How enchanting. My dreams come true! An Elf helps me in to a steaming bath and another is making cocoa for a house full of them. You are a woman after my heart!
Author's Response: :) Well . . . you know ;) What can I say, I love my elves.
I enjoyed this and look forward to more.
Author's Response: Thank you, Lisse. As I mentioned in the story notes, this is merely an excerpt from a short story that I've barely begun working on. It's on the shelf for now and I'm not sure exactly when I'll be working on it in earnest. I have a number of stories in progress at the moment and I work on them as my muse moves me.
Thank you for your response to my challenge. Any 3 year old is a handful. And I can imagine your puffy cheeked little blond elfling to be double trouble! What a patient Ada, and happy childhood you made for Legolas. No wonder he grew to be so strong and beautiful!
Welcome to this excellent site. I hope you enjoy it as much as I do. This is one of my favorite stories by Greengreatdragon. This site will be the richer because you have joined.
Author's Response: aw thanks so much! :D <3
Beautiful. Well written. This shows a wildness about Elves that I have always asociated with them. I am so delighted with this story and the more so because you included love between them. You are a gifted writer.
I enjoyed this when I read it for the first time months ago. I imagine Legolas would have long thought on this moment. Thank you for an enjoyable story
Author's Response: thanks again!! <3
I've always thought there must be some prejudice toward elves on the part of humans, brought on by ignorance and jealousy. Thank you for this story.
This is your first and only and it is so very good. Please, you must write more. I have heard other author's much better than I am give this advise. Try to write every day. You do not have to post, but write something for yourself every day.
Give us more!
Beautiful beyond my ability to describe. Masterfully done. Entrancing
Author's Response: Thank you!
every word is perfection
Author's Response: ::blushes:: Awww...thanks! We put in a lot of work. It's nice to know that someone thinks it paid off. :-)
So nice to read another of your stories.I don't think you've posted a new one in some time. I'm a big fan of yours. this is Charming, and entertaining. Wonderfully written!
Author's Response: Thank you for reading, Lisse!:) I thought I could prove Uni and fanfiction can be equally balanced. And I was wrong... So now high on my summer to-dos is to catch up on writing. Danke!
Oh how very beautiful and touching. The Fall season conveys endings and grief and your carefully crafted words bring it all home. You did such a good job. I feel Legolas' heart break and your own.
"May blessings go with you"
Author's Response: Thanks you! I am so glad you enjoyed! Calo anor na ven! Vanwa
"Dear Valar, what had he done?
He reached out to her, “Calavénë I-” Haldir realizes he's been horrid, and Rumil is on to him!
You are doing a fine job!
You are doing a fine job!
Author's Response: Wonderful! A new reader. Hello! I hope you will stay until the very end. I am glad you are enjoying this story :)
I read once that love is always mingled with other complex emotions and it seems to be quite true. Reading and enjoying. Cannot wait for the next chapter. Thank you for this entertaining story!
Author's Response: Again, thank you for still following t he story and for your reviews. it means a lo to know that a fragment of my imagination and fantasy can add a little entertainment in your life. :)
He merely sought to light the spark of passion inside her. Instead he had awoken the raging fires of love.
This sums it up beautifully. Reading and enjoying.
Author's Response: Thank you. The sentence came to me as i was writing it. It sent chills up my spine when i read it again. I should have the next chapter up later today :)
a great chapter! I loved the addition of the Valar Elbereth. I am reading along and enjoying your story.
Author's Response: thank you for still following the story. I am glad you are enjoying it.
What is Nimwen up to? I am enjoying your story!
Author's Response: Thank you for reading, enjoying, and most of all reviewing! =) You will see in Chapter Four... -attempts to put on a mysterious face...-
It's your story. I have not read the latest chapter yet, but you can pair Farimir with who ever you want!
Author's Response: Haha thank you for understanding =) I just didn't want any haters yelling at me.
This is really very good. I can see the ancient streets and dwellings as they walk to the event. The rough men at the back are bruits. Your discriptions are perfect. Not to "wordy" yet they get the point across.
I'm very impressed! A great job!
Author's Response: Thank you soo much! Your approval means a lot to me =) I have been working very hard at trying to not use too much description but still describe. I'm glad you like it =D
Wow! This is very Exciting! You wrote the sparing scene*very*well. I think any kind of battle scene is tough. Poor Nim! She's going to need skill and luck. She may have gotten herself into a bind, but Faramir will not let her stand alone, even if she protests.
A great cliff hanger. And very well written! I'm impressed as always. You are a marvel.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your continual support and enjoyment! This one took me a while to write, just trying to figure out how to write the sparring and such. I am very pleased that you thought it was well-written =) Hopefully the next one will be even better! =)