Penname: Nevasaiel [Contact] Real name:
Member Since: 01/02/05
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Uh... what to say about me. Well, I'm 19 and I've been writing fanfics for a long time. I've posted a couple of stories on another site but decided to branch out a little. I love feedback and constructive criticism. Suggestions on where to go with plots etc. is always appreciated as well. : )
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Domination by Shanastay Rated: NC-17 [Reviews - 5]
Summary: Might want to put a couple of towels down on your chair before reading this. Straight-up dominatrix smut. Starring elves include Haldir, Legolas, and Rumil.
Categories: Lord of the Rings Slash
Characters: Haldir, Legolas, Original Character
Genres: Romance, Drama, Erotica, Other
Warnings: Slash (same sex pairing), Graphic Sex, Kink, AU (alternate universe), Extreme/taboo Fetish
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 24153 Read Count: 10977
[Report This] Published: 09/11/04 Updated: 24/11/05
Reviewer: Nevasaiel Signed
Date: 14/08/05 Title: Chapter 4: The Arrival/Unexpected Surprises

Ok, I already reviewed this story but cos it was kinda deleted I'm going to do it again. Once again, this story is hot as hell! and I really hope you put more of it up cos I'm dying to know where you're going with the rest of it!

Author's Response: To be honest neither myself nor my co-authoress have any idea where this is going. We have a sketchy idea of what may happen next but every time we sit down and write we are amazed by what comes out. We are glad you have enjoyed our efforts so far. Thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: Nevasaiel Signed
Date: 01/01/06 Title: Chapter 5: Two Ring Circus

First off, that chapter was just as spectacular as the last few. But I expected nothing less from you so it almost goes without saying that I loved every word of it. Secondly, I can't believe the shit you've been taking lately! And I thought my problems were bad! Jesus! Anyway, I'm sure no one resents the long wait for an update, especially with all the crap you've had to deal with. I hope it gets better for you soon. No one deserves to be unhappy for long! :)

Author's Response: Thank you for your support. It means the world to me to know that my fans understand. I'm hoping 2006 will be better than 2005. Hopefully I'll be able to update all my fics on a more regular basis now.

Summary: When Mary Sues invade and the characters stay in character.
Categories: Other Movies
Characters: Will Turner, Captain Jack Sparrow
Genres: Humor, Parody
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 2891 Read Count: 4164
[Report This] Published: 07/12/04 Updated: 30/11/05
Reviewer: Nevasaiel Signed
Date: 05/09/05 Title: Chapter 2: When Sues Attack

Funny! Oh-so funny! I loved it! More of the same, please!Lol. :)

Summary: (Or a Little Guide For Avoiding Simple Mistakes When Writing Lord of the Rings Fan Fiction)
Categories: Off Topic
Characters: None
Genres: General
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 878 Read Count: 1384
[Report This] Published: 06/02/05 Updated: 06/02/05
Reviewer: Nevasaiel Signed
Date: 10/11/05 Title: Chapter 1: How Not To Get Haunted by Tolkien

This is really helpful. Even though having everyone follow this kind of thing would defeat the purpose of fanfiction. I thought the whole idea was to be creative in your own right. Fanfiction is just borrowing a few things that inspired you. Not sticking 100% to the original. If that's what people wanted then they would just stick to the book and save themselves the trouble. Not to mention the fact that a lot of LotR fiction is more often than not inspired by the films. If that's all they've seen of the story then they have the right to pretty much do what they want with it. Soz for going on. I don't mean to be a pain in the ass. And I really do think that posting this would be a good way of helping misunderstandings of the story. But you can't condemn someone for not wanting to stick to it. :)

Summary: The city of Troy falls to Agamemnon and Menelaus. What will Paris do now that he is their own personal slave?
Categories: Other Movies
Characters: Paris
Genres: Angst
Warnings: Rape
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 7319 Read Count: 13096
[Report This] Published: 14/08/05 Updated: 14/08/05
Reviewer: Nevasaiel Signed
Date: 14/08/05 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

OH MY GOD! How can you be so mean?!Lol. Poor Paris! What more can they possibly do to him?! Please tell me he's going to get out of there eventually! I need to know what happens so you have to write more! I feel so sorry for him I almost want to cry! In case you don't get it already, I really like this. You write it really well and your torture ideas are very... imaginative! I never would've come up with the bees. Keep up the good work! :)

Reviewer: Nevasaiel Signed
Date: 31/08/05 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Yet another spectacular chapter. I say again, poor Paris!Lol. What's the girl's story then? It sounds like she has done this kind of thing a lot. Is she nice or nasty? I'm looking forward to the next one. Keep'em coming (pardon the expression.lol)

Reviewer: Nevasaiel Signed
Date: 10/11/05 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Ok, this is the second time I've read this story and I still want to know what happens! :) I really like it. It seems strange that I like reading about something so... nasty. But you're writing it really well and it really makes me feel sorry for Paris. So I'd love you forever if you posted more!Lol. :) Pleeease?