Reviews by L8Bleumr
Summary: A 16-year-old girl of Osgiliath, Nimwen Urúvion, has known Faramir for a long time. Him teaching her to fight and being her casual friend, but soon, Nimwen's life is going to be turned upside down...
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Boromir, Denethor, Faramir, Original Character
Genres: Action/Adventure, Family, Friendship, Romance
Warnings: Character Death, Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 7203 Read Count: 6689
Published: Jun 23 2010 Updated: Oct 15 2010 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter Eight- Mute Reviewer: L8Bleumr Signed
Ah, finally the kiss. I can't wait to see what happens next. I've been wanting to see these two express their feelings.

Author's Response: Finally is right! I have been dying for them to kiss for forever, and yet how it happened truly surprised me. The next chapter will be coming soon with the aftermath of that impulse! Glad you enjoyed and thanks for reviewing!
Date: Oct 15 2010
Summary: Faramir defends his brother's memory after realizing that many citizens of Gondor are thinking ill of Boromir. Basically what I myself say to people who don't like Boromir because he attacked Frodo.
Categories: Book-verse, Movie-verse Characters: Boromir, Faramir
Genres: Drama, Family
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 978 Read Count: 883
Published: Jul 01 2010 Updated: Jul 01 2010 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: L8Bleumr Signed
I can imagine Faramir would have felt strongly to protect his brother's good name. I think this relates to real life also. It seems people don't have much to say until someone does something wrong and then it's talked about for weeks. It's unfortunate the positive is not looked at with the same attention. Good story.

Author's Response: thanks! it annoys me also that the good things go unnoticed, while the bad is always what gets the gossip. i think we need to celebrate the good more, as well! thanks again for the review!
Date: Jul 03 2010
Summary: This is a story I submitted for a contest on a Harry Potter website. It's supposed to be the punishment you give to the rules that wizards broke. It's written in a formal letter form.
Categories: Other Movies Characters: None
Genres: Humor
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1223 Read Count: 1508
Published: Jul 09 2010 Updated: Jul 09 2010 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Breaking the Rule Reviewer: L8Bleumr Signed
This one is different. Wizards obviously need a lot of rules. I especially like the Lady Gaga punishment, though I'm not so sure she could be considered a muggle. Oh and BTW, the NEW Wizarding World of Harry Potter at Universal Studios in Orlando is pretty cool. Great set up. It looks just like Diagon Ally and the rides are great. I ate my first traditional English breakfast (blood sausage...yuk). If you like Harry Potter, you'll like this place.

Author's Response: Gaga is borderline muggle and witch/wizard lol. i know about the park. I just have to have money to go there lol. hopefully when i start working next year i can make enough to go there
Date: Jul 25 2010
Deeper than Breathing by ziggy Rated: NC-17 starstar [Reviews - 68]
Summary: above all else, elves have a gift with song. When Eomer meets with the remaining fellowship, he sees an opportunity to rouse Théoden and fight off the dead hand of Saruman. He persuades Legolas to accompany him back to Edoras while Aragorn and Gimli find the hobbits. Legolas has an important task- to reach Théoden, to convince him to rouse the Riders and to lead them against Saruman. But Eomer is arrested immediately they arrive and it will not be long before Grima has Legolas similarly incarcerated. Eomer becomes confused and fascinated.
Categories: Lord of the Rings Slash Characters: Legolas
Genres: General
Warnings: Slash (same sex pairing)
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 75147 Read Count: 18143
Published: Jul 17 2010 Updated: Oct 03 2010 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 Reviewer: L8Bleumr Signed
I am thoroughly enjoying this story. I am in love with your portrayal of Legolas. He is wild and unpredictable. It is a side of him I have not seen before and it makes perfect sense. I am so glad you decided to continue with your story and cannot wait to read more. You are a wonderful writer and I am hooked.

Author's Response: Thank you L8Bleumr -that view of Legolas comes from his irritating cheerfulness on Caradhras, and then he stops singing at Nimrodel and cannot translate the lament for Gandalf from sorrow, and then is so light hearted at other times. He changes quickly and of course Tolkien himself has Gandalf say the Mirkwood elves are 'more dangerous and less wise' than the Noldor Rivendell elves. As you say, it makes perfect sense!! You are very kind to say such nice things and I am flattered that another writer whose work I like, thinks so too.Just for you then. Next chapter.
Date: Sep 02 2010
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 Pippin Reviewer: L8Bleumr Signed
Wonderful, wonderful, wonderful. I usually know what to say when I review but you have left me speechless. The interaction between all of the characters is so genuine. I find myself wishing that more of these moments between them all were in the books or in the movies. Legolas and Gimli are superb. Then you throw in the Hobbits and it is like the story within the story. I can't say enough. From one author to another... I bow with hand over heart. You are a true artist ziggy.

Author's Response: Well... that was so nice it left me a bit speechless. Thank you. I am flattered. I suppose Tolkien focused mostly on the hobbits and I always felt a bit starved for the others. I like the gap fillers and Pippin's voice is very strong in my head. A few more of those coming up but the next chapter is very hard for Legolas.
Date: Sep 04 2010
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 Saruman Reviewer: L8Bleumr Signed
The end of this chapter left me heartbroken. Eomer has tried to leave it as it is but he is too deeply involve with his heart. I loved that Gimli was the one to intervene and how the fellowship gathered around Legolas to comfort him. Still, I am sad that Eomer got pushed aside once again. Every emotion, every description, every mental scene came across in true living color for me. It is not often that I read something that stays with me as if I just stepped from a movie theater. Your story is one of those rarities that has moved me with every chapter. Awesome!!!

Author's Response: Ah, Legolas is in shock but he is a very gentle soul and never forgets his lovers. Wait and see. Proise to update this weekend if I can.
Date: Sep 12 2010
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 The Palantir Reviewer: L8Bleumr Signed
I guess I hadn't realized before that everyone saw the vision of Mirkwood burning. What a horrible thing to have to witness. Your story is coming along nicely. I'm glad to see Legolas can still find comfort even after Saruman's cruel words. Nicely written, comforting scene in the woods. I think they both needed to soothe each others minds, among other things.

Author's Response: Yes, I still cringe when I think about this myself. I really didn't know that was going to happen before I wrote it but it had to be painful otherwise Saruman would not have had his revenge. I did wonder about making Saruman more discrete but it just couldn't happen...thank you for the review. I liked Eomer being so ready to help Legolas but feeling shut out, and then Legolas going to him.
Date: Sep 17 2010
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 The Sons of Thunder Reviewer: L8Bleumr Signed
I love the way you describe the turmoil Aragorn is experiencing over the palantir and taking the Paths of the Dead. And also, Elrohir's reaction to Legolas. It seems only natural that he might be apprehensive about a Wood elf. I am curious to see where this leads. Will they have a confrontation? Will he see that Legolas is indeed a true friend and not the savage that he surely has been led to believe the silvan elves to be? I hope he brings word of Mirkwood which might ease Legolas' worried mind. Very interesting chapter. Leaves me wanting more as always.

Author's Response: I am so glad you picked up on that. Elrohir is very complex in this. There is only one chapter left in this and Elrohir remains suspicious I'm afraid. I have always felt that Tolkien neglected Legolas and Gimli rather- and when the Grey Company arrives, surely they would have had some news? So I wanted to highlight the sacrifice they both make to stay with Aragorn- there is only one small bit in the book where they even mention this but it hints at vast unspoken emotions. But you are spot on at identifying Elrohir as a key character in this- I spent some time refining his part in this chapter.
Date: Sep 26 2010
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: L8Bleumr Signed
*hehe* I feel like was just called upon to respond to the teachers question and got the answer right. Extra credit for figuring out Elrohir. LOL Love ya Ziggy.

Author's Response: gold star for you. And ht next chapter before the end of the weekend, I promise.
Date: Sep 28 2010
Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 The Choice Reviewer: L8Bleumr Signed
First of all, love the way Elrohir fishes for information about Legolas and his intentions to follow Aragorn, and then Merry speaking up and defending him was most precious. But the best part by far was the exchange between Legolas and Gimli, the promise to revisit certain places, insuring their undying friendship. The other thing you touch upon that was never given much thought is Legolas' realization of what it is like to live a mortal life. We only ever think of Arwen and her choice. But for Legolas to struggle over the choice to heed Gladriel's words or honor an oath to Aragorn had to have been a very tough thing to swallow. I believe his choice was set from the moment the fellowship left Rivendell. He would follow Aragorn regardless. But to have glanced into his future would of course make him feel as though his days were numbered, hence making him closer to mortal men then elves once he heard the gulls call. This is by far the best, most honest depiction of not only Legolas but all the characters you have portrayed. I hope you will continue with writing more stories for I enjoy your work immensely. Your talent is truly a gift and thank you for sharing it. Always a fan, Moe.

Author's Response: As always, you pick up on all those little signals for the future! But I am so glad you picked up on Gimli and Legolas too- that is the most important and constant thing in Legolas' life right now with all the uncertainty. You are right of course, he is destined the moment he sets out from Rivendell, from Mirkwood almost- he cannot turn back, not in his character. You say such nice things, thank you. A new story up next week, just for you and Ladyjane and Melusine.
Date: Oct 03 2010
Summary: A response to the A Gollum-ish Challenge by Ethee.
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Frodo, Gollum, Sam, Sméagol
Genres: Other
Warnings: None
Challenges: A Gollum-ish Challenge
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 318 Read Count: 3574
Published: Jul 20 2010 Updated: Jul 20 2010 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Gollum's Monologue Reviewer: L8Bleumr Signed
You speak 'gollumeeze' very well;) Great back and forth between the two personalities. I can tell you had a good time with this one.

Author's Response: Lol thanks. I really wanted to try that challenge and i did hehe. I most certainly had a blast writing this story :)
Date: Jul 25 2010
Blood and Tears by TwistedFate Rated: NC-17 [Reviews - 2]
Summary: A young woman's journey of survival in a world far from hers.
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: None
Genres: Action/Adventure
Warnings: First Draft
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 6026 Read Count: 5537
Published: Jul 24 2010 Updated: Aug 03 2010 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 5: A Small Hope Reviewer: L8Bleumr Signed
My, what this poor girl has been through. It's like an episode of 'I Shouldn't Be Alive'.(don't know where you're from or if you watch Discovery Channel) I am hoping she finds food, shelter and medicine soon. What an awful thing to have to go through. I am anxious to see who she will happen upon during her journey.

Author's Response: yes, i watch discovery channel, alot of it actually lol. As to who she happens upon... it's a suprise! i read your story "Guardian of the Light" i love it so far.
Date: Aug 04 2010
Summary: Thank you J.R.R. Tolkien, thank you Peter Jackson, for making Middle- Earth what it is.
Categories: Off Topic Characters: Peter Jackson
Genres: Poetry
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 108 Read Count: 1065
Published: Jul 25 2010 Updated: Jul 25 2010 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: L8Bleumr Signed
Your enthusiasm and sentiment for both author and director are very evident. I think you speak for many of us who are fans of both books and movies.

Author's Response: Thank you =) I've noticed some people only like one, but I find that I adore them equally, and I was thinking "where would we be without Tolkien?" It wasn't really supposed to be a poem, I have some better poetry coming later, but I just wanted to get my thoughts and thanks out =)
Date: Jul 26 2010
Summary: Just three strands of hair... The gift of Galadriel through Gimli's eyes.
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Galadriel, Gimli
Genres: Poetry, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 176 Read Count: 1096
Published: Jul 26 2010 Updated: Jul 26 2010 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Galadriel's Gift Reviewer: L8Bleumr Signed
You have managed to portray Gimli's thoughts wonderfully. It is as if I am eavesdropping on his mind. Very good.

Author's Response: Thank you very much =) It was a challenging piece to write, I'm glad you think that I did it well.
Date: Jul 26 2010
Summary: This a poem depicting the inner thoughts of Calavene, the protagonist in Heart of Stone
Categories: Off Topic Characters: Haldir
Genres: Poetry
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 170 Read Count: 1259
Published: Jul 26 2010 Updated: Jul 26 2010 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Your Soul Reviewer: L8Bleumr Signed
I like your poem. I can see her whispering this to Haldir after they make love, before she runs off.

Author's Response: Thank you. it is a simple one. I'm not really prolific in writing complicated, layered poems.
Date: Jul 27 2010
Summary: Before the War of the Ring, many had their own "War of the Ring" in their mind. How hard was it to resist the temptation of unlimited power? And what did it do to those around them?
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Galadriel, Original Character
Genres: Drama
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 803 Read Count: 1145
Published: Aug 01 2010 Updated: Aug 01 2010 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Galadriel Reviewer: L8Bleumr Signed
This is a side of Galadriel I haven't seen before. Most of the time she is portrayed as being wise and all knowing, giving her advice. But you have shown her in her own personal struggle with the knowledge of the ring and how it could seduce her even before Frodo arrives to offer it to her. I'm sure she would have known about it beforehand and it probably would have plagued her mind often. Very good. I liked it.

Author's Response: Yes, this one was really hard to write, because I had to slip into the mind of someone who was wise and powerful and mostly kind of aloof, and see her as vulnerable and then write that. I am glad that you liked it, and thank you for reviewing! =)
Date: Aug 01 2010
Summary: Amroth reaches the shore, and cannot find his love. He ponders their love and wonders what is life anymore, without her?
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Amroth, Nimrodel
Genres: Drama, Poetry, Romance
Warnings: Character Death
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 342 Read Count: 1231
Published: Aug 03 2010 Updated: Aug 03 2010 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: If I Can't Love Her Reviewer: L8Bleumr Signed
Tragedy and love. They seem like opposites but they go together so well. A very nice poem about two Elves we don't read much of. Poetry is the one thing I wish I could do but unfortunately, it is not within me. This is a nice change. Good job.

Author's Response: Thank you so much =)I read The Song of Nimrodel this week, and I was really inspired to write something about the two of them.
Date: Aug 03 2010
Summary: A one shot family moment in Mirkwood
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Thranduil
Genres: Family
Warnings: None
Series: The Life of a Leaf
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 635 Read Count: 1408
Published: Aug 05 2010 Updated: Aug 05 2010 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: L8Bleumr Signed
I like this very sweet loving moment when everything seems so right in the world. These are very treasured times whether it is written in a story or real life. Wonderfully descriptive writing.
Date: Aug 05 2010
Summary: How did Eomer feel when he saw his sister fall in love with Aragorn? A short poem.
Categories: Book-verse, Movie-verse Characters: Aragorn, Eomer, Eowyn
Genres: Drama, Family, Poetry, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 72 Read Count: 1542
Published: Aug 09 2010 Updated: Aug 09 2010 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Brotherly Love Reviewer: L8Bleumr Signed
Well, I liked it so let me tell you why. I see Eomer as Eowyn's protector. They have both been through much in their lives. Now she is throwing caution to the wind, pining for Aragorn who her brother knows nothing about. He is a stranger and threatens to come between Eomer and his sister, the only bloodline he has left. He does not want to lose that connection, especially in times of war when family is the one thing that binds you to who you used to be.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! That is the way I wanted it to be interpreted, and I see that I have done an adequate job. I am very glad that you enjoyed it, and thank you for telling me why. It helps me to know what I did right. =)
Date: Aug 09 2010
Summary: A response to the challenge, A drabble to the Mummers Dance by Lisse. Subject in question : Elrond/Celebrian
Categories: Off Topic Characters: Celebrían, Elrond
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 100 Read Count: 1256
Published: Aug 10 2010 Updated: Aug 10 2010 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Impatient Dance Reviewer: L8Bleumr Signed
Very good first drabble. I have yet to try this format but I love reading them. You go girl. You're well on your way.

Author's Response: thanks :) i love Lisse challenge. i am well on my way? gosh, ur being kind. But it means a lot coming from someone so good at writing as you
Date: Aug 10 2010
Reflections by luthien85 Rated: G [Reviews - 6]
Summary: A response to the challenge, An honest moment with your character by Lisse. Character in question : Haldir/Calavene
Categories: Movie-verse, Off Topic Characters: Haldir
Genres: Hurt/Comfort
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 267 Read Count: 1030
Published: Aug 10 2010 Updated: Aug 10 2010 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Reflections Reviewer: L8Bleumr Signed
You bring out the struggle Haldir has with who he used to be and who he is now. It's kind of sad to know he still fears certain things, even with his loving son by his side. Very touching.

Author's Response: thank you :) yes, i made haldir suffer in my fan fic don't i lol...but i guess sometimes as a aprent you will always fear for your child and so much has happened between calavene and he, i am sure he fear what it will be like if mae finds out
Date: Aug 10 2010
Wildflowers by Whisper Rated: R [Reviews - 16]
Summary: Response to Lisse's The Mummers' Dance Challenge. Double Drabbles set in Mirkwood during the 3rd Age. Beneath the moon, two elves danced a dance.
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Original Character
Genres: Romance
Warnings: AU (alternate universe)
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1781 Read Count: 7430
Published: Aug 10 2010 Updated: Aug 12 2010 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 Reviewer: L8Bleumr Signed
This was beautiful. It was sexy. It was satisfying. The rhythm of your words is so poetic. I just loved it.

Author's Response: Thank you L8Bleumr. Like I said below, these drabbles were my first. I've definately been turned on to them. -Whisper
Date: Aug 12 2010
Unrelenting Love by luthien85 Rated: NC-17 [Reviews - 39]
Summary:

Haldir and Legolas were fast friends in their youth and spend their time together. One unfortunate incident involving Legolas' younger sister, Lothestel left a bitter taste in Haldir's mouth.

Now years had passed and a tragedy struck Mirkwood. Legolas' brother Gollon Penarn who was the crown prince was murdered by Orcs. To ensure the safety of his people, the new crown prince, Legolas proposed an alliance with the elves of Lorien. Lord Celeborn accepted the alliance with another gesture, the marriage of his Marchwarden to the Princess of Mirkwood.

Lothestel agreed to the marriage without getting to know her betrothed. Much to her surprise and dismay, her wedding night came and with it Haldir.

Could they put their animosity aside to help save the two kingdom? Will true love ever come to them and prevail in the end?

This is Unrelenting Love...
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Aragorn, Arwen, Celeborn, Galadriel, Haldir, Legolas, Orcs/Uruk-Hai, Original Character, Orophin, Rúmil, Thranduil
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Family, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort, Romance
Warnings: AU (alternate universe), Graphic Sex, Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 59128 Read Count: 17768
Published: Aug 17 2010 Updated: Dec 21 2012 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9 - What the Eyes Saw Reviewer: L8Bleumr Signed
I knew that sneaky little elleth would pull something like this. Lothestel is like a skiddish cat. One wrong move and she's out of there. Haldir's gonna have to do some sweet talking to get her to see it was not his fault. Nice to see an update. Hope the next one will come sooner.

Author's Response: She didnt do it on purpose i think. People do stupid things when they're in love and she really wanted to convince haldir that she loves him and he loves her back but alas, Haldir's heart belongs to another. I hope to have the next update sometime tomorrow :) now that school hasnt been so crazy, i can focus on writing :)
Date: Jul 28 2011
Title: Chapter 1: Prologue Reviewer: L8Bleumr Signed
From reading the summary, it sounds like an interesting story. A lot of humor in the epilogue. I laughed through most of it. I can just imagine Legolas' face as he discovers it was his sister he was spying on. But the funniest thing was Legolas laughing like an elleth. Very immature and cute at the same time. A side of Leg we don't see very often, him in his youth. Very funny. I hope you continue with the story.

Author's Response: as usual, you are the first to comment :) thanks a lot moe, i really appreciate it. I'll continue the story for you if not for everyone else :) hope you'll like the next chapters to come
Date: Aug 17 2010
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1 - By Chance Reviewer: L8Bleumr Signed
Hot chapter. Haldir is good at torturing. I don't think I would have admitted my mistake though lol. Loved the scene with Legolas behind the rose bush. My two favs in one chapter. Great way to start my day.

Author's Response: no one can say no to these two hot elves...*sighs the object of my fantasies ;P
Date: Aug 21 2010