Reviews by Dark_Elf
I Capture The Castle by Amethyst Rated: PG-13 star [Reviews - 5]
Summary: Elijah and Robin both share an interest in medieval history...but can they live it?....
Categories: Actor Fics Characters: Orlando Bloom, Billy Boyd, Elijah Wood, Dominic Monaghan
Genres: General
Warnings: Character Death
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 957 Read Count: 1930
Published: Jul 04 2004 Updated: Jul 04 2004 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Prologue Reviewer: Dark_Elf Signed
This is pretty good. Can't wait till more! :D
Date: Jan 28 2005
Summary: Maria has been friends with Elijah all her life. He's been the only one she has been brave enough to trust and the only one who knows what deamons she's had to overcome in her past. When a subsequent new found friendship with Dominic (courtesy of Elijah's introductions) becomes something more, will she be able to let go of her past and let her guard down enough to find happiness with him? Will she let her guard down enough for Dom to show her that love isnt always painful? Will she finally have someone else she can turn to, or will she let fear rule over her once more and ruin everything she has ever wanted
Categories: Actor Fics Characters: Dominic Monaghan, Original Character
Genres: Romance, Angst
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4601 Read Count: 2717
Published: Nov 04 2004 Updated: Nov 04 2004 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 2: When Our Kite Lines First Crossed We Tied Them into Knots Reviewer: Dark_Elf Signed
Oh this is sooo good, really! I can't wait for more! :)
Date: Jan 24 2005
When a Shadow Falls by Gwenneth Rated: PG-13 [Reviews - 9]
Summary: A wizard seeks to destroy Middle-Earth, starting with the Elves. When Aragorn goes to Legolas' home, he finds him gravely injured and soon discovers powers his friend has hid. Can the fellowship and their friends save Middle-Earth again?
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Aragorn, Arwen, Legolas, Gimli, Frodo, Sam, Merry, Pippin, Gandalf / Olorin, Elrond, Faramir, Elrohir, Celeborn, Galadriel, Thranduil, Elladan, Glorfindel, Original Character, Erestor
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, General
Warnings: AU (alternate universe)
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 13617 Read Count: 3098
Published: Nov 16 2004 Updated: Mar 01 2006 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Vague Warnings Reviewer: Dark_Elf Signed
good, me like it
Date: Jan 22 2005
Title: Chapter 1: Vague Warnings Reviewer: Dark_Elf Signed
good, me like it
Date: Jan 22 2005
by Rated: [Reviews - ]
Summary:
Categories: Orphan Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 0 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 0 Read Count: 0
Published: Dec 31 1969 Updated: Dec 31 1969 [Report This]
Title: None Reviewer: Dark_Elf Signed
Thanks for the info. I had read some where that Legolas did live somewhere else, but I wasn't for sure. And I'll watch those grammer problems too.
Date: Jan 29 2005
Turnabout by Ariel Rated: PG [Reviews - 1]
Summary: A tragic accident in Minas Tirith leaves Frodo comforting a wounded Merry while the rest of the fellowship struggle to free them both from a deadly trap.
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Legolas, Merry, Pippin, Sam, Aragorn, Frodo, Gandalf / Olorin, Gimli
Genres: Drama, Angst
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 16672 Read Count: 5285
Published: Feb 16 2005 Updated: Feb 27 2005 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Dark_Elf Signed
this is getting good. hope the rocks don't crush them! Update soon please. :)

Author's Response: I do have it finished and I will be uploading the next chapters as soon as they are proofed! Thank you for your patience and for letting me know you enjoyed the story.
Date: Feb 16 2005
Falling by etherealpixie Rated: R [Reviews - 9]
Summary: When Holly's life takes a turn for the worse, she runs away, and ends up in Middle Earth. What will happen when The Ring calls to her, and uses her deepest fears against her to stop her from helping the Fellowship? What do these visions mean?
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Aragorn, Arwen, Legolas, Gimli, Frodo, Sam, Merry, Pippin, Gandalf / Olorin, Elrond, Treebeard, Saruman, Gollum, Boromir, Faramir, Galadriel, Haldir, Original Character, Orcs/Uruk-Hai, Witch King
Genres: Romance, Action/Adventure, Drama, Horror, Fantasy
Warnings: Rape, Character Death, Torture
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1627 Read Count: 3924
Published: May 07 2005 Updated: May 08 2005 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Dark_Elf Signed
This is good! Keep writing! :D
Date: May 07 2005
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter2 Reviewer: Dark_Elf Signed
This is getting very interesting. Keep writing! :D
Date: May 08 2005
by Rated: [Reviews - ]
Summary:
Categories: Orphan Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 0 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 0 Read Count: 0
Published: Dec 31 1969 Updated: Dec 31 1969 [Report This]
Title: None Reviewer: Dark_Elf Signed
it sounds interesting to me. Please do begin writing soon!
Date: May 21 2005
Summary: Whilst on an army training exercise in the Forest of Dean, England, a young soldier discovers that there is something nasty deep in the woods. This results in she and three companions finding themselves on an extraordinary rescue mission which spans the ages. Set in the time of the War of Wrath and present day England 2005.
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Orcs/Uruk-Hai, Original Character, Other, Celeborn, Celebrimbor, Erestor, Galadriel, Gil-Galad, Glorfindel
Genres: Action/Adventure
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 46682 Read Count: 16626
Published: May 22 2005 Updated: Jun 14 2005 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: A Singular Honour Reviewer: Dark_Elf Signed
Thats pretty good! Dont listen to negative comments. I think its really good. :D
Date: May 24 2005
Summary: Genna is a death dealer, who has recently fled Mordor and death. She flees to the Great Cavern (MOM) and joins the fellowship on their quest to destroy the ring. She finds friends and maybe even an everlasting love amoung the group! R&R note this is my first fic and I've got absolutely no idea what I'm doing.
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Original Character
Genres: Romance, Action/Adventure
Warnings: Graphic Sex, Torture
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 6277 Read Count: 6099
Published: Aug 19 2005 Updated: Aug 29 2005 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 2: New Beginnings Reviewer: Dark_Elf Signed
This is good! A Death Dealer?:/ Sure does sound like a vampire. What about the Ring?! update soon!
Date: Aug 20 2005
Summary: After Courtney gets her "big break", she falls in love with Orlando Bloom while playing as a musician in The Lord of the Rings.
Categories: Actor Fics Characters: Orlando Bloom, Other, Original Character
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 2276 Read Count: 2330
Published: Aug 23 2005 Updated: Sep 01 2005 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 : A Journey in the Dark Reviewer: Dark_Elf Signed
This is good. Please continue. :D

Author's Response: Thank you very much, Dark Elf. I know for many that it may seem very...boring at first, in some ways, but eventually I'll get to the romance part of the story. I cannot wait to post the next chapter!
Date: Aug 23 2005
Summary: Merry and Pippin are the Shire's trouble makers. However, when they wander out of Hobbiton, Merry and Pippin find themselves in the hands of the Big Folk. The thing is, the Big Folk are of the Enemy... Short, light story of innocence, trust, and Darkness.
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Merry, Pippin
Genres: Mystery
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 3489 Read Count: 7356
Published: Oct 01 2005 Updated: Apr 18 2006 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Prelogue - Mischief Managed Reviewer: Dark_Elf Signed
Not bad, not bad at all. Just a note though, you do know that Merry and Pippin don't live in Hobbiton, right? Merry is from Buckland and Pippin is from Tookland, I think. I'm really sure what its called where he's from, but, any who, really cool beginning. I want to know who the two eyes belong too. Please update soon!

Author's Response: Well, yeah, I did look it up in the books and saw that they lived in Buckland and Tookland. Maybe they're visiting someone, I'll include that later in the story. Thanks for your comments, I'm a fairly new writer!
Date: Oct 01 2005
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 1 - Merry, Pippin, and Setting Out Reviewer: Dark_Elf Signed
Another good addition, and you were right about the Palantir;there are Seven seeing stones. Who's this shadowed person? He sounds as if he doesn't want to do whatever he has to do. Update soon! :D PS- for a new writer, your not bad. You should see my stories, their horrible,lol.

Author's Response: Not all who appear shadowed are dark in their hearts... You'll just have to read too find out! (Hint: I think its going to be an original character. Im not so sure yet.)
Date: Oct 05 2005
Going Home by Maddy Carr Rated: PG [Reviews - 4]
Summary: "Sam…I've…I've reached the end", the voice wavering, perhaps the last tendrils of fear surrendering to inevitability. "It's time for me to go." One-Shot. There is another way to journey to the West.
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Frodo, Sam
Genres: Angst
Warnings: Character Death
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 938 Read Count: 1588
Published: Nov 05 2005 Updated: Nov 05 2005 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: 1 of 1 Reviewer: Dark_Elf Signed
Oh, wow. That is so sad yet so beautiful at the same time. Wonderful, sad, story.
Date: Nov 06 2005
Summary: When the ring fell into the fires of Mount Doom, they all believed it had ended. They had completed their mission, and everyone went home. Unfortunately, nothing ever ends so smoothly and fairytale endings rarely happen. And for the fellowship of the ring this certainly was not the ending. Sometimes what we feel is the end is actually the beginning. Content Warning: This story holds both R rated material and content matter as well as orginal characters. You have been warned. Lord of the Rings (C) Tolkien Return of the Ring and the original characters there in (c) Star-Bunny
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Aragorn, Arwen, Legolas, Gimli, Frodo, Sam, Merry, Pippin, Gandalf / Olorin, Gollum, Celeborn, Galadriel, Original Character, Other
Genres: Romance, Action/Adventure, Drama, Angst
Warnings: AU (alternate universe)
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 2075 Read Count: 1942
Published: Nov 28 2005 Updated: Nov 28 2005 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Prologue Reviewer: Dark_Elf Signed
Very interesting. Really, I'm interested in this. But, just a question: what is the Aratar? Did you mean the Valar?

Author's Response: Thank you so much for taking the time to review. Now to answer your question! Your half right there on the Aratar being Valar... they are but they are the 8 greatest of the Manwe, etc... a really good reference for this is the website called the Encyclopedia of Arda... here's the link... http://www.glyphweb.com/arda/default.asp
Date: Nov 29 2005
Everlong by alice fan1 Rated: R [Reviews - 3]
Summary: read
Categories: Actor Fics Characters: Orlando Bloom, Billy Boyd, Viggo Mortensen, Elijah Wood, Liv Tyler, Dominic Monaghan, Sean Bean, Other
Genres: Romance, Drama, Tragedy, Other
Warnings: Graphic Sex, Rape, Character Death, None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 20001 Read Count: 7902
Published: Jan 29 2006 Updated: Feb 04 2006 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: the first and the sequel Reviewer: Dark_Elf Signed
Well, it's good, but could you put some spaces every now and then, and seperate them into paragraphs? I mean, don't get me wrong, it's pretty good, but it's a bit complicated to read.
Date: Jan 30 2006
In the Tower by gythia Rated: G [Reviews - 4]
Summary: poem about Sam in the Tower of Cirith Ungol
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Sam, Frodo
Genres: Angst
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 232 Read Count: 1353
Published: Feb 14 2006 Updated: Feb 14 2006 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: complete poem Reviewer: Dark_Elf Signed
Wow...amazing. Truely beautiful and--there are no words to describe this. Beautiful, is all I can say.

Author's Response: thanks!
Date: Feb 15 2006
Summary: scenes, poetry, and drabbles from the AU of the Fake World. First chapter is a G rated poem about Aragorn, the following chapters are nc17 Pippin stories. "The Fake World" is in the bookverse section because although it's an au it's the au from Pippin's vision in the Palantir, so it fits with bookverse. These are expanded scenes from that story, sort of my version of an extended dvd.
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Pippin
Genres: Poetry
Warnings: AU (alternate universe)
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5797 Read Count: 4732
Published: Feb 16 2006 Updated: Mar 28 2006 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Aragorn Ring-Lord Reviewer: Dark_Elf Signed
Wow...you have a talent for writing poems, no doubt 'bout it. Love it! :)

Author's Response: Thanks Dark Elf! It's great to be appreciated!
Date: Feb 17 2006
Summary: Young Frodo, Sam, Merry, and Pippin (and not to mention Sam's dog, Tomato!) go sailing in their home-crafted boat. But what begins as a sunny, uneventful day might end with disastrous results. (Movie-verse as the hobbits' ages are not accurate.) Written for Dark_Elf's Challenge "Hobbits."
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Frodo, Merry, Pippin, Sam
Genres: Angst, General
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2001 Read Count: 1965
Published: Mar 28 2006 Updated: Mar 28 2006 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: A-Sailing Do We Go Reviewer: Dark_Elf Signed
Cool! Although, I'd like to point out just a couple of things. The first is the ages of the hobbits. According to this story, Frodo is thirteen, yet he is actually 22 years old than Pippin, 14 years old than Merry and 12 years older than Sam. In other words, the only person who would considered alive at the time is Sam and he'd only be a year old. Ages are really hard and I'll pass just a wee bit of advice I recieved from a friend: if you can, try to avoid ages. It is alright if you do, don't get me wrong, but it's also good to avoid too.
The second thing is probably not as important, but I'd just like to mention it. Sam does not really like water. I forget the exact page I read it on, but I don't think you'll catch Samwise Gamgee getting in ANY boat. Of course, after this incident, I could see why.

Other than that, I loved it! :D I really really really did. Especially the last remark:
'Frodo grinned. "Well, we still have our picnic."'
Hee, sounds something a typical hobbit would say.

Good work! :)

Author's Response: Thanks! Yes... *nods in agreement* The only ages I\'m really familiar with are with the Men (Aragorn, Boromir, Faramir, etc.) and definitely NOT with the hobbits. :) I\'ll probably erase the ages sometime later. I did mention that Sam did not like water, but from the story it doesn\'t seem like he really is scared of it. I was thinking that maybe the incident and other few crashes, almost-drowns, and etc., etc. would lead to Sam\'s fear of the water and boats that are described in Lord of the Rings. Yeah, I love the last remark too. I thought about Pippin saying it, but it seems that Frodo should end the story. Thanks!
Date: Mar 28 2006
Regicide by Alatariel Narmolanya Rated: PG-13 [Reviews - 6]
Summary: Everything seems well after the passing of the War of the Rings and the evil of Mordor. Broken alliances have been mended, kingdoms are flurishing, and the Fellowship - that is, what remains of it on Arda - are living happily. So what is this whisper of plans to overthrow the King of Gondor and murder the Fellowship and those close to the King? To weave through mysteries, dangers, and deaths, the Fellowship must once more come together.

Some must die in order for others to live...
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Aragorn, Arwen, Elladan, Elrohir, Faramir, Gimli, Legolas, Merry, Original Character, Other, Pippin, Sam
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Mystery
Warnings: Torture
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4027 Read Count: 2572
Published: Mar 28 2006 Updated: May 01 2006 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Prologue Reviewer: Dark_Elf Signed
Hmm...a plot to be rid the Fellowship eh? Interesting...yes, very interesting. Please do continue. ^_^

Author's Response: Well, that I will! Thanks!
Date: Mar 28 2006
Summary: A dark AU tale (bookverse) in which Merry holds Frodo captive at Crickhollow "for the salvation of the Shire." Merry will be corrupted, Frodo will begin to break, Sam will fight to save him, Pippin will be forced to choose sides, and all four hobbits will be challenged in unexpected ways. Though the ending will be hopeful, this story travels dark roads.
Categories: Book Verse Slash Characters: Frodo, Merry, Pippin, Sam
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Other
Warnings: AU (alternate universe), Slash (same sex pairing), Torture
Series: None
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 126080 Read Count: 40321
Published: Apr 11 2006 Updated: Sep 28 2006 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Prelude to a kidnapping Reviewer: Dark_Elf Signed
I've read this on stories of arda, but only bits and pieces. I am reading its sequal, but I haven't reviewed on it quite yet. This is an awsome story! Keep coming with them!

Author's Response: thank you! I have lots of help from Ariel and CelandineG and Aratlithial. I can\'t believe I\'ve been writing this for 3 years. Glad you like it so far.
Date: Apr 12 2006
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2: Tea and Dissonance Reviewer: Dark_Elf Signed
Oh boy, Pippin's in a sort of bad spot. On the one hand, he wants to help Frodo, while on the other, he wants to do what Merry says. I like it how you put it through Pip's perspective.
Merry's not acting himself though, suppose that's what got Pippin in such a spot.

Author's Response: things will get pretty dark for poor Pip before the end. thanks for writing!
Date: Apr 16 2006
Title: Ring Around the Merry Reviewer: Dark_Elf Signed
Whoa! What's wrong with Sam? It was the tea, wasn't it? Merry has something up his sleeve. Update soon!
Date: Apr 22 2006
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5: Second Breakfasts and Just Desserts Reviewer: Dark_Elf Signed
Merry has gone off the deep end and he's dragging poor Pip after him.
Date: Apr 30 2006