Reviews by L8Bleumr
Summary: Before the War of the Ring, many had their own "War of the Ring" in their mind. How hard was it to resist the temptation of unlimited power? And what did it do to those around them?
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Galadriel, Original Character
Genres: Drama
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 803 Read Count: 1098
Published: 08/01/10 Updated: 08/01/10 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Galadriel Reviewer: L8Bleumr Signed
This is a side of Galadriel I haven't seen before. Most of the time she is portrayed as being wise and all knowing, giving her advice. But you have shown her in her own personal struggle with the knowledge of the ring and how it could seduce her even before Frodo arrives to offer it to her. I'm sure she would have known about it beforehand and it probably would have plagued her mind often. Very good. I liked it.

Author's Response: Yes, this one was really hard to write, because I had to slip into the mind of someone who was wise and powerful and mostly kind of aloof, and see her as vulnerable and then write that. I am glad that you liked it, and thank you for reviewing! =)
Date: 08/01/10
Summary: Amroth reaches the shore, and cannot find his love. He ponders their love and wonders what is life anymore, without her?
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Amroth, Nimrodel
Genres: Drama, Poetry, Romance
Warnings: Character Death
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 342 Read Count: 1188
Published: 08/03/10 Updated: 08/03/10 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: If I Can't Love Her Reviewer: L8Bleumr Signed
Tragedy and love. They seem like opposites but they go together so well. A very nice poem about two Elves we don't read much of. Poetry is the one thing I wish I could do but unfortunately, it is not within me. This is a nice change. Good job.

Author's Response: Thank you so much =)I read The Song of Nimrodel this week, and I was really inspired to write something about the two of them.
Date: 08/03/10
Summary: A one shot family moment in Mirkwood
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Thranduil
Genres: Family
Warnings: None
Series: The Life of a Leaf
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 635 Read Count: 1339
Published: 08/05/10 Updated: 08/05/10 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: L8Bleumr Signed
I like this very sweet loving moment when everything seems so right in the world. These are very treasured times whether it is written in a story or real life. Wonderfully descriptive writing.
Date: 08/05/10
Why Review? by Lisse Rated: G [Reviews - 11]
Summary: take the time to comment. It means so much.
Categories: Off Topic Characters: None
Genres: Essay
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 333 Read Count: 1065
Published: 08/05/10 Updated: 08/05/10 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: L8Bleumr Signed
I wrote something similar not too long ago. I totally agree with you. I try to review everything I read at least once. There is nothing better than having an author respond with their appreciation. Sometimes I have been one of their only reviewers. I am a musician too and I have played in a smokey bar at 2 am for only 5 people. Yea it sucks but you keep plugging along. But without feedback, you don't know if your doing your best. I am grateful for every one of my readers but especially my reviewers. They make me smile, make me laugh and keep me going with their encouraging words, especially when my muses go on vacation.

Author's Response: You are such a faithful person and offer encouragement to so many. We are grateful for you
Date: 08/05/10
Summary: How did Eomer feel when he saw his sister fall in love with Aragorn? A short poem.
Categories: Book-verse, Movie-verse Characters: Aragorn, Eomer, Eowyn
Genres: Drama, Family, Poetry, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 72 Read Count: 1484
Published: 08/09/10 Updated: 08/09/10 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Brotherly Love Reviewer: L8Bleumr Signed
Well, I liked it so let me tell you why. I see Eomer as Eowyn's protector. They have both been through much in their lives. Now she is throwing caution to the wind, pining for Aragorn who her brother knows nothing about. He is a stranger and threatens to come between Eomer and his sister, the only bloodline he has left. He does not want to lose that connection, especially in times of war when family is the one thing that binds you to who you used to be.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! That is the way I wanted it to be interpreted, and I see that I have done an adequate job. I am very glad that you enjoyed it, and thank you for telling me why. It helps me to know what I did right. =)
Date: 08/09/10
Summary: A response to the challenge, A drabble to the Mummers Dance by Lisse. Subject in question : Elrond/Celebrian
Categories: Off Topic Characters: Celebrían, Elrond
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 100 Read Count: 1216
Published: 08/10/10 Updated: 08/10/10 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Impatient Dance Reviewer: L8Bleumr Signed
Very good first drabble. I have yet to try this format but I love reading them. You go girl. You're well on your way.

Author's Response: thanks :) i love Lisse challenge. i am well on my way? gosh, ur being kind. But it means a lot coming from someone so good at writing as you
Date: 08/10/10
Reflections by luthien85 Rated: G [Reviews - 6]
Summary: A response to the challenge, An honest moment with your character by Lisse. Character in question : Haldir/Calavene
Categories: Movie-verse, Off Topic Characters: Haldir
Genres: Hurt/Comfort
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 267 Read Count: 1005
Published: 08/10/10 Updated: 08/10/10 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Reflections Reviewer: L8Bleumr Signed
You bring out the struggle Haldir has with who he used to be and who he is now. It's kind of sad to know he still fears certain things, even with his loving son by his side. Very touching.

Author's Response: thank you :) yes, i made haldir suffer in my fan fic don't i lol...but i guess sometimes as a aprent you will always fear for your child and so much has happened between calavene and he, i am sure he fear what it will be like if mae finds out
Date: 08/10/10
Wildflowers by Whisper Rated: R [Reviews - 16]
Summary: Response to Lisse's The Mummers' Dance Challenge. Double Drabbles set in Mirkwood during the 3rd Age. Beneath the moon, two elves danced a dance.
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Original Character
Genres: Romance
Warnings: AU (alternate universe)
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1781 Read Count: 7284
Published: 08/10/10 Updated: 08/12/10 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 Reviewer: L8Bleumr Signed
This was beautiful. It was sexy. It was satisfying. The rhythm of your words is so poetic. I just loved it.

Author's Response: Thank you L8Bleumr. Like I said below, these drabbles were my first. I've definately been turned on to them. -Whisper
Date: 08/12/10
Unrelenting Love by luthien85 Rated: NC-17 [Reviews - 39]

Haldir and Legolas were fast friends in their youth and spend their time together. One unfortunate incident involving Legolas' younger sister, Lothestel left a bitter taste in Haldir's mouth.

Now years had passed and a tragedy struck Mirkwood. Legolas' brother Gollon Penarn who was the crown prince was murdered by Orcs. To ensure the safety of his people, the new crown prince, Legolas proposed an alliance with the elves of Lorien. Lord Celeborn accepted the alliance with another gesture, the marriage of his Marchwarden to the Princess of Mirkwood.

Lothestel agreed to the marriage without getting to know her betrothed. Much to her surprise and dismay, her wedding night came and with it Haldir.

Could they put their animosity aside to help save the two kingdom? Will true love ever come to them and prevail in the end?

This is Unrelenting Love...
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Aragorn, Arwen, Celeborn, Galadriel, Haldir, Legolas, Orcs/Uruk-Hai, Original Character, Orophin, Rúmil, Thranduil
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Family, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort, Romance
Warnings: AU (alternate universe), Graphic Sex, Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 59128 Read Count: 17315
Published: 08/17/10 Updated: 12/21/12 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9 - What the Eyes Saw Reviewer: L8Bleumr Signed
I knew that sneaky little elleth would pull something like this. Lothestel is like a skiddish cat. One wrong move and she's out of there. Haldir's gonna have to do some sweet talking to get her to see it was not his fault. Nice to see an update. Hope the next one will come sooner.

Author's Response: She didnt do it on purpose i think. People do stupid things when they're in love and she really wanted to convince haldir that she loves him and he loves her back but alas, Haldir's heart belongs to another. I hope to have the next update sometime tomorrow :) now that school hasnt been so crazy, i can focus on writing :)
Date: 07/28/11
Title: Chapter 1: Prologue Reviewer: L8Bleumr Signed
From reading the summary, it sounds like an interesting story. A lot of humor in the epilogue. I laughed through most of it. I can just imagine Legolas' face as he discovers it was his sister he was spying on. But the funniest thing was Legolas laughing like an elleth. Very immature and cute at the same time. A side of Leg we don't see very often, him in his youth. Very funny. I hope you continue with the story.

Author's Response: as usual, you are the first to comment :) thanks a lot moe, i really appreciate it. I'll continue the story for you if not for everyone else :) hope you'll like the next chapters to come
Date: 08/17/10
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1 - By Chance Reviewer: L8Bleumr Signed
Hot chapter. Haldir is good at torturing. I don't think I would have admitted my mistake though lol. Loved the scene with Legolas behind the rose bush. My two favs in one chapter. Great way to start my day.

Author's Response: no one can say no to these two hot elves...*sighs the object of my fantasies ;P
Date: 08/21/10
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2 - Payback Backfired Reviewer: L8Bleumr Signed
Oh wow! Needed a cold shower after this one. Looks like the hubby is in trouble tonight. lol Love the tension. It's always so explosive when they resolve things even if it doesn't happen right away.

Author's Response: tell me about it. I had to take a cold shower myself after i wrote that. what a dirty little mind i have lol. might not be so explosive as you will see later on...
Date: 08/22/10
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3 - Tragedy in Mirkwood Reviewer: L8Bleumr Signed
Yes, what a sad day indeed. To think of a mother and unborn child dying breaks my heart. When you have a child of your own, stories like this touch you much deeper than you know. I can honestly say, I'm glad this story is fiction. Legolas has a lot on his plate now. I hope he remains with his love. I hope Haldir will go to Mirkwood to console the family in person, since they are so close. Much tragedy but a well written chapter no less.

Author's Response: Yup Legolas would have to step up. Nyonna will be there for him all the way but no marriage for them yet sadly. As for Haldir traveling to Mirkwood..we would have to see..He is a busy ellon, being the marchwarden and all
Date: 08/23/10
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4 - Decision to Journey Reviewer: L8Bleumr Signed
Oh Las! Oh yes Las! Let me tell you, this Legolas pairing is driving me wild (in a good way) He is after all my favorite. Let's hurry on to Lorien. Can't wait to see what happens when Lothestel sees Haldir again.

Author's Response: Im glad you loved the pairing. I like to think legolas as a romantic tender lover...i try to portray him like that here...i hope it comes across that way...
Date: 08/26/10
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5 - The treaty and some Reviewer: L8Bleumr Signed
Hey my review buddy is back! You have missed a lot of great stories. I hope you get a chance to catch up on some of them, especially Melusine and ladyjane (and mine). I know, I'm shameless. I've finished Guardian and have started on a new story, Magic Man. And you must check out Deeper than Breathing by ziggy. Her work is outstanding. Glad to see your update. I am longing for Haldir and Lothestel to have a fiery affair but I'm sure the journey there will be worth the wait. Welcome back mellon nin. You have been greatly missed, both your reviews and your stories.

Author's Response: on my phone now..i know..i missed a lot of story..wish i could catch up soon. thanks for sticking out for this story!
Date: 09/18/10
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6 - The Bitter Proposal Reviewer: L8Bleumr Signed
I completely agree with regalaria and say welcome home. I hope you will find some time to post more. We have missed you, but I totally understand. School comes first of course. Great chapter. Finally, the word is out. She is going to have a cow and kill Haldir. *hehe* Such tension coming up. Can't wait to see what happens next. (Lots of yelling, maybe some smacking and then some hot 'hate myself for loving you' sex?) A girl can dream can't she.

Author's Response: Lol..if only life was that simple :) thanks for the review. I have missed you guys and i am looking forward to reading your new work. Just hope that time will be on my side with school work and all
Date: 10/19/10
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7 - Truth Will Out Reviewer: L8Bleumr Signed
You are such a freakin' tease. Hey, welcome back again. Nice to see the update. Hope all is well with you. This was very hot and frustrating (mean that in a good way). Can't wait for more.

Author's Response: I'm sorry to be such a tease... lol u know me..its good to be back..*sighs it seems nowadays all i have time for is to post the stories and respond to reviews...I really want to read some of the new stories u wrote but man...time is envious
Date: 11/19/10
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8 - One Week Reviewer: L8Bleumr Signed
I'm glad to see Haldir and Lothestel finally giving into their feelings for one another. Loved how he took her hand while they were walking and wanting her to walk by his side. Such an honorable elf. But now I'm worried about this Elwen. I'd really hoped she would want Beinion but now I see her as a real problem in the near future. You're weaving your web again aren't? Nicely done. Hope you can update again soon.

Author's Response: keeping it a secret :) but come on..its too early in the story to have a happy ending :P
Date: 02/16/11
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11 - Home Reviewer: L8Bleumr Signed
Good to see an update from you. My, things seem as though they are about to get complicated. Looking forward to more.
Date: 10/04/11
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10 - The Wedding Reviewer: L8Bleumr Signed
Haldir, just throw her to the floor and get on with it! LOL. Good chapter. I sure hope Lothestel comes around soon. I mean, does she know how lucky she is in the first place? Can't wait for more and it's nice to see you back writing again.

Author's Response: Don't we all wish that happened to us lol But doing that might drive Lothestel away. She is a very proud elleth XD It's good to be writing back again :) and thank you for reviewing Moe :)
Date: 08/09/11