Reviews by NessaMahtar
Nîn Óre (My Heart) by Mari Rated: PG-13 [Reviews - 14]
Summary: Suki is an average high school student where half her teachers like her and half don't. But what happens when a dark blue eyed boy with odd ears appears with other odd people?
Categories: Crossovers Characters: Aragorn, Arwen, Frodo, Gandalf / Olorin, Gimli, Legolas, Merry, Original Character, Pippin, Sam
Genres: Romance
Warnings: AU (alternate universe)
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 15107 Read Count: 8238
Published: Oct 02 2009 Updated: Sep 14 2010 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9-Telling Legolas Reviewer: NessaMahtar Signed
Yay! Another chapter, and the tension has been resolved with a healthy dose of liplock.
Well done! I enjoy reading this story.

Author's Response: Thank you will have chapter 10 up soon hopefully. I already have the epilogue written out and have started on the sequel.
Date: Sep 14 2010
Sorrow Without Tears by Daewen Rated: PG-13 [Reviews - 2]
Summary: I cry, but not the way everyone else does.
Categories: Book-verse, Movie-verse, Off Topic Characters: Original Character
Genres: Poetry, Tragedy
Warnings: Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 150 Read Count: 1209
Published: Oct 03 2009 Updated: Oct 03 2009 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Sorrow Without Tears Reviewer: NessaMahtar Signed
Very powerful. I have no other words to describe it.

Author's Response: Thank you. That one is one of my favorites.
Date: Jul 10 2010
Blood on Snow by Daewen Rated: G [Reviews - 4]
Summary: This season's weather, so unpredictable;
It looks so much like blood on snow.
Categories: Movie-verse, Book-verse Characters: Original Character
Genres: Poetry
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 129 Read Count: 1324
Published: Oct 17 2009 Updated: Oct 17 2009 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Blood on Snow Reviewer: NessaMahtar Signed
So powerful!
I really love your work, it makes you think and makes you wonder, and can even make you cry.
Very well done.

Author's Response: Thank you so much. I've never gotten this many reviews in so little time. They mean a lot to me.
Date: Aug 10 2010
Summary: Shortly before the War of the Ring, a fledgling ranger prepares to depart from his family in Lebennin. Excerpted from a A View of Anórien, a work in progress, in response to Wind Rider’s 100 Prompts challenge #86: My Weapon’s Name.
Categories: Book-verse, Movie-verse Characters: Original Character
Genres: Friendship
Warnings: None
Challenges: 100 Prompts
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 875 Read Count: 1471
Published: Dec 04 2009 Updated: Dec 04 2009 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: The Ranger Departs Reviewer: NessaMahtar Signed
Very well written. It shows the sadness of parting, and a family's love.

Author's Response: Thank you, Nessa. This is just an excerpt from a story in progress, somewhat surreal, incorporating events from my own life adapted for Middle Earth. Several of the characters are real family members and friends.
Date: Jul 27 2010
Summary: From time to time we feel the need to say what's on our mind. This is my bit of advice.
Categories: Off Topic Characters: None
Genres: Essay
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1075 Read Count: 2090
Published: Jun 30 2010 Updated: Jun 30 2010 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: A Bit Of Advice Reviewer: NessaMahtar Signed
Yes, I really appreciate when you review mine =) it makes me feel like you care, and it honestly makes my day. You are the only one who has ever reviewed my story =)

Author's Response: I'm glad you agree. Hang in there. More will respond. Your story is out there now for anyone to read. As long as you are happy with it, that's all that matters.
Date: Jul 02 2010
Summary: Faramir defends his brother's memory after realizing that many citizens of Gondor are thinking ill of Boromir. Basically what I myself say to people who don't like Boromir because he attacked Frodo.
Categories: Book-verse, Movie-verse Characters: Boromir, Faramir
Genres: Drama, Family
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 978 Read Count: 883
Published: Jul 01 2010 Updated: Jul 01 2010 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: NessaMahtar Signed
I agree that Boromir was a true son of Gondor. It says that Faramir was more "kingly" (If I remember correctly...) but Boromir was more adept in skill and such. And it is very realistic that Faramir would write such a thing. Good ideas.

Author's Response: thanks so much! i'm glad you liked it!
Date: Jul 02 2010
Summary: A group of 9 girls gets sent to Middle-Earth. This is their story.
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Elladan, Elrohir, Elrond, Eru / Iluvatar, Faramir, Galadriel, Gandalf / Olorin, Glorfindel, Haldir, Legolas, Original Character, The Fellowship
Genres: Friendship, Romance
Warnings: AU (alternate universe)
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 634 Read Count: 1386
Published: Jul 05 2010 Updated: Jul 05 2010 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Prologue Reviewer: NessaMahtar Signed
This story has a lot of potential! I like the different characters, and how close they are, and how you seem to know each one.
The only issue that I can see possibly coming is that sice you know the characters so well, you just use them easily without proper introductions and such. The reader could easily get confused, since you just introduced them all at once. Could you maybe give a little background and give more depth about the characters for the reader to remember?
But I like it so far, and I will hopefully continue reading this! =)
Well done =)

Author's Response: Thank you very much. I will try to remember that.
Date: Jul 05 2010
Summary: When Arathorn returns to the North after having travelled abroad for many years, he doesn't know he is about to find the love of his life...
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Arathorn, Gilraen
Genres: Family, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 6636 Read Count: 6477
Published: Jul 08 2010 Updated: May 07 2011 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Home again Reviewer: NessaMahtar Signed
Very unique! I have never read a FanFiction about Arathorn before! Original, and it moves along nicely. Looking forward to Chapter two! =)
Date: Jul 08 2010
Title: Chapter 2: A fateful visit Reviewer: NessaMahtar Signed
I like the Tolkien-style you write in. Very matter-of-factly.
Date: Jul 10 2010
Title: Chapter 3: At first sight Reviewer: NessaMahtar Signed
Very good. I look forward to more chapters in the future! =)
Date: Jul 10 2010
Title: Chapter 4: Father and son Reviewer: NessaMahtar Signed
Very intriguing! Everyone has their own secrets and don't know about the other person.
What a good father Arador is!
Date: Jul 27 2010
Title: Chapter 5: A first approach Reviewer: NessaMahtar Signed
Ahh!! So cute!!
One thing though with your dialogue, each time there is a new person speaking it should be "entered"
For example your ending dialogue:
"Will I see you tomorrow?" he asked carefully, gathering his courage.

Gilraen raised an eyebrow and looked at him amusedly. "Will you and your father not have to visit some relatives tomorrow.

"Tomorrow morning", he confirmed. "Why can we not meet tomorrow afternoon?"

"That will hardly be possible", she answered sadly. "The whole settlement will see us."


All that UNLESS you wanted the dialogue to be like this for the style of the story, which I am all for, just try and make it a little less confusing when there are the back-and-forth confrontations such as the last paragraph.


but other than that- capital work! Very unique and fresh. Well done!
Date: Jul 27 2010
Summary: This is a story I submitted for a contest on a Harry Potter website. It's supposed to be the punishment you give to the rules that wizards broke. It's written in a formal letter form.
Categories: Other Movies Characters: None
Genres: Humor
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1223 Read Count: 1509
Published: Jul 09 2010 Updated: Jul 09 2010 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Breaking the Rule Reviewer: NessaMahtar Signed
HP Fanfiction on a LotR site? My two favorite things in one place? I can live with this...
It was vey amusing to read.
Date: Feb 14 2011
Untitled by Daisy Baggins Rated: PG [Reviews - 1]
Summary: Waht happens when there's a meeting of the LOTR Fan Club,and a 'Special Guest' shows up?Who is this special guest?What will happen when one girl finds friendship,and maybe,Romance?
Categories: Actor Fics Characters: Elijah Wood
Genres: Romance
Warnings: AU (alternate universe)
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 298 Read Count: 1185
Published: Jul 26 2010 Updated: Jul 26 2010 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: In which the author can't think of a good chapter name,so just puts this. Reviewer: NessaMahtar Signed
Ah! I love Elijah Wood! Man, I wish this happened to me!!

Author's Response: :) So that means you going to read it??
Date: Jul 26 2010
Summary: A response to the challenge, A drabble to the Mummers Dance by Lisse. Subject in question : Elrond/Celebrian
Categories: Off Topic Characters: Celebrían, Elrond
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 100 Read Count: 1257
Published: Aug 10 2010 Updated: Aug 10 2010 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Impatient Dance Reviewer: NessaMahtar Signed
Very well done first drabble. I would not be able to guess it was a first try. Good job!
Date: Feb 14 2011
Reflections by luthien85 Rated: G [Reviews - 6]
Summary: A response to the challenge, An honest moment with your character by Lisse. Character in question : Haldir/Calavene
Categories: Movie-verse, Off Topic Characters: Haldir
Genres: Hurt/Comfort
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 267 Read Count: 1030
Published: Aug 10 2010 Updated: Aug 10 2010 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Reflections Reviewer: NessaMahtar Signed
Very honest and touching. Very well written!

Author's Response: Thank you so much :)
Date: Aug 10 2010
Summary: An ellon thinks.
Categories: Book-verse, Movie-verse Characters: Elladan, Original Character
Genres: Romance, Tragedy
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 214 Read Count: 1588
Published: Aug 10 2010 Updated: Aug 10 2010 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Thoughts Upon Watching You Leave Me Reviewer: NessaMahtar Signed
This is so beautiful!
"You were born to be free."
Wonderful job, like all of your work.

Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: Aug 10 2010
First Encounters by DarkMaiden Rated: PG-13 [Reviews - 1]
Summary: Twins Aranna and Arwen have their first encounter with Orcs. One ends up in the healing ward.
Categories: Book-verse, Movie-verse Characters: Arwen, Elrond, Glorfindel, Original Character
Genres: Drama, Family, General, Hurt/Comfort
Warnings: AU (alternate universe)
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1109 Read Count: 904
Published: Aug 29 2010 Updated: Aug 29 2010 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: NessaMahtar Signed
Welcome to LotrFanFiction! That story was very nicely written! Will there be more stories following about Aranna?

Author's Response: Thanks for the welcome! I was nervous about posting here. In the future. I'm juggling between two universes, so I have to keep them straight.
Date: Aug 30 2010