Reviews by Aki_choc
Summary:


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Tolkien's great great granddaughter finds his original transcript of Lord of the rings. She reads it and falls asleep after reading a few pages and then the next morning she found herself staring up at the characters that her great great grandfather had made. What caused this? And what can she do to get them back to their own world
Categories: Off Topic Characters: Aragorn, Frodo, Gandalf / Olorin, Gimli, Legolas, Merry, Pippin, Sam
Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama, Family, Fantasy, Friendship, Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 56806 Read Count: 34958
Published: Oct 12 2009 Updated: Nov 07 2011 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5- Tokien's best friend Reviewer: Aki_choc Signed
"She had an ordinary appearance but she was charming which was better than being pretty." that's very true.

Gimli is so funny. It's really good how you pace the story. It's not overwhelming and it keeps me interested with all the inserted humor.

Good job! Favorited.
Date: Oct 19 2009
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11- Epiphany Reviewer: Aki_choc Signed
Wow...did not expect that...

I can smell drama ;)
Date: Nov 02 2009
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12- Driving's not my thing Reviewer: Aki_choc Signed
HAHAHAHA

I love Kim's ending line.
"You're a horrible driver..."
Date: Nov 02 2009
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13- My old man Reviewer: Aki_choc Signed
“PRISON BREAK!!!” Kim yelled from behind.
LOL
Date: Dec 01 2009
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14- Prison Break Reviewer: Aki_choc Signed
hahahaha loved the accidental kiss. So funny!

:)
Good Chapter
Date: Dec 01 2009
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15- The Elven Prince Reviewer: Aki_choc Signed
Uhh....a fat joke...:O

Great scene with Robyn and Legolas. ;)
Date: Dec 01 2009
Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16- Another little Tolkien?! Reviewer: Aki_choc Signed
Hmmm....this Evangeline girl is kind of annoying
lol

No! Robyn IS a TOLKIEN!!!
Date: Dec 01 2009
Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17- Where's King Tut? Reviewer: Aki_choc Signed
Cliffy again!
I love cliffies
LOL

Good luck on your exams!
Date: Dec 01 2009
Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18- Evangeline Reviewer: Aki_choc Signed
I lol at Kim's words
“You don’t suppose they’ll notice this tomorrow do you?” Kim said.
Date: Dec 07 2009
Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19- Master Dwarf and letting go... Reviewer: Aki_choc Signed
It'll be sad when the fellowship has to part ways and leave earth.
:(
Date: Dec 07 2009
Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20- Grounded Reviewer: Aki_choc Signed
hahahaha "Rise and polish sleepy head." nice touch :)

Hmmm....there does seem to be more to Evangeline than meets the eye.

They stayed in the same places?!!! :O
wow...thought they knew better than that lol
Date: Dec 07 2009
Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21- Water conservation hoses Reviewer: Aki_choc Signed
haha water conservation hoses
I looked at the title and I was so intrigued haha :)

yay! her mom knows...maybe she'll be more empathic now :)
Date: Dec 07 2009
Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22- Legolas's Lumberjacks Reviewer: Aki_choc Signed
LOL her mom is funny :P

great descriptions about learning archery
:)
Date: Dec 07 2009
Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23- Road trip Reviewer: Aki_choc Signed
Ooh finally we get to know more about Evangeline's past :)

how exciting!
Date: Dec 07 2009
Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24- Elven Heritage and Ring bearer Reviewer: Aki_choc Signed
That was a sweet talk between Frodo and her.

Ahhh what was Evangeline gonna say? DARN GOLLUM! lol
Date: Dec 07 2009
Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25- All About love Reviewer: Aki_choc Signed
"HOLY COW" That's what I said when I read it...I had to read it a couple of times for it to get through my head haha

Wow Gandalf knows who Evangeline is...
Date: Dec 07 2009
Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26- Betrayal or not Reviewer: Aki_choc Signed
I don't think Evangeline could betray them....I think she planned on doing it but then became friends and even fell in love haha :P

I hope that everyone will be okay. :)
Date: Dec 07 2009
Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27- I'm not insane! Reviewer: Aki_choc Signed
can't be just a dream!! It's not a dream!!! LOL

Merry Christmas by the way :)
Date: Dec 24 2009
Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28- Cartoon Banana-covered Wallpaper Reviewer: Aki_choc Signed
WOWWW!!! I wonder who it is! Gotta read the next chapter quickly but first just wanted to say awesome chapter!!!
Date: Dec 24 2009
Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29- The bargain Reviewer: Aki_choc Signed
Woah! Did not expect that at all....wow...wow...
:O

I love how everything and everyone has some part to play! :) There's some bits that I think are random and have no meaning to it but now it all makes sense LOL

Great chapter!!!
Date: Dec 31 2009
Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30- The End Reviewer: Aki_choc Signed
I can't believe that it's finished
:( :( :( I'm very saddened by this news. I can't wait for the sequel though.

Just like to say that I loved this story, I hope you continue to write more wonderful stories! Not just Little Tolkien but other stories as well.

You're very much like a Little Tolkien ;)

Author's Response: Gahh T^T made me teary! It means a lot to be even compared to Tolkien O.O but I'm so far off from being even near Tolkien. The man is a true genius and I only wish that he could have wrote more classics in his time :(
Date: Dec 31 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1- The beginning Reviewer: Aki_choc Signed
Hey, don't want to sound like I'm pushy or anything but just wondering when the sequel will be out. lol

:)

Author's Response: lol sorry >< I'm still working on it. I've done the first few chapters and I've also added a preview (a paragraph) on this one. Still haven't come up with a title for the sequel T^T
Date: May 04 2010
His Eyes by luthien85 Rated: NC-17 [Reviews - 40]
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Carleena Romano is an aspiring actress. Having been raised in a family with some movie background, it was destined that she become one of the legends. Legends did start some where and Carleena finds herself working as an extra in a big budget Hollywood movie. Destiny however, had other plans for her, in a shape of a young, handsome actor named Orlando Bloom. Will fame finally make Carleena choose between what she wants and what she needs? Will she let a misunderstanding ruin her life?
Categories: Actor Fics Characters: Elijah Wood, Liv Tyler, Original Character, Orlando Bloom
Genres: Friendship, Hurt/Comfort, Romance
Warnings: Graphic Sex
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 107904 Read Count: 33440
Published: Apr 29 2010 Updated: Jun 19 2010 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 3: The Call Reviewer: Aki_choc Signed
Your descriptions and details are amazing! :D

Author's Response: Thank you. I try to capture the essence of the moments. We sometimes get too attached to the main story, we tend to leave out the details. I hope to balance this and give the story a beautiful look and a beautiful feel.
Date: May 06 2010
Summary: Tolkien’s great great granddaughter is in Middle Earth! Her last mission was to return the fellowship to their own world, after accidentally summoning them to her world, with the help of Tolkien’s original transcripts. But now she faces more than she can handle…for she has lost the ring!
Categories: Off Topic Characters: Aragorn, Frodo, Gandalf / Olorin, Gimli, Gollum, Legolas, Merry, Original Character, Pippin, Sam, Sméagol, The Fellowship
Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama, Family, Fantasy, Friendship, Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 15614 Read Count: 5528
Published: May 06 2010 Updated: Jul 03 2010 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1- And so our story begins... Reviewer: Aki_choc Signed
Weeeeeeeeeeeee!!! ^^ sequel!!!

I see that you haven't lost your descriptive touch! I can almost see what it's like to be in Middle Earth! And the dialogue still stays true to the characters and it's great to learn more about Scott's personality. Bipolar and all lol

I love what Kim did in the end. I must admit I've tried that myself a couple of times minus the ringwraiths.

Thank you for a great chapter! Can't wait for the next one! ^^
Date: May 06 2010
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1- And so our story begins... Reviewer: Aki_choc Signed
Dun dun dun!

Great chapter! :)
Date: May 08 2010