Thank you for this heartfelt story. I read a lot of fan fic and this is the ONLY one that has made me cry with its beauty and its sadness. Namarie
Author's Response: Thank you for your review. It's been a long time since anyone commented on this story. This was my very first. I wrote it about 4 or 5 years ago. Gosh, I hope I've improved since then. So glad you enjoyed it and thanks for reading.
OK - I thought the first story was the only one to make me cry. This better come out well cause right now I'm sobbing. You capture the emotional intimacy of real love so well. I hope that it is because you have experienced it.
Author's Response: Thanks again for reading these old stories. I guess a certain amount of someone's written works are based upon real life, esp emotions. Everyone has experienced love and/or loss at one time or another and that's what an author draws on.
Awwwwww what a beautiful story. I feel like the ending was rushed though, but maybe cause I didn't want it to end. There are many story arcs that can be picked up...hint. Thank you.
Author's Response: Again, thanks spinster. Honestly, I wrote this so long ago, I can't remember how I ended this. I was still learning how to write, or at least experimenting. And I've written so many other stories, I'm not sure I have the energy to revisit some of these older ones. On top of that, I'm almost finished posting my current story and writing another. My mind just never stops ... overactive imagination I guess, lol.
Never saw the seagulls coming. Very cute/funny story.
Author's Response: Thanks ; - )