I love your story very much. Unfortunately i just learn english, so i can understand it hardly, but my dictionary is very useful :P I really like how you discribe the two brothers feelings and their thoughts, we can easily understand how they feel. I cannot wait to read the next chapter :))
Author's Response: Oh, thank you, Cirinde! It is a great encouragement to me to know the next chapter is being waited for :) What is your native language, by the way? You know, English is not my mother-tongue either :) And I also have a friend who pretty much learned Eglish by reading fanfiction, it can give some really good practice. Once again, thanks for your kind words!