This is Unbelievably HOT, HOT, HOT! I love Legolas all forceful and demanding like this. He is kind and loving while also dominating. Maybe some women will disagree with me, but it certainly is appealing to have a man you trust dominate like this, even the verbal domination. I see no abuse here only a strong masculine elf taking his elleth and giving her pleasure. Well done! More like this anytime!
Author's Response: I think Legolas needed to crack the whip here. Rhav has to learn that it's not just about her anymore, though she has come a long way. And I think Legolas' new role as lord and leader of his own land has changed him too. He likes his authority, likes to use it on Rhav, and I think she likes it too. Even the toughest warrior wants to be commanded sometimes. Of course, no one but Legolas could get away with this. Anyone else would be missing a digit by now, and I'm not talking about fingers or toes if you know what I mean. ; - )
I would be frustrated too. That beautiful half elvish male is just too rough on her.
As she worked, she thought about his background. He must have quite a story to tell. Half-elves were rare, even in the Forth Age when there were more elf/human couplings. Most did not have children because of the elves that were sailing into the West. Unfortunately for her, Feredir’s parents did not abide by that fact and now she was stuck with their horrid offspring as her guard.
This made me laugh. I love how you incorporate humor into a serious drama. I have never seen any one do this better than you
There are so many things to love about this, I love the moment they share after they both fell. Are your sure Fer did not plan this? The way you have described him I would never push him away ruined berries or not.
You always add such rich detail to your work. Every single chapter is like watching a movie.
Thank you for this wonderful and awesome story.
Author's Response: Yea, I don't think I would have pushed him away either. As a matter of fact, I would have grabbed onto him and not let go. The word 'awkward' comes to mind, lol. Thanks so much for the kind review, my friend.
You know I hate to mirror Duchess comments but the description of the vase and esp the desk, beautiful. I can see everything. Also, I liked the way Terr and Fer are beginning to admit their feelings for each other in a round about way, their hands touching until the tips of their fingers finally part as he leaves to do the Captain's bidding. Btw, never get tired of Captain Glandur!
Another brilliant chapter from an outstanding author! I am always impatient for what you will come up with next.
Author's Response: I think the touch of their fingertips might have been their first real genuine feelings, you know the ones outside of lust and need. And what more can we say about Captain Glandur. He is one of a kind.
What a delight! Beautifully writen. I can catch the scent of the forest, hear the birds and feel the sun. Thranduil is an awesome father! Very enjoyable. You are a very good author!
Author's Response: Thanks Lisse. Little details like the ones you pointed out have never been my strong suit, so it delights me when I get a review like yours. I wanted to show Thranduil as a tender and emotional man, not the hard and callous persona he usually is known for. Glad you enjoyed. :)
Don't you just have to adore Legolas. I enjoyed your poem. It always makes me sad to think of Legolas leaving for the undying lands. You who write him must never stop thinking of adventures for him so he will always stay with us.
Author's Response: Thanks; this was written years ago. Just wanted to share it here :)
See this proves my point... More people read than review. Great slash and only one review. I love this. of course to start out I moved to the explicit slash. Well Done!
Author's Response: Well, first of all, welcome to the story - even though you did skip straight to the saucy parts!! Hhehehe... As for reviews, absolutely. I have an abismal ratio of reads / reviews on this site, especially so since a few months back. Thank God I get reviews on other sites, otherwise I would have given up on this one. And so you can imagine that getting your review went and made it worthwhile once more - so thanks for taking the time - as an author yourself, you know how much it means. I hope you continue to read and enjoy the tale!
I dearly love the elvish courtly flirting between Legolas and Imrahil. I really cannot blame Gimli for his impatience. He has a point. Legolas is a terrible tease and with that beautiful blond hair glowing gold in the sun, and his other attributes shall we say, who would not want him?
Now Elladan and Imrahil are a lovely match. I like that Elladan seems to have fallen hard for the swan prince. I would like to see more of their relationship you can be sure of that! Thank you for all the trouble you went to posting this. It is perfect!
Anytime you post it is a treat! Beautiful Zig!
Love Candy/Lisse (one and the same)
Exciting story! Hope she makes it and finds a good safe place with the elves.