Penname: EnchantessM [Contact] Real name:
Member Since: 08/11/11
Membership status: Member
I work as a freelance editor in RL. I also localize medieaval browser based games (not going to name drop though! J). I'm a huge LOTR fan and especially like fan fic involving Legolas, Haldir and Glorfindel (not together though! I don't like slash. On the other hand, I enjoy well-written Mary Sue and OC romance type stories). If you're looking for a beta, I'll be happy to oblige - send me an e-mail. :)

Oh and shameless promotion, check out the latest videos I uploaded to YT:

"You With Me" - a tribute to Lord Elrond and lady Celebrian:

Elvish Love (Rose of Sharon Instrumental):

Beta-reader: Yes
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Evermind by ToriLee Rated: NC-17 [Reviews - 5]
Summary: Nearly 116 years after the death of Elessar, Middle Earth continues to flourish. Looking into the lives of the King of Rohan and his family, and the struggle they go through to save their country from deception.
Categories: Book-verse, Off Topic
Characters: Eomer, Original Character, Théoden, Théodred
Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama, Fantasy, Hurt/Comfort
Warnings: Character Death, Graphic Sex, Rape, Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 15322 Read Count: 1582
[Report This] Published: 26/05/13 Updated: 14/04/14
Reviewer: EnchantessM Signed
Date: 07/03/14 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

As the beta, I can attest it *is* a lovely chapter. Unfortunately, it did not take. Please repost. :)

Author's Response: Ugh, computer's right? I fixed it, thank you very much for helping me out. :)

Summary: A slightly sensitive girl becomes victim to a Suethor's idiocy; meaning she get's accidently sent into Middle-Earth with a Mary-Sue. It has been so long since she has seen the movie (and she never read the books) so she doesn't know if she will be able to stop the Mary-Sue from ruining the storyline. Not only that, she must get over her own fears just to survive, while trying to keep Ms. Sue away from the 'hotter' male members of the Fellowship. She just wants to go home, but Fate has something against her.
Categories: Movie-verse
Characters: Aragorn, Arwen, Boromir, Elladan, Elrohir, Galadriel, Gandalf / Olorin, Gimli, Glorfindel, Legolas, Merry, Original Character, Pippin, Sam, The Fellowship
Genres: Action/Adventure, Friendship, Humor
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1455 Read Count: 985
[Report This] Published: 14/08/13 Updated: 12/09/13
Reviewer: EnchantessM Signed
Date: 14/08/13 Title: Chapter 1: It Started in the Internet Café

It's a good start, but you're not giving much to work with, review wise. :))

More, please. And yes, romance is always good.

Summary: Twelve hundred years after the Second War for the Ring the elves still walk among men. The Valars' promises and prophesies of the Undying Lands have been proven false as Earth and Middle Earth merged into one realm.

What happened to the elves? Do they still walk among us today? Is it possible that there are other "inaccuracies" in the Tolkien Universe?
Categories: Movie-verse
Characters: Haldir, Legolas
Genres: Angst, Drama, Erotica, General, Humor, Romance
Warnings: First Draft, Graphic Sex
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 28691 Read Count: 4320
[Report This] Published: 17/09/13 Updated: 18/01/14
Reviewer: EnchantessM Signed
Date: 15/10/13 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Hmmm, per title, how about "Where The Leafs Fall"?

Author's Response: I like it.

Reviewer: EnchantessM Signed
Date: 16/10/13 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I wonder what will happen next? :))
Will Maria get a taste of her own experience so to speak, by having Legolas (Lucas) walk in on them? :P

Author's Response: Perhaps ....

Reviewer: EnchantessM Signed
Date: 17/09/13 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Ooooooh, I like the way it started, and I thank thee for going to add a well needed NC17 here. I absolutely love ellon/adaneth action, especially modern day gals! :)

If you're looking for a beta, I'll be happy to oblige. Just send me an e-mail (

Reviewer: EnchantessM Signed
Date: 19/09/13 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

You're def. keeping the momentum - another lovely chapter! :)

A few comments if I may, for you to consider incorporating for a better flowing chapter:

1- The term for lembas is waybread not wey bread.

2- The kitchen was stocked with stainless steel appliances not outfitted.

3- One is setting the plates on the table, not fixing them - I presume they were not broken? ;)

4- Last but not least - Maria eyed the food on her plate, not eyes.

Also a proposed stylistic change: Haldir is the epitamy of proper speech and diction. I simply cannot imagine him say "won't". I would use "will not". Of course - your story and your Haldir, but please reconsider? J

Once again thanks for another lovely chapter.
(my offer to beta still stands, if you wish)