Reviews by Mindirith
The Sons of Thunder by ziggy Rated: NC-17 half-star [Reviews - 308]
Summary: They are called the Sons of Thunder by the Orcs of the Mountains. A storm erupts between one Son of Elrond and one Son of Thranduil. In the aftermath of the battle of the Morannon, Elrohir has one final battle.
Categories: Book-verse, Book Verse Slash, Lord of the Rings Slash Characters: Legolas
Genres: General
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 46 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 314756 Read Count: 79263
Published: Oct 15 2010 Updated: Jun 15 2012 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Keeping Watch Reviewer: Mindirith Signed
Thank you very much! I did not expect anywhere near so complete a response. I greatly appreciated. I wanted to pose the questions, but expected to just wait for the next chapters for the answers. I had not thought about the glamour, that makes a lot of sense. I did assume that loosing oneself in such a host was not too difficult, if it were not for this "sense" Legolas seems to have of feeling Elrohir. But of course the glamour takes care of that. And you are right, of course. Thank you for refreshing my memory. Remembering those things makes it much more logical, I apologize for forgetting. I found The sons of Thunder not that long ago, but it was quite a read all at once. I loved every minute of it though. I will probably go back to the beginning, and re-read, just so I will be ready, and completely caught up for the next chapter. Which I am looking forward to. Thank you for doing such a great job.

Author's Response: Well it was useful for me too to have those questions asked- it nudges me that I need o tremind readers what has gone on before and to expalin things again - I read very quickly too and sometimes miss details that make me question the story. I appreciate those questions. So you will see in the next chapter how you have helped me to make things clearer! And the next chapter is quite an importnat one in terms of Legolas' memory and Elrohir. Thank you again.
Date: Jul 04 2011
Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 A Memory of Rohan Reviewer: Mindirith Signed
Poor Legolas! I am not sure Gandalf is really doing him a favor by keeping all his memories locked up. I love the chapter, as I have enjoyed the rest of your story. I always look forward to the next chapter. "Legolas catches up with Elrohir and feels much, much better" I was going to ask what Elrohir thought he was doing, that his absence seems to be doing more harm then good to Legolas, but at least in the next chapter they seem to get together. I am curious as to how Elrohir manages to evade Legolas' eyes. Wouldn't Legolas have been able to describe Rvyon to Gimli, who should have been able to figure out that he meant at least one of the sons of Elrond? And shouldn't Legolas have seen Elladan and asked him? I am very much enjoying the story, and looking forward to the next chapter!

Author's Response: In answer to your very fair questions -Elrohir really thinks that he is destructive and will be bad for Legolas- he thinks he cannot control himself and so the best thing s to keep away. He also hates himself so much he beleives he does not deserve Legolas- he thinks he should have stayed away and let Elladan have him. The 'glamour' he puts on himself is easy for him. He is after all, Galadriel's grandson and Elrond's son- in the saemw ay the cloaks of Lorien have th epower to conceal in the weave, and the ropes come undone on their own. Also, it is easy to lose yourself amongst 7000 men and Elrohir wants to evade Legoals- Legoals is focused on looking for him and in the next chaper you wil lsee he finds a different way to find him, and is more successful. And your point about why Legolas doesnt just describe Raveyon to Gimli is a good one - but if you read it again, you will see that Gimli just nods and grutns whenever he mentions him, so Legolas assumes he knows whom he is talking about. Also no on e really want s to remind him of waht happened on the mountain in case it drives him back into the place -the memory of the Nazgul. Elladan is nowhere in sight at any time that Legolas is around- he had already left before Legolas arrives - I did that purposely. He does not ride up with Aragorn either. Gandalf has screened the memeories to give Legolas a chance to heal. Remember how he woke in the houses of Healing, screaming? He would not be able to ride with the Host if Gandalf had not done that and Gandaf knows Legolas should be there at the end - see earlier chapters. But Gandalf does not have limitless power anyway so already that wall is crumbling. Better for Legolas to be confused by Elrohir than to be stuck in that place screaming like he was in the Houses of Healing I htink. To some extent this chapter is about setting up the next stage and they still have a long way to go - dont worry. It will alll be resolved.
Date: Jul 03 2011
Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34 Yzira Reviewer: Mindirith Signed
Legolas appears to be a perfect match to Elrohir. He also seems to have an instinctive dislike of Elrohir's blade. Wonderful. But... Please don't leave us hanging like this! You can't leave this story with a cliffhanger! I don't know why I didn't get an update this time, I accidentally figured out that you added 2 new chapters. I hope you will write, and either post the new chapters here or on Faerie. I will be waiting with baited breath. I enjoy your story too much not to.

Author's Response: I will be finishing it here but when I post on Faerie, I'll be redrafting it and adding spice etc. I didn't really know where this was going to end up so it's nice to be able to go back and take my time with it. Yes...Aicanaro is taking on a life of his own. I'm not sure what he's up to
Date: Aug 04 2011
Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35 Reviewer: Mindirith Signed
This is such a wonderful chapter! the tension, but also the reconciliation (I was just plain cheering when Elladan decided to forgive Elrohir), and Legolas getting most of his memories (especially the difficult ones, I guess Gandalf must be one heck of a psychiatrist, for Legolas to be dealing with the mountain memories so wel). I am glad he has Gimli and Pippin, and I hope he has Elrohir also at his side at this point. He needs them all, as torn up as he is. I wonder what happened to Aicanaro. Did Legolas leave it on the ledge? Is Elrohir finally rid of it? Though I supposed that would be a curse as well, as they are on the eve of a great battle, in which he will need weapons he is used to. Is Elrohir going to be healed enough to continue? You keep me on hot coals!

Author's Response: Aicanaro...there's a bit more of his story in the enxt chapter, more hints at where he has come from and who forged him - just hints though. But you are right- Elrohir will need him if he fights the Nazgul again. Elrohir's shoulder is going to be a problem, isn't spoilers though!
Date: Aug 13 2011
Summary: AU. Sauron was defeated in the Last Alliance, but that battle left the relationship between Imladris and Mirkwood in shreds. Legolas and Elladan fight for an alliance, but old prejudices, a poisoning and a servant with conflicting loyalities threaten to destroy their plans.
Categories: Lord of the Rings Slash Characters: Arwen, Elladan, Elrohir, Elrond, Erestor, Glorfindel, Legolas, Lindir, Thranduil
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Drama, Erotica, Family, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort, Mystery, Romance, Suspense, Tragedy
Warnings: AU (alternate universe), BD/SM, Graphic Sex, Kink, MPREG (male pregnancy), Rape, Slash (same sex pairing), Torture, Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 38786 Read Count: 34387
Published: Nov 29 2010 Updated: Jul 01 2011 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 19: The Secret Assassin Reviewer: Mindirith Signed
I have been reading your story as the chapters are published, and I have been very much enjoying it. I like the little twist of Arion possibly being a secret/sleeper assassin. I am also glad to see Elrohir and Lindir finally starting to acknowledge their relationship, even if it is an unconventional one, and admitting they truly like each other. And I am glad Legolas and Elladan got some action. :D
Thank you, and I am looking forward to the next chapter.

Author's Response: :D Really glad you like the story, Mindirith. I quite enjoyed the irony of sweet, innocent Arion being trained to be an assassin. It ties in with something that appears in either the next chapter or the next (This is why there's been such a long gap between the last chapter and this one, I've run out of pre-written chapters so now I have a rough idea where I'm going, but I don't know what goes in what chapter yet). Lindir and Elrohir are going to get even closer ^_^ I figure I should really give poor Lindir a break. Next chapter will most likely contain some form of "action" ;) Thanks again!
Date: Jul 01 2011
Summary: Amorith readies herself to meet little Legolas for the first time, but is she really ready for what she is about to learn from him? Written for ALEC's May theme, third place winner.
Categories: Off Topic Characters: Legolas, Original Character, Thranduil
Genres: Family, General, Hurt/Comfort
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3933 Read Count: 1535
Published: Jul 02 2011 Updated: Jul 02 2011 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Forgiveness Reviewer: Mindirith Signed
This is a wonderful Little Legolas story. You managed to keep the emotions simple but profound, just like a little elfling would experience them. Very well done.

Author's Response: Thanks very much. My first attempt at semi-fluff. I was also shooting for Legolas' ability to perceive things as some children can detect things. I am glad you enjoyed.
Date: Jul 29 2011