Penname: lorelome [Contact] Real name: Clare
Member Since: 26/04/10
Membership status: Member
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Bio? Um... I'm just here to be able to leave comments and bug authors for updates.
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Damn this heat... by ann_arien Rated: NC-17 [Reviews - 3]
Summary: The intense heat of a particular midsummer eve gets to some Elven heads. Elrohir and Elladan decide to pay their former tutor a visit and, for once, authority is usurped.
Categories: Book Verse Slash, Book-verse
Characters: Elladan, Elrohir, Erestor
Genres: Erotica, Humor
Warnings: Graphic Sex, Incest, Slash (same sex pairing)
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7912 Read Count: 2476
[Report This] Published: 14/04/06 Updated: 14/04/06
Reviewer: lorelome Signed
Date: 07/07/10 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

The way that you used "hey" in the dialogue kinda threw me off. Little things like that can make an otherwise-good story sound pretty bad.

Body Language by Zhie Rated: NC-17 [Reviews - 11]
Summary: Glorfindel wants two things: A mate, and to feel useful by being able to protect something. Who knew both wishes could be granted at the same time? Notes: Written for DarkDreamer’s challenge on Erestor Lovers – Reborn Balrog Slayer seeks Single Male Elf for cuddling and naughtiness. Must be unable to dodge falling bookshelves. ((It should be noted that I am a librarian, and the falling bookshelf? It really did happen in my library.))
Categories: Book-verse, Book Verse Slash
Characters: Elladan, Elrohir, Elrond, Erestor, Glorfindel, Lindir, Melpomaen
Genres: Drama, Romance
Warnings: AU (alternate universe), Graphic Sex, Rape, Slash (same sex pairing)
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 17724 Read Count: 36126
[Report This] Published: 18/02/07 Updated: 18/02/07
Reviewer: lorelome Signed
Date: 12/10/10 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Why is this story marked completed???

Author's Response: because i was pretty sure i was done with it where it ended. apparently, i'm the only one who thinks so... ;)