So very sexy and hot. Love it.
A ring can represent practically anything. Undying love, a silent promise, real friendship, commitment, but also nobility, worship or faith. There are rings that symbolize dependence, enslavement, eternity, and apparently there is one that stands for all that’s evil in this world. But let’s not forget a ring is nothing more than a piece of metal that fits nicely around a finger. It doesn’t even have to be pretty.
So don’t ask me why I ended up risking my life, going on this quest to destroy one. I mean, you can’t really blame me for getting caught up in things I don’t even believe in, right?
Be warned: this is a tenth walker fic and English is my second language. It’s possible you’ll hate this story, but don’t forget you’re not legally obliged to do so. And seriously, I really like readers and absolutely love reviewers.
Truly, this is the best 10th walker story I have ever read. There is so much good to say I would have to use each review box for each chapter. She was so real and the romance development so subtle. I know english is not your first language and there were times it was apparent, but it was completely overlooked by your storytelling. Again, great story! I am a fan!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your kind review! I'm so glad you enjoyed reading it. As you know I'm currently rewriting this story on Faerie. If you feel like it, keep track of it and feel free to tell me if the changes are for better of for worse. I'll keep working on improving my English
Lovely! Just wonderful. I can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Nice to meet you AmberRoseEm. So happy you are enjoying the story. More on it's way soon.
This is definitely not what I expected, but that is a good thing! I look forward to the conclusion.
Author's Response: I hope you will not be disappointed. Nice to hear from you again.
It is a short start so I'll be looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: It's so nice to see you have joined in for another adventure. Yes, it was a short chapter, but trust me, there is much more to come. It's difficult to review at such an early stage. Thanks for reading.
I'm a little confused by this chapter, it feels rushed within it compared to the timeline of the movie. I thought the beacons were lit before Denethor brought Faramir to be burned. If she arrived at that point wouldn't there be a huge army out front? I was otherwise able to follow her story and I'm glad she found her hope. Until the last chapter I wasn't sure where she would ultimately end up in the battle!
Author's Response: I may have changed it a bit just to get it to fit a little better. I'm following the basics of the movie but not strictly. I needed to get her there after Gandalf but with the purpose of meeting Denethor. Having her trying to intervene with the burning of Faramir needed to happpen in order for her to be thrown in jail. Like I said, I'm not following too close on the timeline, but we all get the general idea.
I look forward to the next update! I'm trying to figure out where you're going with this and I can't! Which is great!
Author's Response: I love it. This is just what I have tried to aim for. You couldn't have reviewed at a better time, when I was beginning to doubt myself. Thank you.
Another great chapter! It seems Rhavaniel has learned to pick her battles here.
Author's Response: Yes, I think you are right. She knows when to fight and when to keep her cool. And right now she is about to come to a crossroad. Thanks for reading.
Ah I see you have brought the love (or is it lust!) of Haldir into the mix. I wonder who she will choose...
Author's Response: Hi Amber. I guess I am partial to the naughty Haldir. He's good for stirring up the mix. As for Rhav, her discoveries may not leave her much choice.
Wow. That was *amazing*. The chemistry between Rhavaniel and Haldir is palpable. I wonder what will happen when Legolas shows up...
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Things might get difficult when Legi gets there. How could it not?
Again twisting your wonderful tale in ways I don't expect. I'm anxious to see where you go next.
Author's Response: I try to write my stories the way a drunk person walks, never in a straight line, LOL. So glad you are still with me and enjoying.
Love it! Consider me a loyal fan!
Author's Response: So nice to hear from you again Amber. I'm glad to keep you entertained. Thank you so much for following along with my stories. As usual, more tales on the way.
Oh you and your cliffhangers! I loved the interaction between Terrwyn and Legolas.
Author's Response: Thanks. Legolas is always so wonderful to write for, but in this, I can let him be himself without Rhav interfering.
Yay! I'm so excited for another of your stories! I'm very interested so far and I'll be watching for updates.
Author's Response: Hello again AmberRoseEm. It is so nice to see you again and I'm very happy to have you along on another adventure. As you can see, I'm trying something different here. I was a little worried about people responding to a story like this, so it is nice to see a familiar face/reviewer. I truly hope I don't disappoint.
I'm playing catch up with the past few chapters. Her attack wasn't unexpected but the end result was to me. I'm looking forward to more chapters!
Author's Response: Thank you for following along. There are many more chapters to come. I'm always glad to see a review from you. I originally had many worse things happen to Terrwyn, but I just didn't feel right about it. The end result here was how it had to be and I'm happy your were still surprised. More to come.
No reviews yet? I will be the first then. This is great! I'm not usually a fan of first person but this is better than I usually find. I'll be following along for updates.
Author's Response: Thanks very much :) Just one more update to do I'm afraid - but I hope you really like the ending I've thought up. The ending came to me first, it inspired me to write the story and my whole thing has been leading up to it thanks :) Caunedhiel xxx
Hm, I am interested in reading more. Please update soon!
Wooohooo awesome add on! It got dangerous for a few moments there but what a happy ending! :)
Author's Response: Thanks Amber. I guess it could have gotten quite dangerous, especially with Rhav taking the lead, lol. Glad you liked this and remember, Legolas still has to get his revenge *wink wink*.