man! I want haldir to love me...***starts whining badly..kicking the floor and lays down kicking*** I want him, i want him i want him...Love this one honey. Keep'em comin
GREAT CHAPTER AGAIn< Mellon...Have to say...sitting on edge wondering what the heck Val is going to say to Haldir during the birth..make it good...Huggles
I AM SOOOOOO ADDICTED TO THIS STORY...LOVING HALDIR MORE RIGHT NOW!!!!! GREAT JOB MELLON!
Hello...been following your story for a short while now...since its beginning...and finally decided to get an account so that i can review it...I love it very much...I love haldir and find that your story is quite interesting...looking forward to more..please update soon...huggles
Author's Response: Thank you for your nice review. Stay tuned, there will be a lot going on in the next chapters! Annielle
WOW...another great one Mellon, please update..I am so needing another fix on this one...I just love haldir...if i had a kid with him, I would not question it...hehe...
Loved the kids response *Ada, you look like shit* that is so funny...and the fact the elves thought it funny,,,well that just added to the piece of pie...Good work!
This is a good story for being your first, but a word of advice. On some of your paragraphs they tend to run into other and no space there...Kind of confusing to read, but other than that...Well written Mellon...
Author's Response: Thank you for the advice :) I will fix the paragraphs and I'll also work on the clarity of the ideas in future stories!