Reviews by EldarinPrincess
Summary: We all know what happens to Gandalf during the books, but what were his secret thoughts? Read Gandalf's secret diary during his last 20 years in Middle Earth.
Categories: Book-verse, Movie-verse Characters: Aragorn, Arwen, Bilbo, Frodo, Galadriel, Gandalf / Olorin, Gimli, Gollum, Legolas, Manwe, Merry, Pippin, Sam, Sméagol, The Fellowship, Théoden
Genres: Action/Adventure, Fantasy, Humor
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6491 Read Count: 7094
Published: Jul 06 2008 Updated: May 22 2015 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Laughter Floating Over My Shoulder Reviewer: EldarinPrincess Signed
I love this!
Date: Nov 24 2010
Title: Chapter 2: Giving It Up Reviewer: EldarinPrincess Signed
"rest in peace on my little island"--perfect
Date: Nov 24 2010
Summary: This is a poem that I wrote to get some grief out of my system after a very long hard school year.
Categories: Off Topic Characters: None
Genres: Poetry
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 178 Read Count: 1146
Published: May 16 2009 Updated: May 16 2009 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: EldarinPrincess Signed
I sense the deeper emotions at play here. I hope you were able to come to some sort of peace. This was well done. Thanks for sharing.
Date: Jul 09 2011
Summary: A series of lists, of things that only the really insane lord of the rings fan would do.
Categories: Off Topic Characters: None
Genres: Humor
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1323 Read Count: 8936
Published: May 26 2009 Updated: Jul 06 2009 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: The Basics Reviewer: EldarinPrincess Signed
This was brilliant; thanks for posting :)
Date: Jun 08 2011
Dangerous Business by Anwyn Rated: PG-13 [Reviews - 15]
Summary: It is a Dangerous Business, writing Fanfiction, If you don't keep your feet there is no telling where you might be swept off to.
Categories: Off Topic Characters: Elphir, Original Character
Genres: Humor
Warnings: AU (alternate universe)
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 38783 Read Count: 15808
Published: Dec 02 2009 Updated: Mar 05 2011 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: This was definately NOT in my horoscope for today Reviewer: EldarinPrincess Signed
giant hamsters in clown suits
Date: Jan 12 2011
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Small Possessions Reviewer: EldarinPrincess Signed
the great mysterious tampon...love it

Author's Response: To this day such a thing still remains an uncomfortable mystery to most men!
Date: Jan 12 2011
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: From bad, to strange to...simply alright. Reviewer: EldarinPrincess Signed
loved the bit about her wearing the dress; it's so true that in most of the mary sue stories of middle-earth whatever clothing the girls are given they are able to fit into without problems, and it seems always so natural to them.

Author's Response: Yes, exactly I have noticed that when a character, usually female, shows up and needs a new set of clothes there is always a gown or dress that just happens to be laying around and not only fits her perfectly but she looks absolutely beautiful and turns the head of the nearest male of course! While I don't imagine in Middle Earth typical fashion would have been tight and fitted but more loose and flowing that still does not mean everything there is 'One size fits all'
Date: Jan 12 2011
Summary: Lothiriel fondly recalls the first time she saw Eomer's...
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Eomer, Lothiriel
Genres: Humor
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1322 Read Count: 1847
Published: Jun 22 2010 Updated: Jun 22 2010 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: EldarinPrincess Signed
Lovely :)
Date: May 06 2011
Summary: From time to time we feel the need to say what's on our mind. This is my bit of advice.
Categories: Off Topic Characters: None
Genres: Essay
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1075 Read Count: 2054
Published: Jun 30 2010 Updated: Jun 30 2010 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: A Bit Of Advice Reviewer: EldarinPrincess Signed
Thank you for posting this, on behalf of writers and reviewers, especially since you are both yourself! It is important for the reviewer to leave an objective commentary about what they just read, otherwise how else can the author know what they are writing is worth the while?

Author's Response: Everyone likes to know if they're doing a good job or not and reviews do just that. They boost our confidence and sometimes make us better writers. Sometimes friendships are born just because someone decided to leave feedback. You never know what will happen just by pressing that little button at the end of every story. Thank you for agreeing and for sharing your talent and your opinions. That's what it's all about.
Date: Nov 25 2010
Magic Man by L8Bleumr Rated: R [Reviews - 120]
Summary: COMPLETE - Do you ever wonder about the elusive strangers that help us in our most desperate time of need? Where do they come from and where do they disappear to? This is my story of one such stranger who turns out to be anything but. Rated R for Adult situations.
Categories: Off Topic Characters: Legolas, Original Character, Thranduil
Genres: Friendship, Romance
Warnings: AU (alternate universe)
Series: None
Chapters: 41 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 75473 Read Count: 40273
Published: Sep 08 2010 Updated: Nov 02 2010 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Reviewer: EldarinPrincess Signed
As long as you leave the wildlife alone and don’t litter, I don’t see any reason you can’t hang around here--so precious :)

Author's Response: Thanks for reading this. Yes, our girl has a sense of humor. Hope you find this entertaining.
Date: Nov 26 2010
Thrill of the Chase by L8Bleumr Rated: NC-17 [Reviews - 10]
Summary: War is over, evil's been destroyed and Thranduil is on the hunt. It is the Fourth Age and the King needs something to occupy his time since there are no more spiders to hunt. He has set his eyes on a new victim, but this one will prove to be quite a challenge.
Categories: Off Topic Characters: Original Character, Thranduil
Genres: Fantasy, Romance
Warnings: Graphic Sex
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 13487 Read Count: 6452
Published: Oct 05 2010 Updated: Oct 09 2010 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: The Chase Reviewer: EldarinPrincess Signed
There is a reason Thranduil is not mentioned in Tolkien's work; you have hit upon it directly.

Author's Response: I cannot help but picture him like this. It must be good to be the king.
Date: Nov 26 2010
Title: Chapter 5: The Final Battle Reviewer: EldarinPrincess Signed
Oh boy....I think I discovered a renewable heat supply for the winter! It was beautifully written, and the musical inspiration was perfect!

Author's Response: I like your sense of humor. I owe the music to ladyjane. She gave me the inspiration to write this piece. There are so many songs that spark the imagination, very elvish in nature. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing this. It's nice to know there's another Thranduil enthusiast out there.
Date: Nov 29 2010
Taming The Wild by L8Bleumr Rated: NC-17 [Reviews - 153]
Summary: *COMPLETE* She was born with only one purpose, to fight. But when Legolas tries to harness her, she finds it difficult to submit for the sake of their love. She must stay true to her namesake. Rated for explicite adult (het) situations.
Categories: Book-verse, Movie-verse Characters: Haldir, Legolas, Original Character, Orophin, Rúmil, The Fellowship, Thranduil
Genres: Action/Adventure, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort, Romance
Warnings: Character Death, Graphic Sex, Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 118739 Read Count: 70073
Published: Nov 05 2010 Updated: Mar 21 2011 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 33: Foresight Reviewer: EldarinPrincess Signed
I always wonder what I would do if someone gave me a premonition of my future; I think it's best that I don't know. And here Legolas is faced with the very thing. He is very sweet in his message to Rhav. I wonder how he will feel when he sees her in Gondor.

Author's Response: I for one would not want to know. I deal better if I don't know as apposed to knowing and sweating it. And Galadriel's warning was kind of vague. It could have meant just about anything. So now begins a change in these two lovers.
Date: Feb 21 2011
Title: Chapter 31: Severed Bond Reviewer: EldarinPrincess Signed
Haldir's death was very saddening. I like at the very end how he slips in that he loves Rhav, could be his last laugh eh? Because she can't really follow him now. Legolas' hurt at her not taking comfort in his arms is understandable, but right now Rhav is in a mess. Hopefully she can fix her wrongs with the Prince. Like how you summarized the battle nicely.

Author's Response: Yes, you could say that. Haldir got the last word in. And she would never admit to it (and would kick my butt for saying this) but I think she had feelings for him, somewhere buried deep. Though I would not call it love. And Rhav could not have gone to Legolas. He is a part of her mess as you say. Only Antien can comfort her right now.
Date: Feb 21 2011
Title: Chapter 32: Stolen Moments Reviewer: EldarinPrincess Signed
LMAO (laughing my ass off)!!! How utterly awkward that moment was to the two friends! And Antien is a fiesty Elf who I still love dearly! How they can go on seeing each other without that scene going through their minds is going to be tough. Nice distraction for Rhav though. And the scene with her and Legolas is touching. He is still so amiable towards her, and she remains somewhat reserved. But a good start for them both.

Author's Response: I'm glad you got a kick out of this. Think of all the laughs those two will have over the years. "Hey Rhav, remember when you grabbed my..." "You know you liked it Antien." Antien is fiesty and if you want a good read, please check out the author 'aur'. She has written a piece for my two favorite oc's. It is perfectly Antien/Glandur. She is a very good friend and has done justice to these two. It's called 'A day or so in the life of Antien and Glandur'.
Date: Feb 21 2011
Title: Chapter 1: Not This Day Reviewer: EldarinPrincess Signed
I enjoyed the chapter despite its short length. I can't wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response: Nice to meet you Eldarin Princess. I hope you enjoy this tale. Chapters will not always be this short and knowing my history, there will be plenty more.
Date: Nov 24 2010
Title: Chapter 11: The Prince's Best Day Reviewer: EldarinPrincess Signed
Seems they are destined to be with each other. And I love the character of Antien. Hope to see more of him in the future.

Author's Response: Thanks for this. I have never included slash in any of my stories and was worried about how my het readers would feel, which is why I only mention it in passing. But as for this tale, I think it is best I concentrate mainly on him being Rhav's best friend. He will have more scenes in the future though.
Date: Nov 27 2010
Title: Chapter 12: Letting Go Reviewer: EldarinPrincess Signed
It's hard for someone who has been pressed into a certain role to forget what it is they truly want. And for Legolas to insist she remain locked up, that is cruel indeed. But how can he understand? The roles of elleth and ellon always will remain. Rhavaniel is brave to swallow her pride and dreams and have gone on with her father's wishes. In this current day and age of self wishes, the small act of compromise is what truly saves the day, but what is now lost and forgotten. Wow, the last sentence came out too philosophical than intended.

I really enjoyed this chapter. :)

Author's Response: I think Legolas is just now realizing that there is more than friendship and desire for Rhav. He's falling in love and only wants to protect her, forgetting the fact that she can manage quite well on her own. She senses this and it's just a reminder of how the males want to suppress the females, not intensionally but out of love. It's a very fine line. She is also discovering something about herself. She is a born warrior and craves the kill. This new revelation is going to fuel her need to fight and cause havoc in the future. But for now she's doing what she thinks is right and putting aside her own wants. Thanks again for reading and the kind review.
Date: Nov 30 2010
Title: Chapter 13: A Begetting Day To Remember Reviewer: EldarinPrincess Signed
They admitted their love, hooray.

Author's Response: Thanks. Some *ahem* (as we like to call it) on it's way.
Date: Dec 03 2010
Title: Chapter 14: When Hearts Collide Reviewer: EldarinPrincess Signed
This was a great chapter. Rhav's uncertainties are still there, even though she thoroughly enjoyed the experience. And Legolas' embarassment was adoring, as well as his concern for his lady. Thank you for your description of this Prince.

Author's Response: I just had to make him have this awkward moment. It is their first time and it is not perfect as some might make it out to be. Besides, think of all the practice they will need. *wink wink*
Date: Dec 05 2010
Title: Chapter 15: The Prisoner Reviewer: EldarinPrincess Signed
I wasn't prepared for Gollum, how exciting! He definitely is one you pity at first glance without knowing his truly devious nature; I think of schizophrenics when I hear his name. And the fact that the Elves were kind to him is how he really escaped.

Glad that Rhav got her wish, though sadly with a rather disheartening price. At least Legolas was there. And Antien, I am in love with him. :)

Author's Response: I threw Gollum in for a time line and I needed to get Rhav out of the castle. Got your back Rhav. She's gonna fight if it's the last thing I do. Your support for Antien is wonderful. He was a character I just threw in at first and I didn't give him much thought. But he seems to be making a good impression and he's grown on me too. I actually rewrote this chapter. I was going to have him die in this scene, further pushing Rhav to lead a warrior life. It never did sit right with me and I decided to keep him. I might write him his own piece about how he meets Glandur. Don't know. We'll see. Thanks so much for supporting my story. We writers gotta stick together.
Date: Dec 07 2010
Title: Chapter 16: Misfortune Reviewer: EldarinPrincess Signed
It was bound to happen. Her vivacity is too much for her father and Legolas to handle out of their love and concern. And now that she has been wounded, and could have died, or taken by the Orcs (a far worse fate than death) all the hidden agendas come out. It is too bad that marriage pushed that way seems to her father to be the solution, and out of love for her Legolas feels the same. I just hope Rhav finds what she needs.

Author's Response: She is strong and will pull through. It is like the straw that broke the camels back and she just needs a little push. As you said, her father and Legolas only do this because they love her so much. But she needs to find out what she's made of. I'm so glad you get this. No woman should be held back and she's gonna find her way.
Date: Dec 10 2010
Title: Chapter 17: Love and Duty Reviewer: EldarinPrincess Signed
Great chapter. I just actually watched FotR and the Council scene reminded me that I didn't review, so here I am :)

Author's Response: Glad you're here and still enjoying it. You know, I haven't watched the movies in a long time. You mentioning it makes me want to go back and watch 'em again.
Date: Dec 13 2010
Title: Chapter 18: Choices Reviewer: EldarinPrincess Signed
I can't imagine how it feels to know the one you love may never return, and to feel both encouragement and anxiety at the same time is hard. Understandably they would want to spend their last night together in a memorable way.

As for Rhav, seeing Frodo step up boldly as Ring-bearer certainly made her encouraged to pursue her dreams. I hope she finds what she needs in the Golden Wood. Though now her future with Legolas is hazy at best.

Author's Response: It was a night well spent for both of them, but she will not let him woo her into returning to Mirkwood. For too long Rhav has done what's right by others. And I like to think that Frodo affected everyone that was at that counsel. It was just the thing she needed to give her that final push out the door. It's what's waiting for her that will be her biggest surprise and discovery about herself.
Date: Dec 16 2010
Title: Chapter 19: The Renegade Reviewer: EldarinPrincess Signed
Poor Legolas, waking up to an empty bed with that letter. I am glad Rhav followed through with her decision; the first step is always the hardest. I sense a friendship will develop between her and Haldir. Can't wait!

Author's Response: You hit the nail on the head about first steps. It's usually the toughest thing to do. Rhav is tough and she knows what she has to do. One thing is for sure, nothing comes easy and we are in for one hell of a ride. Thank you for always being so prompt with your reviews. It's nice to have your support and you definitely have mine. ; - )
Date: Dec 18 2010