Reviews by Calil Gadien
Chance Encounter by Mordaen Rated: PG-13 [Reviews - 113]
Summary: During their journey, the Fellowship meet up with a stranger not of their world. Will he be of help to them or would he hinder them? Kingdom of Heaven/LotR crossover. Mostly movie-verse with some book-verse
Categories: Movie-verse, Crossovers Characters: Aragorn, Balian of Ibelin, Guy de Lusignan, Legolas, The Fellowship
Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama
Warnings: AU (alternate universe), Torture, Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 90467 Read Count: 48588
Published: 21/01/07 Updated: 01/09/07 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 34: The Last Stand Reviewer: Calil Gadien Signed
“What happened?” asked the Istar. Should be Istari. Other than that, absolutely love your story. Why exactly did you have to bring Guy in though? It was going just fine without him.
Date: 29/12/09
Title: Chapter 35: The Return of the King Reviewer: Calil Gadien Signed
Oh, that came out wrong. Guy makes the story interesting.
Date: 29/12/09
Title: Chapter 34: The Last Stand Reviewer: Calil Gadien Signed
Oh, silly me. forget the 'Istari' remark, I don't know what I'm talking about!!
Date: 29/12/09
Summary: These are questions that may get you pondering. I thought of these durning my free time. See if you can answer these in your head.
Categories: Off Topic Characters: Arwen, Bilbo, Boromir, Elrond, Eowyn, Faramir, Galadriel, Gandalf / Olorin, Gollum, Isildur, Saruman, Sauron, The Fellowship, Théoden, Treebeard, Witch King
Genres: Mystery, Other
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 147 Read Count: 1723
Published: 28/04/07 Updated: 28/04/07 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Calil Gadien Signed
Those are very good questions, I've asked myself a few of them before I ever read this. Yes, I agree. Some spelling errors, I'm sure someone's already said this, but it's spelled Arwen not Arwin, and it's Aragorn not Eragorn, and it was the Council of Elrond, not the meeting of elders.
Date: 16/02/10
The Lost Child by Eruwadhiel Rated: PG-13 [Reviews - 9]
Summary: An elf child raised by the Jedi suddenly finds herself in Middle Earth. Will she stay on ME, or does she leave and complete her mission? Major re-writes and edits in progress.
Categories: Crossovers Characters: Original Character
Genres: Action/Adventure
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 48956 Read Count: 20153
Published: 08/03/08 Updated: 15/07/11 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 Reviewer: Calil Gadien Signed
Ok, I am really glad that you updated, I have been waiting for a long time. One thing. I am having trouble concentrating, and as easy as it is to write large block pages, could you please try writing smaller paragraphs? those really long ones make it slightly difficult (For me) to read, and LOTR and SW are my two favorite things. And technically I think every time there is dialog or dialog switches between two people, you should start a new paragraph.

Thank you for writing!!!

Author's Response: Please be patient with me, I seem to be having some formatting problems with my lastest update. I type everything up in MS word and then cut and paste. When I tried to make the corrections to help you, it ended up in a long column and looked almost like a section of Beowulf. Will look into it further to make adjustments.
Date: 21/10/10