Reviews by Rozzan
Summary: CHARMED AND LORD OF THE RINGS CROSSOVER Slightly depressed at seeing her sisters dealing with their newfound heritage well and even being able to date, Piper wishes that she could do the same. When she recieves a mysterious necklace in the mail, she begins to wonder who would send her it. When a mysterious woman appears in her kitchen and claims that her help is needed for the survival of Middle-Earth, Piper becomes a little freaked out. But when the necklace transports her to Middle-Earth, she finds herself embarking on an incredible journey to save this world--as well as her own. But while she can handle all the battles and traveling, will she be able to handle the feelings she begins to develop for a certain blonde-haired elf....and will she be willing to sacrifice everything she knows for him?
Categories: Crossovers Characters: Aragorn, Arwen, Legolas, Boromir, Elrond, Faramir, Frodo
Genres: Romance, Action/Adventure
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 2608 Read Count: 5014
Published: Jul 09 2004 Updated: Jul 09 2004 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: An Unexpected Present Reviewer: Rozzan Signed
Hi, i rarely read croosover stuff but this chapter I liked. Nice writing, very well done, will look forward to more.
Date: Jul 25 2004
The Wrong Path by White Wolf Rated: PG-13 starstar [Reviews - 17]
Summary: After apparently taking a wrong turn in a mysterious forest, something happens to Legolas. Aragorn doesn't know what's wrong or what to do, so he takes the elf to his father in Rivendell, however Elrond has no answers either. Mellon Chronicles Fic Awards 2004 Winner: Second Place: Best Overall Angst Story; Third Place: Best Friendship Story; Third Place: Best pre-LOTR Story; Third Place: Best Legolas Angst Story; and Fourth Place: Best Story of the Year.
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Aragorn, Legolas, Elrond, Elrohir, Thranduil, Elladan, Glorfindel, Original Character
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 61 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 166006 Read Count: 56731
Published: Jul 27 2004 Updated: Jul 28 2004 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter Three Reviewer: Rozzan Signed
This is a lovely story so far White Wolf I will be continuing to read. I really want to know what has happened and what the outcome will be and I love the friendship between Aragorn and Legolas and the twins are my favourite Elves after Legolas. Well written stories like this are always a pleasure to read.

Author's Response: Please forgive the horribly long delay in responding to your wonderful review. I am so glad you are liking the story. I hope by now you have finished it and liked the way it turned out. One of my favorite subjects is the friendship between Legolas and Aragorn. So many of us have that as the center of our fanfic stories, even thought Tolkien never touched on it pre-FOTR. I love the twins, too.
Date: Aug 01 2004
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter Four Reviewer: Rozzan Signed
OMG! off to read chapter 5 immediately!
Date: Aug 04 2004
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter Six Reviewer: Rozzan Signed
So Intriguing. Youa re really drawing me in here with a great desire to find out what has happened and how it will be resolved. Also I love your characterisations of the elves and Aragorn. Really wonderful! Excellent stuff.
Date: Aug 05 2004
Housebound by ElerrinaRose Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]
Summary: Rose has writer's block. Fortunately, her two elves only see this as a challenge. can they get their frazled woman to forget the fic and relax?
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Legolas, Other
Genres: Romance, Erotica
Warnings: Graphic Sex, Rape, Character Death, Kink
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1127 Read Count: 2235
Published: Aug 05 2004 Updated: Aug 05 2004 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Blocked and itchy Reviewer: Rozzan Signed
Hurry up and update cant wait to see what legolas and Rumil have in mind for the relaxation!
Date: Aug 08 2004
Summary: Another look at the friendship between Legolas and Arwen
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Arwen, Legolas
Genres: Drama
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 785 Read Count: 1433
Published: Aug 28 2004 Updated: Aug 28 2004 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: One of Those Nights Reviewer: Rozzan Signed
Really nice. Full of friendship and love.
Date: Aug 29 2004
Summary: Sequel to "One of Those Nights"
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Arwen, Legolas
Genres: Drama
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 7517 Read Count: 5238
Published: Aug 28 2004 Updated: Aug 30 2004 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 2: Fortune's Fool Reviewer: Rozzan Signed
I am really liking this so far. Nicely written. I like Legolas/Arwen/Aragorn fics.
Date: Aug 29 2004
A Little Night Music by Ariel Rated: NC-17 [Reviews - 16]
Summary: Sam and his Rosie in a rare moment to themselves.
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Rosie, Sam
Genres: Romance, Erotica
Warnings: Graphic Sex
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4519 Read Count: 5239
Published: Oct 10 2004 Updated: Oct 10 2004 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: A Little Night Music Reviewer: Rozzan Signed
I loved it. It was beautiful from start to finish. Your langauge was perfect for the hobbits.
"She was his wholly and cpmpletely, bound, claimed planted and harvested." Lovely sentence. I appreciated her body scarred by motherhood and they both seemed so earthy and real. Their lovemaking was physical amd magical at the same time. A wonderful story.

Author's Response: *grin* Thank you, most profusely! It\'s one of my favorite stories too and my answer to all those that had the poor fellow discarding Rosie or pining for Frodo all his life. I simply couldn\'t see the character Tolkien created living the life he was given like that. I am glad you appreciated my take.
Date: Mar 28 2006
By the Sea by Kokki Rated: PG-13 [Reviews - 25]
Summary: Éomer & Lothíriel — A bittersweet look at Éomer and Lothíriel's relationship and how it blossomed into the greatest love of all time. The wedding night can be extremely awkward, particularly if your marriage was arranged for a political alliance.
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Lothiriel
Genres: Romance, Angst
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 73101 Read Count: 28866
Published: May 21 2005 Updated: Feb 23 2006 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Wedding Night Reviewer: Rozzan Signed
Yes I did like it very much. Especially Lothiriel's feelings.
Date: Aug 07 2005
Summary: A series of drabbles centered around three interpretations of the relationship between the last Ruling Steward and his lady.
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Original Character, Denethor, Ecthelion, Finduilas (Dol Amroth), Imrahil, Adrahil
Genres: Romance, Drama, Tragedy
Warnings: Character Death
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1987 Read Count: 9183
Published: May 23 2005 Updated: Jun 15 2005 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 7: Lost Reviewer: Rozzan Signed
very interesting. I liked these.

Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: Jun 15 2005
Summary: In Lothlorien, Aragorn faces his future and Celeborn shows why he is counted among "The Wise."
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Legolas, Aragorn, Celeborn, Galadriel
Genres: Drama, Angst
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4258 Read Count: 1605
Published: May 24 2005 Updated: May 24 2005 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: One Reviewer: Rozzan Signed
I can hardly believe this story is your first. It is so good. Will write you a long review. The fellowships time in Lothlorien is beautifully portrayed and with your story you have included its with magic. All your characters are perfectly 'in character.' I particularly liked Celeborn's voice, well realised. Aragorn feeling the weight of his destiny and responsibilty which brings him to breaking point was also wonderful. I liked Legolas's reaction to the Mellyrn. he would do that, touch the bark and leaves, feel them grow and I am sure they would talk to him too as he listens. The relationship between Aragorn and Legolas was beautifully drawn. My heart was in mouth as Aragorn woke up. I really thought it was going to happen, so well done for the brief suspense and for quickly allaying my fears. I also liked the flash of humour with Hobbits regarding mushrooms. It lightened the tale and also by contrast threw into relief the seriousness of the quest. Aragorn sitting between the immortals and the mortals was a nice touch which highlighted who he was and his ancestry and heritage. You managed to include everyone in the fellowship in some way, not just the main character. Having Frodo and Merry interested in elven history in Imladris brought them in and reminded us of their personalities and the voices of Gimli and Boromir were spot on too in their dialogue, as was Sam when he said, 'sounds a lot like Strider.' I liked Celeborn's reference to his Granddaughter. I loved your Galdriel's speech when she gave Legolas his gift. One of my favourite moments in book/film. The significance of the story of Turin and Beleg was excellent. I think you have crafted a very rich and meaningful story in a short space. You have included so much from the scope of Tolkien's whole vision and blended issues such as mortality, the Valar, history and prophecy for the future, with the current events and the characters feelings and emotions and given it all great significance. Just fantastic. (Think this the longest review I have ever written.) Hope you will write some more. Rozzan.
Date: May 27 2005
Summary: Legolas is an elfling giving his ada headaches and heartache. The young life of Legolas ‘long under tree’
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Legolas, Thranduil
Genres: Angst, Drama, Humor
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 31150 Read Count: 13640
Published: Jun 12 2005 Updated: Jan 26 2007 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Confined Reviewer: Rozzan Signed
Lovely start, mischevious. I laughed out loud at the line. "I am fading, Ada" I enjoy young Legolas stories, peeking into how others imagine his childhood.

Author's Response: Oh I'm so glad you liked that line, I love to know the bits people enjoyed! thanks for reviewing!
Date: Jun 15 2005
Title: Chapter 2: Into The Wild Green Yonder Reviewer: Rozzan Signed
ah terryfing! Poor child, but he shouldn't have been so bad.

Author's Response: Well I think he learned his lesson!
Date: Jun 15 2005
Title: Chapter 3: Baby Mine Reviewer: Rozzan Signed
I liked in the last chapter the perfume of the forest absorbing into his skin. In this one the multiple spider eyes was a scary image. I like the way Thranduil rescued him mi himself and not the guards and I like the way you show the love he has for his son and the final line, nice emotion.

Author's Response: oo I love when you talk about the parts you liked. I'm so glad you enjoyed this part of the story!
Date: Jun 15 2005
Summary: 3rd Place Winner/Teitho Contest Rewrites PJs Imladris sequence to include Elrond & Aragorn's relationship as it should have been. Also Glorfindel and Erestor
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Aragorn, Gandalf / Olorin, Elrond, Glorfindel, Erestor
Genres: Drama
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3752 Read Count: 1715
Published: Aug 08 2005 Updated: Aug 08 2005 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Imladris Revisited Reviewer: Rozzan Signed
I loved your first sentence, exactly as Elrond would think and a great dramatic opener. You have a keen eye for personalities and show it in gestures and dialogue, good characterisations. Elrond's conflict as a father to foster son Aragorn and to daughter Arwen is well drawn. I can feel his emotion. Nice advice from Gandalf full of perception and wisdom. Good inclusion of the histroy behind this moment in Elrond's thoughts. Beautiful image of the reforged sword and the scene at the memorial is wonderful. It would have been lovely to see some of Aragorn's emotion and feeling too here toward Elrond and his destiny. This was a really well done challenge.
Date: Aug 26 2005
An Heroic Love by Ennorwen Rated: PG-13 [Reviews - 6]
Summary: An arc that celebrates Elrond's great love for Arda through tales/gifts from Celeborn, Elladan, Elrohir, & Arwen. Celebrian, Galadriel & others help. Elladan/OFC, Elrohir/OFC in some parts
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Celeborn, Elladan, Elrohir, Elrond
Genres: Romance, Drama, Angst
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 19031 Read Count: 9055
Published: Aug 22 2005 Updated: Oct 04 2005 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Celeborn Arrives in Aman Reviewer: Rozzan Signed
A lovely beginning with the descriptionof the hatrbour. I could smell the sea air and wanted to be there sitting on that quay. Nice references to history, which i am coming to expect from your tales and also links with Arda, mentions of ancient elves like Olwe and also of the valar gives a sense of long ages and of place. I like your original names very much, Legolas' mothers and Elrond's house, well thought out. Beautiful image of Celebrian in the garden and then sharing there disappointment and sorrow, the simile of "tears streaming down like quicksilver through glass" so gorgeous and emotive. I also appreciate Celebrian's strength at the end, a nice peep into her character and their relationship.
Date: Aug 26 2005
Title: Chapter 2: A Reunion in Tirion Reviewer: Rozzan Signed
I like your explanation of Galdriel/Atariel's personality change and later of her time in gardens of Lorien and the visions. I love your characterisation of celeborn, you write him very well. The description of the city and its surroundings is beautiful. At their renuion i enjoyed the echo of the first chapter with the words. "This is not true." and their implied intimacy was well done with dialogue and your explanation, a nice choice of words. I liked your depiction of Earwen and as ever your attention to names is excellent and the concise but detailed inclusion of much history and of elven races is evident. A lovely chapter that leaves me wanting to know and read more.
Date: Aug 26 2005
Title: Chapter 3: Visit To Imlothien Reviewer: Rozzan Signed
Oh how poignant this is. A nice renuion but tinged with such nostalgia and such heartbreak too. The portraits were a beautiful idea to introduce us to the family tree and all those marvellous descendants, some of whose stories I suspect we will hear. Lovely. Nice insights into the household at Imlothien and the characters again. I felt so sad for Elrond having the hurt of losing Arwen opened up again and now his sons, and when he replies to his wife's happiness and wonder at all the great grandchildren .. that they will never see them though... I almost cried. This mortality/immortality stuff is indeed a bitter thing. Really nice chapter.
Date: Sep 13 2005
Title: Chapter 4: Elladan's Tale: Part One Reviewer: Rozzan Signed
Ch 4.MMM. very nice. I love the voice you give to Elladan. nicely done. I also like your Gilwen, that she is a scholar. The device of seeing their story through letters and her journal is interesting and works extremely well. I appreciated very much the descriptions of Elladan through Gilwen's eyes! That she remembers him so well and can tell him apart from his twin after 2 years gap, shows how much of impression he made upon her, even if she does not fully realise it herself just yet. This is a lovely start to the relationship.
Date: Sep 13 2005
Title: Chapter 5: Elladan's Tale: Part Two Reviewer: Rozzan Signed
5. Another good chapter. I appreciated your description of Frodo and Sam's death, it was quiet and still and peaceful and inevitable, and also the twinge of pain it causes Elrond as he thinks of children. Good to switch to the journal again and tales of life and a relationship beginning and hope after the war. I am really looking forward to knowing more of this story. keep it coming, I am hooked.
Date: Sep 13 2005
Sparring Partners by Rozzan Rated: NC-17 [Reviews - 5]
Summary: Legolas renews his relationship with Eomer through a sparring match and more intimate pursuits.
Categories: Lord of the Rings Slash Characters: Legolas
Genres: Erotica
Warnings: Slash (same sex pairing)
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 14116 Read Count: 5577
Published: Jan 23 2006 Updated: Feb 14 2006 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: One off PWP Complete Reviewer: Rozzan Signed
Well it stands as a one off PWP but I decided to write more, maybe 3 chapters. Hope you enjoy them.
Date: Jan 31 2006
A Friend In Need by Narya Rated: G [Reviews - 17]
Summary: Eowyn and Eomer are grieving for their parents; can anyone in their new home offer comfort?
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Eomer, Eowyn, Thodred
Genres: General
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1210 Read Count: 2483
Published: Oct 26 2008 Updated: Oct 26 2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Rozzan Signed
Thanks for reviewing my story. I am so glad you you liked it so much. Sorry you missed a class the morning after because of reading all night. You are right about the sentence structure in the example you gave. Thanks for the crit.
About your story I liked it a lot. Never read Eomer and Eowyn as children before, so it was an interesting idea.

Author's Response: Thanks, Rozzan; I enjoyed writing it! Can't wait to read more about Rowannen and Legolas...
Date: Oct 29 2008