Reviews by Lisse
The Sons of Thunder by ziggy Rated: NC-17 half-star [Reviews - 314]
Summary: They are called the Sons of Thunder by the Orcs of the Mountains. A storm erupts between one Son of Elrond and one Son of Thranduil. In the aftermath of the battle of the Morannon, Elrohir has one final battle.
Categories: Book-verse, Book Verse Slash, Lord of the Rings Slash Characters: Legolas
Genres: General
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 46 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 314756 Read Count: 79856
Published: Oct 15 2010 Updated: Jun 15 2012 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46 Submission Reviewer: Lisse Signed
Wonderful! I have come to expect great things from you Zig and I am never disappointed. The end was greater than any expectation and completely satisfying.

I think Elrohir’s confession to Legolas was the most heart wrenching he has gone through. He was just so afraid. Legolas did not let him off until he had confessed it all. With that done, and Legolas forgiveness I think Elrohir is on the way to forgiving himself. He has allowed himself to be loved. Additionally I loved Legolas’ reaction, saying that he too had dark horrible thoughts and had to fight them. I remember back in chapter 10 this same theme was featured. L8 and I talked about the nature of evil for a few hours as a result, if I remember correctly. There are slithering things in all of our minds that scurry under a rock when someone comes too near. It is the nature of higher beings to be simultaneously attracted to and repelled by darkness. You have given us a case study in Elrohir of what is perhaps our own base nature. If your story makes people uncomfortable it is just that it has struck a chord. And truly good art makes a person feel something deeply, stirs us to wakefulness regarding things that are beautiful, but also things that are not. Your story has stayed with me for days after reading a chapter, and that is rare, happening with only a one or two other authors. I will be mulling over this last chapter for a very long time.

I love the scene in which Elrohir watches Legolas from afar during the celebration of the hobbit’s awakening. I really don’t know how they waited this long. Your descriptions of Legolas physically throughout this chapter make me see him more clearly than ever and he is quite a gorgeous sight. *G*That subtle little description of clutched grass and dirt leaves one with all sorts of yummy things to imagine about these beyond beautiful creatures! Your slash was as bold as I have read from you and I must say you do it very well. I love nasty full on slash and think you should write it as often as possible.

Again, many thanks for the hours of entertainment and for the deeper veins of gold in your masterpiece that are so thought provoking.

I am sad this is the end of your story of Legolas and the Ring War, but I know you will write more and your rewrite of Songs of Rohan does help ease us away from Sons.

Thank you for dedicating this to me and to my dear friend L8.

Love and Hugs, Candy

Author's Response: You are so sweet to post a review here as well. I so appreciate it my dear. Love ziggyxxx
Date: Jun 15 2012
Below decks by ziggy Rated: NC-17 [Reviews - 10]
Summary: Legolas smiled lazily, sensuously. 'No? Feel how much I don't want you,' he said and pressed himself against Elladan.
A little alternative ending to Ch 10 of Sons of Thunder. For Elladan fans out there!
Categories: Lord of the Rings Slash Characters: Elladan
Genres: Erotica
Warnings: Slash (same sex pairing)
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2051 Read Count: 2152
Published: Dec 04 2010 Updated: Dec 04 2010 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Below decks Reviewer: Lisse Signed
Hey Ziggy, It's me, Candy. I have been away for a while but I am back. I have consolidated my Lisse, and ladyjane accounts. Once again thank you for this delightful gift. Thank you for all you write for us. It's good to be back. I have read all your posts, though I have been gone. You are a master, a star! I am grateful, and your devoted fan, Lisse (Candy)

Author's Response: I was getting worried about you, Candy!! I had noticed no ladyjane reviews and was going to send out an allusers alert to the internet!! Lovely to have you back- I have something I might post to welcome you back when I get a moment- trying to polish the next chapter right now. Love Ziggy
Date: Mar 20 2011
Summary: Daewen's friends spend Christmas with her.
Categories: Crossovers, Book-verse, Movie-verse Characters: Elladan, Elrohir, Erestor, Glorfindel, Legolas, Original Character
Genres: Action/Adventure, Friendship, Humor, Romance
Warnings: AU (alternate universe)
Series: The Daewen Chronicles
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6836 Read Count: 1532
Published: Dec 25 2010 Updated: Dec 25 2010 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Have Yourself A Merry. Little Christmas Reviewer: Lisse Signed
It has been a long time. Glad to hear from you. Your Christmas story is a delight. It made my day. Hope we here more from you soon

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. The last year has been hard (life kicked in), but I'm already looking forward to posting more. I got more of a rush posting this than I did on Christmas day:) Thanks for reviewing!
Date: Dec 27 2010
Summary: LOTR x TRUEBLOOD Southern Vampire Mysteries A/U CROSSOVER. Lord Elrond never suspected what he was getting the elves into when they stepped from the shadows in defense of his long-lost brother Niall - but saving one life leads to the loss of others, dragging two innocent humans down a road of lies and deceit that will ultimately force them to face the most difficult decision of all - to choose between two worlds and the two men they love . . . or to stay alive for all eternity.
Categories: Crossovers Characters: Elrond, Gandalf / Olorin, Glorfindel, Haldir, Orophin, Rúmil
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Fantasy, Romance
Warnings: AU (alternate universe), Character Death, Graphic Sex, Torture, Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 312500 Read Count: 28353
Published: Jan 08 2011 Updated: Feb 22 2013 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: 1 - The Dead Will Rise Reviewer: Lisse Signed
Your notes make me want to read. I have not started yet but will. Your drabbles are awesome. Did you take them off of this site? Just wanted to say that although I do not kow you I am so glad your life is getting better and writing is on your fun to do list again.

Author's Response: Hi Lisse - Sorry I was not notified of your note. I don't write drabbles (?) but did have a collection of one shots and other writings previously posted here that I have not put back. RL certainly gave me a smack down, but life is good once again! Thanks for the kind words! :)
Date: May 27 2012
Summary: Vanimë is asked a difficult question by her sister, and must decide how best to answer it: what is Evil?
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Original Character
Genres: Drama
Warnings: None
Challenges: 100 Prompts
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 856 Read Count: 1999
Published: Jan 13 2011 Updated: Jan 13 2011 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Fire: The Nature of Evil Reviewer: Lisse Signed
This is deep and beautifully writen. It is obvious to me that Vanie is sinking into depression. When the world we once understood so well no longer makes sense we often ask the larger questions. Vanie seems she is wondering if she is capable of such evil herself. I believe you are right. Few things are truly evil by nature.

Author's Response: Thank you! Yes, poor Vanië can't deal with the fact that her father and the rest of her family are doing what they are doing. So she is slipping into depression, afraid of everything, even herself. I appreciate your agreeing with the idea I have contrived for this piece. :)
Date: Jul 03 2011
Summary: Waking up with no memory of who, what, when and why is scary. Finding out who you are is confusing. Finding out that everyone's lied to you - that's painful. Join Raine as she experiences her life as she thinks she knows it during the time of the lord of the rings until her whole world comes crashing down by the truth.
Categories: Book-verse, Movie-verse Characters: Original Character
Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama, Family, Fantasy, Friendship, General, Humor, Hurt/Comfort, Mystery, Romance, Tragedy
Warnings: Character Death, Graphic Sex, Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 45 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 117199 Read Count: 41617
Published: Feb 24 2011 Updated: Jan 13 2014 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 32: Chapter Thirty-Two - The Long Goodbye Reviewer: Lisse Signed
This is beautiful and worded perfectly. I struggle fiercely to produce something of this quality and still fall short. Your scene was sexy and loving, all that it should be.You can be very proud to post this!

Author's Response: Hi Lisse and thankyou for your review. You're a very encouraging person!! ~ Iri
Date: Jan 11 2012
Summary: What does Thranduil think of on Lonely nights? The views and opinions of a woodland King just as the ring was found and started a turn of events that would change the lives of everyone in Middle-earth and beyond.
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Thranduil
Genres: General
Warnings: None
Series: The Thoughts of a...
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 399 Read Count: 1708
Published: Mar 14 2011 Updated: Mar 14 2011 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: The Thoughts of a King Reviewer: Lisse Signed
This is exactly as I see Thranduil and wood elves. I once read a fic calling him the paranoid King of a tin pot realm. Greenwood the Great, the Great North Wood was constantly under attack. Thranduil would have had to be a fiercely capable leader. Bravo!

Author's Response: Thanks very much for the review!! :) your views are very much like my own in regards to Thranduil and the Wood Elves, I just love them to bits for their ferocity and their ability to be extremely stubborn. They had to be though, I think. Thanks, Caunedhiel
Date: Jun 29 2011
Heart's Ballad by Irial Rated: G [Reviews - 8]
Summary: So this is a random poem/song/I'm-not-sure-what that I wrote after meeting someone truly amazing.
Categories: Off Topic Characters: None
Genres: Poetry
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 241 Read Count: 1699
Published: Mar 14 2011 Updated: Mar 14 2011 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Lisse Signed
When something like this happens again I don't care if you do live half a world apart you must seize the moment and be bold. It is the only way to live and if you do you will not regret it. Beautiful poem.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review Lisse. And thankyou for the advice. I'll be sure to heed it if this ever happens again :D
Date: Jan 11 2012
Surprise by ziggy Rated: PG [Reviews - 14]
Summary: Legolas returning from a trist, stumbles across Eomer's room and finds something unexpected.
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Legolas
Genres: Humor
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1831 Read Count: 2074
Published: Mar 27 2011 Updated: Mar 27 2011 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Lisse Signed
Ok this is my worst fan fic nightmare come true, almost. It reminds me of something our Melusine wrote about Gimli and Legolas shopping for a gift. Gimli very inappropriately suggests a set of silver rings, unaware of the elvish engagement tradition. The shop keeper looks at legolas with something between laughter and horror in his eyes as he mistakes the two for more than friends. Btw the shop keeper is an elf.
So this is hilarious! Poor Poor gallant Eomer! I love Legolas slamming doors and screaming down the hall. ROTFLMAO!

Author's Response: Haha! You should look again at Gimli, everyone is beautiful to their own folk and Gimli has such warmth... I have read the story you refer to. I laughed too. I just needed sassy Legolas back after writing Sons where eh has become so much less than he is. Nearly back though so I am looking foward to the next chapter.
Date: Mar 28 2011
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Lisse Signed
oh btw, it is my dear L8 you may owe the Gimli to

Love, Candy

Author's Response: Aha- thank you! I am still thinking about a Gimli-centric story so I will dedicate it to her, thank you!
Date: Mar 28 2011
Morning Daydream by L8Bleumr Rated: PG-13 [Reviews - 14]
Summary: COMPLETE *Side story to Taming The Wild* This is the story of how two Mirkwood elves met and fell in love.
Categories: Lord of the Rings Slash Characters: Original Character
Genres: Romance
Warnings: Slash (same sex pairing)
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6582 Read Count: 5872
Published: Mar 27 2011 Updated: Apr 04 2011 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 3: Friends Reviewer: Lisse Signed
The first touch, wonderful and exciting. They were made for eachother!

Author's Response: I'm just so happy you love them as much as I do. They are the perfect pair.
Date: Apr 06 2011
Summary: *COMPLETE* Thranduil is up to his old tricks again in this naughty little short story.
Categories: Off Topic Characters: Original Character, Thranduil
Genres: Erotica, Romance
Warnings: Graphic Sex
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7462 Read Count: 5457
Published: Apr 06 2011 Updated: Apr 09 2011 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Lisse Signed
This will be my entertainment for the morning at work. Duches is right. You are good at an opening to a story. I would add middle and end as well. More review to follow. I just had to put my two cents in before really getting started.

Author's Response: Thank you so much. Glad I could entertain you at work, but don't get distracted (lol).
Date: Apr 08 2011
Untamed Tales by L8Bleumr Rated: NC-17 [Reviews - 26]
Summary: Just because the story is over doesn't mean the adventures have ended. Here you will find a collection of tales based on my bigger story Taming The Wild. Each one will have a different rating. Not all will be NC-17. Characters will include but are not limited to: Legolas, Rhavaniel, Antien and Glandur. Here you'll find it all, humor, love, friendship and hot elf sex. This will be an ongoing thing as stories will be added whenever something inspires me. Enjoy.
Categories: Book-verse, Movie-verse, Off Topic Characters: Legolas, Original Character
Genres: Erotica, Friendship, Humor, Romance
Warnings: AU (alternate universe), Graphic Sex
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 19324 Read Count: 12094
Published: Apr 13 2011 Updated: Jun 30 2011 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chocolate Reviewer: Lisse Signed
Gives new meaning to the phrase ‘hot chocolate’. It seems that not only does chocolate have an aphrodisiac affect but also induces nesting behavior. I have never heard Rhav or Legolas mention elflings until now. Very hot, very well done. I’ve been waiting a long time for someone to write about chocolate covered Legolas. Thanks for this.

Author's Response: You know, I don't know where the nesting thing came from, except that maybe Arwen's family has influenced Rhav somehow. She's not ready yet though, but it's not to say that she won't eventually. Just a little more chocolate and Rhav would agree to anything (or maybe that's just me - lol)
Date: Apr 17 2011
Title: Chapter 2: The Bathing Room Reviewer: Lisse Signed
This is Unbelievably HOT, HOT, HOT! I love Legolas all forceful and demanding like this. He is kind and loving while also dominating. Maybe some women will disagree with me, but it certainly is appealing to have a man you trust dominate like this, even the verbal domination. I see no abuse here only a strong masculine elf taking his elleth and giving her pleasure. Well done! More like this anytime!

Author's Response: I think Legolas needed to crack the whip here. Rhav has to learn that it's not just about her anymore, though she has come a long way. And I think Legolas' new role as lord and leader of his own land has changed him too. He likes his authority, likes to use it on Rhav, and I think she likes it too. Even the toughest warrior wants to be commanded sometimes. Of course, no one but Legolas could get away with this. Anyone else would be missing a digit by now, and I'm not talking about fingers or toes if you know what I mean. ; - )
Date: Apr 17 2011
Summary: *COMPLETE*With her parents dead and her brother missing, a young Rohirrim girl sets out on a journey of a lifetime. She is on her own in the world, left to face tragedy and wrongful accusations. She must find her way or become just another statistic. It is her desire to find love and peace that pushes her on. When she meets an elf, she sees where she can find such solitude, but the path that leads her there is full of challenges.
Categories: Book-verse, Off Topic Characters: Legolas, Original Character
Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama, Erotica, Romance
Warnings: Graphic Sex, Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 72 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 294948 Read Count: 110362
Published: May 23 2011 Updated: Jun 22 2012 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 20: 20 Ruined Berries Reviewer: Lisse Signed
I would be frustrated too. That beautiful half elvish male is just too rough on her.

As she worked, she thought about his background. He must have quite a story to tell. Half-elves were rare, even in the Forth Age when there were more elf/human couplings. Most did not have children because of the elves that were sailing into the West. Unfortunately for her, Feredir’s parents did not abide by that fact and now she was stuck with their horrid offspring as her guard.

This made me laugh. I love how you incorporate humor into a serious drama. I have never seen any one do this better than you

There are so many things to love about this, I love the moment they share after they both fell. Are your sure Fer did not plan this? The way you have described him I would never push him away ruined berries or not.

You always add such rich detail to your work. Every single chapter is like watching a movie.

Thank you for this wonderful and awesome story.

Author's Response: Yea, I don't think I would have pushed him away either. As a matter of fact, I would have grabbed onto him and not let go. The word 'awkward' comes to mind, lol. Thanks so much for the kind review, my friend.
Date: Sep 08 2011
Title: Chapter 28: 28 Cooks and Books Reviewer: Lisse Signed
You know I hate to mirror Duchess comments but the description of the vase and esp the desk, beautiful. I can see everything. Also, I liked the way Terr and Fer are beginning to admit their feelings for each other in a round about way, their hands touching until the tips of their fingers finally part as he leaves to do the Captain's bidding. Btw, never get tired of Captain Glandur!

Another brilliant chapter from an outstanding author! I am always impatient for what you will come up with next.

Author's Response: I think the touch of their fingertips might have been their first real genuine feelings, you know the ones outside of lust and need. And what more can we say about Captain Glandur. He is one of a kind.
Date: Oct 15 2011
Summary: How did Legolas get his name? A little ficlet written for the Teitho May challenge.
Categories: Book-verse, Off Topic Characters: Legolas, Original Character, Thranduil
Genres: Family, General, Other
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1890 Read Count: 1749
Published: Jun 17 2011 Updated: Jun 17 2011 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Lover of Trees Reviewer: Lisse Signed
What a delight! Beautifully writen. I can catch the scent of the forest, hear the birds and feel the sun. Thranduil is an awesome father! Very enjoyable. You are a very good author!

Author's Response: Thanks Lisse. Little details like the ones you pointed out have never been my strong suit, so it delights me when I get a review like yours. I wanted to show Thranduil as a tender and emotional man, not the hard and callous persona he usually is known for. Glad you enjoyed. :)
Date: Jun 18 2011
Summary: A collection of short poems.
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Arwen, Elladan, Elrohir, Elrond, Galadriel, Haldir, Legolas, Orophin, Rúmil
Genres: Poetry
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 335 Read Count: 4422
Published: Jul 11 2011 Updated: Jul 11 2011 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Legolas Greenleaf, Lover of Trees Reviewer: Lisse Signed
Don't you just have to adore Legolas. I enjoyed your poem. It always makes me sad to think of Legolas leaving for the undying lands. You who write him must never stop thinking of adventures for him so he will always stay with us.

Author's Response: Thanks; this was written years ago. Just wanted to share it here :)
Date: Jul 13 2011
Arcane Land by Alpha Ori Rated: NC-17 [Reviews - 18]
Summary: Elladan and Melven travel to the Greenwood on the warrior exchange program, to serve with Legolas in The Company. Follow them through hardship and sacrifice, friendship and love as they journey into Arcane Land and beyond.
Categories: Lord of the Rings Slash Characters: Elladan, Galdor, Legolas, Original Character, Radagast, Thranduil
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort, Romance
Warnings: AU (alternate universe), Graphic Sex, Slash (same sex pairing), Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 45 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 219985 Read Count: 49733
Published: Sep 21 2011 Updated: May 11 2012 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 21: Divine Inspiration Reviewer: Lisse Signed
See this proves my point... More people read than review. Great slash and only one review. I love this. of course to start out I moved to the explicit slash. Well Done!

Author's Response: Well, first of all, welcome to the story - even though you did skip straight to the saucy parts!! Hhehehe... As for reviews, absolutely. I have an abismal ratio of reads / reviews on this site, especially so since a few months back. Thank God I get reviews on other sites, otherwise I would have given up on this one. And so you can imagine that getting your review went and made it worthwhile once more - so thanks for taking the time - as an author yourself, you know how much it means. I hope you continue to read and enjoy the tale!
Date: Jan 11 2012
Imrahil by ziggy Rated: G [Reviews - 6]
Summary: Cormallen Field. A game of chess, a forfeit. Legolas, Elladan and Imrahil
Categories: Book Verse Slash Characters: Elladan
Genres: Romance
Warnings: AU (alternate universe)
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 2613 Read Count: 1859
Published: Apr 01 2012 Updated: Apr 10 2012 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Lisse Signed
I dearly love the elvish courtly flirting between Legolas and Imrahil. I really cannot blame Gimli for his impatience. He has a point. Legolas is a terrible tease and with that beautiful blond hair glowing gold in the sun, and his other attributes shall we say, who would not want him?
Now Elladan and Imrahil are a lovely match. I like that Elladan seems to have fallen hard for the swan prince. I would like to see more of their relationship you can be sure of that! Thank you for all the trouble you went to posting this. It is perfect!
Anytime you post it is a treat! Beautiful Zig!
Love Candy/Lisse (one and the same)
Date: Apr 01 2012
The Unwanted Healing by Alaeryel Rated: NC-17 [Reviews - 8]
Summary: A young woman finds herself running from 2 years of captivity and horrors unimaginable then orcs near the Golden Wood. She is being watched by its Guardians. As she recovers from injuries both visible and invisible, she is forced to face her past and look to the future as she learsn who and what she is truly is.
Categories: Crossovers Characters: Aragorn, Arwen, Celeborn, Elladan, Elrohir, Elrond, Galadriel, Gimli, Haldir, Legolas, Orophin, Rúmil, Yavanna
Genres: Angst, Horror, Hurt/Comfort, Mystery, Romance, Suspense, Tragedy
Warnings: AU (alternate universe), Graphic Sex, Rape, Torture, Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 15210 Read Count: 6268
Published: Jun 22 2012 Updated: Aug 21 2012 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter1 Reviewer: Lisse Signed
Exciting story! Hope she makes it and finds a good safe place with the elves.
Date: Jun 22 2012