Soo well-written! G stories CAN be wonderful! Wow, it gives a lot more depth to Boromir's character and motivations and feelings. I thoroughly enjoyed this. Very very well done. I can see the darkness and the bodies through the eyes of someone who is trying to keep them all safe and protected. It makes Boromir fatherly to the hobbits, and I really love how you interpreted it like that. (What? I am rambling. In short-- great job. =))

AHH YOU STOPPED!?!?!?!?!?!?
NOOOOOOOO

Ah! I don't like prettyboy jokes, but this one was so true. I cracked up. xD

Author's Response: Glad it made you laugh! =D

Wow. I just discovered this story, and it is beautiful! You have a gift with words, my dear. I look forward to more chapters about little Dia! Your writing lulls me into a dreamy state-- and I am there with Dia and Namo, and I see what is taking place. Very good job. One thing that I would suggest though is maybe slowing down a bit. Every chapter has so much packed into it, I feel as though you may benefit from slowing it down. But that is just me. Your story is wonderful, please keep writing!

Author's Response: I usually put far more narration and descriptions when I write in french, but I admit I tend to be lazier in english ; or, sometimes, I juste don't have the words to put more flesh around bones. I'll try to make more efforts concerning this, though : it will be a good exercize. Thanks for reading ^^

The way you write makes it sound like poetry! So flowing and calm

Author's Response: Wow, thank you! I'm glad you like it - I've struggled a lot with this style in this story. ;) Hope to see you again in my later chapters! ;)

This is absolutely beautiful. I love your writing style, which is absolutely perfect on all accounts. I especially love this chapter because it is not a typical romance, and yet I love it. If I could write half as well as this, I would consider myself blessed. I normally don't read more than one fanfiction chapter a day, but I am enthralled. Your writing is captivating, and I love your deep pure romance, intertwined with a satirical side, and all in all Calahdra. I love her, her being so much like myself. I am starting to ramble now, but I just wanted to say that you have a gift. This is pure art, and I love it. Thank you for sharing this with the rest of the world, it is what we all need.

Author's Response: Thank you very much! I am glad that Calahdra's tale has captured your attention :)

I haven't even grown attached to the characters yet, and already I feel a pang in my heart at the loss!

Amazingly powerful writing. Please continue writing this!

Author's Response: This, as stated in the first shapter, was a daydream that I really needed to get on paper. I have a whole plotline worked out, and I want to continue this fic. All I'm struggling for now is the time to continue all of the WIPs I already have. Lookng at all of them make me sad :( I'm hoping that once I wrap up Ever and Ever, I can work with some of these smaller fics. Thank you for the review! -Whisper

This reminds me of The Song of Nimrodel from The Fellowship. Was that the goal...? Because her love left on a ship and left her alone too. (Sorta)

Very well done though, whatever it was written based off of.

Author's Response: Actually, no it wasn't, but I did notice that once I posted it. I just felt abandoned at that point in time and it came out of that. Thanks for the review!

I read this aloud to mself (as I do with most poems) and I actually choked up at the end! Very very good. Well written and beautiful.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

So powerful and so true! Amazing. Truly amazing. Well done, I love your poetry!

Author's Response: Thanks. I was going through a dark period and this came from it.