Very well done first drabble. I would not be able to guess it was a first try. Good job!
Very honest and touching. Very well written!
Author's Response: Thank you so much :)
This is so beautiful!
"You were born to be free."
Wonderful job, like all of your work.
Author's Response: Thanks!
I really liked this. First of all, it showed Namo as an actual person, instead of just the place of the dead, Mandos. It gave him a personality and thoughts and feelings. Very well done and thank you =)
Author's Response: The Valar are difficult to peg for me. Thanks so much lovely. I'm working on more. Hugs Lisse
Very amazing and powerful! Eru is all-knowing, and God. He is merciful and kind, but the other Valar are not as perfect... I love her anger. Very well portrayed!
Author's Response: Thanks Nessa. I think the torture Elves must have endured to morph to orcs one of the greatest crimes and if the Valar loved the elves this must have grieved them greatly.
Welcome to LotrFanFiction! That story was very nicely written! Will there be more stories following about Aranna?
Author's Response: Thanks for the welcome! I was nervous about posting here. In the future. I'm juggling between two universes, so I have to keep them straight.