Reviews by lilutopiangirl
Mysterious Fate by Cormak Rated: PG-13 starstarhalf-star [Reviews - 92]
Summary: Winner of the Flame of Anor Award: Best Movie Verse Story. A stranger from another realm joins the fellowship, unaware of what danger, love and heartbreak lies ahead. Legolas/OC
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Aragorn, Legolas, Gimli, Frodo, Sam, Merry, Pippin, Gandalf / Olorin, Boromir, Original Character
Genres: Romance, Action/Adventure
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 178591 Read Count: 121051
Published: Jul 05 2004 Updated: Feb 13 2005 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Stranger from Another Realm Reviewer: lilutopiangirl Signed
I see that you haven't updated in a while and you probably won't finish the story but I'd just like to say how wonderful this story is!!!

T^T Pleaseeeee even though it's been a long time, pleeeasseee update!!!

Kaitlyn and Legolas's romance is just so beautiful! It's so easy to love Kaitlyn too!!!

Date: May 06 2010


Tolkien's great great granddaughter finds his original transcript of Lord of the rings. She reads it and falls asleep after reading a few pages and then the next morning she found herself staring up at the characters that her great great grandfather had made. What caused this? And what can she do to get them back to their own world
Categories: Off Topic Characters: Aragorn, Frodo, Gandalf / Olorin, Gimli, Legolas, Merry, Pippin, Sam
Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama, Family, Fantasy, Friendship, Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 56806 Read Count: 44750
Published: Oct 12 2009 Updated: Nov 07 2011 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1- The beginning Reviewer: lilutopiangirl Signed
I love the casualness of your style!


Good Chapter! =)
Date: May 05 2010
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2- They're REAL?!!! Reviewer: lilutopiangirl Signed
This bit just cracked me up!!! -> "It is okay. I am not feeling hot. The air is of the right temperature." He said as Gimli tossed around Kim's bean bag. I could see Kim's expression change. She was obviously getting freaked out.

I do love my Leggy haha xD
Date: May 05 2010
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3- Shop till you drop! Reviewer: lilutopiangirl Signed
Omgosh Pippin! Don't cry Pippin!!!

Thank you Robyn for punching that horrible man! lol

This chapter was A to the W to the E to the S to the O to the M to the E
Date: May 05 2010
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4- Evenstar and Bonding Reviewer: lilutopiangirl Signed
haha Imagine the hobbits wearing sneakers! So cute!

I love how you build up Robyn's character. I can really feel what it's like to be her.

Legolas sound HO-OT!!! Ah! haha but Aragorn sounds HO-OT too! lol

Aragorn's so sweet! =)
Date: May 05 2010
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6- The memory of Boromir Reviewer: lilutopiangirl Signed
I love this chapter!

Poor Robyn. I hope that her parents can work things out soon. :

That was such a sweet moment between Pippin and Robyn. Pippin's so adorable! haha

Great Chapter! :)
Date: May 06 2010
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8- Surprise visit Reviewer: lilutopiangirl Signed
LOL !!! The curtain?! The curtain?! ARE YOU SERIOUS?! LOL Ah Leggy
Date: May 06 2010
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11- Epiphany Reviewer: lilutopiangirl Signed

That was a flippin awesome twist! I didn't realize!! ZOMG! That was an awesome epiphany! hehe

Love it!
Date: May 06 2010
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12- Driving's not my thing Reviewer: lilutopiangirl Signed
haha I'm actually trying that tongue twister you made there. I'm struggling! hehe

Aww this was such a sweet episode. Kim and Robyn has a really strong friendship. Makes me miss my best friend! :'(

I love the ending line! hehe
Date: May 06 2010
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13- My old man Reviewer: lilutopiangirl Signed
That WAS a long sentence! o.o hehe

Aw...I love that you're giving us more background information about the characters. I didn't know that about Sam...did you just make that up by the way? It sounds so real!! o.o
Date: May 06 2010
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14- Prison Break Reviewer: lilutopiangirl Signed
hahahahahaha so cute! I love that! I love my Leggy but Kim is cute with him so I'll let it slide ;)

I'm starting to like Robyn more and more! I would be scared too if I had to go to an old asylum O.O
Date: May 07 2010
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15- The Elven Prince Reviewer: lilutopiangirl Signed
OMG!!! Leggy is soooooooo friggin hot! Dayumm! He's so sweet! :) I love the little talk they had. I never thought about Leggy feeling like that. That was sad and sweet!

LOVE THIS CHAPTER!!! Off I go to the next one! :D
Date: May 07 2010
Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17- Where's King Tut? Reviewer: lilutopiangirl Signed
ARGHHH!! This Evangeline girl gets on my nerves ~.~
Date: May 07 2010
Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18- Evangeline Reviewer: lilutopiangirl Signed
Wow! Your descriptions are impeccable!

I love the ending line once again! haha Kim's really funny!
Date: May 07 2010
Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19- Master Dwarf and letting go... Reviewer: lilutopiangirl Signed
Sad chapter...

I don't want them to leave Robyn!
Date: May 07 2010
Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20- Grounded Reviewer: lilutopiangirl Signed
haha I have to admit that Evangeline throwing a pillow at my Leggy was kinda funny hehe. I kind of like her? I think she's going to be a good person later...I mean she fixed Gimli's axe so....she probably is a good person?

Aw the hobbits making breakfast! That's so cute!

OMG Leggy rejected Kim? :'( Nooo!

LOL they stayed in the same hiding place! Classic! :D
Date: May 07 2010
Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21- Water conservation hoses Reviewer: lilutopiangirl Signed
OMG this was a wonderful action packed chapter!

Once again I must commend you for the wonderful descriptions. The eye ball thing really creeped me out O.O I'm terrified of snakes you see...not to mention skinned, human remains. :

I love how they fought off the ringwraiths! Especially this, "They obviously didn’t like water. No wonder they smell like something dead…other than the fact that they are. But who says that dead things and dead people can’t smell nice?"

Date: May 07 2010
Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22- Legolas's Lumberjacks Reviewer: lilutopiangirl Signed
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!!!! That is so adorable! Leggy's lumberjacks! lol :D

omg Robyn's mom is so funny! haha Aragorn is 87 years old?!!!! O.O Woooh! I did not know that....o.o
Date: May 07 2010
Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23- Road trip Reviewer: lilutopiangirl Signed
OMG THAT'S FREAKY!!! Evangeline's house sounds scary >< And zomg Evangeline's an elf?!!!!!! o.o
Date: May 07 2010
Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24- Elven Heritage and Ring bearer Reviewer: lilutopiangirl Signed
Aww, Evangeline is actually a BIG softy in the inside. :) But what was she gonna say?!!! NOOO!! I wanna know! lol
Date: May 22 2010
Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25- All About love Reviewer: lilutopiangirl Signed
OOOHHHH Finally more about Evangeline's dark past!

BUT I CAN'T BELIEVE THAT SHE LIKES GIMLI!!! But she's so mean to him O.O All I can say is wow....But they'd be cute together :)

haha I love this bit: “I think I have drunk enough. I can feel a tingling on my fingers.” Legolas said. Kim took the beer from his hands and settled it on the dining table.

“AHAHAHAHAHA…that means I win! The boy really can’t hold his liquor!” Gimli said. We watched his eyes roll back to the back of his head and fall from his seat until we finally scattered around him and helped him up.

“Somehow…this scene looks familiar…” Aragorn muttered. Legolas nodded with a grin.

Date: May 22 2010
Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26- Betrayal or not Reviewer: lilutopiangirl Signed
OMG THIS CHAPTER WAS SOO FRIGGIN GOOD AND EPIC!!! SO MUCH SUSPENSE IS BUILDING UP!!! I LOVE IT!!! hahaha I don't think Evangeline betrayed them...?
Date: May 22 2010
Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27- I'm not insane! Reviewer: lilutopiangirl Signed
I love these lines by Kim, she's so awesome: “What did that woman do to it, nail it shut?!” Kim yelled.
AND this “Stop the heroics and let us out!” Kim replied.

BUT OMG What's going on?! O.O Please don't tell me everything was just a dream! Coz that would suck lol

But intense chapter!! :D
Date: May 22 2010
Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28- Cartoon Banana-covered Wallpaper Reviewer: lilutopiangirl Signed
DAMNNN! I thought it was really the end! hahaha You scared me! haha I love the "chapter end notes" touch! :D

I love this bit: "I mean why would you choose cartoon banana covered wallpaper as ball room hall wallpaper?" haha I love your chapter titles too!

OMG who is it?! :O
Date: May 22 2010
Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29- The bargain Reviewer: lilutopiangirl Signed
It's SCOTT?!!!! WHAT?!!! How is that possible?!!!!! TT.TT NO!!! SCOTT WAS SO NICE THOUGH!!! Is it weird that I still think he's awesome? I don't think he's bad to the core....

haha that was cute. "MELLON!" haha "Wai there's more!!" haha LOVE IT!
Date: Jun 16 2010