Hey what happened? How come you stopped with the funny where is the rest of the funny!? D: please continue with your drabble ramdomness it was making me laugh!
Too cute, seriously!!
Ah! What a wonderful and exciting chapter! And it ends with a cliff hanger no less lol, hope to see more of this grand story soon :) You have me on pins and needles! X3
Oh gosh you have me sooo hooked!! I love the way you make your characters more believable and "human" lol I know that sounds odd seeing as they are not humans XD but I guess in the eyes of us mortals yeah. Your writing style is truly unique and I can say for SURE I have not seen anything that comes close to it! Love Love LOVE it!! Your character Kelly Day, is an absolute delight! And even though she gives attitude to everyone around her, but really that's what makes her so....charming XD and so lively. Truly, I think its her attitude towards things that makes this whole scenario and the other characters so very interesting and truly unique :) Looking forward to another update! Please do continue with this amazing story of yours!!
This is truly a work of art!! Aside from the minute typo's this story is wonderful and beautiful the way it's written, the 1st chapter was my favorite! You can feel the Elf's joy, sadness and love for life in every word. Keep up the great work! :)
Author's Response: Thanks :) i'm actually currently re-writing the story, so I hope you like he new version when I post it (minus typos) Thanks for the review Caunedhiel