Wow this past chapter was amazing. Shame on me, I just got an account and haven't reviewed yet. It is a little shocking I guess to see Celebrian (assuming it is her) being so wanton. But I am in love with your rendition of Khamul. Carry on the good work!!!
Author's Response: Ah, you knew it was Celebrian! Excellent! I guess I portrayed her a bit more negatively than most, but she's a high-born elf lady and entitled to a little arrogance. As for her and Grish...I don't think it was very much her idea (not sure if I got that across very well in the story). As for Khamul, thank you, thank you very much.
hahaha, that explains the sniffing! I'm really curious now how you're going to portray the invisibility with the ring now.