Reviews by lorelome
Damn this heat... by ann_arien Rated: NC-17 [Reviews - 11]
Summary: The intense heat of a particular midsummer eve gets to some Elven heads. Elrohir and Elladan decide to pay their former tutor a visit and, for once, authority is usurped.
Categories: Book Verse Slash, Book-verse Characters: Elladan, Elrohir, Erestor
Genres: Erotica, Humor
Warnings: Graphic Sex, Incest, Slash (same sex pairing)
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7912 Read Count: 3433
Published: Apr 14 2006 Updated: Apr 14 2006 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: lorelome Signed
The way that you used "hey" in the dialogue kinda threw me off. Little things like that can make an otherwise-good story sound pretty bad.
Date: Jul 07 2010
Body Language by Zhie Rated: NC-17 [Reviews - 19]
Summary: Glorfindel wants two things: A mate, and to feel useful by being able to protect something. Who knew both wishes could be granted at the same time? Notes: Written for DarkDreamer‚Äôs challenge on Erestor Lovers ‚Ä“ Reborn Balrog Slayer seeks Single Male Elf for cuddling and naughtiness. Must be unable to dodge falling bookshelves. ((It should be noted that I am a librarian, and the falling bookshelf? It really did happen in my library.))
Categories: Book-verse, Book Verse Slash Characters: Elladan, Elrohir, Elrond, Erestor, Glorfindel, Lindir, Melpomaen
Genres: Drama, Romance
Warnings: AU (alternate universe), Graphic Sex, Rape, Slash (same sex pairing)
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 17724 Read Count: 49725
Published: Feb 18 2007 Updated: Feb 18 2007 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 Reviewer: lorelome Signed
Why is this story marked completed???

Author's Response: because i was pretty sure i was done with it where it ended. apparently, i'm the only one who thinks so... ;)
Date: Oct 11 2010