Reviews by L8Bleumr
Reflections by luthien85 Rated: G [Reviews - 12]
Summary: A response to the challenge, An honest moment with your character by Lisse. Character in question : Haldir/Calavene
Categories: Movie-verse, Off Topic Characters: Haldir
Genres: Hurt/Comfort
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 267 Read Count: 1245
Published: Aug 10 2010 Updated: Aug 10 2010 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Reflections Reviewer: L8Bleumr Signed
You bring out the struggle Haldir has with who he used to be and who he is now. It's kind of sad to know he still fears certain things, even with his loving son by his side. Very touching.

Author's Response: thank you :) yes, i made haldir suffer in my fan fic don't i lol...but i guess sometimes as a aprent you will always fear for your child and so much has happened between calavene and he, i am sure he fear what it will be like if mae finds out
Date: Aug 10 2010
Wildflowers by Whisper Rated: R [Reviews - 16]
Summary: Response to Lisse's The Mummers' Dance Challenge. Double Drabbles set in Mirkwood during the 3rd Age. Beneath the moon, two elves danced a dance.
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Original Character
Genres: Romance
Warnings: AU (alternate universe)
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1781 Read Count: 9031
Published: Aug 10 2010 Updated: Aug 12 2010 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 Reviewer: L8Bleumr Signed
This was beautiful. It was sexy. It was satisfying. The rhythm of your words is so poetic. I just loved it.

Author's Response: Thank you L8Bleumr. Like I said below, these drabbles were my first. I've definately been turned on to them. -Whisper
Date: Aug 12 2010
Unrelenting Love by luthien85 Rated: NC-17 [Reviews - 42]

Haldir and Legolas were fast friends in their youth and spend their time together. One unfortunate incident involving Legolas' younger sister, Lothestel left a bitter taste in Haldir's mouth.

Now years had passed and a tragedy struck Mirkwood. Legolas' brother Gollon Penarn who was the crown prince was murdered by Orcs. To ensure the safety of his people, the new crown prince, Legolas proposed an alliance with the elves of Lorien. Lord Celeborn accepted the alliance with another gesture, the marriage of his Marchwarden to the Princess of Mirkwood.

Lothestel agreed to the marriage without getting to know her betrothed. Much to her surprise and dismay, her wedding night came and with it Haldir.

Could they put their animosity aside to help save the two kingdom? Will true love ever come to them and prevail in the end?

This is Unrelenting Love...
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Aragorn, Arwen, Celeborn, Galadriel, Haldir, Legolas, Orcs/Uruk-Hai, Original Character, Orophin, Rúmil, Thranduil
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Family, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort, Romance
Warnings: AU (alternate universe), Graphic Sex, Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 59128 Read Count: 20877
Published: Aug 17 2010 Updated: Dec 21 2012 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9 - What the Eyes Saw Reviewer: L8Bleumr Signed
I knew that sneaky little elleth would pull something like this. Lothestel is like a skiddish cat. One wrong move and she's out of there. Haldir's gonna have to do some sweet talking to get her to see it was not his fault. Nice to see an update. Hope the next one will come sooner.

Author's Response: She didnt do it on purpose i think. People do stupid things when they're in love and she really wanted to convince haldir that she loves him and he loves her back but alas, Haldir's heart belongs to another. I hope to have the next update sometime tomorrow :) now that school hasnt been so crazy, i can focus on writing :)
Date: Jul 28 2011
Title: Chapter 1: Prologue Reviewer: L8Bleumr Signed
From reading the summary, it sounds like an interesting story. A lot of humor in the epilogue. I laughed through most of it. I can just imagine Legolas' face as he discovers it was his sister he was spying on. But the funniest thing was Legolas laughing like an elleth. Very immature and cute at the same time. A side of Leg we don't see very often, him in his youth. Very funny. I hope you continue with the story.

Author's Response: as usual, you are the first to comment :) thanks a lot moe, i really appreciate it. I'll continue the story for you if not for everyone else :) hope you'll like the next chapters to come
Date: Aug 17 2010
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1 - By Chance Reviewer: L8Bleumr Signed
Hot chapter. Haldir is good at torturing. I don't think I would have admitted my mistake though lol. Loved the scene with Legolas behind the rose bush. My two favs in one chapter. Great way to start my day.

Author's Response: no one can say no to these two hot elves...*sighs the object of my fantasies ;P
Date: Aug 21 2010
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2 - Payback Backfired Reviewer: L8Bleumr Signed
Oh wow! Needed a cold shower after this one. Looks like the hubby is in trouble tonight. lol Love the tension. It's always so explosive when they resolve things even if it doesn't happen right away.

Author's Response: tell me about it. I had to take a cold shower myself after i wrote that. what a dirty little mind i have lol. might not be so explosive as you will see later on...
Date: Aug 22 2010
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3 - Tragedy in Mirkwood Reviewer: L8Bleumr Signed
Yes, what a sad day indeed. To think of a mother and unborn child dying breaks my heart. When you have a child of your own, stories like this touch you much deeper than you know. I can honestly say, I'm glad this story is fiction. Legolas has a lot on his plate now. I hope he remains with his love. I hope Haldir will go to Mirkwood to console the family in person, since they are so close. Much tragedy but a well written chapter no less.

Author's Response: Yup Legolas would have to step up. Nyonna will be there for him all the way but no marriage for them yet sadly. As for Haldir traveling to Mirkwood..we would have to see..He is a busy ellon, being the marchwarden and all
Date: Aug 23 2010
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4 - Decision to Journey Reviewer: L8Bleumr Signed
Oh Las! Oh yes Las! Let me tell you, this Legolas pairing is driving me wild (in a good way) He is after all my favorite. Let's hurry on to Lorien. Can't wait to see what happens when Lothestel sees Haldir again.

Author's Response: Im glad you loved the pairing. I like to think legolas as a romantic tender lover...i try to portray him like that here...i hope it comes across that way...
Date: Aug 26 2010
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5 - The treaty and some Reviewer: L8Bleumr Signed
Hey my review buddy is back! You have missed a lot of great stories. I hope you get a chance to catch up on some of them, especially Melusine and ladyjane (and mine). I know, I'm shameless. I've finished Guardian and have started on a new story, Magic Man. And you must check out Deeper than Breathing by ziggy. Her work is outstanding. Glad to see your update. I am longing for Haldir and Lothestel to have a fiery affair but I'm sure the journey there will be worth the wait. Welcome back mellon nin. You have been greatly missed, both your reviews and your stories.

Author's Response: on my phone now..i know..i missed a lot of story..wish i could catch up soon. thanks for sticking out for this story!
Date: Sep 18 2010
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6 - The Bitter Proposal Reviewer: L8Bleumr Signed
I completely agree with regalaria and say welcome home. I hope you will find some time to post more. We have missed you, but I totally understand. School comes first of course. Great chapter. Finally, the word is out. She is going to have a cow and kill Haldir. *hehe* Such tension coming up. Can't wait to see what happens next. (Lots of yelling, maybe some smacking and then some hot 'hate myself for loving you' sex?) A girl can dream can't she.

Author's Response: Lol..if only life was that simple :) thanks for the review. I have missed you guys and i am looking forward to reading your new work. Just hope that time will be on my side with school work and all
Date: Oct 19 2010
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7 - Truth Will Out Reviewer: L8Bleumr Signed
You are such a freakin' tease. Hey, welcome back again. Nice to see the update. Hope all is well with you. This was very hot and frustrating (mean that in a good way). Can't wait for more.

Author's Response: I'm sorry to be such a tease... lol u know me..its good to be back..*sighs it seems nowadays all i have time for is to post the stories and respond to reviews...I really want to read some of the new stories u wrote but man...time is envious
Date: Nov 19 2010
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8 - One Week Reviewer: L8Bleumr Signed
I'm glad to see Haldir and Lothestel finally giving into their feelings for one another. Loved how he took her hand while they were walking and wanting her to walk by his side. Such an honorable elf. But now I'm worried about this Elwen. I'd really hoped she would want Beinion but now I see her as a real problem in the near future. You're weaving your web again aren't? Nicely done. Hope you can update again soon.

Author's Response: keeping it a secret :) but come on..its too early in the story to have a happy ending :P
Date: Feb 16 2011
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11 - Home Reviewer: L8Bleumr Signed
Good to see an update from you. My, things seem as though they are about to get complicated. Looking forward to more.
Date: Oct 04 2011
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10 - The Wedding Reviewer: L8Bleumr Signed
Haldir, just throw her to the floor and get on with it! LOL. Good chapter. I sure hope Lothestel comes around soon. I mean, does she know how lucky she is in the first place? Can't wait for more and it's nice to see you back writing again.

Author's Response: Don't we all wish that happened to us lol But doing that might drive Lothestel away. She is a very proud elleth XD It's good to be writing back again :) and thank you for reviewing Moe :)
Date: Aug 09 2011
Summary: Unrequited love. I hate it, yet love it. It gives you a chance to watch from afar, and wish without being caught up in the action.
Categories: Off Topic Characters: None
Genres: Poetry, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: On My Own
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 167 Read Count: 1332
Published: Aug 19 2010 Updated: Aug 19 2010 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: L8Bleumr Signed
You speak for all of us who have had a crush on someone who doesn't return the same feelings. Unrequited love can make you feel like you are floating on a cloud but it can also smother that joy when the reality sets in. You portray both the highs and lows of love unanswered.

Author's Response: Thank you for enjoying! I have had a very hard week trying to figure out my feelings for someone, and trying to learn more about myself and them. Unrequited love plays such a role in many many stories, and even more so in real life. It feels terrible at the moment, but when you get what you want it usually turns out to be not that great after all.
Date: Aug 19 2010
Summary: "I’m not sure exactly why this whole thing wasn’t freaking me out more, but it may have something to do with the fact that the last thing that happened to me in London was that I was shot. Death has a certain way of putting perspective on things." Legolas/OC
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Aragorn, Arwen, Boromir, Celeborn, Denethor, Eomer, Eowyn, Faramir, Frodo, Galadriel, Gandalf / Olorin, Gimli, Haldir, Legolas, Merry, Original Character, Pippin, Sam, Saruman, The Fellowship, Théoden
Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama, Friendship, Romance
Warnings: Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 50658 Read Count: 19403
Published: Aug 23 2010 Updated: Jan 28 2014 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Prologue Reviewer: L8Bleumr Signed
OK I'll admit, I'm a sucker for a Legolas/OC story. There's not much to go by yet so I'll wait to comment until you write more. I'll definitely return though. By the way, who's gonna clean up that mess? lol

Author's Response: I'm glad you reviewed, and hopefully you won't have to wait too long for an update.
Date: Aug 24 2010
Summary: A poem written as a response to a challenge placed by L8Bleumr on her story Blue Moon :)
Categories: Off Topic Characters: Original Character
Genres: Poetry
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 132 Read Count: 1409
Published: Aug 24 2010 Updated: Aug 24 2010 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Once in a Blue Moon Reviewer: L8Bleumr Signed
This was absolutely beautiful. It's like you were in my head. Thank you so much for responding. I can just imagine Orophin out on the borders and thinking of Ethiriel. He remembers the piece of paper she gave him and takes it out. His heart swoons to know she loves him too. Great, wonderful, I just can't say enough.

Author's Response: Aww...i am glad you liked it. It just something to compliment your great story :)
Date: Aug 24 2010
Summary: A collection of Nessa drabbles through the eyes of her husband, Tulkas.
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Nessa, Tulkas
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 200 Read Count: 2390
Published: Aug 29 2010 Updated: Aug 30 2010 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: The Ever Green Lawns of Valinor Reviewer: L8Bleumr Signed
Very descriptive. I felt like I was watching her myself. Drabbles can be a good way to take a break from writing longer stories. However, please continue with Nimwen. I do love that story and can't wait for an update.

Author's Response: Oh don't worry, Chapter 7 of Nimwen should be up in three days at the latest. I just needed a little break, as you said. Also, I have wanted to try a drabble for a long time and I have always felt "connected" with Nessa (obviously due to having the same name) Glad you enjoyed it! =)
Date: Aug 29 2010
Summary: The three brothers set out on a hunting trip that could proove to be fatal. Estel does as much as he can on his own, but as he awaits dieing, will his brothers come soon enough.
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Elrohir
Genres: Angst
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4941 Read Count: 5048
Published: Sep 03 2010 Updated: Sep 04 2010 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 3: Searching for something more than just hope. Reviewer: L8Bleumr Signed
Welcome and congrats on your first story. I think it has potential. I feel bad for Elrohir being the one to have to tell Elrond about the accident. I get the feeling he's gonna to be pretty upset.

Author's Response: Whoa thanks, i didn't think anyone would read it that fast. thanks, any constructiove criticizm and please be honist
Date: Sep 03 2010
Title: Chapter 5: Broken fevers and broken hearts Reviewer: L8Bleumr Signed
Well, you asked for my honest opinion. I am no professional so I cannot critique this too much. Maybe a beta reader can better help you with that. Now about the story, you did make me think about Elrond raising Aragorn. It is said that elves don't get sick. But Aragorn is human, mostly. I began to ponder the thought of Elrond having to know something about human sicknesses and how to cure them if he was to be responsible for Aragorn's upbringing. It might have proven to be quite challenging in the beginning. Aragorn had to learn to live with the elves just as much as Elrond had to learn about raising a young human. Interesting. Continue on and let's see where this goes.
Date: Sep 04 2010
No Man by Anwyn Rated: G [Reviews - 3]
Summary: A third age drabble
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Eomer, Eomund, Eowyn, Théodwyn
Genres: Family
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 101 Read Count: 1733
Published: Sep 10 2010 Updated: Sep 10 2010 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: L8Bleumr Signed
Very sweet. Good first time drabble. Congrats.

Author's Response: Thanks so much L8Bleumr! It was abit of a challenge to keep it at exactly 100 words but I am happy with how it turned out.
Date: Sep 11 2010
Summary: A quick drabble, set well into the Fourth Age, when the Elves and the Ents have dwindled into legend.
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Original Character
Genres: General
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 216 Read Count: 1099
Published: Sep 13 2010 Updated: Sep 13 2010 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: L8Bleumr Signed
I love how they thought there was nothing to see, yet things were happening all around them. Very sweet.

Author's Response: Thank you. I often have that feeling in a forest; it's gratifying to hear that the story conveyed it.
Date: Sep 14 2010
Summary: Returning home unexpected on a rainy night, Eowyn gets an eyeful of the one thing she would have never imagined. Jealousy, hurt, curiosity or something else – which will have the top say in her?
Categories: Book-verse, Book Verse Slash, Lord of the Rings Slash Characters: Aragorn, Eowyn, Faramir
Genres: Erotica, Romance
Warnings: Graphic Sex, Slash (same sex pairing)
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 19683 Read Count: 15980
Published: Sep 15 2010 Updated: Dec 07 2011 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: L8Bleumr Signed
Oh wow! I must say that Eowyn is one of my favorite characters and Eowyn/Faramir are my favorite couple, but you have made me see them in a whole new light. Love how you portray Eowyn. This is how I imagine her to be once she settles in with Faramir in Ithilien. I hope she never loses that fire. I can't wait for more.

Author's Response: Thank you, L8Bleumr! Your kind words are most inspiring :) Ah, Eowyn could never completely settle down, now could she? ;) Frankly, much as I love both their characters, I always had some doubts re the peaceful uneventful bliss of their marriage. Such a couple is just bound to have some adventures, don't you think?
Date: Sep 15 2010
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Reviewer: L8Bleumr Signed
I can only imagine what she saw. Well, I know what she saw but... you know what I mean. It's good to be the King. I will not guess where this is leading to but my anxious thoughts see Eowyn in a delicious Gondorian sandwich. Loving this fun, exciting sexy piece.

Author's Response: Oh, yes, I know what you mean xD And yes, being King is good, and going to get only better. Well, at least for some time... Anyway, love the 'delicious Gondorian sandwich' phrase! I would have so totally stolen and used it if only they had sandwiches in Middle-earth...
Date: Oct 02 2010
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Reviewer: L8Bleumr Signed
You have made me go back and forth on this one. I am able to put myself in Eowyn's shoes here. At first she just wants to watch and maybe get some small compensation for it. Then she sees things differently and is even sad for them. I felt like she should be fuming mad. Then when I begin to agree with her, she flips and lets anger and jealousy in. Now I find myself back to my original thoughts. Great work. Can't wait for more.

Author's Response: Ha-ha! Your comment made me laugh with joy. To be frank, though, she's made me go back and forth too... Problem is, I guess, that the longer she watches, the more she learns, and the more complicated it all becomes. Besides, a woman's mind (let alone her heart) is not always 100% logical - and, after all, she does love the man (at least one of them), so anger is by far not the only force driving her. It would have been so much simpler if it was...
Date: Nov 03 2010