i really hope the brother isn't who i think he is..
the little love scene between kim and legalos was so cool.
Evangeline.. i think she can be trusted.. i dunno
things are starting to make sense now though.
over 100 reviews ^^ congrats!
Wow, you've gotten so amazing at writing. Everything flows and is clear, its funny =], and the protaganist is easy to follow and connect to. I love the plot.. its so clever! Especially the little details you can take in woth the family background, and the angst Robyn has about showing her weaknesses.
And the way Gimli talks! lol..The characters stay true to the movie (no slashes :D)
Your so talented, you should definately keep going!
(ill be the screaming fan that stalks you if you ever decide to become a writer. lol)
Haha, just read the second chapter. The conversations are so well thought out!
'"It is okay. I am not feeling hot. The air is of the right temperature." He said..' this was soooo funny :D
Nice desciptions of Uruk-hai, and the best friends really cool as well.
I wish i touched Legolas's ears.. or Aragon's, though that prob wouldnt mean anything...lol
Yesss!! i definately loved the whole 'lets go shopping'
I love your dialogue (like i said before)
And the whole seatbelt thing.. lol, a nice touch ;D. And and.. you didnt forget about the other characters which werent there, like Arwen. Aragon's so sweet.
looking forward to the next chapter!!
I'm starting to like Kim more and more. And Robyn too, they're friendship seems really strong.
And the little love triangle :D, legolas is so clueless, and kim is a little too.
This part : '“Well…since no one is willing to get a haircut...' It made me grin, i couldnt imagine any of the fellowship wanting to cut their hair.
The last part also tied up the chapter really well.. it was so sad when gandulf was remembering tolkein..
Looking forward to the break in.. lol.. i wonder how the fellowship are going to tackle this one ^^
just had a huge dose of your fanfic.. it felt like i was reading an actual novel =D.
i love the way you dont forget any of the characters.. i didnt realise pippin could be so deep! very sad about the unrequited love...
i hope scott's gonna be okay, hope robyn won't be too mean and lead him on or anything... lol im always rooting for the second guy.
really want to read the next chapter! left it in suspense...
btw - thanx so much kun
huh, that was unexpected (in a good way ^^)
the fellowship were so cool for protecting Robyn =D
its good they're staying with robin, even if she might not be the great great great grand daughter of Tolkien (for all the crazy stuff they've been through)
And Evangeline... “She’s obviously a monster in disguise…She’s definitely obnoxious like a monster, yes?” haha laughing at that. go kim!
And i like the part with scott ~ lol
oh my gosh scott is so cool! and sweet and smart too...
'“Never mind that!” I replied. “I’m responsible for the fellowship…so…just shoo.”'
shoo Evangeline! lol, though her situation is starting to get interesting...
'Evangeline snapped and then suddenly stopped, choking on her words.'
maybe she's not so bad after all....
The story's getting more and more suspensful! another great chapter!!
good luck on the rest of your exams =D
WOW! intense chapter
"Kim scrunched up her nose and pretended to stab Evangeline with an invisible knife." haha go kim! though im convinced there's another side to her, lol, but maybe not haha
And i love this bit! XD
'“Re match for helm’s deep?” Legolas said to Gimli.
“You’re on, elf boy.” Gimli replied.'
And the ring wraiths actually made me shiver! good descriptions.
I liked the change of pace, cant wait for the next!
Author's Response: Thanks Theja chan!!! I'm glad that you like the story T^T it means so much coming from such a genius like you lolz~
aww.. i feel so bad for gimli
and the fellowship has done so much for robyn, they're so cool XD
i hope robyn's gonna be okay though..
'I used to yell at Frodo whenever I’d watch the Lord of the Rings movie' hahaha i can imagine that!
and aragon's just got me cracking up laughing lol
'"Yes. You shall shine sleepy head"'
hm.. pretty nice of evangeline, startinng to like her a little bit more
ahh! what can robyn do when she's grounded?
wow! love your description when she put on the ring
"'You mean you slept with 8 men?!'" lol, does sound bad when you put it that way
haha no one can resist aragon's charm lol
Kim and Legolas are sooooo cute
and so clueless -_-''
i know my reviews sound disconnected, but they're just random thoughts i have while reading the story =)
"She rolled her eyes and continued to sharpen her dagger. " i would be very careful not to make her angry,lol
noooo! dont cancel your date with scott!!! lol XD
wow.. i guess we'l get an explanation from evangeline..
'“They’re actually- Can you promise-” Her face grew even grimmer. “That’s why I’m here…I-I need the rin-”'
nooo! what was she going to say???
ahh! what's Gollum doing here? i thought he was dead...
good chapter ;D
That was my exact reaction! didn't see that coming...
"‘Wait till you find out that she’s an elf…that will knock your socks off…’ I thought to myself." lol.. gimli's beinng pretty nice about it though
Legolas and Kim are so cute XD
it'd be sad if they had to seperate :(
ohhh. things are starting to click with evangeline's past.. cant wait for the next chapter!!
what happened? is robyn dreaming this or did she dream the fellowship?
i'd be freaking out too if i were her.
Author's Response: go on msnnnnn dearrr! :)
phew.i was scared when she said it was a dream.
i love the dialogue of Sméagol, it sounds exactly like its supposed to.
'I mean why would you choose cartoon banana covered wallpaper as ball room hall wallpaper?' lol :D
omg i think i know who 'him' is ><
Author's Response: Gahhhh you're too genius!! haha XD Of coures you know who it is =/
no no no no no. urgh, and i liked scott.
stupid @#$%** scott.
he put him to sleep? like, killed him?
'Got anything yet, love?” Scott said'
im getting angrier at him by the second....
'“Oh I remember this bit!” I exclaimed. “MELLON!”' lol, i thought she was just saying melon, like the fruit.
hm.. maybe scotts turning good?
aragons so amazing. and they did something for her on the USB.. that's so cute.
what!!!! she's going to middle earth. wow, that'll be interesting. and scott's gonna be there XD (still angry at him for the whole kidnapping thing though). did kim fall in as well?
great chapter, amazing story!
will definately wait for sequel