Good grief! Legolas is making an offer for a fake wedding while he gets some action on the side. Calavene is not taking very good care of herself. Haldir is a drunken mess. I'd like to see that. Actually, this last part about Haldir at the practice field, drunk and shooting arrows struck me as kind-of funny. And then Rumil slaps him. I could picture it in my mind and I chuckled to myself. I'm glad to see Calavene with Legolas in Mirkwood though. He will help her recover her strength. She needs to start taking care of herself. They are all just one big mess aren't they?
Author's Response: They are definitely messy lol. Legolas was trying to be kind but hey, man has his needs lol. i don't know whether i want legolas to stay in the picture longer. I kind of liked the idea of him and calavene being brother and sister like, but i don't know maybe i'll decide to ruin Haldir's life after all. He is a meany sometimes. It took 6 large bottles of miruvor to make haldir look funny and yes, it would be funny if the scene became a movie or something lol
Look at the fine mess you've gotten us into this time. LOVIN' IT! Leave it to a Hobbit to give misinformation. Now she's looking to Legolas, whether she loves him as a friend or more. Haldir... you'd better get a move on, and soon. Can't wait to see which direction you will take next. I love this stuff.
Author's Response: Yes, Hobbits are inquisitive little creatures arent they, poking their heads in things they don't understand. oh well... can't say it was entirely frodo's fault. Haldir should be getting a move on soon. Let us see how things go :) thanks for reviewing buddy!
I am not just on the edge of my seat, I'm on the edge of my roof. I swear I'll jump too if something bad happens. OK, you know I'm kidding. Great chapter by the way. Awesome cliffhanger. Get that computer fixed quickly. Oh and by the way, Legolas needs to get a new bird. What did it do, stop to eat too many field mice along the way? HELLO. There's a letter to be delivered. Thank goodness Haldir made it in time, at least I hope he did.
Author's Response: I don't know what happened to Legolas' hawk. Maybe it found some sexy feathery female to entertain him? I cant say whether Haldir made it in time or not. We will have to see how my twisted mind will work soon lol. we do post at the same time don't we lol.. well great minds think alike :D thanks for your review!
Cool looking flower. Is this something that grows where you live? I've never seen anything like it. I wish I'd had the ability to speed up pregnancy. Those last couple of months were a bitch. Anticipating the next chapter.
Author's Response: No, i found it searching through the net. It grows in China :) her body is responding in a way that is out of her control, ready to expel the life out of her. let us hope she makes it :)
O.K. I'm going to give you a chance to redeem yourself for Calavene's sake. Actually, I could see this going either way, but I will not try and guess what will happen. I just enjoy being left out on the ledge waiting for an update ;-) I'm excited to see what you will do next. Great cliffhanger. Great chapter. Yea Orophin (for finding the flower). I still say it's all the hawk's fault for taking too long to deliver the message lol.
Author's Response: go either way? care to share what you think will happen? Let's see if you have the power of foresight like Elrond lol. yeah, I'm with you..it's all the hawk's fault! Damn those mice or female hawk :D
I knew you would do it. I had a feeling she would die. This is so sad. Haldir never had a chance to truly be with her and now she's gone. She is gone right? I mean, you're not going to turn this into some 'Carrie' movie with a creepy hand coming out of the grave, grabbing Haldir and pulling him into the dirt? Oh... uh... sorry, that's the horror movie lover in me coming out. Now I'm worried for Haldir. I hope he will not fade from grief and leave his son behind. This is great. It's not often a story does not end in happily ever after, though it's not over yet, I know. I must admit, I love how your mind works. Great chapter but very sad : - (
Author's Response: She is gone... :P Haldir won't fade since his son has become is beacon of hope. My mind is a mysterious maze... you'll never know what you will find at the next corner... but i think the ending will leave you guys satisfied :)
Aaawww. I love the interaction between Haldir and his son. So sweet. Just when I get that warm fuzzy feeling, you bring in some mystery. I cannot wait to read the next chapter.
Author's Response: just two more chapters! hang in there and all will be answered :)
What just happened? I must know soon. One more chapter to go. This is very exciting. Love Mae. He is so cute and so much like Haldir. This was a very sweet chapter with his uncles and Gimli and the Hobbits. I can't wait for the end.
Author's Response: Hehehe..epilogue will be up soon :) hang in there and thanks as usual for being my loyal reviewer!
Yea! You brought her back. Hey if Glorfindel can do it why shouldn't Calavene. Very sweet ending. All is right with the world once again. It's been fun reading and following along with your work and I can't wait for more from you.
Author's Response: Well maybe her sacrifice is not to the grandiosity of balrog slaying but still the love of a mother for her child is equally if not more impressive :) thanks for following me until the end :)
Oh, I knew you were talking about his sword. Yea, that's it. That's right. Uh his sword. ;) hehehe. Very amusing. Great read. Wonderful play on words. I enjoyed it immensely.
Author's Response: LOL! thanks! I got this idea when i was standing at the kitchen sink! It's so naughty!
I found nothing confusing but rather suspenseful. Can't wait to read more on this story. Great writing. I'm hooked and look forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you, the next chapter will be in shortly I promise you. One question, are the images too graphic, I have never used graphic images in a story before?
They are small and some details are hard to make out. Personally, I find them in good taste. Just remember, less is more. I'm not sure how to do images or I would try it in my own stories.
Author's Response: I no they are small, but this site only allows 200x200 for the size otherwise they would be bigger.
You can feel the tension in the room. Can't wait to see where this goes.
Oh my! I think they need to figure out how to relieve some of this tension between them, and quick. They both need to quit being so stubborn towards each other. Love the angst in this chapter. Next one please.
Such excitement! It seems this is going to be quite a journey for them both. Can't wait for the next chapter.
ok I'm interested. Don't worry about the Faramir/Eowyn thing. I'm sure he had a life before he met her. After all, there's a reason they call it 'fiction'.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I am in the process of Chapter Two right now. I am glad you like it, and thank you for understanding about his before life =)
Your story has potential. I have not read many about Faramir before the Ring War, especially his childhood. I think it is interesting and I look forward to more chapters. If you don't mind though, I'd like to make a suggestion. It's something I myself have been guilty of doing, being a first time fanfic writer. It would make a better visual for the reader if you explained their surroundings a little more. For instance, where are they, when are they and what does it look like, smell like, feel like, etc. It's surprising what a little background detail does to enhance one's imagination. I am no expert by a long shot. It's just something I thought would help me understand the scenery better. Good job though. Keep writing.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for liking it and reviewing =) And any suggestions are ALWAYS welcome! That is a good idea... I will absolutely work on that! Tank you so much! =)
I think this is a good build up of what's to come. Nimwen seems desperate to find her independence and she's taking Faramir along for the ride. I'm eager for more.
Author's Response: Thank you so much L8Bleumr for always commenting on my stories! Chapter Four should be posted by Sunday if I can =)
What happens??? I'm not worried. Nimwen seems like she can hold her own, but I'm still biting my nails while I wait for the next chapter. Your writing has greatly improved. Great job. Keep it coming NessaMahtar.
Author's Response: =) I consider that a great compliment, thank you so much for reading and enjoying! The next chapter is on its way!! =)
Nimwen is one kick-ass chick but has she bitten off more than she can chew? And now she's realizing how she feels for Faramir right before a duel to the death. It's almost too much to take. I must know what happens and soon.
Author's Response: Chapter six is in progress and should be coming soon! Thanks for always reading and reviewing so positively! =)