Penname: Masked [Contact] Real name: Renae
Member Since: 12/11/10
Membership status: Member
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Hi. I'm me and I usually like villains.
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Summary: During the journey through Moria, one of Pippin's pranks has a strangely fortuitous outcome.
Categories: Movie-verse
Characters: Aragorn, Boromir, Frodo, Gandalf / Olorin, Gimli, Legolas, Merry, Pippin
Genres: Drama, Humor
Warnings: AU (alternate universe)
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2284 Read Count: 2597
[Report This] Published: 05/06/08 Updated: 05/06/08
Reviewer: Masked Signed
Date: 07/12/10 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Tee hee hee. Loved the last line. :)

Summary: A poem on eowyn's thoughts throughout the two towers and return of the king.
Categories: Book-verse, Movie-verse
Characters: Eowyn
Genres: Poetry
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1260 Read Count: 1346
[Report This] Published: 01/09/08 Updated: 01/09/08
Reviewer: Masked Signed
Date: 03/12/10 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I loved the story aspect of Eowyn's thoughts- "fearing Grima's caress":)- but I think the poetry aspect could be better if you structured it. I loved it anyway, and the last part- so sweet.

Author's Response: hey thanks for the review, glad you liked it. can you explain the structure bit of your comment, any more hints as this was my first poem and i want to improve. ta again x

Reviewer: Masked Signed
Date: 05/12/10 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

At first I thought it could be better structured (by "structured", I meant with a rhyme scheme), but reading it again, I think it's better in free verse. It stays in touch with the story and Eowyn's emotions better this way. The only way I can think of that you might improve it is edit the parts that seem forced. This felt somewhat forced to me: "We had seen evidence of the plundering, burning and destroying and we all hoped desperately our men would be returning.
Even then my thoughts were churning.
The idea forming both exhilarating and concerning."
but a lot of the rhymes were really good: "I thrust my faithful sword and my aim is true.
His reign is ended but as my eyes darken it seems my life is too." is one example.

Author's Response: thanks for the more indepth feedback, i'm grateful for the hints and glad you like most of the poem. i'll take your advice into account when writing more poetry in the future. x elfenears

Summary: Nine rings in hand, Sauron travels Middle-Earth, searching for the nine who would become the most feared of his servants.
After six of the Nazgul are assembled, Sauron and his most trusted arrive in Numenor to rot the heart of Middle-Earth's most proud realm, all the while looking for the last three to complete the Nine Riders.
Categories: Book-verse
Characters: Anarion, Cirdan, Elendil, Elrond, Gil-Galad, Isildur, Míriel, Morgoth / Melkor, Nazgűl, Oropher, Other Canon Character, Sauron, Witch King
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 51526 Read Count: 32437
[Report This] Published: 03/01/10 Updated: 10/02/10
Reviewer: Masked Signed
Date: 09/12/10 Title: Chapter 1: Khamul

I really like your characters. :D
I haven't read the complete story yet, though.

Summary: a new evil sprouts from the seeds of the old! follow the mouth of sauron's career as third Dark Lord from the day he was first called so to the very end.
Categories: Book-verse
Characters: Mouth of Sauron, Sauron
Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama, Fantasy
Warnings: AU (alternate universe)
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 593 Read Count: 1111
[Report This] Published: 19/03/10 Updated: 19/03/10
Reviewer: Masked Signed
Date: 13/11/10 Title: Chapter 1: The New Evil begins

I think this will be really good. I'm a fan of the Mouth.

Summary: The Witch-king of Angmar's loyalty to Sauron surpasses that of a faithful servant; he is utterly devoted to his Master. Begins within the Two Towers timeline.
Categories: Movie-verse, Lord of the Rings Slash
Characters: Sauron, Witch King
Genres: Romance
Warnings: AU (alternate universe), Character Death, First Draft, Slash (same sex pairing), Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4662 Read Count: 2532
[Report This] Published: 27/09/10 Updated: 08/12/10
Reviewer: Masked Signed
Date: 09/12/10 Title: Chapter 1: Dead Marshes

Love this AU. Particularly love your portrayal of the Witch-King.=)

Author's Response: Thank you. I love the Witch-king, he's just such an interesting character with plenty of scope for interpretation, this story has just been begging to be written.

Summary: Merry, Pippin and my new hobbit character: Dongal.the three hobbits are going to steal some vegetables from Famer Maggot's crop but something unexpected happens.
Categories: Book-verse
Characters: None
Genres: Drama
Warnings: First Draft
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 604 Read Count: 932
[Report This] Published: 05/12/10 Updated: 05/12/10
Reviewer: Masked Signed
Date: 05/12/10 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Interesting insight on what it would be like to be a young hobbit. Good job.

Author's Response: Thank you for the review. I Enjoyed writing it and am delighted you njoyed reading it ! R o B x D

Summary: Aragorn comes across something sinister that must be gotten rid of!
Categories: Book-verse
Characters: Aragorn
Genres: Action/Adventure
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1068 Read Count: 1077
[Report This] Published: 07/12/10 Updated: 07/12/10
Reviewer: Masked Signed
Date: 09/12/10 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Like it, very well-written battle. And detailed: "Blood sprayed all over the ground." =)
The one thing you could improve on is spacing out the paragraphs. It would be easier to read that way.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I will space it more which hopefully will make it easier to read !

Summary: Ever since Frodo had destroyed the Ring, he fell into a coma for 7 years. Now, the Fellowship gathers again, including Arwen, at Rivendell, where Frodo lies. The elves have predicted his last breath will be today. Will this be the big moment?...
Categories: Movie-verse
Characters: Arwen
Genres: Romance
Warnings: Character Death
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 498 Read Count: 771
[Report This] Published: 23/12/10 Updated: 23/12/10
Reviewer: Masked Signed
Date: 04/01/11 Title: Chapter 1: The Last Breath

Good story... but sad. Very unique. =)

One by frodo_luv Rated: PG [Reviews - 3]
Summary: Annabelle Bracegirdle has known Frodo, Sam, Merry, and Pippin almost all her life. But now as the quest for the One Ring arises, things begin to change...
Categories: Movie-verse
Characters: Original Character, The Fellowship
Genres: Humor, Romance
Warnings: First Draft
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 14294 Read Count: 4802
[Report This] Published: 27/12/10 Updated: 25/01/11
Reviewer: Masked Signed
Date: 02/01/11 Title: Chapter 1: The Party

I'm liking this; I haven't read it all yet, though, but I intend to. Cute story. =)

Reviewer: Masked Signed
Date: 05/01/11 Title: Chapter 1: The Party

Merry and Poppin are hilarious. Good action, too. And I'm liking the Frodo/Annabelle/Legolas triangle. =)

Author's Response: thanks! i still don't know who Annabelle will choose because Legolas is the good-looking, immortal elf, but she's known Frodo longer and he's pretty much her best friend. decisions, decisions...

Summary: Another dark adventure lies before Frodo and the Fellowship against the Mouth of Sauron and the remnants of Saurons army
Categories: Book-verse
Characters: Frodo
Genres: Action/Adventure
Warnings: Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1355 Read Count: 3389
[Report This] Published: 04/01/11 Updated: 18/03/11
Reviewer: Masked Signed
Date: 05/01/11 Title: Chapter 1: the voyage

I think this will be a good story. The undying lands are interesting.