Reviews by legolasalicious
Summary:

Now complete. Autheil is the daughter of an elvish king, Master assassin and skilled thief, destined to save her race from sauron's ever firm grip. Only the princess of thieves has plans of her own, Involving lord Elrond's son Elladan and her childhood friend.The more she falls for him, the more she begins to realise it is impossible to escape fate, and fate has a nasty taste of revenge for those who try and escape.


Categories: Off Topic Characters: None
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Drama, Family, Fantasy, Friendship, Horror, Hurt/Comfort, Tragedy
Warnings: Character Death, Violence
Series: The Prophacy
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 16557 Read Count: 7367
Published: Aug 24 2012 Updated: Sep 27 2012 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 17: What Happens Next (Epilogue ) Reviewer: legolasalicious Signed
Ooph. Poor, poor Elladen. He and Authiel were made for each other :( But methinks there is more no? I see a new story 'Eath's Angel: Queen of Thieves Part 2- The Return of the Queen' yes? No? Maybe? Please?

Author's Response: Thank youu... For your delight there will be two more!!! Earths angel:queen of thieves being the third, this is when the whole truth is reveiled, the next... Wait and see mellonin :D
Date: Sep 27 2012
Title: Chapter 12: Is That What I Really Am? Reviewer: legolasalicious Signed
Awwwww shucks! I've been following this story for awhile and it's good. Really good. I like Authiel, she's badass , but I can't help but melt at the cute little lovey scenes. Keep writing and

HAPPY TOLKIEN WEEK!!

Author's Response: Thank you, it always means a lot to me when i get reviews of any sort :), I hope you enjoy the rest as much is i enjoy witing it, happy Tolien week to you too, :)
Date: Sep 20 2012
Summary:


COMPLETED Autheil is gone, fate has played its cards, but fate can be fooled,so when Elladan sees a girl, identical to Autheil on a hunting trip, he believes fate has been kind, but alas, this girl is different from Autheil, she  knows no love, nor remembers him as her lover; she knows only hate and war. If this truly is Autheil, can the elves of Rivendell, win back Autheil’s memory, and Elladan her heart before it is too late, before her mind is truly overthrown and fate gets a hand in the game of love and hate, war and peace,and as all the people of middle earth know, fate always has its way.


Categories: Off Topic Characters: Elladan, Elrohir, Elrond, Erestor, Galadriel, Glorfindel, Haldir, Legolas, Nazgūl, Orcs/Uruk-Hai, Sauron, Thranduil, Witch King
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Drama, Family, Fantasy, Friendship, Humor, Hurt/Comfort, Mystery, Romance, Suspense
Warnings: None
Series: The Prophacy
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9147 Read Count: 4234
Published: Sep 28 2012 Updated: Nov 01 2012 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Angels and Demons Reviewer: legolasalicious Signed
YAY!!! MORE UPDATES

Author's Response: :) i hope you like the next two storys, im glade you liked the first :)
Date: Sep 28 2012
Title: Chapter 1: Angels and Demons Reviewer: legolasalicious Signed
YAY!!! UPDATES

Author's Response: Hehe.. do nt worry, the next two storys will be uploaded soon, this is only the start. Thank you for reveiwing, look out for the rest of this story, and thank you for my final storys title!!! I have named it Princess of thieves on your request :)
Date: Sep 28 2012
Summary:

SEQUEL TO 'AND ONE MORE THING': Andrea has adjusted to her new job as a personal trainer. She has even accepted the fact that she will be unable to have her dream home built. But the loss of Dominic's love is something that hurts too deeply to let go. Six months after the the break-off of their engagement, Andrea finds herself having to deal with a piece of news that will put a permanent breach between her and the hope of a rekindled relationship with Mr. Monaghan. Will the two never be able to give love another shot? Or should Andrea never say never?


Categories: Actor Fics Characters: Dominic Monaghan
Genres: Romance
Warnings: Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 16434 Read Count: 2807
Published: Jan 22 2013 Updated: Feb 17 2013 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: 6 Months Later Reviewer: legolasalicious Signed
YAY!!!!!!!!! UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! SEQUEL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

*breathes*

Now that that's over I can speak. Great chapter! You know, you really do have a talent for dropping COMPLETELY UNEXPECTED BOMBS at the end of the chapter. I mean, its not FAIR! I used to love Dom and Evangaline, but then I read Dom and Andrea and I thought YES! They work! But then she was in the hobbit and I though DOM AND EVANGALINE FOREVER and now I'm so confused. But anyways, THANK YOU and I hope Andrea gets her man back before it's too late!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review! It really means a lot to me to know that there is someone who cares enough about my stories to give me a nudge forward! Chapter 3 will be up by tomorrow and I hope you will like what is to come! Cheers ^__^
Date: Jan 22 2013
Title: Chapter 2: Unexpected News Reviewer: legolasalicious Signed
OH MY GOD!! I KNEW IT!!! But why?! Why couldn't it be Dom's?!

And one more thing.

UPDATE!!!!!!

Author's Response:

Chapter three is almost finished and should be posted in a few hours! Thanks for your review! I love your enthusiasm, and I cannot wait to see what you think of what is to come! :D Thank you again!!

Date: Jan 23 2013
Title: Chapter 2: Unexpected News Reviewer: legolasalicious Signed
Aww come on...can we have another chapter? Please?
Date: Jan 23 2013
Title: Chapter 3: A Visit Reviewer: legolasalicious Signed
I am so sorry for not reviewing. The website crashed and I couldn't access it so...yeah.

Anyways BILLY! Yay! I knew he'd be back! And that is so sweet of him to try and do that. I knew James would do that-he's such a bastard, its unbelievable. So yeah KEEP GOING
Date: Jan 29 2013
Title: Chapter 4: Another Try Reviewer: legolasalicious Signed
Oh ANDREA NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!! She only had it for 3 chapters! That's not FAIR! ARGH!

The FBI better rehire her after this. This is all their fault for being unable to catch the guy themselves. Useless morons.

GREAT chapter, really worth the wait. And, as always KEEP GOING!
Date: Jan 29 2013
Title: Chapter 4: Another Try Reviewer: legolasalicious Signed
Firstly, I am SO sorry for not reviewing before. My internet crashed and I died.

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!! I knew the moment she kicked that door open it wouldn't end well. But WHY?! But seriously, the FBI better give her, her job back and she better get back with Dom. So yh...KEEP GOING!
Date: Feb 02 2013
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Reviewer: legolasalicious Signed
OH MY GONDOR!! DOM!! BILLY!! CHIEF!!

I'm so glad that she got her job back! I expected Billy to come, but not DOM! I literally just woke up when I read this and my eyes went the size of tennis balls when Dom walked in! I think in the next chapter, there should be Dom finding out about her pregnancy, with lots of tension and uncertainty and then the chapter after Evangaline vs Andrea...or somewhere along the line. I would love to see a bitch fight between the two of them, with Dom helpless in the middle. And, as always KEEP GOING!

Author's Response:

I am totally using "Oh my Gondor" from now on. That is too funny lol.

Anyway, yes! Isn't it great to see Andy back with the good old FBI? Hmm....I like you're suggestions VERY much....let's see what I can do. I'm gonna try to crank out one more chapter before the day is over. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! I hope you enjoy what is to come! Blessings ^__^

Date: Feb 03 2013
Title: Chapter 6: Never Reviewer: legolasalicious Signed
Oh hell, ouch! That was painful. Poor Andrea. Dom was so...abrupt. But he DOES have feelings for her! Yes lots of feelings hmmmm...I HAVE IT! After the bitch fight between Andrea and Evangenline, he should have to choose one of them. Then the other, storms off totally unattractively and runs off home. She could break off the engagement so Dom doesn't look bad! Yes, I see this happening, do you?

Well, tell me what you think, and, as always KEEP GOING!

Author's Response:

I love the whole bitch fight idea lol. Thanks for reading and reviewing! I'll see what I can do to incorporate your suggestions ^_^

Date: Feb 04 2013
Title: Chapter 7: Fight Reviewer: legolasalicious Signed
Oh, wow. That was *perfect*! You got it exactly how I imagined it! Yay! I feel hopeful for the two of them now, I'm just not sure what major thing should happen next...Maybe she should just be extra kickass at work because she's so angry. Well, you decide but either way KEEP GOING!
Date: Feb 06 2013
Title: Chapter 8: A New Life Reviewer: legolasalicious Signed
She's MOVING?! WHAT?! And Dom, you naughty boy! You'd better hurry up and make up your mind. But I think I can see where this is going...sort of. I have an idea of what the ending could be like...Well, I'll keep it to myself for now and see if it's true. Meanwhile KEEP GOING!
Date: Feb 07 2013
Title: Chapter 9: Italy Reviewer: legolasalicious Signed
NO! It can't already be the wedding! But, but, but-

I don't know how you're going to pull this one off. I'm actually blank.

I need to know.

Now.

Write faster.

Why are you still reading this?

Go and write.

Oh yeah and...

KEEP GOING!
Date: Feb 16 2013
Title: Chapter 10: Never Say Never Reviewer: legolasalicious Signed
YES YES YES YES YES YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'M SO HAPPY!!!! *sniffs* That was beautiful!

Now I want to know EVERYTHING- the wedding? Her job? KIDS? Tell me!

This isn't the end because otherwise I wouldn't say....

KEEP GOING!
Date: Feb 18 2013
Summary:
*COMPLETED* Exiled for murder, Autheil wanders middle earth, looking to her old ways to survive. The shadow of Mordor takes a hold of middle earth, and Autheil finds herself doubting herself and everyone around her. When all seems lost, the elves being to look to her, the traitor and outcast for aid. But a life of bloodshed cannot be undone. Autheil begins to embrace who she truly is and with it begins to loose all she holds dear.
Categories: Book-verse, Movie-verse, Off Topic Characters: Elladan, Elrohir, Elrond, Erestor, Glorfindel, The Fellowship
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Drama, Family, Fantasy, Friendship, Horror, Hurt/Comfort, Romance, Tragedy
Warnings: Character Death, Torture, Violence
Series: The Prophacy
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 24634 Read Count: 4143
Published: Jan 31 2013 Updated: Feb 21 2013 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Exile Reviewer: legolasalicious Signed
You're back! Yay! I've been waiting for this one for some time now. I had to reread the first two because it's been so long!

Anyways, tense chapter! What will happen between the three of them now? Update so I can find out!

Author's Response: Sorry its taken so long, i've been busy recently and have not been able to find time to start or finish stories. I will be updating as soon as i can don't worry :D
Date: Feb 02 2013
Title: Chapter 6: The Reality Of Autheil's Life Reviewer: legolasalicious Signed
This story is so good! You've got a great plot line and it's developing really well. But Authiel's personality keeps confusing me. Is she meant to keep flicking between horrible and nice? But besides that I have nothing negative to say. I love Authiel and Elladen together!

Author's Response: Thank you so much!! At this moment in time Authiel is meant to keep cheep changing from nice to nasty, you will find out why later!! It make her somewhat more unpredictable and this will (SPOILER)be a part of a choice to kill or save someone close to her later on.... Thank you so much for reading and reviewing I hope you enjoy the rest.

Author's Response: Thank you so much!! At this moment in time Authiel is meant to keep keep changing from nice to nasty, you will find out why later!! It make her somewhat more unpredictable and this will (SPOILER)be a part of a choice to kill or save someone close to her later on.... Thank you so much for reading and reviewing I hope you enjoy the rest.
Date: Feb 06 2013
Title: Chapter 7: The Council Of Elrond Reviewer: legolasalicious Signed
So..Authiel's not in the Fellowship, but I imagine she'll have lots of run ins with them? But where is she off to now? Hmmmm has it got something to do with her prophecy? Lots of questions for a great chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you for the review!! I suppose you will have to wait and see :D
Date: Feb 07 2013
Title: Chapter 6: The Reality Of Autheil's Life Reviewer: legolasalicious Signed
I haven't really reviewed this story much have I? No? Well, I'm going to review every few chapters till the end.

So, I really liked this chapter because I like her freakout. It's just like what I do when I get angry! I like how Elladen is completely devoted to Authiel and their love is so cute!

Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing!!! I'm glad you liked it so far :D
Date: Feb 21 2013
Title: Chapter 7: The Council Of Elrond Reviewer: legolasalicious Signed
Hahaha everyone's making oaths of epicness and Authiel's just like O.o I'm not that senseless

Author's Response: I guess i thought another 10th walker would be boring! Thank you for reviewing
Date: Feb 21 2013
Title: Chapter 8: The Sun Is Broken And The Night Calls Reviewer: legolasalicious Signed
LAMEIA!! OMG is she like Lameia from Merlin? Because I would be blown away by that plot bunny,as if she was evil from the inside, like an inside agent in Rivendell! Do you watch Merlin? (By the way I know that was completely missing the point of this very well written chapter, but I freaked when I saw Lamiea)

Author's Response: Yes that was the idea...Lameia from Merlin... yes i watch merlin, i used to write fanfic for it too!!! Any way thank you for reviewing :D
Date: Feb 21 2013
Title: Chapter 10: Who Am I? Reviewer: legolasalicious Signed
Elrohir is starting to warm up to Authiel eh? Well, that's something I thought I'd never see. It was pretty awesome when he just read her like a book and compliments her. It made me laugh when he ends it with 'most of the time though, you're a bitch'.

Author's Response: I'm glad you like it, i think Elrohir is trying to accept Autheil for who she is and Autheil's trying to be nicer to people but failing slightly!!! One again thank you for reading
Date: Feb 21 2013
Title: Chapter 11: The Beginning Of An End Reviewer: legolasalicious Signed
OHMYGOSHELROHIRISHEOKAYTHEPROPHECYHASSTARTEDISHOULDUSESPACINGIMADRAMAQUEENIMGOINGTOREADTHENEXTCHAPTER

Author's Response: Haha, thank you for reviewing :D
Date: Feb 21 2013
Title: Chapter 12: Bitter, Twisted, Anger Reviewer: legolasalicious Signed
Let him live! (Hey that's a Les Mis song...) I'm guessing that they will get to Rivendell and Elrond will be like MY SON! NO! Then he'll see Authiel carrying him and be like its your fault. Then Nendir will be an idiot and say yeah you're fault blah blah then she gets angry.

Maybe.

Author's Response: Hahaha, the Nendir bit made me laugh so much :D I would say wait and see but i've finished the story!!! Thanks again
Date: Feb 21 2013