Wah! I like the way you describe the characters
A very interesting chapter
LOL funny phone call...sweet phone call :)
Please write more :)
Ah! A cliffhanger O_O
That was such a sweet moment between Leggy and Kim :)
hmmmm....I don't like this Evangeline girl...
Omg poor Gimli....
Evangeline's sooooo mean O_O
hahaha "rise and polish"
so cute! A very nice touch :)
Oh my gosh O.O why did Legolas reject her?!!! Kim so deserves him!!!
argh...why are her parents so unreasonable?!
Ahhhh Lumberjacks!!! yay!
That wasn't a bad chapter at all!
I love how you end the chapters in suspense.
Aw sweet moment between Frodo and Robyn :)
They're both really good ring bearers if you ask me lol
Ah what was she about to say to Robyn?! WHY?!!! I'm so curious now ><
OH MY GOSH!!!! She likes GIMLI?!!!! REALLY?!!! Is she capable of that?! lol
They can make a cute couple I guess....just as long as she's nice and takes things easy haha
Your chapters get more and more interesting!!! :)
I wonder who it is...
I'm trying to think of someone who could be Evangeline's brother...I can't think of anyone ~.~
WAHHH!!! Another cliff hanger!!! Please write more soon :)
ZOMG ZOMG ZOMG ZOMG!!!!
LOL I love Kim! She's just so wonderful. Somehow I expected her to do something like that lol
Beautifully crafted chapter! Can't wait for the next one! ^^
Awwww he piggy backed her :) that's sweet! He suits being with Robyn lol I think I'm falling in love with him too! Haha
Can Gollum really find the ring for them...I wonder. It's no surprise that he likes Robyn. It's coz she was nice to him :)
Zomg!!! He kidnapped her parents??!!! 0.0 oh no he didn't!
Scott is such a badass but I can't help but be in the ScottxRobyn fever haha!
L-l-l-loved this chapter!!! From the camouflaging bridge to the descriptions of Gathburz (which are amazing by the way) to the drama between Legolas and his father and to my personal favorite, the little bond sesh she had with the hobbits, Evangeline and Scott haha :) Love it!!!
Robyn, you can't get him out of your head coz you've fallen head over heels for him!!! lol >:
Maerwen kind of pisses me off lmao I don't like her much. Even though she hasn't really done anything wrong lmao
I love Scott's lines!! haha “Knowing you, you’ll probably slip, fall down and break a bone somehow, so I’m accompanying you.” Scott replied. I looked at him and blushed. Was he worried about me? And as if to answer the question that lingered in my head, he said, “Not because I’m worried that you’ll probably slip, fall down and break a bone, I just wanna be there when you DO slip, fall down and break a bone somehow.” He smiled at me with an evil, fake innocent smile which I kindly reciprocated with a scowl.
He's hot! lol
hahahaha I love Kim! Her personality is just so different from others. But she's not all perfect either. She has those little faults which make her even better. I love how she says this, “No, I don’t want to see him.” Kim said. “I’m scared that when I do, I’ll accidentally slap or kick him…” Usually...the girls would say something else like "It hurts too much to see him." lmao
OMG!!! Can Scott get any hotter?!!! "Are you stalking me?" AH! I would blush like Robyn too if that happened to me. Scott's such a flirt ;)
Aw! Legolas is so sweet to Kim! I'm glad they're together!
That whole speech of his was beautiful! He is a sly fox ;) I love how he says, "You hold my heart, you have my love..." AH! So sweet!!! Now I'm going to look for those songs because they sound sweet! haha