Reviews by luthien85
Summary: Haldir has spent a lifetime protecting his home and his heart. With the birth of one of the last Peredhil also came his oath to watch over and protect her. The wall he has built to protect his soul is being threatened. Change does not come so easily to the Lorien Elf as he tries to deny the fact that love is stronger than arrogance.
Categories: Movie-verse, Off Topic Characters: Eowyn, Faramir, Haldir, Legolas, Original Character
Genres: Angst, Friendship, Romance
Warnings: Graphic Sex, Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 52 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 178260 Read Count: 64922
Published: 27/06/10 Updated: 08/09/10 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 34: 34 Undesirable Reviewer: luthien85 Signed
yay!! go haldir go! ride like the wind and kick that bad man's ass!! wooo hooo!! some day my prince will come! daa daa da da da daaaa....

Author's Response: Alright. Calm down Cinderella. Yes he is on his way but will he make it in time? That is the question.
Date: 21/08/10
Title: Chapter 35: 35 Missing Reviewer: luthien85 Signed
aaahhhhh!! that evil man! Haldir better get his butt there! owh, that elf makes me so angry at times!

Author's Response: Which makes punishing him all the more fun. Come here boy, so I can put a whoopin' on ya!
Date: 22/08/10
Title: Chapter 36: 36 In Dark Places Reviewer: luthien85 Signed
Arrghhh!! a cliffie! *throws self off it... wonderful chapter. im glad haldir has come to his senses. please reach there in time. if anything happens to her, the idea of losing the two most handsome elves in Arda is too painful

Author's Response: I wish you would step back from that ledge my friend... It's not worth throwing away all that we have. hehehe. See ya on the flip side. sorry it's late here and I'm rambling.
Date: 22/08/10
Title: Chapter 37: 37 The Secret Room Reviewer: luthien85 Signed
another cliffie!! ahhh!! i swear i have died so many times this weak! great great chapter! haldir is now back in my good graces :) cant wait for the next one

Author's Response: Thanks. I just can't seem to get away from the cliff.
Date: 24/08/10
Summary: From time to time we feel the need to say what's on our mind. This is my bit of advice.
Categories: Off Topic Characters: None
Genres: Essay
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1075 Read Count: 1810
Published: 30/06/10 Updated: 30/06/10 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: A Bit Of Advice Reviewer: luthien85 Signed
Hi! It's me again your review buddy lol. It's true. Every writer, good or bad, me being the latter, likes to read reviews about the story they wrote. Some of us are more experienced and some like me, are starting to write. Reviews help an author to know that their story is enjoyed by others.

Reviews work as a food source for me and my muse. When we get no feedback about our story, we tend to think people don't like it. Yes, the read count shows you how many people have read your story but with no or an abysmal amount of reviews, you will start to think that are they really reading it until the end or skipping through?

Reviews also help the said author interact with their readers. Sometimes and in this case with my story and you, i remembered a plot i had forgotten until you mentioned it. An author/reader relationship should always be a two way relationship. For that, i thank you for being my loyal reader and reviewer.

In the end, all us authors, amateur or professional would really love to hear some feedbacks about their story and like spiced wine said, some of the stories here can put published authors to shame. I believe those authors deserve some recognition in the form of a review.

Author's Response: I am glad you agree and personally I think you are a good writer. After I finished your story His Eyes, I went back and read the first chapter again. I could see how your writing improved. Do not doubt yourself. I am proud to be your review buddy and hope to be so as long as we are writing.
Date: 30/06/10
Worth The Risk by L8Bleumr Rated: NC-17 [Reviews - 6]
Summary: An Elf and a Shieldmaiden fall in forbidden love.
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Eowyn, Legolas
Genres: Romance
Warnings: Graphic Sex
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8809 Read Count: 1981
Published: 10/08/10 Updated: 10/08/10 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Worth The Risk Reviewer: luthien85 Signed
That was HOT!! I am relieved and happy now... I feel...i i can take on the world now! A girl needs her daily dose of loving like that!

Author's Response: Glad you liked it and happy to help. lol
Date: 10/08/10
Summary: Unrequited love. I hate it, yet love it. It gives you a chance to watch from afar, and wish without being caught up in the action.
Categories: Off Topic Characters: None
Genres: Poetry, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: On My Own
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 167 Read Count: 1021
Published: 19/08/10 Updated: 19/08/10 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: luthien85 Signed
Mundane life...*sighs...yeah that is how girls see their lives without the love of their lives... I have been there. Wonderful! you captured the very feeling of being invisible and the hope of him seeing you and how life seems to be mocking you for being unable to win his attention. Very wonderful!

Author's Response: Thank you, I am very glad you enjoyed it. I have been having a hard time with my life currently, with certain people causing confusion and sadness. This poem was just to pour out my feelings, I am glad you enjoyed! =)
Date: 20/08/10
Blue Moon by L8Bleumr Rated: NC-17 [Reviews - 5]
Summary: She has admired Orophin from afar. But when she finally meets him, can she tell him her true feelings? A story of distant love.
Categories: Off Topic Characters: Original Character, Orophin
Genres: Romance
Warnings: Graphic Sex
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4471 Read Count: 2060
Published: 23/08/10 Updated: 23/08/10 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Blue Moon Reviewer: luthien85 Signed
Very..very hot... it scared me at first you know..the idea of watching someone you love making love to someone else...but im glad they both found each other... Hey, I answered your challenge :D

Author's Response: You did? *jumping up and down* I'm going there right now. Thanks for reading.
Date: 24/08/10
Taming The Wild by L8Bleumr Rated: NC-17 [Reviews - 150]
Summary: *COMPLETE* She was born with only one purpose, to fight. But when Legolas tries to harness her, she finds it difficult to submit for the sake of their love. She must stay true to her namesake. Rated for explicite adult (het) situations.
Categories: Book-verse, Movie-verse Characters: Haldir, Legolas, Original Character, Orophin, Rúmil, The Fellowship, Thranduil
Genres: Action/Adventure, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort, Romance
Warnings: Character Death, Graphic Sex, Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 118739 Read Count: 65064
Published: 05/11/10 Updated: 21/03/11 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 33: Foresight Reviewer: luthien85 Signed
Dear Moe..its has been a while but i finally managed to read up to this point. i must say i missed your stories and i'm glad to see you are still as wonderful as ever. I love legolas in this story of yours and how the two met and bickered and then fell in love. I look forward to the next chapter :)

Author's Response: Hello my dear review buddy. It's been so long. Glad to see you back here again. Just like old times. I appreciate you taking time out of your busy schedule to read this tale and I'm so glad you are enjoying it. There's more to come and some yummy stuff too, if you know what I mean. *wink wink*
Date: 19/02/11
Summary: *COMPLETE*With her parents dead and her brother missing, a young Rohirrim girl sets out on a journey of a lifetime. She is on her own in the world, left to face tragedy and wrongful accusations. She must find her way or become just another statistic. It is her desire to find love and peace that pushes her on. When she meets an elf, she sees where she can find such solitude, but the path that leads her there is full of challenges.
Categories: Book-verse, Off Topic Characters: Legolas, Original Character
Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama, Erotica, Romance
Warnings: Graphic Sex, Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 72 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 294948 Read Count: 80677
Published: 23/05/11 Updated: 22/06/12 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 11: 11 Flowers For Sale Reviewer: luthien85 Signed
Wonderful! I have just begun reading this story. Though u left me confused lol..i thought surely the hero would be Legolas, and i see u picked up where u left. Legolas is married to rhavaniel :) i eagerly await more of this fine story

Author's Response: luthien, oh it's so good to hear from you. Hope all is well for you. It's been so long. Well, as you can see, I'm taking a chance with this one, writing oc's instead of canon, but I'm really having a great time doing it. Yes, Legolas and Rhav are married now after a long relationship. Other characters from Taming the Wild will find their way here also, though I don't know if you've read it yet. Well, one might think Legolas would have been her hero, but you know me, gotta keep you guessing. Some things never change. I hope you'll continue to read this. There is so much more to come and one very hot OMC elf too. Thanks for reviewing. It's always good to see you here.
Date: 25/07/11
Title: Chapter 13: 13 Lost Innocence Reviewer: luthien85 Signed
Love knows no bound i guess :) Rosloch seems like a noble man. I cannot wait to see where you go with this :)

Author's Response: Thanks. Glad you like Rosloch. He is that older sexy rugged well muscled guy that drives women wild. OK maybe it's just me, but trust me, Terrwyn is a lucky girl.
Date: 03/08/11
Title: Chapter 15: 15 Confessions Reviewer: luthien85 Signed
Oh much as i worry about terrwyn, im intrigued at what Rosloch signed. Eagerly waiting for more!

Author's Response: Well, I'll just say they are both lucky there's an elf in charge. More on the way soon.
Date: 13/08/11
Wicked Game by Nadia Rated: NC-17 [Reviews - 5]
Summary: Zowie's immediate future is well-planned: finish secondary school, win a football tournament with her schoolmates, find the perfect dress for her Leavers' Ball, and then move out of her parents' house in Wellington to begin a new life as an university student. Life, however, will prove to be much harder than that. Meeting a young actor named Orlando will change all her priorities, and facing some life-altering events will face Zowie with more challenges that she knows how to handle.
Categories: Actor Fics Characters: Original Character, Orlando Bloom
Genres: Angst, Drama, Romance
Warnings: Graphic Sex
Series: Wicked Game Trilogy.
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 162694 Read Count: 30439
Published: 03/08/11 Updated: 15/08/11 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44 Reviewer: luthien85 Signed
I hope things doesnt spiral out of control when the rest of the lot leaves... Why won't she tell Orlando already! Grr... Superb chapters! I await more :)

Author's Response: Well, Zowie isn't going through her best of times, so we'll have to wait and see... ;) Thank you so much for your reviews! You're the only reader who has contacted me so far, and knowing how much you like the story is a great feeling - this is a project that I've been working on for so long, I was more than a little nervous when I first posted it. :)
Date: 12/08/11
Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37 Reviewer: luthien85 Signed
I must say how sorry i was for not reading this story sooner. I loved Wynter and this story is slowly becoming one of my favourites too. Great depiction of the not so perfect Orlando. Perfection is boring lol a flowed Orli is tantalising. I hope this news won't flare up her pil taking incident. Drug addiction would be bad. I eagerly await more from you :)

Author's Response: Thank you! And don't be sorry - I just began to post this story a few days ago, so it's okay. I'm really happy to know that you loved "Wynter", it was such an enjoyable story to write, I'm glad to know so many people liked it. I do try not to make Orlando too perfect because, like you said, perfect is boring. :P And as for the drug taking... we'll just have to wait and see. Thanks for your kind words, I'd love to hear what you think of what will come next!
Date: 09/08/11
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: luthien85 Signed
I know how you feel believe me lol...I have one loyal reviewer for my stories as well and sometimes hearing from one constant reviewer gives us the sense of security that someone at least someone is enjoying our stories :)

Author's Response: Exactly! I only discovered the read count of my stories a few days ago (after YEARS of being in this site *slaps forehead*) and it's a weird feeling to see I have reached 600+ reads in only a few days, but that only one person has contacted me. You don't really know whether all those people loved the story but didn't dare to comment, or if they simply hated it so much they couldn't even think about commenting. LOL But like you said, hearing from at least one reader makes it all worthwhile. :D
Date: 13/08/11
The Prophecy by Annielle Rated: NC-17 [Reviews - 13]
Summary: The Lorien Marchwarden is at the center of a prophecy describing the rebirth of great elven heroes. Only its accomplishment will convince the elves to fight alongside Men and finally defeat Sauron. But a crucial player was not born in Middle Earth...
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Celeborn, Elrond, Galadriel, Haldir
Genres: Romance
Warnings: AU (alternate universe), Graphic Sex
Series: None
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 157821 Read Count: 24160
Published: 04/08/11 Updated: 22/04/12 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - The Lorien Marchwarden Reviewer: luthien85 Signed
Wonderful! Anything with the Marchwarden I would be happy to read. I await the next chapters eagerly to see this arranged bonding. Your story is slightly similar to mine in terms of concept. Might i make a small suggestion? Between the dialogues lines, could u perhaps add some spacing? Makes it easier to read and follow :) Good job indeed :)

Author's Response: Done! Thank you for the tip!
Date: 04/08/11