I'm partial to Glorfindel/Erestor stories and i find this one a delight.
So much tension!
I almost feel like clonking them both over the head with a book and shouting "bloody hell just tell each other how you feel!"
well written i think and you actually have good grammer :)
I have a massive smile on my face now. hee that was random and funny :) i really like it
Author's Response: Thanks, Caunedhiel, for reading and reviewing. I'm delighted that you enjoyed the story so much and very much appreciate the kind feedback. Thanks again.
ha, that is just childishly, amazing, random nonsence
but it works :)
Author's Response: Thank you very much! It was rather fun to write too, as I recall.
I like this. It's very tolkienesque (if that's even a word) in the way its written. And its nice that characters that don't get as much attentions as others are being explored
Please update soon!! :)
Author's Response: Thanks Caunedhiel! This is actually my first attempt to write. I'll try to update as soon as I can!
I have to say I love your Sauron :) and your witch-king they are both very amusing and completely evil :)
hmm... I wonder how Aule will re-act when he opens his door to find Sauron standing on the doorstep, so to speak?
Please update soon, cant wait for more!!
Just a quick suggestion, you might want to make more spaces in your text as it is difficult to read on a computer and hurts the eyes.