Hey there! thanks for reviewing my story :)
Now, this has got to be the first fanfic that I have ever read about Frodo! Haha, just wanted to share that :D
I would suggest you check some of the spelling errors and I would put some more detail into Frodo's thoughts (in particular). If his parents died, I think he'd be more than sad- he'd be devastated right? so, fix some spelling errors and don't be afraid to be more descriptive- otherwise it's a great story!
Author's Response: Will do! :) Finally someone reviewed!!!