Reviews by Farawein
Summary: Kimberly Sullivan is a 17 year old girl in 2004. She lives in a family where she and her mother are ritually beaten by her father, and her mother can't do anything to stop it. One night, Kimberly finds out a devestating secret: She's not really Kimberly Sullivan. She doesn't even know who she is. She was found wrapped in a blanket. After being beaten severely by her father, Kimberly runs out into a storm, trying to escape. She accidently runs into the street and is hit by a car. When she awakens, she is in Middle-Earth...and is becoming smitten by the prince of Mirkwood. But can she handle the real truth about her past...and come to meet the father who thought she was lost: Elrond of Rivendell?
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Aragorn, Arwen, Legolas, Gandalf / Olorin, Elrond, Elrohir, Celeborn, Galadriel, Thranduil, Elladan, Glorfindel, Original Character
Genres: Romance
Warnings: Graphic Sex
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 31335 Read Count: 15117
Published: Jul 08 2004 Updated: Jul 09 2004 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One Reviewer: Farawein Signed
bloody hell. that is good
Date: Jul 17 2011
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter three Reviewer: Farawein Signed
I like the way you described the way Legolas was upset at Kimberly's *dad*. And I did not find anything offensive, it made me think of my friend, and how she needed a mom like Kimberly's.
Date: Jul 17 2011
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter One Reviewer: Farawein Signed
brilliant, it made me cry, as if I was there with her
Date: Jul 17 2011
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter eight Reviewer: Farawein Signed
you should have the spell back fire on her, that way, she'd be sent away from Middle Earth, ridding the lovers of her idiocy.
Date: Jul 17 2011
Face to Face by ElfShampoo Rated: NC-17 [Reviews - 3]
Summary: members of lord of the rings end up in tenbury but how will they react when they meet their counterparts?
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Original Character
Genres: Drama
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 2573 Read Count: 1813
Published: Jul 30 2004 Updated: Jul 30 2004 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Meeting the guys. Reviewer: Farawein Signed
what does arwenamin mean? it sounds like he's saying "my Arwen"
Date: Jul 02 2011
Summary: The economy is down, so Aragorn starts a carnival to raise funds to keep Gondor rich. But everything seems to go wrong!
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Aragorn, Arwen, Frodo, Sam, Other
Genres: Humor
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 664 Read Count: 3374
Published: Sep 21 2004 Updated: Sep 21 2004 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Gee, I wonder what'll happen in this chappie... Reviewer: Farawein Signed
lol. not my gumdrop buttons
Date: Jul 06 2011
Adopted by LessienEHelyanwe Rated: NC-17 starhalf-star [Reviews - 10]
Summary: Legolas is being adopted and he doesn't know it. Mentions rape.
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Legolas, Elrond, Thranduil
Genres: Angst
Warnings: Graphic Sex, Rape, AU (alternate universe)
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 7439 Read Count: 18519
Published: Oct 09 2004 Updated: Oct 09 2004 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Farawein Signed
Not to be too critical, but I suggest using more detail in describing the scene, like explaining what Legolas' new room looks like. And there are many holes in this story, like how Thranduil went from cold and abusive to loving, and putting Legolas up to adoption. This is a good plot, and I like the premises, you just need to connect the lines with setting, description, and use of emotions.
Try to make the characters' emotions reach out to the readers. make them feel the emotions as if it were from their own heart.
I hope i'm making sense to you.
Date: Aug 11 2011
Summary: After a young Eldarion poses a strange question, his parents and friends try to explain some of the Facts of Life to the five-year-old, and learn that sometimes you can over-think things. Rated because of discussion of sexuality, but at the level of a five-year-old, so if you pick up on anything it's your own fault for having a dirty mind! ;)
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Aragorn, Arwen, Legolas, Gimli, Eldarion
Genres: Humor
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2659 Read Count: 3714
Published: Oct 10 2004 Updated: Oct 10 2004 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: A Prince's Question Reviewer: Farawein Signed
oh by god, that's funny. From a child's point of view, its so confusion when questions pop up, and no one is there to answer them. thank the Valor for Eowyn.

Also, what is with the ... instead of an E in Eowyn. I don't get it, and I have seen in in a lot of other stories, like ...lrond, and ...restor, It doesn't make any sence to me. please clarify

Author's Response: Thank you! Yes, we all of us owe Eowyn so much... As for the "..." showing up in names, that tends to happen when the site changes formatting. Because Éowyn should have an accent over the first letter of her name (I put one in now; let's see if it shows up when I post this), sometimes certain formatting won't support that, so instead a "..." will show up its place, because either the website itself or your current browser won't support the funky letter. It's very annoying as a writer, I'll tell you that; when I first posted this the É showed up fine. Now I suppose I'll have to go through and edit things to try and bring it back...sigh!
Date: Aug 08 2011
Summary: Haldir and his brothers find a child in the woods.
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Haldir, Original Character, Orophin
Genres: General
Warnings: AU (alternate universe)
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 55914 Read Count: 21052
Published: Oct 13 2004 Updated: Oct 13 2004 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 6: Scars Reviewer: Farawein Signed
I can't stop crying. this chapter, makes my stomach clench and my heart ache for Zinnia. I know that child abuse is a very hard thing to write about, and I have to congratulate you on being able to make such a horrid subject bring tenderness to my heart. you are a great, and wonderful writer
Date: Aug 07 2011
A Bedtime Story by Tammy Rated: G star [Reviews - 26]
Summary: A cute twist in the story when Legolas tells the 'LOTR' tale to Aragorn's children
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Aragorn, Arwen, Legolas, Gimli, Frodo, Sam, Merry, Pippin, Gandalf / Olorin, Elrond, Boromir
Genres: General
Warnings: AU (alternate universe)
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 604 Read Count: 5192
Published: Nov 27 2004 Updated: Nov 27 2004 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: A Bedtime Story Reviewer: Farawein Signed
what did Arwen mean when she said "Practice"?
Date: Jun 30 2011
Summary: I think the title is self explanatory
Categories: Off Topic Characters: Sauron
Genres: Humor
Warnings: None
Series: The 10 songs/dances etc That Would Confuse/Scare etc the LOTR Characters
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 696 Read Count: 5452
Published: Aug 18 2005 Updated: Aug 18 2005 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: 56 ways to annoy the Dark Lord Sauron Reviewer: Farawein Signed
These are BRILLIANT! I told my 16 year old cousin to read it, and he didn't get number 37, and 54(He finds Hilary Duff very attractive)
Date: Jul 11 2011
8 by iggybaby Rated: G [Reviews - 22]
Summary: I wrote this poem for a 7 year old boy who's dying from cancer. His wish was to recieve the most birthday cards, so he could get into the guiness book of world records. He's turning eight at the end of may, thus the title being called 8.
Categories: Off Topic Characters: None
Genres: Poetry
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 59 Read Count: 5264
Published: May 09 2007 Updated: May 09 2007 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Farawein Signed
the next time you visit that boy, tell him life is never over, and that no matter what other people say, he can reach the skies. i once new someone that had cancer, and she did not let anything stand in her way, she died doing what she loved best, art, so i would let the boy do what he loves, and let his spirit shine free.
Date: Jun 24 2011
Summary: Harry goes home for the summer after 6th year to find his uncle angry. After 4 weeks of torture, Harry comes into his magical inheritance...and find himself and the world about him changed completely...LOTRxHP crossover.

(I'm not sure how graphic the torture in this is, the first chapter is the only graphic scene.)
Categories: Crossovers Characters: None
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst
Warnings: Torture
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 5624 Read Count: 15963
Published: Oct 11 2007 Updated: Nov 04 2007 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Reviewer: Farawein Signed
Okay, I would like to say that this is a good story, but I just want to ask what is wrong with the spacing between the paragraphs in the third and fourth chapter thing. Also, I would like to comment that in the second chapter, a part of the third was in the second, and the fount is all weird in some parts of the story. I just wanted to make sure you knew what was up. But this is a good story plot, and The summary sent chills up my spine. I wish I was that good. Happy writing
Date: Jul 21 2011
The Lost Child by Eruwadhiel Rated: PG-13 [Reviews - 9]
Summary: An elf child raised by the Jedi suddenly finds herself in Middle Earth. Will she stay on ME, or does she leave and complete her mission? Major re-writes and edits in progress.
Categories: Crossovers Characters: Original Character
Genres: Action/Adventure
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 48956 Read Count: 20432
Published: Mar 08 2008 Updated: Jul 15 2011 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Farawein Signed
i like the cross over, good idea for the book, I really like the plot line
Date: Jun 30 2011
Orc Talk! by Kitt Otter Rated: PG [Reviews - 9]
Summary: Young Legolas learns a new word and his older brother learns to be more prudent. MEFA 2008 Nominee.
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Legolas, Thranduil
Genres: Humor
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1721 Read Count: 2087
Published: Jul 03 2008 Updated: Jul 03 2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Orc Talk! Reviewer: Farawein Signed
what does Tor’g-la’ther mean? o.0

Author's Response: Oh, wow, I’m nearly ashamed of this story now. So, uh, it means something along the lines of troll piss... yeah, sorry 'bout that. :P Any case, thank ya for reading! :)
Date: Sep 10 2011
Summary: Thranduil has a rough day with 3-year old Legolas
Categories: Off Topic Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1743 Read Count: 1839
Published: Feb 16 2010 Updated: Feb 16 2010 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Farawein Signed
i like the idea of the story, you should write about Legolas growing up, that would bring in the readers, and if you write other chapters as well as this, you'll be golden
Date: Jun 30 2011
Summary: "I’m not sure exactly why this whole thing wasn’t freaking me out more, but it may have something to do with the fact that the last thing that happened to me in London was that I was shot. Death has a certain way of putting perspective on things." Legolas/OC
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Aragorn, Arwen, Boromir, Celeborn, Denethor, Eomer, Eowyn, Faramir, Frodo, Galadriel, Gandalf / Olorin, Gimli, Haldir, Legolas, Merry, Original Character, Pippin, Sam, Saruman, The Fellowship, Théoden
Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama, Friendship, Romance
Warnings: Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 50658 Read Count: 16442
Published: Aug 23 2010 Updated: Jan 28 2014 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2 Reviewer: Farawein Signed
love it, please update soon.

Author's Response: thank you, I'm glad you liked it!
Date: Jul 05 2011
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4 Reviewer: Farawein Signed
Continue! Please! This is bloody good and I want to know what happens next

Author's Response: Aww, thank yu :)
Date: Jul 19 2011
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6 Reviewer: Farawein Signed
please please please please continue. This story is brilliant! I love it the plot

Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Date: Aug 12 2011
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8 Reviewer: Farawein Signed
OH MY GOD! She's being kidnapped my the Uruk-hi! Not Good. Not good at ALL.
Date: Aug 28 2011
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3 Reviewer: Farawein Signed
awesome. please update soon. please?

Author's Response: I might update tomorrow, just because I'm getting such warm reviews :)
Date: Jul 17 2011
You've Got Fanmail! by Melda Rated: PG-13 [Reviews - 112]
Summary: The members of the Fellowship must learn to deal with one of the worst aspects of being famous...fanmail..written by the horror of horrors, fangirls.
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Aragorn
Genres: None
Warnings: AU (alternate universe)
Challenges: Hilarious stories!!!
Series: None
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 35811 Read Count: 48911
Published: Apr 12 2011 Updated: Jul 24 2011 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Fanmail and the chaos it causes Reviewer: Farawein Signed
you are a genius! I laughed insanely at the jack sparrow scene, and at the part with Snape swearing like a fiend, i laughed so hard my cousin thought i was choking. your are funny

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so happy that you like it. Being only 15 and a budding writer, it's hard to imagine that I would get this kind of feedback from so many people. And as more and more read this story, I get more and more reviews stating how funny it is. I hope you didn't actually choke....tell you're cuz I said Yohla (that's Melda speak for hi. It's a combination of 'Yo' and 'hola', it's perfect street slang!) <3 Love and peanutbutter, Melda
Date: Jun 29 2011
Summary: *COMPLETE*With her parents dead and her brother missing, a young Rohirrim girl sets out on a journey of a lifetime. She is on her own in the world, left to face tragedy and wrongful accusations. She must find her way or become just another statistic. It is her desire to find love and peace that pushes her on. When she meets an elf, she sees where she can find such solitude, but the path that leads her there is full of challenges.
Categories: Book-verse, Off Topic Characters: Legolas, Original Character
Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama, Erotica, Romance
Warnings: Graphic Sex, Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 72 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 294948 Read Count: 87202
Published: May 23 2011 Updated: Jun 22 2012 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 20: 20 Ruined Berries Reviewer: Farawein Signed
I like how you tied in Master Curuven's story of how he met his wife into their day, but with a slight alteration. I like it a lot

Author's Response: Thanks Farawein. I wanted to give the reader a little insight into Curuven's personality and thought the best way to do that was to let him tell a story. It was also a good way for Terrwyn to get to know him too.
Date: Sep 03 2011
Title: Chapter 27: 27 In Dreams Reviewer: Farawein Signed
oh pretty please with a cherry on top continue. I love this story

Author's Response: As always, there will be more to come. Thanks!
Date: Oct 08 2011
Title: Chapter 43: 43 Full Circle Reviewer: Farawein Signed
I simply love it! And I love how you introduced Glandur's lover as the elf that started it all. :) This Chapter made me cry (In a good way)

Author's Response: So glad you are still enjoying this. Yes, Antien really started this story while I was still writing Taming the Wild. He's always got his nose in things, lol.
Date: Jan 17 2012