Reviews by Farawein
Summary: Kimberly Sullivan is a 17 year old girl in 2004. She lives in a family where she and her mother are ritually beaten by her father, and her mother can't do anything to stop it. One night, Kimberly finds out a devestating secret: She's not really Kimberly Sullivan. She doesn't even know who she is. She was found wrapped in a blanket. After being beaten severely by her father, Kimberly runs out into a storm, trying to escape. She accidently runs into the street and is hit by a car. When she awakens, she is in Middle-Earth...and is becoming smitten by the prince of Mirkwood. But can she handle the real truth about her past...and come to meet the father who thought she was lost: Elrond of Rivendell?
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Aragorn, Arwen, Legolas, Gandalf / Olorin, Elrond, Elrohir, Celeborn, Galadriel, Thranduil, Elladan, Glorfindel, Original Character
Genres: Romance
Warnings: Graphic Sex
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 31335 Read Count: 14635
Published: 08/07/04 Updated: 09/07/04 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One Reviewer: Farawein Signed
bloody hell. that is good
Date: 17/07/11
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter three Reviewer: Farawein Signed
I like the way you described the way Legolas was upset at Kimberly's *dad*. And I did not find anything offensive, it made me think of my friend, and how she needed a mom like Kimberly's.
Date: 17/07/11
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter One Reviewer: Farawein Signed
brilliant, it made me cry, as if I was there with her
Date: 17/07/11
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter eight Reviewer: Farawein Signed
you should have the spell back fire on her, that way, she'd be sent away from Middle Earth, ridding the lovers of her idiocy.
Date: 17/07/11
Face to Face by ElfShampoo Rated: NC-17 [Reviews - 2]
Summary: members of lord of the rings end up in tenbury but how will they react when they meet their counterparts?
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Original Character
Genres: Drama
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 2573 Read Count: 1742
Published: 30/07/04 Updated: 30/07/04 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Meeting the guys. Reviewer: Farawein Signed
what does arwenamin mean? it sounds like he's saying "my Arwen"
Date: 02/07/11
Summary: The economy is down, so Aragorn starts a carnival to raise funds to keep Gondor rich. But everything seems to go wrong!
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Aragorn, Arwen, Frodo, Sam, Other
Genres: Humor
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 664 Read Count: 3191
Published: 21/09/04 Updated: 21/09/04 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Gee, I wonder what'll happen in this chappie... Reviewer: Farawein Signed
lol. not my gumdrop buttons
Date: 06/07/11
Adopted by LessienEHelyanwe Rated: NC-17 [Reviews - 8]
Summary: Legolas is being adopted and he doesn't know it. Mentions rape.
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Legolas, Elrond, Thranduil
Genres: Angst
Warnings: Graphic Sex, Rape, AU (alternate universe)
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 7439 Read Count: 17643
Published: 09/10/04 Updated: 09/10/04 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Farawein Signed
Not to be too critical, but I suggest using more detail in describing the scene, like explaining what Legolas' new room looks like. And there are many holes in this story, like how Thranduil went from cold and abusive to loving, and putting Legolas up to adoption. This is a good plot, and I like the premises, you just need to connect the lines with setting, description, and use of emotions.
Try to make the characters' emotions reach out to the readers. make them feel the emotions as if it were from their own heart.
I hope i'm making sense to you.
Date: 11/08/11
Summary: After a young Eldarion poses a strange question, his parents and friends try to explain some of the Facts of Life to the five-year-old, and learn that sometimes you can over-think things. Rated because of discussion of sexuality, but at the level of a five-year-old, so if you pick up on anything it's your own fault for having a dirty mind! ;)
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Aragorn, Arwen, Legolas, Gimli, Eldarion
Genres: Humor
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2659 Read Count: 3576
Published: 10/10/04 Updated: 10/10/04 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: A Prince's Question Reviewer: Farawein Signed
oh by god, that's funny. From a child's point of view, its so confusion when questions pop up, and no one is there to answer them. thank the Valor for Eowyn.

Also, what is with the ... instead of an E in Eowyn. I don't get it, and I have seen in in a lot of other stories, like ...lrond, and ...restor, It doesn't make any sence to me. please clarify

Author's Response: Thank you! Yes, we all of us owe Eowyn so much... As for the "..." showing up in names, that tends to happen when the site changes formatting. Because Éowyn should have an accent over the first letter of her name (I put one in now; let's see if it shows up when I post this), sometimes certain formatting won't support that, so instead a "..." will show up its place, because either the website itself or your current browser won't support the funky letter. It's very annoying as a writer, I'll tell you that; when I first posted this the É showed up fine. Now I suppose I'll have to go through and edit things to try and bring it back...sigh!
Date: 08/08/11
Summary: Haldir and his brothers find a child in the woods.
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Haldir, Original Character, Orophin
Genres: General
Warnings: AU (alternate universe)
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 55914 Read Count: 20318
Published: 13/10/04 Updated: 13/10/04 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 6: Scars Reviewer: Farawein Signed
I can't stop crying. this chapter, makes my stomach clench and my heart ache for Zinnia. I know that child abuse is a very hard thing to write about, and I have to congratulate you on being able to make such a horrid subject bring tenderness to my heart. you are a great, and wonderful writer
Date: 07/08/11
A Bedtime Story by Tammy Rated: G [Reviews - 26]
Summary: A cute twist in the story when Legolas tells the 'LOTR' tale to Aragorn's children
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Aragorn, Arwen, Legolas, Gimli, Frodo, Sam, Merry, Pippin, Gandalf / Olorin, Elrond, Boromir
Genres: General
Warnings: AU (alternate universe)
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 604 Read Count: 4980
Published: 27/11/04 Updated: 27/11/04 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: A Bedtime Story Reviewer: Farawein Signed
what did Arwen mean when she said "Practice"?
Date: 30/06/11
Summary: I think the title is self explanatory
Categories: Off Topic Characters: Sauron
Genres: Humor
Warnings: None
Series: The 10 songs/dances etc That Would Confuse/Scare etc the LOTR Characters
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 696 Read Count: 5270
Published: 18/08/05 Updated: 18/08/05 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: 56 ways to annoy the Dark Lord Sauron Reviewer: Farawein Signed
These are BRILLIANT! I told my 16 year old cousin to read it, and he didn't get number 37, and 54(He finds Hilary Duff very attractive)
Date: 11/07/11
8 by iggybaby Rated: G [Reviews - 22]
Summary: I wrote this poem for a 7 year old boy who's dying from cancer. His wish was to recieve the most birthday cards, so he could get into the guiness book of world records. He's turning eight at the end of may, thus the title being called 8.
Categories: Off Topic Characters: None
Genres: Poetry
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 59 Read Count: 5052
Published: 09/05/07 Updated: 09/05/07 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Farawein Signed
the next time you visit that boy, tell him life is never over, and that no matter what other people say, he can reach the skies. i once new someone that had cancer, and she did not let anything stand in her way, she died doing what she loved best, art, so i would let the boy do what he loves, and let his spirit shine free.
Date: 24/06/11
Summary: Harry goes home for the summer after 6th year to find his uncle angry. After 4 weeks of torture, Harry comes into his magical inheritance...and find himself and the world about him changed completely...LOTRxHP crossover.

(I'm not sure how graphic the torture in this is, the first chapter is the only graphic scene.)
Categories: Crossovers Characters: None
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst
Warnings: Torture
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 5624 Read Count: 15588
Published: 11/10/07 Updated: 04/11/07 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Reviewer: Farawein Signed
Okay, I would like to say that this is a good story, but I just want to ask what is wrong with the spacing between the paragraphs in the third and fourth chapter thing. Also, I would like to comment that in the second chapter, a part of the third was in the second, and the fount is all weird in some parts of the story. I just wanted to make sure you knew what was up. But this is a good story plot, and The summary sent chills up my spine. I wish I was that good. Happy writing
Date: 21/07/11
The Lost Child by Eruwadhiel Rated: PG-13 [Reviews - 9]
Summary: An elf child raised by the Jedi suddenly finds herself in Middle Earth. Will she stay on ME, or does she leave and complete her mission? Major re-writes and edits in progress.
Categories: Crossovers Characters: Original Character
Genres: Action/Adventure
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 48956 Read Count: 20242
Published: 08/03/08 Updated: 15/07/11 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Farawein Signed
i like the cross over, good idea for the book, I really like the plot line
Date: 30/06/11
Orc Talk! by Kitt Otter Rated: PG [Reviews - 9]
Summary: Young Legolas learns a new word and his older brother learns to be more prudent. MEFA 2008 Nominee.
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Legolas, Thranduil
Genres: Humor
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1721 Read Count: 1964
Published: 03/07/08 Updated: 03/07/08 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Orc Talk! Reviewer: Farawein Signed
what does Tor’g-la’ther mean? o.0

Author's Response: Oh, wow, I’m nearly ashamed of this story now. So, uh, it means something along the lines of troll piss... yeah, sorry 'bout that. :P Any case, thank ya for reading! :)
Date: 10/09/11
Summary: Thranduil has a rough day with 3-year old Legolas
Categories: Off Topic Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1743 Read Count: 1664
Published: 16/02/10 Updated: 16/02/10 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Farawein Signed
i like the idea of the story, you should write about Legolas growing up, that would bring in the readers, and if you write other chapters as well as this, you'll be golden
Date: 30/06/11
Summary: "I’m not sure exactly why this whole thing wasn’t freaking me out more, but it may have something to do with the fact that the last thing that happened to me in London was that I was shot. Death has a certain way of putting perspective on things." Legolas/OC
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Aragorn, Arwen, Boromir, Celeborn, Denethor, Eomer, Eowyn, Faramir, Frodo, Galadriel, Gandalf / Olorin, Gimli, Haldir, Legolas, Merry, Original Character, Pippin, Sam, Saruman, The Fellowship, Théoden
Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama, Friendship, Romance
Warnings: Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 50658 Read Count: 16050
Published: 23/08/10 Updated: 28/01/14 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2 Reviewer: Farawein Signed
love it, please update soon.

Author's Response: thank you, I'm glad you liked it!
Date: 05/07/11
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4 Reviewer: Farawein Signed
Continue! Please! This is bloody good and I want to know what happens next

Author's Response: Aww, thank yu :)
Date: 19/07/11
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6 Reviewer: Farawein Signed
please please please please continue. This story is brilliant! I love it the plot

Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Date: 12/08/11
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8 Reviewer: Farawein Signed
OH MY GOD! She's being kidnapped my the Uruk-hi! Not Good. Not good at ALL.
Date: 28/08/11