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The Trial Of One So Small by FrodoLuver1 Rated: PG [Reviews - 7]
Summary: Frodo is enjoying a not so pleasent afternoon when he is informed of terrible, devastating news. He has to deal with loss, devastation, and getting back on the road to recovery with a little help from his friends.
Categories: Book-verse, Off Topic
Characters: Frodo
Genres: Tragedy
Warnings: Character Death
Series: Frodo's Journey
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3292 Read Count: 2660
[Report This] Published: 23/08/11 Updated: 10/11/11
Reviewer: MaeGovannen Signed
Date: 26/08/11 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter Two: Brandy Hall

Hey there! thanks for reviewing my story :)

Now, this has got to be the first fanfic that I have ever read about Frodo! Haha, just wanted to share that :D
I would suggest you check some of the spelling errors and I would put some more detail into Frodo's thoughts (in particular). If his parents died, I think he'd be more than sad- he'd be devastated right? so, fix some spelling errors and don't be afraid to be more descriptive- otherwise it's a great story!

Author's Response: Will do! :) Finally someone reviewed!!!