Ok, well I havn't read much of this, But i really enjoyed the interaction with Glorfindel. combines modern literary dialogue of grilling the captive/enemy for information with the awesome history of Middle Earth. Great Job! I hope to read more.
Author's Response: Thanks!
Great story and writing, again.
Loving the whole idea that Khamul is actually shaping the whole history of Middle Earth, makes for some interesting moments!
One thing, and i am going to sound like a total nerd/jerk/whatever for saying this, but the Eotheod moved into the area of Angmar in the reign of Earnil II, meaning the same period of time that Angmar was defeated. But that is really only a technicality, so i really wouldn't worry about it. only nerds/jerks/whatevers like me would notice haha!
Author's Response: Thank you! And thanks for the correction! I changed the little 'history' footnote accordingly. Please let me know if there are any other technicalities! Glad you're enjoying it!