Soo well-written! G stories CAN be wonderful! Wow, it gives a lot more depth to Boromir's character and motivations and feelings. I thoroughly enjoyed this. Very very well done. I can see the darkness and the bodies through the eyes of someone who is trying to keep them all safe and protected. It makes Boromir fatherly to the hobbits, and I really love how you interpreted it like that. (What? I am rambling. In short-- great job. =))
This is THE best: The Gap of Rohan... PURE genius. I LOVE THIS.
AHH YOU STOPPED!?!?!?!?!?!?
Hahaha!!! That was HYSTERICAL. very wonderful. Bahahaha!!
Author's Response: Thanks.
Ah! I don't like prettyboy jokes, but this one was so true. I cracked up. xD
Author's Response: Glad it made you laugh! =D
Well written, and elvish sounding.
The exclamation points add to it very well, and it is short, yet very well written.
Well done! =)
Wow. I just discovered this story, and it is beautiful! You have a gift with words, my dear. I look forward to more chapters about little Dia! Your writing lulls me into a dreamy state-- and I am there with Dia and Namo, and I see what is taking place. Very good job. One thing that I would suggest though is maybe slowing down a bit. Every chapter has so much packed into it, I feel as though you may benefit from slowing it down. But that is just me. Your story is wonderful, please keep writing!
Author's Response: I usually put far more narration and descriptions when I write in french, but I admit I tend to be lazier in english ; or, sometimes, I juste don't have the words to put more flesh around bones. I'll try to make more efforts concerning this, though : it will be a good exercize. Thanks for reading ^^
Poor little Dia, out on her own on a quest.
I am anxious to see what happens next!
Author's Response: Either she kills Fëanaro in a fit or rage, or they make cookies \o/
The way you write makes it sound like poetry! So flowing and calm
Author's Response: Wow, thank you! I'm glad you like it - I've struggled a lot with this style in this story. ;) Hope to see you again in my later chapters! ;)
Wait wait wait... Pippin... ATE it!?!?
This is absolutely beautiful. I love your writing style, which is absolutely perfect on all accounts. I especially love this chapter because it is not a typical romance, and yet I love it. If I could write half as well as this, I would consider myself blessed. I normally don't read more than one fanfiction chapter a day, but I am enthralled. Your writing is captivating, and I love your deep pure romance, intertwined with a satirical side, and all in all Calahdra. I love her, her being so much like myself. I am starting to ramble now, but I just wanted to say that you have a gift. This is pure art, and I love it. Thank you for sharing this with the rest of the world, it is what we all need.
Author's Response: Thank you very much! I am glad that Calahdra's tale has captured your attention :)
Another thing that I love about your writing is that you make it SO realistic! I can feel the blush on my skin, and my heart beating in my chest. I pretty much stay away from romance, but I am so glad I did not skip over this! Amazing. Amazing.
I haven't even grown attached to the characters yet, and already I feel a pang in my heart at the loss!
Amazingly powerful writing. Please continue writing this!
Author's Response: This, as stated in the first shapter, was a daydream that I really needed to get on paper. I have a whole plotline worked out, and I want to continue this fic. All I'm struggling for now is the time to continue all of the WIPs I already have. Lookng at all of them make me sad :( I'm hoping that once I wrap up Ever and Ever, I can work with some of these smaller fics. Thank you for the review! -Whisper
The longing was made very visible through all the exclamations. She just wants someone to love her, someone to be her bulwark.
Very well done. I love Eowyn and your writings.
Author's Response: Thank you, that means so much to me!
This reminds me of The Song of Nimrodel from The Fellowship. Was that the goal...? Because her love left on a ship and left her alone too. (Sorta)
Very well done though, whatever it was written based off of.
Author's Response: Actually, no it wasn't, but I did notice that once I posted it. I just felt abandoned at that point in time and it came out of that. Thanks for the review!
Oh Aragorn speeding up that hill... Haha very funny, I laughed.
I read this aloud to mself (as I do with most poems) and I actually choked up at the end! Very very good. Well written and beautiful.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it.
This is so true and sad! I feel the same way so often! Very well done.
Author's Response: Thanks!
So powerful and so true! Amazing. Truly amazing. Well done, I love your poetry!
Author's Response: Thanks. I was going through a dark period and this came from it.
Very good. You have your own writing style that is unique to YOU, and I like that a lot. One critique I have found: I was really into the story... and then it stopped and there were no more chapters ='(( haha =)
Author's Response: Yeah I need to update. Thank you!! The next chapter should be up soon.