Reviews by VeronicaD13
Mirkwood Adventures by Mary A Rated: NC-17 [Reviews - 4]
Summary: This story, an epic PWP, has no socially redeeming value, it was written for all of the women with beating hearts who prefer their Elves served straight up! Adults Only! We promise you will never think of Thranduil the way you did before.
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Legolas, Gimli, Elrond, Elrohir, Celeborn, Galadriel, Thranduil, Elladan, Glorfindel, Haldir, Erestor, Orophin
Genres: Erotica, Humor
Warnings: Graphic Sex, Kink
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 163247 Read Count: 21910
Published: Nov 04 2004 Updated: Jan 31 2005 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 24: Skating and Snow Balls Reviewer: VeronicaD13 Signed
This is such an interesting story! I would like to see you continue it, b/c I am seriously interested in seeing what happens when Mary goes out into the world. Also I would like to see what happens when she finds out that Mal has not only been sleeping with Thranduil, but with also with whomever she wants. Something tells me that Mary would have a serious problem with that. Not so much in the fact that she wants to sleep around too, but that it's bad enough that she has to share, but Thranduil does too.

Can't wait to she where the relationship with Legolas and Rai goes. Hopefully things go well enough that she says what the heck and goes to Mirkwood for a visit. Hope she's ok.

Can't wait for more!
Date: Mar 21 2010
Body Language by Zhie Rated: NC-17 [Reviews - 15]
Summary: Glorfindel wants two things: A mate, and to feel useful by being able to protect something. Who knew both wishes could be granted at the same time? Notes: Written for DarkDreamer’s challenge on Erestor Lovers – Reborn Balrog Slayer seeks Single Male Elf for cuddling and naughtiness. Must be unable to dodge falling bookshelves. ((It should be noted that I am a librarian, and the falling bookshelf? It really did happen in my library.))
Categories: Book-verse, Book Verse Slash Characters: Elladan, Elrohir, Elrond, Erestor, Glorfindel, Lindir, Melpomaen
Genres: Drama, Romance
Warnings: AU (alternate universe), Graphic Sex, Rape, Slash (same sex pairing)
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 17724 Read Count: 44571
Published: Feb 18 2007 Updated: Feb 18 2007 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 Reviewer: VeronicaD13 Signed
Please don't leave the story there! Need more! What else happens? This is such a great idea!

Author's Response: well, technically, i thought i was finished with this. but people keep poking me telling me i need to 'finish' this finished story...
Date: Jun 22 2009
Rationalising MPreg by sylc Rated: NC-17 [Reviews - 57]
Summary: Lindir, a former thrall, is forced against his will to become a witness in Sauron's trial on Taniquetil in the Fourth Age. Main pairings: Sauron/Lindir, Glorfindel/Lindir. Slash, MPreg (due to Sauron's experiments), Angst, Slavery, Noncon, Tentacles, Body manipulation, Mind control, Oral, Violence, Incest, Minor involved. Necrophilia. Bestiality. Character death.
Categories: Book Verse Slash Characters: Celebrimbor, Ecthelion, Elrond, Eonwe, Erestor, Gandalf / Olorin, Gildor, Glorfindel, Ingwë, Lindir, Manwe, Morgoth / Melkor, Orcs/Uruk-Hai, Sauron
Genres: Angst, Drama, Erotica, Horror, Hurt/Comfort, Mystery, Romance, Suspense, Tragedy
Warnings: Character Death, Extreme/taboo Fetish, Graphic Sex, Incest, MPREG (male pregnancy), Rape, Slash (same sex pairing), Torture, Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 64 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 281514 Read Count: 85719
Published: Mar 18 2007 Updated: Sep 04 2010 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 51: Manwe's Mirror Reviewer: VeronicaD13 Signed
Oh my! This story has gotten darker and darker the more I read it. I'm not a fan of squick, but there are some parts in there that amaze me and keeps me reading!

I wonder why no one stepped in and told Manwe and Eonwe that what they are doing is wrong. I know Lindir did some really heinous stuff in the past but no one should have to suffer what he has at their hands. Where is Elbereth or Eru during all of this? Can't they do something? Why didn't Lindir say something about what happened earlier to Elrond or even better while he was in court with a ton of witnesses? Is there truly no one in Valinor that objects to rape - regardless of the desired result or the victim?

I hope that there is a happy end for at least Glorfindel. I don't know if I want him to stay with Lindir or not. I hope that Lindir does find out that Laiglas was partly responsible for Glorfindel's departure. What he said was totally out of line. Does he hope for a reconcilliation of his parents or something?

Update soon!

Author's Response: Thank you so much, VeronicaD13, for your thoughtful and kind review. I really appreciate your positive feedback and am delighted that you've enjoyed the story so much so far. I also hope for a happy ending and am striving towards that goal. Thanks again!
Date: Jun 21 2009
Summary:

A ring can represent practically anything. Undying love, a silent promise, real friendship, commitment, but also nobility, worship or faith. There are rings that symbolize dependence, enslavement, eternity, and apparently there is one that stands for all that’s evil in this world. But let’s not forget a ring is nothing more than a piece of metal that fits nicely around a finger. It doesn’t even have to be pretty.

So don’t ask me why I ended up risking my life, going on this quest to destroy one. I mean, you can’t really blame me for getting caught up in things I don’t even believe in, right?

Be warned: this is a tenth walker fic and English is my second language. It’s possible you’ll hate this story, but don’t forget you’re not legally obliged to do so. And seriously, I really like readers and absolutely love reviewers.


Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Aragorn, Boromir, Frodo, Gandalf / Olorin, Gimli, Legolas, Merry, Original Character, Pippin, Sam
Genres: Action/Adventure, General, Romance
Warnings: AU (alternate universe), First Draft
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 60019 Read Count: 58705
Published: Mar 04 2009 Updated: Jan 24 2015 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17 Reviewer: VeronicaD13 Signed
This is a great story! Don't quite understand what the regrets are yet, but I guess that's coming in the future. Same with the delayed gift.

Love the interactions that Iris has with the fellowship. And her ever-changing relationship with Legolas is pretty great too. Can't wait to see where that actually winds up going.

More soon please!

Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing! That really gets my spirits up. This chapter should make the gift bit clear, the regrets are still to be explained. There is more coming soon...
Date: Jul 12 2009
Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18 Reviewer: VeronicaD13 Signed
Great if sad update! I can't wait to see what's next! I wonder if he will tell her and what her reaction will be...

More soon please!

Author's Response: A little sad, I know. I guess I just can't turn mortal-elf love into one big joke, can I? Will he tell her? Who knows? Well, maybe I should... ;) Stay tuned! and thank you for your review!
Date: Aug 02 2009
His Special Child by Sivan Rated: G [Reviews - 3]
Summary: Elrond thoughts and actions when first Aragorn brought to him with Gilraen.
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Aragorn, Elladan, Elrohir, Elrond, Gilraen
Genres: Family, General
Warnings: AU (alternate universe)
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 588 Read Count: 1179
Published: Jun 23 2009 Updated: Jun 23 2009 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: 1/1 Reviewer: VeronicaD13 Signed
Awww - he ran right up and called him daddy. Too cute!

I think you should add some more chapters about how cute and special little Estel actually is. Wait - did that sound a little greedy, b/c it really was!

Great story!
Date: Jun 23 2009
Summary: When Karen and Lisa take a trip to Maine to relax, they are not expecting to get stuck in an avalanche, or to be rescued by Aragron and Legolas and transported to Middle-Earth at the request of Elrond and Gandalf. Asked to join the fellowship, can they find thier place and strength to help defeat Saruron?
Categories: Lord of the Rings Slash Characters: Aragorn, Balrog, Bilbo, Boromir, Celeborn, Elendil, Ents, Eomer, Eowyn, Faramir, Frodo, Galadriel, Gimli, Glorfindel, Gríma, Haldir, Legolas, Merry, Nazgûl, Orophin, Pippin, Rúmil, Sauron, Théoden, Théodred, Tom Bombadil, Treebeard
Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama, Erotica, Fantasy, Friendship, Humor, Hurt/Comfort, Romance, Suspense, Tragedy
Warnings: Character Death, Graphic Sex, Rape, Slash (same sex pairing), Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 16015 Read Count: 13097
Published: Jun 30 2009 Updated: Jul 01 2009 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11-Leaving Rivendell Reviewer: VeronicaD13 Signed
Just started reading this story and it's great!

Will Karen and Aragorn ever get it together? What is his deal being jealous of Faramir when he technically has Arwen? Will that situation ever change so that Karen can get her man? And will Faramir wind up with Eowyn? Please say yes - I don't want him with Karen.;)

Soooo Happy about Lisa and Legolas! Will she eventually wind up being an elf?

More soon please!

Author's Response: I will say that Karen and Faramir do not end up together :) As to the jealousy, you will see why that was added, it takes care of the arwen issue LOL... As for the rest? You just have to wait and see I will be posting more soon! If I gave it away now, I would spoil the fun! Thanks for the review! Shannon
Date: Jul 01 2009
Summary: A path made clear, and new obstacles to overcome.
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Haldir
Genres: Romance, Suspense, Tragedy
Warnings: Graphic Sex
Series: None
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 123625 Read Count: 48661
Published: Aug 03 2009 Updated: Jul 22 2011 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 Reviewer: VeronicaD13 Signed
Oh Haldir's gonna find her and they are gonna be soooo happy! I hope she lets him apologize without running away.

Can't wait for more!
Date: Feb 01 2010
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Reviewer: VeronicaD13 Signed
Great chapter! I would have freaked out too not being able to see when I woke up in pain! Did she just sleep for a really long time or was something else in her eyes?

I can't wait to see her reaction to Haldir going through her stuff. Particularly her underwear. That's what I'm guessing anyway....

Will she just wind up blurting out what she suspects as far as where she is and who she's with? Can't wait to see the reaction to THAT!

Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Y'know, her waking up with sleep in her eyes... I kind of left out why she passed out or whatever... lol, when I get to going good I leave things out that I was thinking and thought I wrote down... bleh! Plot holes!!! we'll say she passed out... I think I would have if I realized I was where she was. Thanks so much for reading!
Date: Aug 28 2009
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Reviewer: VeronicaD13 Signed
Great update! Loved it when she freaked out on him! I totally understand the panic attack. Now that she knows who she's dealing with, and she will probably begin to learn how to communicate, I wonder if she will immediately try to seek out Galadriel to find out what's going on, or hang around a while.

Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: y'know, I'm not sure... following chapters wil ahve to take a lot more thought so I can make the storic as non generic as possible... Part of me wants to make where she HAS to stay in lorien for safety, but part of me wants to have to make her go looking for complete safety. If I did that, though, I Im not sure if it would make the best sense to keep Hadlir withher on that journey, or to make it to where he has to stay, since he is a marchwarden... course, TOlkien never says annything about whether or not Haldir is really a Marchwarden, soooo... hmmm idk...
Date: Sep 10 2009
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 Reviewer: VeronicaD13 Signed
Oh THAT's gonna be a fun ride down in a dress for someone with acraphobia! LOL! Wonder how long it'll take Haldir to come back up and get her?

Can't wait for more!
Date: Nov 02 2009
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Reviewer: VeronicaD13 Signed
Oh what's the problem? Is it b/c she's mortal? Oh I hope he gets over that!

Can't wait to see what Sarah thinks of Caras Galadhon!
Date: Nov 21 2009
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 Reviewer: VeronicaD13 Signed
Oh dear. Two steps forward, one step back it seems. Can't wait to see what happens when they keep moving forward!

Can't wait for more!
Date: Dec 03 2009
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 Reviewer: VeronicaD13 Signed
Wow! Will he stop actually thinking about this now and just go with it? I guess if he's still so worried he should go and ask Galadriel for some advice. Might be an awkward conversation, but she's supposed to have some insight, right?

Can't wait for more!
Date: Dec 04 2009
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 Reviewer: VeronicaD13 Signed
Oh dear! What's gonna happen? Have their afternoons of magical sex come to an untimely end? Hopefully they don't send her away - they'd have to send Haldir too!

Can't wait for more!
Date: Jan 05 2010
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 Reviewer: VeronicaD13 Signed
Oh Poor Sarah! I wonder what Celeborn was going on about in the beginning that could have convinced Haldir that Sarah was so evil that he wouldn't speak to her anymore. Will he try to say goodbye at least? Maybe help her on the road? I can't imagine what will happen if they don't train her in any weapons or even give her one, if she were to run into any meanies on the road....

Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Celeborn didn't get the situation the same as Galadriel did, so I guess she and aSarah have a different kind of connection. Celeborn is a king, he fears for his people, and for Haldir, since he knows they are already so close. He doesn't want anyone to get hurt, therefore he's not as open to hearing her side. Sad, I know... Haldir is confused. You'll see. He is sworn to obey Galadriel and Celeborn, after all, but he does love Sarah, so he's torn. As far as what happens between the two of them later you'll just have to see *wink* ;) As far as training--remember she really can't stay in Lorien anymore, or she'll 'pollute' more people, so Celeborn (and Galadriel to some extent) just want to keep their kingdom safe from her. Don't worry, she's not defenseless ;) Thanks for reading!!
Date: Jan 19 2010
Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 Reviewer: VeronicaD13 Signed
Poor Sarah! And no one even came to see her off! Although I'm sure Haldir was probably warned not to on pain of death or something equally bad, but It still sucks. I hope that Sarah is okay on her journey.

Can't wait for more!
Date: Jan 27 2010
Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 Reviewer: VeronicaD13 Signed
Poor Sarah! At least Haldir's going after her now. I love that he plans to make her his wife. Wonder if Celeborn saw THAT one coming. I mean what he did was really wrong, and I don't think any amount of apologizing can adequately make up for it. Maybe he can do some major groveling when they come back. If they come back....

Oh I hope Haldir finds her before she gets pneumonia! Maybe Susie can find her too! She can at least sit next to Sarah and keep her warm..

I wonder if since they are heading to Harad, if they are actually going to be nice down there. I mean it is probably a while before the WOR, so maybe they aren't COMPLETELY evil right now....

Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: lol, well Celeborn had his people in mind, and I don't think Haldir hates him for it, he's just frustrated that his king didn't take the time to stop and really process the information he was given :( And yes, it's well before the war of the ring, most likely in the middle of the second age :D I like setting stories before the movies or the trilogy of books, because it not only gives a little more freedom, but it's more interesting (I think) than having the same things going on that have alreayd gone on in the books and movies :) Thanks sooo much for your loyal reading!!!
Date: Jan 29 2010
Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 Reviewer: VeronicaD13 Signed
Bloody corsets! Oh Haldir how will you find her now if she is on her way to Edoras! Is Sarah going to have to learn a new language now? I'm guessing that she was speaking her limited Sindarin the whole time, but I could be wrong. I hope she realizes that she could easily "bewitch" them and tries to stay away as much as possible. At least she's with some people who can protect her now...

Can't wait for more!
Date: Jan 30 2010
Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 Reviewer: VeronicaD13 Signed
Yay! He made it! Oh and Sarah's going to spill the beans about the curse! Bad Idea! Won't the folks of Rohan want to run her out of town too for being a witch or something?

Can't wait for the reunion! Hope he begs for forgiveness in front of witnesses!
Date: Feb 04 2010
Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 Reviewer: VeronicaD13 Signed
That was a great chapter! I love how Haldir charmed his way into seeing her! And now she knows that he's serious about her. FANTASTIC!

I can't wait to hear what he says to her about not staying by her and then coming after her. Also should be REALLY interesting to see how everyone else reacts to the story.

Can't wait for more!
Date: Feb 07 2010
Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 Reviewer: VeronicaD13 Signed
Awesome! I love it! So happy they're getting married!

Can't wait for more!
Date: Feb 09 2010
Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 Reviewer: VeronicaD13 Signed
Such and ominous set of signs! A mysterious voice, unknown people giving precious things away b/c they know that strength and love will be needed, and the obvious obliviousness all spell bad things in the future. I know Haldir and Sarah will prevail! Wonder if she could just go all Rumplestilzkin on him and try out a bajillion names... Maybe she could get Haldir to tell her some Elvish names...

Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: yay! Glad you like! Yeah, I'm trying to make it obvious, I don't like a lot of guessing:) It's just a fanfic, anyway, not novel, lol :P I was thinking Rumplestilzkin too! lol....
Date: Feb 15 2010
Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 Reviewer: VeronicaD13 Signed
Oh SaraH! I'm so glad that didn't go worse than it did! Maybe Haldir can stay with her, like "byherside" "not letting you outta my sight" with her, for the rest of time. Sigh. I know - too much to ask for. The evil guy would probably just try to kill him then and we can't have that.

Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: lol! Your comments are great :D
Date: Feb 24 2010
Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 Reviewer: VeronicaD13 Signed
Oh that was so hot! Glad they were able to sneak away! And such a sad ending too! Oh well - guess they'll have to make the most of their time together then, won't they?

Wonder what Rumil's there for. Will he at least be civil this time? Hope he learns to like his sister-in-law.

Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Hot? Woo hoo! lol thanks
Date: Mar 17 2010