I liked the teasing dream sequence. For a moment I thought she gave in too quickly. Glad she's letting him sweat it out a little longer but that they can still admit their love for each other.

Author's Response: yes, Carleena loves him. He's the love of his life. The question is can she put aside her prejudice and accept him again. There will be more teasing dream scenes soon :)

Yes, it was very satisfying and my name was spelled right, haha. Now it makes sense why she flew off the handles and disappeared after catching OB and Angela together. The ghosts from her past have finally caught up to her and she needed to deal with them. Loved the Chpt.

This is definitely the best chapter by far. I loved how Carleena came around and realized what she has been missing is right in front of her. The play was a good dose of reality. But my favorite part was the way he proposed to her, the ring on the ice cream. Nice touch. I couldn't help but remember the night my husband proposed to me. Those are memories no one forgets. Well done.

Author's Response: thank you so much. I had hope the proposal scene sound believable since i myself have never been proposed to lol. The play is actually something i had experienced before. I had watched a play before that was really like my life and it prompted me into action. I'm glad you guys enjoyed it. I will write better!

First of all, let me say I appreciate the fact that you didn't have Carleena win the Oscar. It makes the story so much more realistic. It's not a perfect world and I don't particularly like reading about one. So I'm reading along and feeling good and then... BOOM!!! I really didn't see it coming. I was busy thinking about her parents and the awards show. I'm on the edge of my seat and waiting anxiously. Excellent chapter. Great cliff hanger.

Author's Response: I felt it wasn't right for her to win. It was her first movie and i thought Liv and Orlando should be honoured since they have been in the business for a while now. I'm glad i'm making you wait on the edge of your seat. Stay tuned. All will be revealed!

Oh, you had me going there. I thought for sure his spirit was visiting her one last time. I thought he was gone for sure. You had my heart pumping. Darn those doctors. It would have been awful for their son to grow up without his father. Hmmm... sounds familiar. (inside joke) Max is such a cute name, too. Can't wait to see how it ends.

Author's Response: I had a hard time writing this part. TO die or not to die, that is the question lol. It would have been satisfying on a literary stand point but i couldn't disappoint Orlando's fans. Plus i have not the heart to kill him. Thank you for following the story up till almost the end.

I for one am surprised there are not more reviews for this story. It is beautifully written, very professionally done. Stories like yours are the reason I decided to try writing my own. You have a great talent and I am glad you are sharing it. I've added it to my favorites. I love the story line and look forward to seeing the relationship between these two grow and mature together. The dialog is wonderful. The friendships are entertaining. Your descriptive writing makes me feel as if I were right there with them. I get such emotions from reading it. Keep writing this and I promise to keep reviewing. Please update soon.

Author's Response: You said that stories like mine kept you writing, well reviews like YOURS keep ME going :) Thankyou for your support, I'm sure you understand the pleasure that a review can give an author. I try my best with my stories, hoping that they don't turn cliched or dull. I'm currently halfway through the next chapter, so perhaps another update at the end of the week...LC

O... M... G... That was hot. I think I'm liking the story behind Oloriel and Herendil even better than Arwen and Legolas. If that's what you write for your second characters, I can't wait to see what's in store for the main ones. That was the most arousing sponge bath scene I've ever read. I bow down to you. Best chapter so far. More... and soon.

Author's Response: As always, I'm glad that you liked it. I wrote it last night (or then again, technically it was this morning) when I hadn't even planned to write anything at all. Had to do a bit of a spell check when I awoke this morning, but the story itself did not change :) Herendil and Oloriel are indeed having an easier run than Alar/Arwen/Legolas. And hot things are ahead, and in store for them, but do not ask me when, how or what exactly because I've only got the barest gist of it. As for updates, maybe this time next week. I've got to finish writing my essay now! LC

Short and sexy. A good read. I was a little confused when she called him her husband, but I see where you were going with it.

Author's Response: i wanted to run away from the fan fic i had going. I wanted something sexy and has some family feel to it. Hope it wasn't too confusing

This is an interesting story. I'm surprised to see you have not been reviewed yet. I will admit, I'm not too up on my First Age Middle Earth history so some of the places are a little confusing, but that's just me. I am anxious to see where this story goes. Am I right to assume that the Nazgul characters are all women? If so, that's a new twist. Good writing and I look forward to following along.

Author's Response: Thanks! Seven of the Nazgul are women in this. I decided to make the Witch-King male because that adds some tension with Khamul, who thinks she should be chief, and is also very annoyed that Sauron put a man in charge. The ninth Nazgul's also a man...I'm not sure why. Maybe it was for contrast between the Witch-King - who's fairly strong-willed - and the ninth Nazgul, who's weak and not all that smart. Thanks again for the review! I hope you enjoy the rest of the story!

I am amazed at how much you know about these stories. I like how you even incorporate characters that were only mentioned in passing in the books. Nicely done once again.