Reviews by Tinker


Tolkien's great great granddaughter finds his original transcript of Lord of the rings. She reads it and falls asleep after reading a few pages and then the next morning she found herself staring up at the characters that her great great grandfather had made. What caused this? And what can she do to get them back to their own world
Categories: Off Topic Characters: Aragorn, Frodo, Gandalf / Olorin, Gimli, Legolas, Merry, Pippin, Sam
Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama, Family, Fantasy, Friendship, Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 56806 Read Count: 45028
Published: Oct 12 2009 Updated: Nov 07 2011 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26- Betrayal or not Reviewer: Tinker Signed
i really hope the brother isn't who i think he is..
the little love scene between kim and legalos was so cool.
Evangeline.. i think she can be trusted.. i dunno
things are starting to make sense now though.

over 100 reviews ^^ congrats!
Date: Dec 08 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1- The beginning Reviewer: Tinker Signed
Hey Kun!
Wow, you've gotten so amazing at writing. Everything flows and is clear, its funny =], and the protaganist is easy to follow and connect to. I love the plot.. its so clever! Especially the little details you can take in woth the family background, and the angst Robyn has about showing her weaknesses.
And the way Gimli talks! lol..The characters stay true to the movie (no slashes :D)
Your so talented, you should definately keep going!
xoxox Chan
(ill be the screaming fan that stalks you if you ever decide to become a writer. lol)
Date: Oct 16 2009
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2- They're REAL?!!! Reviewer: Tinker Signed
Haha, just read the second chapter. The conversations are so well thought out!
'"It is okay. I am not feeling hot. The air is of the right temperature." He said..' this was soooo funny :D

Nice desciptions of Uruk-hai, and the best friends really cool as well.

I wish i touched Legolas's ears.. or Aragon's, though that prob wouldnt mean
Date: Oct 16 2009
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4- Evenstar and Bonding Reviewer: Tinker Signed
Yesss!! i definately loved the whole 'lets go shopping'
I love your dialogue (like i said before)
And the whole seatbelt thing.. lol, a nice touch ;D. And and.. you didnt forget about the other characters which werent there, like Arwen. Aragon's so sweet.
looking forward to the next chapter!!
xx chan
Date: Oct 16 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1- The beginning Reviewer: Tinker Signed
I'm starting to like Kim more and more. And Robyn too, they're friendship seems really strong.
And the little love triangle :D, legolas is so clueless, and kim is a little too.

This part : '“Well…since no one is willing to get a haircut...' It made me grin, i couldnt imagine any of the fellowship wanting to cut their hair.

The last part also tied up the chapter really well.. it was so sad when gandulf was remembering tolkein..

Looking forward to the break in.. lol.. i wonder how the fellowship are going to tackle this one ^^
Date: Oct 16 2009
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14- Prison Break Reviewer: Tinker Signed
just had a huge dose of your fanfic.. it felt like i was reading an actual novel =D.
i love the way you dont forget any of the characters.. i didnt realise pippin could be so deep! very sad about the unrequited love...
i hope scott's gonna be okay, hope robyn won't be too mean and lead him on or anything... lol im always rooting for the second guy.

really want to read the next chapter! left it in suspense...

btw - thanx so much kun
Date: Nov 04 2009
Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16- Another little Tolkien?! Reviewer: Tinker Signed
huh, that was unexpected (in a good way ^^)
the fellowship were so cool for protecting Robyn =D
its good they're staying with robin, even if she might not be the great great great grand daughter of Tolkien (for all the crazy stuff they've been through)

And Evangeline... “She’s obviously a monster in disguise…She’s definitely obnoxious like a monster, yes?” haha laughing at that. go kim!

And i like the part with scott ~ lol

Date: Nov 07 2009
Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17- Where's King Tut? Reviewer: Tinker Signed
oh my gosh scott is so cool! and sweet and smart too...

'“Never mind that!” I replied. “I’m responsible for the fellowship…so…just shoo.”'
shoo Evangeline! lol, though her situation is starting to get interesting...
'Evangeline snapped and then suddenly stopped, choking on her words.'

maybe she's not so bad after all....

The story's getting more and more suspensful! another great chapter!!

good luck on the rest of your exams =D
Date: Nov 15 2009
Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18- Evangeline Reviewer: Tinker Signed
WOW! intense chapter

"Kim scrunched up her nose and pretended to stab Evangeline with an invisible knife." haha go kim! though im convinced there's another side to her, lol, but maybe not haha

And i love this bit! XD
'“Re match for helm’s deep?” Legolas said to Gimli.
“You’re on, elf boy.” Gimli replied.'

And the ring wraiths actually made me shiver! good descriptions.

I liked the change of pace, cant wait for the next!

Author's Response: Thanks Theja chan!!! I'm glad that you like the story T^T it means so much coming from such a genius like you lolz~
Date: Nov 17 2009
Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19- Master Dwarf and letting go... Reviewer: Tinker Signed
aww.. i feel so bad for gimli

and the fellowship has done so much for robyn, they're so cool XD

i hope robyn's gonna be okay though..
Date: Nov 30 2009
Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20- Grounded Reviewer: Tinker Signed
'I used to yell at Frodo whenever I’d watch the Lord of the Rings movie' hahaha i can imagine that!

and aragon's just got me cracking up laughing lol
'"Yes. You shall shine sleepy head"'

hm.. pretty nice of evangeline, startinng to like her a little bit more

ahh! what can robyn do when she's grounded?
Date: Nov 30 2009
Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21- Water conservation hoses Reviewer: Tinker Signed
wow! love your description when she put on the ring

"'You mean you slept with 8 men?!'" lol, does sound bad when you put it that way
Date: Nov 30 2009
Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22- Legolas's Lumberjacks Reviewer: Tinker Signed
haha no one can resist aragon's charm lol

Kim and Legolas are sooooo cute
and so clueless -_-''
Date: Nov 30 2009
Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23- Road trip Reviewer: Tinker Signed
i know my reviews sound disconnected, but they're just random thoughts i have while reading the story =)

"She rolled her eyes and continued to sharpen her dagger. " i would be very careful not to make her angry,lol

noooo! dont cancel your date with scott!!! lol XD

wow.. i guess we'l get an explanation from evangeline..
Date: Nov 30 2009
Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24- Elven Heritage and Ring bearer Reviewer: Tinker Signed
'“They’re actually- Can you promise-” Her face grew even grimmer. “That’s why I’m here…I-I need the rin-”'
nooo! what was she going to say???

ahh! what's Gollum doing here? i thought he was dead...

good chapter ;D
Date: Nov 30 2009
Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25- All About love Reviewer: Tinker Signed
That was my exact reaction! didn't see that coming...
"‘Wait till you find out that she’s an elf…that will knock your socks off…’ I thought to myself." lol.. gimli's beinng pretty nice about it though

Legolas and Kim are so cute XD
it'd be sad if they had to seperate :(

ohhh. things are starting to click with evangeline's past.. cant wait for the next chapter!!
Date: Dec 02 2009
Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27- I'm not insane! Reviewer: Tinker Signed
wow.. intense.
what happened? is robyn dreaming this or did she dream the fellowship?
i'd be freaking out too if i were her.

Author's Response: go on msnnnnn dearrr! :)
Date: Jan 04 2010
Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28- Cartoon Banana-covered Wallpaper Reviewer: Tinker Signed
phew.i was scared when she said it was a dream.
i love the dialogue of Sméagol, it sounds exactly like its supposed to.

'I mean why would you choose cartoon banana covered wallpaper as ball room hall wallpaper?' lol :D

omg i think i know who 'him' is ><

Author's Response: Gahhhh you're too genius!! haha XD Of coures you know who it is =/
Date: Jan 04 2010
Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29- The bargain Reviewer: Tinker Signed
no no no no no. urgh, and i liked scott.
stupid @#$%** scott.

he put him to sleep? like, killed him?

'Got anything yet, love?” Scott said'
im getting angrier at him by the second....

'“Oh I remember this bit!” I exclaimed. “MELLON!”' lol, i thought she was just saying melon, like the fruit.
Date: Jan 04 2010
Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30- The End Reviewer: Tinker Signed
hm.. maybe scotts turning good?

aragons so amazing. and they did something for her on the USB.. that's so cute.

what!!!! she's going to middle earth. wow, that'll be interesting. and scott's gonna be there XD (still angry at him for the whole kidnapping thing though). did kim fall in as well?

great chapter, amazing story!
will definately wait for sequel
Date: Jan 04 2010
Summary: Tolkien’s great great granddaughter is in Middle Earth! Her last mission was to return the fellowship to their own world, after accidentally summoning them to her world, with the help of Tolkien’s original transcripts. But now she faces more than she can handle…for she has lost the ring!
Categories: Off Topic Characters: Aragorn, Frodo, Gandalf / Olorin, Gimli, Gollum, Legolas, Merry, Original Character, Pippin, Sam, Sméagol, The Fellowship
Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama, Family, Fantasy, Friendship, Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 15614 Read Count: 7201
Published: May 05 2010 Updated: Jul 03 2010 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6- The Engagement... Reviewer: Tinker Signed
Leading a girl on like that is just mean XD
I can't wait to see where this is going... heheh

Evangeline and Gimli.. cute couple I wanna know more about AND since love is in the air, all the more reason for Robyn (or Scott) to make their move.

Kim and Legolas! Always rooting for those two, now just need to see what Kim's answer will be ;) . Oh, and I really like how you were inspired with those lyrics, they sounded like wedding wows

Oh, and I know I'm getting ahead of myself, but it would be so cool to have a wedding in Mirkwood.. but first there's that little problem of Maerwen... who will most likely be very very angry... hm...

will be waiting for more intently (no pressure ;P)
Date: Jun 23 2010