Reviews by Irial
Summary: *COMPLETE*With her parents dead and her brother missing, a young Rohirrim girl sets out on a journey of a lifetime. She is on her own in the world, left to face tragedy and wrongful accusations. She must find her way or become just another statistic. It is her desire to find love and peace that pushes her on. When she meets an elf, she sees where she can find such solitude, but the path that leads her there is full of challenges.
Categories: Book-verse, Off Topic Characters: Legolas, Original Character
Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama, Erotica, Romance
Warnings: Graphic Sex, Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 72 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 294948 Read Count: 97900
Published: May 23 2011 Updated: Jun 22 2012 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 58: 58 Elvish Teachings Reviewer: Irial Signed
And finally it all comes together! Beautifully versed my dear L8Bleumr! ~ Iri

Author's Response: Again, thanks so much Iri. You're always so kind and I'm always happy to hear from you.
Date: Apr 05 2012
Title: Chapter 59: 59 Goodbyes and Well-wishes Reviewer: Irial Signed
How sad that Terrwyn has to leave her home because some people want to see an innocent woman hanged? But at least she's with Feredir and she gets to visit an amazing place :D And I love the pillow talk between these two! Once again I'm bowing to your talent! ~ Iri

Author's Response: Well, not everyone feels this way towards her, but right now, Bregmund's parents are not at all happy and it could be a dangerous situation. Still, Mirkwood will be a great experience for her. Thanks again Iri.
Date: Apr 07 2012
Love Games by L8Bleumr Rated: NC-17 [Reviews - 3]
Summary: Legolas learns that life in Ithilien leaves no time for his wife, but this time she will not take 'no' for an answer. Part of my Untamed series, this story is related to my epic, Taming the Wild, but can be read as a stand alone.
Categories: Book-verse, Off Topic Characters: Legolas
Genres: Erotica, Romance
Warnings: Graphic Sex
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3707 Read Count: 3197
Published: Jul 07 2011 Updated: Jul 07 2011 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Love Games - Untamed Series Reviewer: Irial Signed
Oh my gosh I was laughing so hard throughout this whole story! Rhav is so sneaky!!!!! What a tease!! ~ Iri
Date: Feb 19 2013
Summary: Three years after their majorly epic and hilarious adventure, the gang is at one of their yearly celebrations and an accident happens. Marie is sucked through a portal and into an unknown Canon. Now, they must travel through a whole NEW set of Canons to find her and bring her home. Will they succeed? Or will Marie be forever beyond their reach?
Categories: Movie-verse, Crossovers, Other Movies Characters: Captain Jack Sparrow, Jareth (Labyrinth), Original Character, The Fellowship
Genres: Action/Adventure, Humor, Parody
Warnings: AU (alternate universe)
Series: None
Chapters: 42 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 37497 Read Count: 25871
Published: Aug 09 2011 Updated: Nov 05 2012 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Nothing bad EVER happens on a pirate ship! Reviewer: Irial Signed
Hello again! *sings* I know where they're going!! I'm glad to have found this, it's been forever since I've been online but I really enjoyed Part 1 of this. So glad there's a lot uploaded I'm looking forward to hours of entertainment! ~ Iri

Author's Response: Hi! :D Missed you, Iri. I am so glad that you are so engaged in the series. It really makes my day. And I hope I follow through on the hours of entertainment.
Date: Apr 09 2012
Title: Chapter 2: We're going to The Picture Show! Reviewer: Irial Signed
Oh good gosh! Is Snape going to survive these places? I thought some of the worlds they visited last time would surely give him a heart attack. Now he's in the Rocky Horror Picture Show? That couldn't possibly end well!!

Author's Response: I know. Just wait until you read the rest of the chapters with the Dr.Frank-N-Furtur mixed to wreak all kinds of havok upon Snape's poor existence.
Date: Apr 09 2012
Title: Chapter 4: It's Fine Dining With The Best! Reviewer: Irial Signed
Jack probably nicked one of those bottomless pit bags from someone from Hogwarts (you know the one Hermione carries around?) and filled it with bottles of rum from every single canon he encountered. That's my theory and I'm sticking to it! Another hilarious albeit short chapter! ~ Iri

Author's Response: That is an excellent theory!
Date: Apr 09 2012
Title: Chapter 6: One head is better than none Reviewer: Irial Signed
What awaits them? Why I'd guess a little bit of everything! Wonderful thus far my dear Melda I applaud you ~ Iri

Author's Response: Thank you! I bow to your applause and you must know how much this means to me! It's good to have you reading again.
Date: Apr 09 2012
Title: Chapter 8: The Key to everything lies within the chamber pot Reviewer: Irial Signed
Aaah never a chapter passes without mishaps that results in unending hilarity! ~ Iri

Author's Response: I do my best, my dear, I do my best. After all, wasn't it Yoda that said 'There is no try, there is only do.'? Don't tell Marie that I just quoted Star Wars. She hates that trilogy with a deep and unending passion...something like her feelings for vampires that sparkle or Justin Beiber.
Date: Apr 09 2012
Title: Chapter 13: Drag me to Hellsing Reviewer: Irial Signed
Hello again Melda! It's been a LONG time I know! Anyways, just wanted to let you know I've thoroughly enjoyed the previous few chapters, especially seeing Gandalf get into trouble over not closing those portals!! Also props to you for picking Hellsing! I only just finished watching this so had to laugh when I saw Alucard's name pop up haha.

Anyway, thankyou for continuing to entertain absent folks like me! ~ Iri
Date: Dec 24 2013
Summary: Back in the saddle again. Legolas, Rhavaniel and a small company of elves and dwarves travel to Minas Tirith to help in the rebuilding. Along the way Legolas' thoughts turn to more than reconstructing gardens.
Categories: Book-verse, Off Topic Characters: Legolas, Original Character
Genres: Romance
Warnings: Graphic Sex
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2927 Read Count: 3256
Published: Aug 19 2011 Updated: Aug 19 2011 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Irial Signed
How very inventive of Legolas! And wicked!! I love re-visiting these two and their antics! You write them so well together! ~ Iri
Date: Feb 19 2013
Summary: Frodo is enjoying a not so pleasent afternoon when he is informed of terrible, devastating news. He has to deal with loss, devastation, and getting back on the road to recovery with a little help from his friends.
Categories: Book-verse, Off Topic Characters: Frodo
Genres: Tragedy
Warnings: Character Death
Series: Frodo's Journey
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3292 Read Count: 4586
Published: Aug 23 2011 Updated: Nov 10 2011 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One: I Hate Boats Reviewer: Irial Signed
Hi there,

I am so glad that you've decided to join the crazy world of fanfics and congratulate you on having the courage to do so. I think you have a wonderful imagination and with practice you'll end up dazzling us with some wonderful tales.

However I do have to agree with the others: spelling and grammar. The biggest turn off for me when reading a new story is a lack of either. As much as an author could have a fantastic story to tell it's hard to get into it if I'm constantly noticing errors. Brush up on that and I'm sure you'll do just fine.

Keep it up!! I want to see exactly where your creativity can take us all.

~ Iri
Date: Jan 05 2012
Summary: They met only briefly, but she will forever be in his dreams until he returns home. (written for a challenge titled Dreams)
Categories: Book-verse, Movie-verse Characters: Legolas, Original Character
Genres: Mystery, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10775 Read Count: 3024
Published: Sep 16 2011 Updated: Feb 23 2013 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Irial Signed
Oh how beautiful! I was filled with the imagery and colours and even the sounds of the glade. I think there's some kind of Elvish in you, my friend because your words can make me picture the scene as though it's happening right before my eyes. A wonderful talent, as I hope I've said before. ~ Iri

Author's Response: Thank you so much. This was one of my favs to write. I did it for a challenge, with no luck for winning. I've gotten a lot of reviews on a different site, asking if there will be more. I never intended to write more because it was only for a contest, but I couldn't leave it alone as the people kept asking. Actually, there will be two more chps and a wrap up for this. I've been working on it bit by bit for a long while now. I'm hoping to post the remainder of it later this week. Oh, wouldn't it be nice to experience elvishness? I do have a great love for the outdoors, though lol.
Date: Feb 18 2013
Summary: Another Untamed Tale. An unexpected night in Ithilien resparks two lovers ambitions. Sometimes it's good to break the rules.
Categories: Book Verse Slash Characters: Original Character
Genres: Erotica, Romance
Warnings: Graphic Sex, Slash (same sex pairing)
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3209 Read Count: 1665
Published: Nov 17 2011 Updated: Nov 17 2011 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: The Business of Pleasure Reviewer: Irial Signed
Holy.... Wow. Just wow. : D And I LOVE these two. I'm pretty sure I've told you that before. But it has to be said again - these two are two of the BEST OCs I've ever read in my whole life. I don't normally leap at the chance to read slash but I just had to give this a go. And as always L8Bleumr you haven't disappointed! ~ Iri

Author's Response: Thank you Irial. I was taking a big chance by posting this 1) for the slash. I'm a het writer and I'm sure my readers are used to that, and might have been turned off by a slash story. And 2) because of the use of oc's as main characters. But I do love these guys, and I felt like I owed it to them to give them their time in the spotlight. They are two very different people, but what one lacks, the other makes up for, and I just feel that they fit together perfectly.
Date: Feb 19 2013
Summary: After Aragorn is made king of Gondor and the time of men begins, Eowyn and Faramir find the time to get married and start a life together. This story tells of their first night as husband and wife in a romantic and sensual way.
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Eowyn, Faramir
Genres: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Warnings: Graphic Sex
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 3453 Read Count: 2185
Published: Jan 03 2012 Updated: Apr 22 2012 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: The Making of the Marriage Bed Reviewer: Irial Signed
It is very well structured and there's nothing wrong with your prose. I look forward to reading more from you :) ~ Iri

Author's Response: Thank you. I do plan to write more. I hope you keep reading! :)
Date: Jan 04 2012
Summary: Says it all. Though fairly dumb.
Categories: Off Topic Characters: None
Genres: Humor
Warnings: None
Series: 10 ways
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 88 Read Count: 1386
Published: Jan 25 2012 Updated: Jan 25 2012 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: 10 ways to scare & anger the fellowship Reviewer: Irial Signed
Out of all of these I'd say number nine would definitely get you shot on sight. Without questions! ~ Iri
Date: Apr 08 2012
Summary: An Air Force doctor gets magically sent to Middle Earth by a crazy man who's spell was from Mordor.
Categories: Book-verse, Movie-verse Characters: Eomer, Eowyn, Nazgûl, Orcs/Uruk-Hai, Original Character, Saruman, Sauron, The Fellowship, Théoden
Genres: None
Warnings: Rape
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 12094 Read Count: 11406
Published: Jan 31 2012 Updated: Feb 07 2014 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 spells of old Reviewer: Irial Signed
I'm with Melda - definitely more descriptions and a more easy-to-read layout would benefit this tale. I like the concept definitely but it's just a little hard to read. ~ Iri

Author's Response: Sorry I'm still new at this
Date: Apr 08 2012
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 spells of old Reviewer: Irial Signed
Oh no, don't be sorry! Like I said your concept is great, just needs a few structure and grammer pick ups to make it easier to read! Otherwise it's great. We are all new at this at some point and I found that advice from fellow authors and readers helped me along the way! My tales used to be a right mess don't worry! With practice it'll become easier! Keep going! ~ Iri

Author's Response: Aww so sweet. But chapter nine is gonna be great
Date: Apr 09 2012
Imrahil by ziggy Rated: G [Reviews - 4]
Summary: Cormallen Field. A game of chess, a forfeit. Legolas, Elladan and Imrahil
Categories: Book Verse Slash Characters: Elladan
Genres: Romance
Warnings: AU (alternate universe)
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 2613 Read Count: 1604
Published: Apr 01 2012 Updated: Apr 10 2012 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Irial Signed
There are so many brilliant phrases and word-turns in this chapter it's hard to identify them all. I love Gimli's brief slide into immaturity with the beard tails in his mouth. I also do especially like 'They had things to do, places to go, Pippin to see'. And possibly my fav quote of this chapter is again Gimli's : 'Yes, yes, everyone is very well pleased with everyone else...'. Hmmm maybe it's just Gimli who made the first half of this shine? As for the little tidbit at the end of the chapter, this is gorgeous, a moment of realization for Elladan which is very well handled. Amazing work! ~ Iri

Author's Response: Thank you, Irial. Gimli always 'speaks' to me- and I just find him such an intruiging and warm character - that habit he has of sucking the ends of his beard shows in times of extreme anxiety. I'm pleased you like the Elladan bit- as you get trhough Sons you'll see why this I wrote this.
Date: Apr 11 2012
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Reviewer: Irial Signed
Oh how very clever of Legolas. And how sweet too. A beautiful intervention! ~ Iri

Author's Response: Is that the bit where he distracts Gimli and reminds him Aragorn is who they follow? Again, all of this was just there waiting to be put down- I find the best bits are when the action is 'uncovered' - it sort of writes itself. These first chapters all wrote themselves and took little time- it's later that I slowed down - not that this will affect you! I did keep folks waiting sometimes. Again, thank you for letting em know you are enjoying this Iri
Date: Apr 11 2012
The Last Wood Elf by L8Bleumr Rated: NC-17 [Reviews - 62]
Summary: *COMPLETE* When Mirkwood is destroyed, there is only one survivor, an elfling named Legolas. He is the last of his kind, the last wood elf. Eventually he is brought to Rohan where King Théoden takes him into his home and raises him along with his son, Théodred and his nephew Eomer. The boys develop a strong bond and swear their loyalty to one another. Although Legolas is brought up in a world of men, he longs to someday return to his home and, along with his adopted brothers, cleanse it of the evil malice that dwells there and rebuild the elven city, even if he is the last. *Warning* Not your typical Legolas story. Legolas’ history is strictly AU while the rest loosely follows book/movie verse (mind you I said loosely.)
Categories: Book-verse, Movie-verse Characters: Eomer, Eowyn, Gríma, Haldir, Legolas, Original Character, Théoden, Théodred
Genres: Action/Adventure, Friendship, Tragedy
Warnings: AU (alternate universe), Character Death, Graphic Sex, Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 45 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 269126 Read Count: 24854
Published: Jun 25 2012 Updated: Apr 07 2014 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 2: Woodsmen of the North Reviewer: Irial Signed
I absolutely adore how you've described meeting the woodsmen from Legolas' tiny point of view - actually the sentence 'seemed to touch the sky with his red head' made me laugh so loudly I scared my cat half to death! These woodsmen sound like a great people - I'd certainly feel safe around them!!

Glad to see our two travellers safe for the moment! ~ Iri

Author's Response: I have to admit, it was fun writing these woodsmen. I guess there's really not much known about them, so I got to do a little bit of oc stuff here. The brothers were the most fun, the kind of guys I'd like to hang out with.
Date: Dec 21 2013
Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 What Lies Beneath Edoras Reviewer: Irial Signed
Ugh poor Legolas trapped like a caged animal! The description of the cell makes my skin crawl. I hope Grima gets what's coming to him sooner rather than later! ~ Iri

Author's Response: Yea, it was tough torturing Legolas, but someone has to do it. Grima will get his eventually.
Date: Dec 28 2013
Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 From Darkness Into Flight Reviewer: Irial Signed
All I could think about during this chapter was screaming RUN LEGOLAS RUN at the top of my lungs! A daring rescue coordinated by Eowyn! And the beginnings of Dernhelm, what a clever inclusion of her alter - well done once again :) ~ Iri

Author's Response: Like I mentioned before, I just love Eowyn's character. I knew it had to be her who helped Legolas escape. She'd never let him rot in a dungeon. Eomer won't be too happy to learn that his sister put her life in danger, but he'll get over it. She's one damn tough chick!
Date: Dec 28 2013
Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 On Open Plains Reviewer: Irial Signed
Oh my gosh what an intense getaway! Legolas copped just about everything that could possibly have been thrown at him! And hooray for Arod coming to fight for his master like that.

A wonderfully intense action packed chapter L8. Poor Legolas seems to be constantly being chased from his homes :( and now for the first time he's truly out in the cold by himself. I hope his journey gives him some reprieve at some point! ~ Iri

Author's Response: It's always darkest before the dawn, and Legolas is on some very dark times. But there is a change coming, as well as more challenges.
Date: Dec 29 2013
Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 The Entwood Reviewer: Irial Signed
Oooh intriguing! I can't wait to find out why a Galadhrim was so far from home and how on earth she fell into the hands of the Southrons!

I love Beechbone, he reminds me of Quickbeam :D

Another twist in the tale and the excitement continues! ~ Iri

Author's Response: This is the part where I get to branch off from canon and do my own thing for a while. It's difficult trying to stick to the original story line while putting my own twist to it. And now, as Legolas journeys away from Rohan, he'll begin to understand his heritage better. He's getting into his element now, Ents and forests and all.
Date: Dec 29 2013
Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 The Blacksmith Reviewer: Irial Signed
Wow. Not at all what I was expecting when I suspected Rota was up to something. What a way for her treachery to be revealed!

I'd write more L8 but I have the next chapter to devour! ~ Iri

Author's Response: Legolas' loose ways are getting him in trouble, and Rota is just the one to put the nail in the coffin. He's met his sexual match, I think.
Date: Dec 28 2013