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The Prophecy by Annielle Rated: NC-17 [Reviews - 13]
Summary: The Lorien Marchwarden is at the center of a prophecy describing the rebirth of great elven heroes. Only its accomplishment will convince the elves to fight alongside Men and finally defeat Sauron. But a crucial player was not born in Middle Earth...
Categories: Movie-verse
Characters: Celeborn, Elrond, Galadriel, Haldir
Genres: Romance
Warnings: AU (alternate universe), Graphic Sex
Series: None
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 157821 Read Count: 21977
[Report This] Published: 04/08/11 Updated: 23/04/12
Reviewer: delightfulmaiden Signed
Date: 15/08/11 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - Intamacy and dilemma

man! I want haldir to love me...***starts whining badly..kicking the floor and lays down kicking*** I want him, i want him i want him...Love this one honey. Keep'em comin

Reviewer: delightfulmaiden Signed
Date: 01/09/11 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - Competition

GREAT CHAPTER AGAIn< Mellon...Have to say...sitting on edge wondering what the heck Val is going to say to Haldir during the birth..make it good...Huggles

Reviewer: delightfulmaiden Signed
Date: 19/08/11 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Fading

I AM SOOOOOO ADDICTED TO THIS STORY...LOVING HALDIR MORE RIGHT NOW!!!!! GREAT JOB MELLON!

Reviewer: delightfulmaiden Signed
Date: 15/08/11 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Acquaintance

Hello...been following your story for a short while now...since its beginning...and finally decided to get an account so that i can review it...I love it very much...I love haldir and find that your story is quite interesting...looking forward to more..please update soon...huggles

Author's Response: Thank you for your nice review. Stay tuned, there will be a lot going on in the next chapters! Annielle

Reviewer: delightfulmaiden Signed
Date: 24/08/11 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Reunion

WOW...another great one Mellon, please update..I am so needing another fix on this one...I just love haldir...if i had a kid with him, I would not question it...hehe...

Loved the kids response *Ada, you look like shit* that is so funny...and the fact the elves thought it funny,,,well that just added to the piece of pie...Good work!

Summary: Ethiriel narrowly escapes death after saving her good friend, Haldir from a charging Uruk-hai in the woods of Lothlorien. What Ethiriel had not known is that because of her foolishness, Haldir had to be punished in her place. But, she is disturbed with a feeling that he won't survive this punishment.

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Categories: Book-verse, Movie-verse
Characters: Galadriel, Haldir, Original Character, Orophin, R˙mil
Genres: Fantasy, Friendship
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4778 Read Count: 1738
[Report This] Published: 18/08/11 Updated: 26/08/11
Reviewer: delightfulmaiden Signed
Date: 18/08/11 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Against the northern borders

This is a good story for being your first, but a word of advice. On some of your paragraphs they tend to run into other and no space there...Kind of confusing to read, but other than that...Well written Mellon...

Author's Response: Thank you for the advice :) I will fix the paragraphs and I'll also work on the clarity of the ideas in future stories!