Reviews by NessaMahtar
Summary: The Company's first night in Moria from Boromir's P.O.V.
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Aragorn, Legolas, Gimli, Frodo, Sam, Merry, Pippin, Gandalf / Olorin, Boromir
Genres: General
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1192 Read Count: 1515
Published: 10/12/04 Updated: 10/12/04 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: The Black Pit of Moria Reviewer: NessaMahtar Signed
Soo well-written! G stories CAN be wonderful! Wow, it gives a lot more depth to Boromir's character and motivations and feelings. I thoroughly enjoyed this. Very very well done. I can see the darkness and the bodies through the eyes of someone who is trying to keep them all safe and protected. It makes Boromir fatherly to the hobbits, and I really love how you interpreted it like that. (What? I am rambling. In short-- great job. =))
Date: 07/24/10
Summary: The Barad-Dur Help Group meet in Barad-Dur to discuss their issues. And that's just where their adventures begin!
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Aragorn, Legolas, Frodo, Sam, Merry, Pippin, Gandalf / Olorin, Sauron, Saruman, Gollum, Boromir, Faramir, Other, Denethor, Witch King
Genres: Humor, Parody
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8792 Read Count: 12405
Published: 08/17/05 Updated: 09/01/05 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 5: BDHG Chapter 5 Reviewer: NessaMahtar Signed
This is THE best: The Gap of Rohan... PURE genius. I LOVE THIS.
Date: 07/26/10
Title: Chapter 9: BDHG Chapter Nine Reviewer: NessaMahtar Signed
AHH YOU STOPPED!?!?!?!?!?!?
NOOOOOOOO
Date: 07/26/10
Slander by jules14 Rated: G [Reviews - 5]
Summary: An extremely silly oneshot. Faramir and Denethor come back from Mandos to take revenge on Peter Jackson.
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Boromir, Denethor, Faramir, Finduilas, Other
Genres: Humor
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2340 Read Count: 2068
Published: 06/08/07 Updated: 06/08/07 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: NessaMahtar Signed
Hahaha!!! That was HYSTERICAL. very wonderful. Bahahaha!!

Author's Response: Thanks.
Date: 07/23/10
Summary: Just a silly 5 line joke about Legolas and Aragorn
Categories: Off Topic Characters: Aragorn, Legolas
Genres: Humor
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 74 Read Count: 1841
Published: 09/27/07 Updated: 09/27/07 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Shampoo Reviewer: NessaMahtar Signed
Ah! I don't like prettyboy jokes, but this one was so true. I cracked up. xD

Author's Response: Glad it made you laugh! =D
Date: 07/26/10
Summary: A poem of Arwen, Luthien, and Elbereth Githoniel.
Categories: Book-verse Characters: None
Genres: Poetry
Warnings: None
Series: Three things were given to the Elves under the Sun: Poetry, Prose, and Song
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 64 Read Count: 4543
Published: 11/21/07 Updated: 11/21/07 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: NessaMahtar Signed
Very good.
Well written, and elvish sounding.
The exclamation points add to it very well, and it is short, yet very well written.
Well done! =)
Date: 07/05/10
Summary: She was born last of all, both in age and power. The weakest of the Ainur she was, yet to her Eru All Father had given the greatest gift : freedom.
Here is the story of Dia, the smallest of the Maļa and companion of Annatar, whose loyalty always dwelt only to men and ultimatly Iluvatar.
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Eru / Iluvatar, Feanor, Mķriel, Morgoth / Melkor, Namo / Mandos, Original Character, Sauron
Genres: General
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 8835 Read Count: 9164
Published: 01/31/08 Updated: 10/15/10 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 6: "You who have no task" Reviewer: NessaMahtar Signed
Wow. I just discovered this story, and it is beautiful! You have a gift with words, my dear. I look forward to more chapters about little Dia! Your writing lulls me into a dreamy state-- and I am there with Dia and Namo, and I see what is taking place. Very good job. One thing that I would suggest though is maybe slowing down a bit. Every chapter has so much packed into it, I feel as though you may benefit from slowing it down. But that is just me. Your story is wonderful, please keep writing!

Author's Response: I usually put far more narration and descriptions when I write in french, but I admit I tend to be lazier in english ; or, sometimes, I juste don't have the words to put more flesh around bones. I'll try to make more efforts concerning this, though : it will be a good exercize. Thanks for reading ^^
Date: 10/09/10
Title: Chapter 7: And what do I do now ? Reviewer: NessaMahtar Signed
Poor little Dia, out on her own on a quest.
I am anxious to see what happens next!

Author's Response: Either she kills Fėanaro in a fit or rage, or they make cookies \o/
Date: 10/13/10
Summary: Seeking peace in the sanctuary of Rivendell, a fallen warrior and a refugee of war find that their greatest demons are yet to be overcome.
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Celebrķan, Ecthelion, Elrond, Erestor, Glorfindel, Legolas
Genres: Angst, Drama, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 34224 Read Count: 16669
Published: 03/21/09 Updated: 08/24/10 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: A Step into the Shadow Reviewer: NessaMahtar Signed
The way you write makes it sound like poetry! So flowing and calm

Author's Response: Wow, thank you! I'm glad you like it - I've struggled a lot with this style in this story. ;) Hope to see you again in my later chapters! ;)
Date: 07/23/10
Summary: Again with the silly poetry.
Categories: Off Topic Characters: Legolas
Genres: Humor, Poetry
Warnings: None
Series: Lord of the Haikus
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11 Read Count: 1753
Published: 05/17/09 Updated: 05/17/09 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Legolas--A Haiku Reviewer: NessaMahtar Signed
Wait wait wait... Pippin... ATE it!?!?
Date: 09/04/10
Ever and Ever by Whisper Rated: R [Reviews - 57]
Summary: Rohan is withering under the weight of the war. Calahdra Medlinniel, however, is falling in love. A Shieldmaiden of Rohan, Calahdra is young, damaged, and driven by duty. Yet how could she give her life for her people when she suddenly has so much to live for?
Categories: Book-verse, Movie-verse Characters: Legolas
Genres: Romance
Warnings: Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 44 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 123142 Read Count: 48257
Published: 06/21/09 Updated: 01/14/11 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6: Drowning Reviewer: NessaMahtar Signed
This is absolutely beautiful. I love your writing style, which is absolutely perfect on all accounts. I especially love this chapter because it is not a typical romance, and yet I love it. If I could write half as well as this, I would consider myself blessed. I normally don't read more than one fanfiction chapter a day, but I am enthralled. Your writing is captivating, and I love your deep pure romance, intertwined with a satirical side, and all in all Calahdra. I love her, her being so much like myself. I am starting to ramble now, but I just wanted to say that you have a gift. This is pure art, and I love it. Thank you for sharing this with the rest of the world, it is what we all need.

Author's Response: Thank you very much! I am glad that Calahdra's tale has captured your attention :)
Date: 06/29/10
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7: Admissions Reviewer: NessaMahtar Signed
Another thing that I love about your writing is that you make it SO realistic! I can feel the blush on my skin, and my heart beating in my chest. I pretty much stay away from romance, but I am so glad I did not skip over this! Amazing. Amazing.
Date: 06/29/10
Forever is Dead by Whisper Rated: PG-13 [Reviews - 2]
Summary: The world is fading for the elves of Middle Earth. Their choices are to linger and perish or to begin life anew in a land far away. This is the story of two young elves who are given no choice. This is the story of those left behind.
Categories: Book-verse Characters: None
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1858 Read Count: 1306
Published: 08/14/09 Updated: 08/14/09 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: On the Horizon Part 1 Reviewer: NessaMahtar Signed
I haven't even grown attached to the characters yet, and already I feel a pang in my heart at the loss!

Amazingly powerful writing. Please continue writing this!

Author's Response: This, as stated in the first shapter, was a daydream that I really needed to get on paper. I have a whole plotline worked out, and I want to continue this fic. All I'm struggling for now is the time to continue all of the WIPs I already have. Lookng at all of them make me sad :( I'm hoping that once I wrap up Ever and Ever, I can work with some of these smaller fics. Thank you for the review! -Whisper
Date: 07/26/10
Summary: Somewhere you're watching me like the moon watches the land at night.
Categories: Off Topic Characters: Eowyn
Genres: Poetry, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 189 Read Count: 1285
Published: 08/30/09 Updated: 08/30/09 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: You're There, Somewhere Reviewer: NessaMahtar Signed
So beautiful.
The longing was made very visible through all the exclamations. She just wants someone to love her, someone to be her bulwark.
Very well done. I love Eowyn and your writings.

Author's Response: Thank you, that means so much to me!
Date: 08/10/10
Forgotten by Daewen Rated: G [Reviews - 4]
Summary: You forgot me. You left me here. You lied.
Categories: Off Topic Characters: Original Character
Genres: Hurt/Comfort, Poetry, Tragedy
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 104 Read Count: 1228
Published: 09/02/09 Updated: 09/02/09 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Forgotten Reviewer: NessaMahtar Signed
This reminds me of The Song of Nimrodel from The Fellowship. Was that the goal...? Because her love left on a ship and left her alone too. (Sorta)

Very well done though, whatever it was written based off of.

Author's Response: Actually, no it wasn't, but I did notice that once I posted it. I just felt abandoned at that point in time and it came out of that. Thanks for the review!
Date: 07/26/10
Grated Lemon Peels by Chiu Rated: PG-13 [Reviews - 5]
Summary: The worst (as of this publishing) way to start The Two Towers.
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Aragorn
Genres: Other
Warnings: None
Challenges: Bad Beginnings
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 105 Read Count: 1316
Published: 09/18/09 Updated: 09/18/09 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Grated Lemon Peels Reviewer: NessaMahtar Signed
Oh Aragorn speeding up that hill... Haha very funny, I laughed.
Date: 02/14/11
Autumn by Daewen Rated: G [Reviews - 4]
Summary: Legolas thinks
Categories: Off Topic, Book-verse, Movie-verse Characters: Legolas
Genres: Poetry, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 115 Read Count: 1370
Published: 09/27/09 Updated: 09/27/09 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Autumn Reviewer: NessaMahtar Signed
I read this aloud to mself (as I do with most poems) and I actually choked up at the end! Very very good. Well written and beautiful.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 07/10/10
Do You Realize? by Daewen Rated: G [Reviews - 3]
Summary: I want to let you know.
Categories: Off Topic Characters: Elladan, Original Character
Genres: Poetry, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 184 Read Count: 1265
Published: 09/27/09 Updated: 09/27/09 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Do You Realize? Reviewer: NessaMahtar Signed
This is so true and sad! I feel the same way so often! Very well done.

Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: 08/10/10
Finding Yourself by Daewen Rated: PG-13 [Reviews - 4]
Summary: It's the losing that's easy. The finding is what's difficult.
Categories: Movie-verse, Book-verse, Off Topic Characters: Erestor, Original Character
Genres: Friendship, Hurt/Comfort, Tragedy
Warnings: Torture, Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 158 Read Count: 1452
Published: 10/01/09 Updated: 10/01/09 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Finding Yourself Reviewer: NessaMahtar Signed
So powerful and so true! Amazing. Truly amazing. Well done, I love your poetry!

Author's Response: Thanks. I was going through a dark period and this came from it.
Date: 08/10/10
Nīn Óre (My Heart) by Mari Rated: PG-13 [Reviews - 14]
Summary: Suki is an average high school student where half her teachers like her and half don't. But what happens when a dark blue eyed boy with odd ears appears with other odd people?
Categories: Crossovers Characters: Aragorn, Arwen, Frodo, Gandalf / Olorin, Gimli, Legolas, Merry, Original Character, Pippin, Sam
Genres: Romance
Warnings: AU (alternate universe)
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 15107 Read Count: 8106
Published: 10/02/09 Updated: 09/14/10 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1-High School is so Much Fun Reviewer: NessaMahtar Signed
Very good. You have your own writing style that is unique to YOU, and I like that a lot. One critique I have found: I was really into the story... and then it stopped and there were no more chapters ='(( haha =)

Author's Response: Yeah I need to update. Thank you!! The next chapter should be up soon.
Date: 07/25/10