scene. I wish I had your talent for poetry.
Author's Response: *blushes* Thank you!
You are most welcome.
Icy surrender. That has got to be your best description yet. So beautiful and yet so deadly.
Author's Response: Why thank you! I'm happy you like it :D
When I first read this, I thought it was talking about me! Perfectly descriptive of a young heart.
Sounds like Lacrymosa by Evanescence. Love that song!
Isn't it always interesting when friends become enemies and choose a different path from yours but your paths are parallel? I told my friend abouut my love of rock music and she acts like I've betrayed her and yet she listens to basically the same music. Interesting indeed.
I feel like I'm slowly falling apart. Again, wow.
And keep our faith and hope alive. Very beautiful and poetic. I hope I don't sound cliche here, but I really mean it.
I especially like the last line. The seas at Alqualonde are red. Very sorrowful.
Author's Response: Hi, Daewen. :) Thank you for reviewing my story, "The Greatest Torment." Actually, I'm not sure now since it's been so long, but I think I have to give my mother partial credit for the last line. At least, for the way the last few lines were arranged for maximum impact. Anyway, I'm glad that you liked it. :) ~ Still Anonymous
You're welcome. I always like stories that leave a haunted feeling. Would you please read and review my fanfictions?